Most recent public comments by India Bell https://nowcomment.com/users/84834 https://nowcomment.com/documents/268241?scroll_to=2425707 https://nowcomment.com/documents/268241?scroll_to=2425707 Tue, 13 Apr 2021 09:41:48 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/268244?scroll_to=2423968 https://nowcomment.com/documents/268244?scroll_to=2423968 Mon, 12 Apr 2021 09:48:29 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/268244?scroll_to=2423951 https://nowcomment.com/documents/268244?scroll_to=2423951 It's very difficult when you have to write out and think about mental illness for days. It's easy to write about it for a moment but harder when writing about it for days at a time Mon, 12 Apr 2021 09:43:52 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/268244?scroll_to=2423751 https://nowcomment.com/documents/268244?scroll_to=2423751 Mon, 12 Apr 2021 09:17:44 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/247386?scroll_to=2257483 https://nowcomment.com/documents/247386?scroll_to=2257483 I get the idea but it's kind of ignorant to mark people skipping for getting a tardy more than 3 minutes after the bell. What if someone gets to school 20 minutes after the bell? It doesn't address problems that may arise. Tue, 05 Jan 2021 09:27:58 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/240374?scroll_to=2181665 https://nowcomment.com/documents/240374?scroll_to=2181665 For me personally, this might be the hardest part of writing. Being able to keep your characters humanly while still adding sensory details. Wed, 04 Nov 2020 09:40:54 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/235523?scroll_to=2139377 https://nowcomment.com/documents/235523?scroll_to=2139377 His curse is to always have to tell this story. Although he changed his ways he will remain cursed because of his previous actions Fri, 16 Oct 2020 09:49:52 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/235523?scroll_to=2139341 https://nowcomment.com/documents/235523?scroll_to=2139341 He was saved from the sinking ship and is grateful to see people. Fri, 16 Oct 2020 09:39:45 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/235523?scroll_to=2136522 https://nowcomment.com/documents/235523?scroll_to=2136522 He changes perspective on sea creatures. In the beginning, he killed the Albatross but now he is blessing the creatures that pass him. Thu, 15 Oct 2020 10:03:27 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/235523?scroll_to=2136509 https://nowcomment.com/documents/235523?scroll_to=2136509 Before the death of his crew, they looked him in the eyes and cursed him. This is apart of his curse. Thu, 15 Oct 2020 10:00:48 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/235523?scroll_to=2136483 https://nowcomment.com/documents/235523?scroll_to=2136483 The crew meets death and looks her in the face. Thu, 15 Oct 2020 09:52:51 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/235523?scroll_to=2136399 https://nowcomment.com/documents/235523?scroll_to=2136399 The bird gave them happiness and joy at the lonely sea. Now their journey has become lonely again. Thu, 15 Oct 2020 09:34:09 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/235523?scroll_to=2136359 https://nowcomment.com/documents/235523?scroll_to=2136359 The crew is saddened by the actions of the sailor and right now they are speechless. Thu, 15 Oct 2020 09:31:13 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/225299?scroll_to=2042613 https://nowcomment.com/documents/225299?scroll_to=2042613 It's okay to be brutally honest with someone that comes with having to be an editor. Tue, 15 Sep 2020 09:49:31 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/225299?scroll_to=2042560 https://nowcomment.com/documents/225299?scroll_to=2042560 Writing is a comfort for people so it isn't the editors right to judge them for it. Tue, 15 Sep 2020 09:47:11 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/214990?scroll_to=1971908 https://nowcomment.com/documents/214990?scroll_to=1971908 It can be easy to summarize what you want to write but, it's better to express your writing so that it can appeal to the readers. If you were to summarize a text instead of describing the meaning and choosing words that are synonymous with the text your readers could misunderstand the message/purpose. Fri, 21 Aug 2020 09:49:11 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/214990?scroll_to=1969141 https://nowcomment.com/documents/214990?scroll_to=1969141 If you make your character too stagnant and unrealistic. You want he/she to be relatable so that the readers will engage. Become more observant of other's patterns and mimic those in your writing. The point is to make your character a reality and your story engaging. Thu, 20 Aug 2020 10:13:52 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212883?scroll_to=1964832 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212883?scroll_to=1964832 Many have so much self doubt that they fail to realize some of the things they are capable of. If you don't have a good understanding of yourself when writing you will begin to get the bigger picture of who you are. Tue, 18 Aug 2020 10:16:13 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212883?scroll_to=1959584 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212883?scroll_to=1959584 Everyday life is what makes us the same. We have different experiences everyday but sometimes many other people might've been in the same situation or felt the same emotion. There is beauty in everyday life Mon, 17 Aug 2020 10:01:58 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212883?scroll_to=1959574 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212883?scroll_to=1959574 Everyone has a "weird" side whether they admit it or not. Sometimes writing out your thoughts could help the next person gather up the courage to admit they're weird quirky traits. Mon, 17 Aug 2020 10:04:58 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212883?scroll_to=1959326 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212883?scroll_to=1959326 In order to form a good story you have to point out the parts of yourself that you probably don't like but others might be able to relate. Don't make yourself unbelievable but own up to your flaws and characteristics. Mon, 17 Aug 2020 09:45:16 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212883?scroll_to=1959313 https://nowcomment.com/documents/212883?scroll_to=1959313 As writers we tend to get caught up in the idea of a making the perfect character and the perfect conflict resolution that we lose creativity in the little details Mon, 17 Aug 2020 09:41:59 -0400