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      <title>what I feel is the need to nod my head because this poem is truly a musical, when she rhymes Maya pleasures the readers by rhyming, so maybe that's why she rhyme in this poem.</title>
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      <pubDate>Sat, 13 Feb 2021 19:47:07 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>Maybe, Hopscotch represents the struggles of black life so when she loses, she won because she is now escaping the struggles of life.</title>
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      <pubDate>Sat, 13 Feb 2021 19:47:07 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>I wonder what she meant by &quot;they think I lost. I think I won&quot;  I think there is a deeper meaning behind that sentence.</title>
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      <description>Maybe this is a competition. Where this game represents life, and people are racing to the finish line.</description>
      <pubDate>Sat, 13 Feb 2021 19:47:07 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>Diction in the title Harlem Hopscotch.
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      <description>The title Harlem Hopscotch maybe has something to do with poverty in Harlem and how the Black community used hopscotch to distract themselves from many challenges. Also, another example of diction is: in the first two lines in her stanza she rhymes.</description>
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      <title>Sound techniques</title>
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      <description> I noticed that Maya Angelou ends every sentence with punctuation. This is a sound technique called end-stopping. It creates a sense of order. She uses this technique to make the line have a clear stop of what she is saying, this helps the reader dig deep into what is being said in  a line where end-stopped is given</description>
      <pubDate>Sat, 13 Feb 2021 19:47:07 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>When both feet land Maya Angelou talks about the challenges in life. So maybe What Maya Angelou is communicating is: that adults have a lot of problems to deal with so they distract themselves by playing a child's game.</title>
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      <title>I definitely agree as soon as the narrator's feet are on the floor Maya Angelou immediately talks about the obstacles in life. </title>
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      <title>zooming in on the metaphors Maya Angelou uses </title>
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      <description>I'm not sure if this I right but based on the second stanza my analogy from reading this is that Maya Angelou is using metaphors to compare the struggles of life to hopscotch.  She uses metaphors to explain a harsh reality for many black people and how many in Harlem used hopscotch to escape from that reality.</description>
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      <title> &quot;My judgment had been due to my sense of how little they appeared to want. I could not conceive of peddling myself for so low a price.
But, for a higher price?For Fonny&quot;
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      <description>I think Tish is considering selling herself so she can get money to help Fonny.  She wants to support Fonny she will do what ever they can.</description>
      <pubDate>Thu, 07 Jan 2021 13:35:34 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title> I noticed that Daniel is a witness and he can provide alibis that Fonny wasn't there the night of Victoria rape but sadly he's in jail. </title>
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      <description>That's why Daniel is such a major character in this book, he hold information that can help Fonny.</description>
      <pubDate>Fri, 08 Jan 2021 22:34:03 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>I think that Victoria knows that it wasn't Fonny that raped her. I think she just blamed the black man to get all of this over with. This is a very stressful situation and no woman should go through this.</title>
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      <pubDate>Wed, 20 Jan 2021 15:58:00 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>This is a very explicit comment but I think what Daniel is saying is that the white man gets pleasure from hearing the black man suffer. I think Baldwin is talking through Daniel and is sharing his views as a black man, and what the white man has done to </title>
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      <description>Black people</description>
      <pubDate>Tue, 19 Jan 2021 15:12:02 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>he's not acting soft. He went to jail because the police thought he stole a car. It's unfair that the police is racially profiling a black man.</title>
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      <pubDate>Wed, 06 Jan 2021 10:29:05 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>Is Sharon planning to go all the way to Puerto Rico?</title>
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      <description>If she is, I feel like she is determined to get Fonny out of jail. After all, Fonny is like Sharon's son, she known him since he was 9.</description>
      <pubDate>Wed, 06 Jan 2021 09:59:17 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>Why does Fonny want Tish to marry him, I personally think they're to young Fonny is 22 and Tish 19, is it because people got married at such a young age in the 70s and it was common ? Or does Fonny love Tish so much he couldn't wait</title>
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      <pubDate>Mon, 04 Jan 2021 09:05:09 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>This reminds me of the Kalief Browder case were a black man was accused of stealing a back pack and was sent to Rikers Island for 3 years. He never stood trial or was found guilty of any crime, he spent three years in prison.</title>
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      <description>https://www.nytimes.com/2015/06/09/nyregion/kalief-browder-held-at-rikers-island-for-3-years-without-trial-commits-suicide.html</description>
      <pubDate>Sat, 09 Jan 2021 17:49:21 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>Notice how Baldwin is slowly  revealing why Fonny's in jail. This technique leaves readers biting their nails!</title>
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      <pubDate>Wed, 06 Jan 2021 09:51:40 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>This is Love </title>
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      <description>I know this because Fonny is leaving her after having sex he is making sure she gets home and she is safe</description>
