Comments by SARA PHILLIPS Most recent public comments by SARA PHILLIPS https://nowcomment.com/users/94386 the last word of every 2nd and 4th line in each stanza rhymes. I love when poems subtly rhyme its so satisfying but not cheesy. https://nowcomment.com/documents/135537?scroll_to=2317595 https://nowcomment.com/documents/135537?scroll_to=2317595 Fri, 05 Feb 2021 22:14:41 -0500 this whole poem didn't really sound like a traditional poem. it sounded a lot like a song. like when I was reading it I couldn't help it but perceive it as a song. https://nowcomment.com/documents/135537?scroll_to=2317594 https://nowcomment.com/documents/135537?scroll_to=2317594 Fri, 05 Feb 2021 22:10:14 -0500 It's so cool to see what union square looked like in 1911. https://nowcomment.com/documents/135537?scroll_to=2317593 https://nowcomment.com/documents/135537?scroll_to=2317593 when I think of union square now I think of shoppers, students, and protesters walking the streets, but this is so much different and even though it doesn't look like it does now it still has the same busy energy. Sun, 07 Feb 2021 18:08:41 -0500 I don't really agree with this. if they know their truth and the truth would prove him innocent they should fight for his freedom. https://nowcomment.com/documents/239919?scroll_to=2261330 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239919?scroll_to=2261330 Sat, 09 Jan 2021 17:56:45 -0500 It concerns me that they may not be able to provide for each other and her child. there both so young and at that time it was hard to find a well paying job for such young people. https://nowcomment.com/documents/239919?scroll_to=2261328 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239919?scroll_to=2261328 Wed, 06 Jan 2021 13:25:17 -0500 everything about this paragraph makes it hard to believe Fonny isn't innocent. he's seems so respectful and caring. https://nowcomment.com/documents/239919?scroll_to=2261323 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239919?scroll_to=2261323 Fri, 08 Jan 2021 12:33:05 -0500 thank youuu https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2254017 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2254017 Fri, 01 Jan 2021 18:54:43 -0500 shouldn't she be like... not drinking when she pregnant. https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2253742 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2253742 Thu, 31 Dec 2020 19:17:58 -0500 what did he want to say? why couldn't he say it? https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2253741 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2253741 Tue, 19 Jan 2021 13:32:59 -0500 this whole sentence confuses me so much lol. https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2253740 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2253740 Thu, 31 Dec 2020 19:16:15 -0500 yeahhh https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2253737 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2253737 Thu, 31 Dec 2020 19:06:09 -0500 I wonder why his faced changed in this way... it almost seems like he's getting pent up or tense. https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2253736 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2253736 Thu, 31 Dec 2020 19:05:22 -0500 what was she "doing" and why did her heart jump up? https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2253734 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2253734 Thu, 31 Dec 2020 19:02:31 -0500 this really shows how much they truly love each other. They really care about each other too. https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2250683 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2250683 Mon, 21 Dec 2020 13:59:05 -0500 ikrrrrr https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2250678 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2250678 Mon, 21 Dec 2020 13:56:59 -0500 I wonder what that has to do with anything. https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2249676 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2249676 Fri, 18 Dec 2020 15:35:35 -0500 I agree they seem un-welcoming https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2246802 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2246802 Wed, 16 Dec 2020 13:22:33 -0500 yeah that's definetly not a good idea. It can cause several problems with the baby and their development. https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2246797 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2246797 Wed, 16 Dec 2020 13:21:04 -0500 I wonder why he smiled. https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2241573 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2241573 Sun, 13 Dec 2020 23:40:52 -0500 how did the nickname "tish" come from clementine? Hoe did she get that nickname and why? https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2241572 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2241572 Sun, 13 Dec 2020 23:39:42 -0500 I agree. https://nowcomment.com/documents/231335?scroll_to=2164051 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231335?scroll_to=2164051 Mon, 26 Oct 2020 22:34:24 -0400 religion is also very important to him and It seems to help him in all sorts of ways and can be almost like an escape. https://nowcomment.com/documents/231335?scroll_to=2164049 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231335?scroll_to=2164049 Mon, 26 Oct 2020 22:34:03 -0400 he talks about his religion in such a way that makes me think he's not very comfortable in the environment its created for him. https://nowcomment.com/documents/231335?scroll_to=2164045 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231335?scroll_to=2164045 