Most recent public comments by Katie L. Bishop https://nowcomment.com/users/94524 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231819?scroll_to=2528257 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231819?scroll_to=2528257 This paragraph could resemble change as Janie leans over the front gate as she sees Johnny Taylor approaching. One could predict that this could potentially be right before a major turning point in the story. Fri, 27 Aug 2021 20:03:20 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231819?scroll_to=2528255 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231819?scroll_to=2528255 This last sentence in this part of the passage seems to summarize this paragraph pretty well. This paragraph is filled with gossip and judgement. As the woman makes her way through the town, fellow citizens throw insults and attack the woman with harsh words behind her back. Fri, 17 Sep 2021 11:24:25 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231819?scroll_to=2528237 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231819?scroll_to=2528237 Here Janie begs to have more time before she gets married. This small sentence shows what Janie is going through in one sentence. She is so young, and she wants to wait longer, but she is practically being forced into marriage at such a young age. She did not want it to be her time to be married. Fri, 27 Aug 2021 19:37:07 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231819?scroll_to=2528235 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231819?scroll_to=2528235 In this paragraph, the audience may feel sorrow for the women as she walks through the town. The narrator uses pathos to bring emotion into the text and pulls the readers in. For example the text says, "They made burning statements with questions, and killing tools out of laughs. It was mass cruelty." You can feel the judgement through the passage and it really makes the reader feel as if they are with the woman as she is getting insulted. Fri, 27 Aug 2021 19:28:00 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/263250?scroll_to=2380263 https://nowcomment.com/documents/263250?scroll_to=2380263 What your saying can relate to the audience. Someone who has lived in Sellersburg their whole life may not know what world they are missing out on. Wed, 17 Mar 2021 14:59:59 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/263250?scroll_to=2380182 https://nowcomment.com/documents/263250?scroll_to=2380182 I agree with you. When we were kids, we may have looked at life through rose colored glasses. We did not realized what reality is like until now. Some of us are still trying to figure out how big the world actually is. As kids, we may have seen things in a positive way. There are still many positives in this world, but as we grew older, we noticed the negatives. Wed, 17 Mar 2021 14:59:58 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/263250?scroll_to=2380127 https://nowcomment.com/documents/263250?scroll_to=2380127 I really like how the author uses this simile in the text. I feel like it helps me understand the message being conveyed better. The author uses different similes, which seems to draw readers in. Wed, 17 Mar 2021 14:59:57 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/263250?scroll_to=2380070 https://nowcomment.com/documents/263250?scroll_to=2380070 The word "ALIVE" seems to resemble significance. If the title was, "We made it to school," wouldn't it seem off? The word "ALIVE" seems to bring the title together. Wed, 17 Mar 2021 15:00:01 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/263250?scroll_to=2379979 https://nowcomment.com/documents/263250?scroll_to=2379979 Colleen, I like how you described how a butterfly could represent children growing. We all started as babies, but we grew into who we are now. Just like how caterpillars grow up to be butterflies. We all grow up to being something beautiful and unique. Wed, 17 Mar 2021 14:59:55 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/263224?scroll_to=2376452 https://nowcomment.com/documents/263224?scroll_to=2376452 As I read through this piece, I noticed this too. I really like how the author made the tone of this work stand out. There was a moment of happiness, sadness, and excitement. There were also many pathos throughout this piece that had to do with the tone. Fri, 12 Mar 2021 10:04:59 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/263224?scroll_to=2376451 https://nowcomment.com/documents/263224?scroll_to=2376451 This is exactly what I thought when I read this part of the article. What could the teacher have been saying? It would be hard to defend yourself if you were insulted with words you did not know. Fri, 12 Mar 2021 10:01:59 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/263224?scroll_to=2376442 https://nowcomment.com/documents/263224?scroll_to=2376442 I agree with what you are saying about the title. At first, by reading the title, I was not for sure what this story was about. After reading the text, it began coming together. The text was very intriguing! Fri, 12 Mar 2021 09:57:19 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/263224?scroll_to=2375307 https://nowcomment.com/documents/263224?scroll_to=2375307 Just this singular phrase can be relatable to the audience. This also causes a pathos affect in the reading. Most of the time, we find comfort in knowing we are not alone. For example, say a student forgets their homework. They are worried all day knowing