      <pubDate>Sat, 19 Dec 2020 22:52:20 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>I think this sex scene is more than sex.</title>
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      <description>It's about taking there relationship to the next level and forming a bond with each other</description>
      <pubDate>Fri, 18 Dec 2020 12:02:24 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>This is a very graphic scene but what we can retrieve from this, is Baldwin is a very descriptive person/author</title>
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      <pubDate>Fri, 18 Dec 2020 11:53:33 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>I think it's more than just an newborn I think Mrs.Hunt started this  fight mainly because she feels Tish is corrupting Fonny.</title>
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      <pubDate>Mon, 04 Jan 2021 09:10:44 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>I observe character relationships and I notice that Ernestine Loves her sister, stands up for her, and even helps with finding a lawyer For Fonny. Ernestine is a great big sister</title>
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      <pubDate>Fri, 18 Dec 2020 11:48:05 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>I notice the figurative language Baldwin makes Tish use, the tone,word choice it really shows the boiling anger erupting  from Tish.</title>
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      <description>Tish has every right to be mad.</description>
      <pubDate>Fri, 18 Dec 2020 11:12:51 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>This was supposed to be a celebration but it became a fight, that's  no way to celebrate someone being pregnant. How might this impact Tish.</title>
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      <description>Is she scared?</description>
      <pubDate>Mon, 21 Dec 2020 13:56:18 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>Yeah I agree this is what Fonny and his sisters saw in their childhood.</title>
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      <pubDate>Thu, 17 Dec 2020 09:28:36 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>This sentence makes me think that Mrs Hunt want's Fonny to be in jail, what makes me think that is the sentence where she says&quot; I think this is the Lord's way of making my boy think on his sins. What sins? </title>
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      <description>Why  is Fonny in Jail?</description>
      <pubDate>Sat, 19 Dec 2020 22:39:45 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>Why doesn't Fonny's parents go see him in jail? Do they not Love him?,Are they mad at him.</title>
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      <pubDate>Thu, 17 Dec 2020 09:16:58 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>It's sad that Fonny and his sisters had to grow up with such abusive parents. Imagine the Trauma to young Fonny.</title>
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      <pubDate>Tue, 19 Jan 2021 13:49:06 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>yes but the question is can Fonny's parent agree?</title>
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      <description>I don't think so because The Hunt family is known to be stubborn</description>
      <pubDate>Tue, 22 Dec 2020 13:25:09 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>There about to have a celebration because he was on the phone with Frank saying to come over.</title>
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      <pubDate>Wed, 16 Dec 2020 10:13:22 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>especially a Black female in her time.</title>
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      <pubDate>Wed, 06 Jan 2021 16:42:12 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>Sharon is a good parent</title>
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      <description>Notice how Sharon helps Mrs.Hunt off the floor even though Mrs.Hunt 
 says all these horrendous remarks on her future grandson and Sharon Grandson.</description>
      <pubDate>Fri, 22 Jan 2021 10:53:56 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>If there story is in NYC why is the book called If Beale street Could Talk?</title>
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      <description>Does it relate to the culture of Beale street?</description>
      <pubDate>Wed, 16 Dec 2020 13:29:20 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>Notice how Baldwin put's flashbacks in his writing like for an example line 44-45 where they talk about dressing for mrs. Hunt it triggers a flashback of Fonny and Tish sexual relationship.</title>
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      <pubDate>Wed, 06 Jan 2021 16:42:12 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>I feel like Mrs.Hunt is not going to respect the fact Tish is pregnant,because they don't respect her.</title>
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      <pubDate>Wed, 16 Dec 2020 13:27:38 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>Tish Has good parents, Tish thought her parents were going to disown her because of her baby but that's not the case. They're having a celebration</title>
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      <pubDate>Tue, 22 Dec 2020 10:58:50 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>I like how Baldwin didn't make Tish tell the readers how Fonny got arrested by Tish saying &quot;if,if&quot;</title>
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      <description>It built the suspence and made reader including me wonder how did Fonny get arrested?!</description>
      <pubDate>Mon, 14 Dec 2020 14:59:18 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>What I notice is Tish analyses and zooms in one everyone's appearance </title>
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      <description> These are the following people where she explained thier appearance Fonny's mom, Fonny, Teddy, Tish's mom,Herself,Tish's dad, Frank,Teddy</description>
      <pubDate>Fri, 22 Jan 2021 21:27:16 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>From this sentence &quot;Thank you Mama&quot; I know that Tish is relieved that her mom Didn't scold her</title>
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      <description>This just tells me Tish was frightened  of what her family might think of her.</description>
      <pubDate>Wed, 09 Dec 2020 11:04:23 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>I notice that in paragraph 94 and 99 they both talk about Teddy's appearance mainly his hands.</title>
