Comments by SANIYA LIRIANO Most recent public comments by SANIYA LIRIANO https://nowcomment.com/users/94162 Simile https://nowcomment.com/documents/135537?scroll_to=2341672 https://nowcomment.com/documents/135537?scroll_to=2341672 The author uses "as" to describe how the women felt when listening to the man speak. Thu, 18 Feb 2021 15:31:00 -0500 Rythm https://nowcomment.com/documents/135537?scroll_to=2341651 https://nowcomment.com/documents/135537?scroll_to=2341651 I like this stanza shows rythm because the idea hasn't changed. In the beginning of the poem it says "With the man I love who loves me not". That idea is distributed throughout this stanza. Thu, 18 Feb 2021 15:26:37 -0500 I feel like this stanza creates tension because its talking about how the guy doesn't really understand that the girl likes him https://nowcomment.com/documents/135537?scroll_to=2341649 https://nowcomment.com/documents/135537?scroll_to=2341649 Thu, 18 Feb 2021 15:21:17 -0500 Maybe this means that the man she was walking with was handsome, and that's why girls where staring https://nowcomment.com/documents/135537?scroll_to=2341639 https://nowcomment.com/documents/135537?scroll_to=2341639 Thu, 18 Feb 2021 15:14:00 -0500 I feel like the woman is listening to everything the man is saying and is understanding him, but I also think she feels that he doesn't understand that she likes him. Maybe she has been dropping hints and he hasnt caught on yet. https://nowcomment.com/documents/135537?scroll_to=2341632 https://nowcomment.com/documents/135537?scroll_to=2341632 Thu, 18 Feb 2021 15:06:29 -0500 I agree, I thought the image would be at night and more modern like. I also thought the image would mainly focus on two people. https://nowcomment.com/documents/135537?scroll_to=2341631 https://nowcomment.com/documents/135537?scroll_to=2341631 Thu, 18 Feb 2021 15:03:06 -0500 I agree she is worried for tish but she also seems angry/irritated https://nowcomment.com/documents/239919?scroll_to=2302459 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239919?scroll_to=2302459 Sat, 30 Jan 2021 01:29:55 -0500 18 is young but now that she is going to become a mother it changes the whole situation https://nowcomment.com/documents/239919?scroll_to=2302458 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239919?scroll_to=2302458 Sat, 30 Jan 2021 01:28:24 -0500 I agree but honestly tish is already pregnant meaning she should make her own decision https://nowcomment.com/documents/239919?scroll_to=2302455 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239919?scroll_to=2302455 Sat, 30 Jan 2021 01:26:50 -0500 Hes telling tishs parents that he wants to marry her and that hes a good person https://nowcomment.com/documents/239919?scroll_to=2302447 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239919?scroll_to=2302447 Sat, 30 Jan 2021 01:00:54 -0500 Even though tish is young, her father is still supportive. He still shows that he cares for her and that he will have her back. https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2253615 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2253615 Thu, 31 Dec 2020 00:17:44 -0500 Tish told her family she was pregnant https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2253585 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2253585 Wed, 30 Dec 2020 21:16:21 -0500 It seems like the dad had gotten tense. The son is talking about how he knew what was going to happen, so the dad had probably knew what was going to happen as well. https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2253584 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2253584 Sun, 24 Jan 2021 19:54:12 -0500 The bottle is alcohol and maybe she didnt open it until now because she wanted to age it. https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2253583 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2253583 Wed, 30 Dec 2020 20:55:21 -0500 Fonny doesnt have a good relationship with his mom https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2231577 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2231577 Mon, 07 Dec 2020 20:57:11 -0500 yea that was weird https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2231576 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2231576 Wed, 06 Jan 2021 01:32:03 -0500 thats nice that they apologized to each other, but why clementines friend exaggerated the situation? like it honestly wasnt necessary to lie abt it https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2231575 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2231575 Mon, 07 Dec 2020 20:42:38 -0500 Why is her "friend" saying all that for? Why is clementine still friends with her? https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2227900 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2227900 Sun, 06 Dec 2020 22:22:32 -0500 Geneva is a bad friend