they forgot their assignment. Later their friend tells them they forgot the homework too, and there's a moment of relief, knowing they are not alone. Thu, 11 Mar 2021 14:13:58 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/263224?scroll_to=2375295 https://nowcomment.com/documents/263224?scroll_to=2375295 This can make readers emotional, which brings pathos into this message. The fellow students engage with each other, and tell each other to be strong. They give each other confidence boosts. This can make the audience feel despair for the students. Thu, 11 Mar 2021 14:03:09 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/262700?scroll_to=2372741 https://nowcomment.com/documents/262700?scroll_to=2372741 This message stuck out to me because of how true it is. When we are kids, depending on how we grow up, we are taught how to lead or follow. Now, those who follow are too scared to lead, and those who lead may not want to follow. For example, say you were always called quiet or shy as a kid. Many people could assume you did not enjoy talking to people, when really as a child you were taught to follow instead of leading. In school we are put into classes and told if we are "gifted" or not. This could change the way we see ourselves, which could make us too scared to lead or follow. Wed, 10 Mar 2021 13:32:07 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/262700?scroll_to=2372728 https://nowcomment.com/documents/262700?scroll_to=2372728 I feel like this specific quote could have a deeper meaning. When we go home with a heavy backpack, filled with homework that needs to be completed, a lot of the times students are already carrying worries, insecurities, family issues, and other problems on their backs. If you have a stressful life back at home, you are not going to want to do a lot of homework. Tue, 09 Mar 2021 14:03:16 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/262700?scroll_to=2372528 https://nowcomment.com/documents/262700?scroll_to=2372528 Emma, I love how you described this quote! I completely agree with you. Many students have a hard time studying, so when they do try to study, they memorize it. A lot of times when you memorize something in a short period of time, there is a good chance you will completely forget it in the future. Tue, 09 Mar 2021 13:55:44 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/262700?scroll_to=2372509 https://nowcomment.com/documents/262700?scroll_to=2372509 I love the way Jordyn wrote this. It really sums up what this TED talk conveyed. Lets say a student was called a "regular." They were told they did not get the best grades and were not one of the "gifted" kids. This could bring down that kids confidence so much, making them not want to continue learning. When we were in our younger ages people acted like life was easy, but as we grew older, it got a lot harder. Tue, 09 Mar 2021 13:47:48 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/260954?scroll_to=2363368 https://nowcomment.com/documents/260954?scroll_to=2363368 At first, Malcolm X was not sure where to start. He did not realize this many words existed in this world, and he had no idea which words he needed to learn. He was in a confused/uncertain state of mind. Wed, 03 Mar 2021 13:14:21 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/260283?scroll_to=2354998 https://nowcomment.com/documents/260283?scroll_to=2354998 If it was my birthday and this happened, I would not be too happy either. It is upsetting to know how some kids find bullying others refreshing. Rachel was minding her own business,not wanting any trouble, and at first she was happy on her birthday to get to have a cake at the end of the day. Thu, 25 Feb 2021 22:08:53 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/260283?scroll_to=2354996 https://nowcomment.com/documents/260283?scroll_to=2354996 Even as Rachel tries to explain that the red sweater is not hers, her teacher shouts at her. Rachel just turned eleven, and she is dealing with this red sweater on her birthday. This made Rachel even more upset than she already was, causing her to break into tears. Thu, 25 Feb 2021 22:04:21 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/260279?scroll_to=2354516 https://nowcomment.com/documents/260279?scroll_to=2354516 As the boy leaves, Mrs. Jones says, "Behave yourself, boy!" Then she shuts the door. After that whole experience, those are her last words towards him. She brought him in for dinner, gave him money, and did not bring him to jail or get him in any sort of trouble. She is an inspiration to many, and hopefully her kindness can be spread throughout others. Tue, 20 Apr 2021 22:01:29 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/260279?scroll_to=2354472 https://nowcomment.com/documents/260279?scroll_to=2354472 The boy was scared, and seemed to not want to tell the truth. Why did Roger say he didn't aim to, instead of just telling the truth right away? What was holding him back? Could he have been feeling guilty after trying to steal? Tue, 20 Apr 2021 22:01:29 -0400 https://nowcomment.com/documents/258111?scroll_to=2333000 https://nowcomment.com/documents/258111?scroll_to=2333000 This line may have a deeper meaning behind it. She could be saying that she is comfortable in the life she has, and is comfortable in her skin. When she says, "I have no wish to escape." What could she mean by "escape?" What do you think she would be escaping? Fri, 12 Feb 2021 08:43:46 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/257626?scroll_to=2326792 