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      <pubDate>Wed, 09 Dec 2020 11:01:44 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title> Fonny behaved didn't steal,rob but he's in jail</title>
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      <description>why is he in jail if he stayed away from crime? Maybe he did nothing maybe this whole book is about how White people put Black people in jail for no reason. Is this about Judicial racism.</description>
      <pubDate>Thu, 10 Dec 2020 18:09:18 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>For some reason I think that Tish might come to Ernestine for her to share her thoughts and for Tish to share things with her.</title>
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      <description>I think this because Ernestine is smart and she has more experience in this world than Tish. Plus, Ernestine is  her big sister</description>
      <pubDate>Wed, 09 Dec 2020 10:22:40 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>I feel like the tone of Joseph's voice is like he ashamed </title>
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      <description>That a Black man at this time has white blood </description>
      <pubDate>Fri, 22 Jan 2021 13:25:55 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>I kindly disagree </title>
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      <description>I don't think she's depressed I think she's scared what her family might think of her,and there's a lot of tension, and suspence  for Tish to plan when the right time to tell them.</description>
      <pubDate>Wed, 06 Jan 2021 16:42:11 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>It's crazy to think Tish's Mama knew and she was only waiting for Tish to simply tell her.</title>
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      <pubDate>Sat, 02 Jan 2021 12:34:36 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>What I notice is That Tish's parents love Fonny and take  care for him as if he was family.</title>
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      <description>Maybe Fonny's parent are less involved in his life then Tish's family is. Also, Tish's family is paying the Lawyer.</description>
      <pubDate>Mon, 14 Dec 2020 21:05:56 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>I think Tish is telling us that Frank is fonny's father no the baby's</title>
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      <pubDate>Wed, 09 Dec 2020 09:40:47 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>I feel like fonny's mom is very sarcastic</title>
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      <description>I feel like this because her tone when she says it sounds like she doesn't care, for instance, when she complimented Tish and when she called the church handsome.</description>
      <pubDate>Fri, 04 Dec 2020 10:57:52 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>I noticed in my previous book in The Autobiography of Malcolm X that conk is when black people straighten their hair to make it like a white person. I think Black men wanted to be accepted so they made their hair straight. But Fonny is smart and aware.</title>
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      <pubDate>Sun, 20 Dec 2020 18:36:09 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>it's when the kids don't have school and when some  adults don't have work.</title>
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      <description>so the streets are busy.</description>
      <pubDate>Fri, 04 Dec 2020 10:32:46 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>What i noticed reading this book so far is that in the book it shows everyone's relation ship and how it formed</title>
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      <description>Tish,Fonny Joseph, Sharon and Fonny's mom and dad's relationship</description>
      <pubDate>Tue, 19 Jan 2021 12:25:26 -0500</pubDate>
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      <title>I wonder what relationship Tish's mom has with Fonny's mom?</title>
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      <title>if they love each other and make love with each other why would the father make such despicable remarks?</title>
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      <description>Based off this paragraph I think that Fonny's parents aren't going to be supportive of him if they found out he's having a baby. I think they're going to yell at him.</description>
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      <title>Because usually a friendship or a relationship can start from a conflict.</title>
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      <description>  I wonder how Alonzo feels. How is he supposed to take care of the kid if he's in jail?</description>
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      <title>I don't understand what you mean do you mean we have a limit Of what we say or do we have a limit of what we do, because if it's what we do I disagree.</title>
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      <title> I believe Paragraph 16 relates to paragraph 19 because maybe the blindness and terror was the bible saying black people were the descendants of Ham and predestined to be slaves.</title>
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      <title>There something that Baldwin feels that he can't describe, when he said Jesus, my dearest friend,who would never fail me knew all the secrets of my heart perhaps he did, but I didn't. This show that Baldwin is felling something that he can't describe</title>
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      <title> The author is saying that he became an preacher and I think he chose this job because he wanted to excel at something and he was bored, But another reason is maybe James wanted to be distracted from all the gang related issues</title>
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      <title>James Bladwin is saying </title>
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      <description>Baldwin is saying if we were all gods children why do blacks have to cast so far away meaning why do black have to go through all these awful things if we were gods children</description>
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      <title>Baldwin is saying if we were all gods children why do blacks have to cast so far away meaning why do black have to go through all these awful things if we were gods children</title>
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When she says who&#8217;s &#8220;little boy&#8221; are you it&#8217;s a negative concept because I think little boys refer to the henchmen of the pimps and racketeers back then, but when Baldwin says i&#8217;m yours That means i&#8217;m a little boy of a pastor or god meaning i&#8217;m a worker or henchmen of a pastor, or god.