Thu, 28 Jan 2021 14:25:38 -0500 I'm wondering the same thing https://nowcomment.com/documents/231335?scroll_to=2164041 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231335?scroll_to=2164041 Mon, 26 Oct 2020 22:30:49 -0400 this shows how much hatred has been put into religion and how its used for forcing people to do things and to make up of bad things people have done. https://nowcomment.com/documents/231335?scroll_to=2164037 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231335?scroll_to=2164037 Mon, 26 Oct 2020 22:30:18 -0400 This is showing how much white people actually enjoyed being racists and harm black people. It didn't just happen, they enjoyed it. So much so that they would be happy to see their black servants do something wrong. https://nowcomment.com/documents/231335?scroll_to=2164033 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231335?scroll_to=2164033 Mon, 26 Oct 2020 22:27:39 -0400 here he's really showing what it was like to be a black man then. no matter how much money you make and how successful you become it doesn't matter. You don't have main control over your life. https://nowcomment.com/documents/231335?scroll_to=2164031 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231335?scroll_to=2164031 Mon, 26 Oct 2020 22:25:26 -0400 education is definitely one fo his top priorities. https://nowcomment.com/documents/231335?scroll_to=2164027 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231335?scroll_to=2164027 Wed, 28 Oct 2020 10:43:47 -0400 I agreeee https://nowcomment.com/documents/231335?scroll_to=2164021 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231335?scroll_to=2164021 Mon, 26 Oct 2020 22:19:24 -0400 I agree with you. some of these words are still used casually. https://nowcomment.com/documents/231335?scroll_to=2164013 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231335?scroll_to=2164013 Mon, 26 Oct 2020 22:18:04 -0400 I agree with everyone who's saying it's about Jesus. It is after all a hymn which is a section of text taken from the Bible. https://nowcomment.com/documents/231335?scroll_to=2164011 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231335?scroll_to=2164011 Wed, 13 Jan 2021 10:50:44 -0500 This is where the title from the beginning came from. https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2145170 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2145170 Mon, 26 Oct 2020 22:18:04 -0400 I agree https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2145167 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2145167 Mon, 26 Oct 2020 22:18:04 -0400 its almost like he's writing a guide book on how to deal with the racism in this time with advise and past experiences https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2145163 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2145163 Mon, 26 Oct 2020 22:18:04 -0400 this letter seems to be very important and mean a lot to him. https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2145011 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2145011 Mon, 26 Oct 2020 22:18:04 -0400 yeah https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2145003 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2145003 Mon, 26 Oct 2020 22:18:04 -0400 yes I agree https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2145000 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2145000 Mon, 26 Oct 2020 22:18:04 -0400 I wonder what the means. symbolism? https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2144999 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2144999 Mon, 26 Oct 2020 22:18:04 -0400 a violent or sudden change or disruption to something. https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2144996 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2144996 Mon, 26 Oct 2020 22:18:04 -0400 there is deffinetly heavy symbolism here https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2144995 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2144995 I think he's trying to say that so many black people have been the foundation of white peoples success without getting any of the credit and as they start to rise up and accomplish stuff on their own white people are angered by it. (maybe this is just a guess) Mon, 26 Oct 2020 22:18:04 -0400 he's saying that even though people say there is does not mean anyone had really changed. Freedom is being celebrated "too soon" meaning he doesn't feel like there has been any freedom in the past 100 years. https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2144987 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2144987 Mon, 26 Oct 2020 22:18:04 -0400 yes I agree https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2144985 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2144985 Mon, 26 Oct 2020 22:18:04 -0400 I agree https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2144982 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2144982 Mon, 26 Oct 2020 22:18:04 -0400 he really cares about who he's talking about. https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2144981 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2144981 the wording is really powerful and has a lot of passion put into it. You can tell its about someone important Mon, 26 Oct 2020 22:18:04 -0400 I really want to know what this symbolizes. https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2144973 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2144973 Mon, 26 Oct 2020 22:18:04 -0400 I agree https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2144950 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231316?scroll_to=2144950 Mon, 26 Oct 2020 22:18:04 -0400