https://nowcomment.com/documents/257626?scroll_to=2326792 Bishop compares rain to the teakettle's tears. Rain could be seen as cloud tears, just like water droplets coming from a teakettle can be seen as tears. I love how she words this sentence! Tue, 09 Feb 2021 13:34:53 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/257626?scroll_to=2326773 https://nowcomment.com/documents/257626?scroll_to=2326773 An annual calendar containing important dates and statistical information. Tue, 09 Feb 2021 13:30:10 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/247092?scroll_to=2299645 https://nowcomment.com/documents/247092?scroll_to=2299645 Many people do not look forward to aging. People always wish they could be a child again. But when Morrie says,"When you're in bed, you're dead." he smiles. Many would see that as a dark and depressing thought. But Morrie smiled. Thu, 28 Jan 2021 14:24:39 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/247092?scroll_to=2299521 https://nowcomment.com/documents/247092?scroll_to=2299521 What Morrie says is true. We all want things, but do we really need these things? I always hear people, including myself sometimes, talking about how we need something. For example,expensive shoes, or a brand new game console. Do we really need those? Or is it just a want. Thu, 28 Jan 2021 13:57:38 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/247092?scroll_to=2299483 https://nowcomment.com/documents/247092?scroll_to=2299483 The way Morrie explained this really made me begin to think deeper. Being older can be just like being a child again. I find it intriguing how throughout life, we start off as a child, and as we age, we slowly become a child again. Mon, 01 Feb 2021 12:13:00 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/243457?scroll_to=2269389 https://nowcomment.com/documents/243457?scroll_to=2269389 Mitch remembers how he used to refer to Morrie as coach which is a connection between the past and the present. I found this a lot deeper than it seems to be. If Mitch did not recognize this connection between Morrie and himself, he would have missed out on the conversations he has over the word "coach" in the present time. Mon, 11 Jan 2021 14:04:54 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/240008?scroll_to=2187516 https://nowcomment.com/documents/240008?scroll_to=2187516 Emma, when you mentioned that many people do not know how to express their emotions, I feel as if a lot of people can relate to this. Many people often have a difficult time expressing themselves to others when they are in a tough situation. I feel like you brought out a good point in this movie that a lot of people probably can relate to! Arnold is not sure how to express his emotions towards jack, so he uses the words, "We hate you." Fri, 06 Nov 2020 23:42:50 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/240008?scroll_to=2187512 https://nowcomment.com/documents/240008?scroll_to=2187512 The ending train scene seemed to be filled with excitement and wonder, other than sadness. Yes they were clearly upset about Jack getting a new job, as Emma stated,but they seemed overall happy that they got to experience the world for themselves. Jack was happy for them, but also sad to see them go. Fri, 06 Nov 2020 23:36:29 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/240008?scroll_to=2187506 https://nowcomment.com/documents/240008?scroll_to=2187506 This is a really good point! Jack is so caring towards Barry. Jack does not care whether Barry's aim when golfing is good. He was just proud that he hit the golf ball. That is a reason why Barry trusts Jack more than he does his biological father. His biological father would not care about his sons hit, he would care about how he hit. he would tell Barry everything he did wrong when golfing. Jack would be proud of Barry no matter what. Fri, 06 Nov 2020 23:30:02 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/240008?scroll_to=2187498 https://nowcomment.com/documents/240008?scroll_to=2187498 In the last scene I felt as if there was a cliff-hanger. When the end scenes came on I thought to myself, "Is that really the end?" We ask ourselves questions such as, "Where is the train actually going?" or "How long will the train begone?" We wonder what will happen between the characters in the movies relationships. Will their relationships continue? How will their lives be different? Tue, 15 Dec 2020 12:14:03 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/240008?scroll_to=2187434 https://nowcomment.com/documents/240008?scroll_to=2187434 I did not realize this until you pointed it out. I did not really think there was a deeper meaning to this and it amazes me that there are many things I probably would not have noticed unless someone points it out to me. Thank you for sharing this with us! Never would have noticed without your message. Fri, 06 Nov 2020 21:02:41 -0500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/238472?scroll_to=2170541 https://nowcomment.com/documents/238472?scroll_to=2170541 After I read a poem or article, I enjoy learning more about the poet or the author. The poet of this poem is named Rupi Kaur. She actually wrote, published, and illustrated her first poetry collection at age 21! Her poems are filled with emotion and love, compassion, and healing. She was born in India and now is a Canadian poet. She often speaks of her experience, trauma, and relationships. Fri, 06 Nov 2020 21:02:41 -0500