https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2227823 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2227823 Fri, 04 Dec 2020 10:30:35 -0500 She is talking about how her and Fonny met https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2226608 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2226608 Thu, 03 Dec 2020 20:41:11 -0500 I wonder what her and Fonny go through https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2226600 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2226600 Thu, 03 Dec 2020 20:33:16 -0500 she really loves him https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2224825 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2224825 Fri, 04 Dec 2020 10:34:04 -0500 so hes 3 years older then her https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2224822 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2224822 Wed, 02 Dec 2020 20:45:57 -0500 Um how old is she? and my guess of them being lovers was correct. https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2224820 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2224820 Wed, 02 Dec 2020 20:44:18 -0500 I think something bad happened to clementine and she doesnt want to tell Alonzo so she doesnt worry him but she knows she has to. https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2224818 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2224818 Wed, 02 Dec 2020 20:42:36 -0500 I feel like the relationship she has with him is more than a friend now, before I thought it was just best friends, but I feel like she might think of him as more than that. https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2222197 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2222197 Sun, 20 Dec 2020 19:49:32 -0500 is this clementines bestfriend? https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2222195 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2222195 Tue, 01 Dec 2020 20:51:14 -0500 Thats something im curious about too,Trish doesnt sound like clementine at all. https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2222179 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2222179 Tue, 01 Dec 2020 20:45:25 -0500 I feel like the story is going to be about how clementine "finds herself" https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2222177 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2222177 Thu, 28 Jan 2021 10:42:32 -0500 What this person is saying is that the country is celebrating freedom when there actually isn't any at all https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2174247 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2174247 Thu, 29 Oct 2020 22:34:20 -0400 This person told James how the world is and that it is racist and that he was living the way he was now simply because of the color of his skin. https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2174240 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2174240 Thu, 29 Oct 2020 22:27:11 -0400 I agree and i think the person is saying that if he basically gives up, then hes also leading his kids and future grandkids to give up. https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2174237 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2174237 Thu, 29 Oct 2020 22:24:29 -0400 I feel like this person is basically saying that he has to make a better life for himself for the sake of his peoples future https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2174235 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2174235 Thu, 29 Oct 2020 22:23:01 -0400 I agree, its as if this person was giving James a "guide" to a better life. https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2174228 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2174228 Thu, 29 Oct 2020 22:19:43 -0400 I feel like its saying how to "survive" in this country and how to deal with white people https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2174227 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2174227 Thu, 29 Oct 2020 22:18:38 -0400 I agree, I feel like its saying to not judge everyone off the majority because there is still good people out there https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2174226 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2174226 Thu, 29 Oct 2020 22:16:24 -0400 I feel like this means that it is not right that the people who are causing destruction and ugliness/crime in the world are being claimed innocent. I feel like they are saying that the bad people are never held accountable if they are white. https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2174224 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2174224 Thu, 29 Oct 2020 22:14:23 -0400 I agree with this statement, I feel like the sibling of James dad felt happy when thinking of these memories and felt like he/she was reliving