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      <title> I think this means that the efforts by parents to teach their kids about the world they will be living in as a Black person. And it's scary for an elder to let a kid go especially in a world and time where people are despised cause of their color</title>
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      <title>I think this sentence  means that the elders are trying to prepare Their black child from the hate and obstacles they are going to face in this white world</title>
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      <description> This means He's eager, He's eager to find what he's good at so he can succeed in life.</description>
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      <title>I think this sentence means that white people want a black servant to steal, just to show that's what black people do and just show that white people are superior.</title>
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      <title>I believe this is  the life for people who were black in the 60's and this is how it was especially Harlem because Harlem was a very poor place the people live in Harlem most likely was living in poverty and had a scarcity of basic goods.</title>
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      <description>I think the next paragraph is how Baldwin used church to not be caught up in the streets and gangs which many of his friend resorted too. Judging from the last sentence. His friends are on the needle, wine, whisky these are drugs that James friend are taking but instead of James being a follower he went to church to probably be distracted from all those things.</description>
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      <title> I think Baldwin is going through puberty and having these  thoughts and he thinks he is sinning and that's why he calling himself evil.</title>
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      <title> I noticed he's talking about a savior which is  Jesus</title>
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      <description>I believe  this means  to me is for the black man to not show signs of any weakness to a White man, do not show an opening or an entrance for a white man to belittle a black man, So when James Baldwin says to cloak your weariness it means to hide your tiredness so you don't let anyone take an advantage over you.</description>
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      <title>I think Baldwin wants to leave the ghetto and be famous so no white person can say anything to him</title>
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      <title>And i think he became aware of a lot of things at 14 like racism</title>
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      <title>i agree</title>
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      <title>I'm not sure Maybe this is his book</title>
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      <title>Baldwin is saying in order to survive as a human we need to let things go</title>
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      <title>I'm not sure but I think the last sentence is basically stating that were equal</title>
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      <description>In the last sentences it says That no one is more christian than anyone else. But still white people try to put down white people saying that were descendants of Ham, So were more christian. But Black people say white people are descendants of Cain, but People are the same amount of christian doesn't matter the of what  skin color you are.</description>
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      <title>Why is the father so mad that Baldwin friend is Jewish, Is it because they have a different religion?</title>
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      <title>Paragraph 16 relates to paragraph 19 because maybe the blindness and terror was the bible saying black people were the descendants of Ham and predestined to be slaves.</title>
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      <title>There something that Baldwin feels that he can't describe, when he said Jesus, my dearest friend,who would never fail me knew all the secrets of my heart perhaps he did, but I didn't. This show that Baldwin is felling something that he can't describe. </title>
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      <title>he became an preacher and I think he chose this job because he wanted to excel at something and he was bored</title>
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      <title>I think this means for white churches The principles was Faith, hope,and charity but for most black churches it's blindness, loneliness,and terror</title>
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      <title>Baldwin is saying if we were all gods children why do blacks have to cast so far away meaning why do black have to go through all these awful things if we were gods children</title>
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      <title>Little boy</title>
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      <description>When she says who's &quot;little boy&quot; are you it's a negative concept because I think little boys refer to the henchmen  of the pimps and racketeers back then, but when Baldwin says i'm yours That means i'm a little boy of a pastor or god meaning i'm a worker or henchmen of a pastor, or god</description>
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      <title>This means that the efforts by parents to teach their kids about the world they will be living in as a Black person. And it's scary for an elder to let a kid go especially in a world and time where people are despised cause of their color </title>
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      <description>This shows Baldwin is trying so hard to make it out the ghetto</description>
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      <title>This is showing that the white people want to limit the Black man capabilities but they definitely didn't limit James Baldwin  capabilities</title>
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      <title>I think this means that when A black servant for a white family who probably made 1 cent a week smuggles good from white people they let them do it just so they can show that white people are more superior.</title>
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      <title> I think Baldwin is going through puberty and he is afraid he's going to end up on the streets and do evil things that he could've never imagine him doing.</title>
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      <title>wow you just summed up the whole paragraph, I totally agree with you.</title>
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      <title> When it says let your cries be silent and to hide your weariness it basically saying to  Black Man and Women to  not  show any weakness To white people. Don't let them have power over you.</title>
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      <title>yeah ) I agree and that doesn't go for just James it goes for A lot of African Americans in this world Today.</title>
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      <title>it is very sad</title>
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