Comments by Bryleigh Yarbrough Most recent public comments by Bryleigh Yarbrough https://nowcomment.com/users/86693 just continue w your essay because you're going in the right direction https://nowcomment.com/documents/260496?scroll_to=2351755 https://nowcomment.com/documents/260496?scroll_to=2351755 Thu, 25 Feb 2021 02:45:37 +0800 Maybe put this quote in quotation marks or like tie it in with her speech better https://nowcomment.com/documents/260496?scroll_to=2351744 https://nowcomment.com/documents/260496?scroll_to=2351744 Thu, 25 Feb 2021 02:44:45 +0800 thesis? maybe state whether or not her argument is effective and what she uses (strategies) https://nowcomment.com/documents/260496?scroll_to=2351735 https://nowcomment.com/documents/260496?scroll_to=2351735 Thu, 25 Feb 2021 02:43:35 +0800 Maybe like add more to your introduction to set the stage more for the audience so that your thesis stands out and is clear https://nowcomment.com/documents/260496?scroll_to=2351729 https://nowcomment.com/documents/260496?scroll_to=2351729 Thu, 25 Feb 2021 02:41:37 +0800 Agreed https://nowcomment.com/documents/260496?scroll_to=2351725 https://nowcomment.com/documents/260496?scroll_to=2351725 Thu, 25 Feb 2021 02:41:00 +0800