them. https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2174219 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2174219 Thu, 29 Oct 2020 22:10:01 -0400 This person is basically talking about how she/he got to watch James father grow physically and as a person https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2174213 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2174213 Thu, 29 Oct 2020 22:06:10 -0400 this person is talking about james, and is his fathers sibling https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2174207 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2174207 Thu, 29 Oct 2020 22:03:10 -0400 He thought of jews as white and he knew they would appear in the bible with certain type of names and was shocked when he saw them far from egypt https://nowcomment.com/documents/231335?scroll_to=2168435 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231335?scroll_to=2168435 Tue, 27 Oct 2020 23:57:56 -0400 People where telling him that it was basically impossible to believe because it was written long after what happened. He felt like he saw certain things that didn't sound right (good) like it was made to trick people https://nowcomment.com/documents/231335?scroll_to=2168426 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231335?scroll_to=2168426 Wed, 28 Oct 2020 12:50:30 -0400 He became closer to the people and felt their pain while they felt his by being in church https://nowcomment.com/documents/116282?scroll_to=2168424 https://nowcomment.com/documents/116282?scroll_to=2168424 Tue, 27 Oct 2020 20:16:57 -0400 He felt like if he was to be tempted while bored of life, he would become like the people from the Avenue https://nowcomment.com/documents/116282?scroll_to=2168421 https://nowcomment.com/documents/116282?scroll_to=2168421 Tue, 27 Oct 2020 20:14:31 -0400 He feels like christians have a negative life/ the principles represent something negative https://nowcomment.com/documents/116282?scroll_to=2168418 https://nowcomment.com/documents/116282?scroll_to=2168418 Tue, 27 Oct 2020 20:12:14 -0400 I agree with this, he feels like blacks are basically outcasts, and that if god is saying that all children are his, why have blacks go through worse things than whites https://nowcomment.com/documents/116282?scroll_to=2168415 https://nowcomment.com/documents/116282?scroll_to=2168415 Tue, 27 Oct 2020 20:09:23 -0400 I notice that hes describing life in a negative way https://nowcomment.com/documents/116282?scroll_to=2168412 https://nowcomment.com/documents/116282?scroll_to=2168412 Tue, 27 Oct 2020 20:07:27 -0400 He wasnt worried about "his souls salvation"he just wanted any type of attention https://nowcomment.com/documents/116282?scroll_to=2168411 https://nowcomment.com/documents/116282?scroll_to=2168411 Tue, 27 Oct 2020 20:04:59 -0400 Black people were taught to not like themselves and think of themselves poorly from the moment they were born. https://nowcomment.com/documents/231335?scroll_to=2165663 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231335?scroll_to=2165663 Tue, 27 Oct 2020 10:52:23 -0400 From the beginning of a black persons life, ,they are taught that they mean nothing in this world https://nowcomment.com/documents/116282?scroll_to=2159078 https://nowcomment.com/documents/116282?scroll_to=2159078 Mon, 26 Oct 2020 09:31:59 -0400 He wanted to change his life, but he had noticed that it was going to be difficult https://nowcomment.com/documents/116282?scroll_to=2159063 https://nowcomment.com/documents/116282?scroll_to=2159063 Sun, 25 Oct 2020 20:40:55 -0400 I agree, whites were so privileged that if they did something wrong there would be no punishment, but if a black person was to do it there would be a issue, and thats sad https://nowcomment.com/documents/116282?scroll_to=2159009 https://nowcomment.com/documents/116282?scroll_to=2159009 Sun, 25 Oct 2020 20:17:07 -0400 I agree with this. He refused to walk down the path whites had set for him. https://nowcomment.com/documents/116282?scroll_to=2158997 https://nowcomment.com/documents/116282?scroll_to=2158997 Sun, 25 Oct 2020 20:10:48 -0400 He refused to let white people lay out his "future". He refused to let them tell him who he was. https://nowcomment.com/documents/116282?scroll_to=2158985 https://nowcomment.com/documents/116282?scroll_to=2158985 Sun, 25 Oct 2020 20:04:27 -0400 He doesnt respect the standards whites have made because they have proven to him that they dont go by their word (they dont live by the standards) https://nowcomment.com/documents/116282?scroll_to=2152291 https://nowcomment.com/documents/116282?scroll_to=2152291 Wed, 21 Oct 2020 20:15:01 -0400 he is scared of what he can become because he is witnessing everyone else change around him. https://nowcomment.com/documents/116282?scroll_to=2152276 https://nowcomment.com/documents/116282?scroll_to=2152276 Wed, 21 Oct 2020 20:08:23 -0400