Comments by doenat the cross Alexander walker Most recent public comments by doenat the cross Alexander walker https://nowcomment.com/users/94608 This overall poem kind of has the nyc vibe to it. And this is significant because it shows the importance of how a place can spark pleasure in someones heart. https://nowcomment.com/documents/136692?scroll_to=2321486 https://nowcomment.com/documents/136692?scroll_to=2321486 Mon, 08 Feb 2021 11:00:21 -0500 I feel like the tone the author has in this sentence is stronger. Or more aggressive. https://nowcomment.com/documents/136692?scroll_to=2321452 https://nowcomment.com/documents/136692?scroll_to=2321452 Mon, 08 Feb 2021 10:53:32 -0500 I feel like the author is using a hyperbole because he says shrieks. He is relating the police sirens to shrieking which is exagaration to a say how loud the sirens are. https://nowcomment.com/documents/136692?scroll_to=2321430 https://nowcomment.com/documents/136692?scroll_to=2321430 Mon, 08 Feb 2021 10:48:46 -0500 Parts of this poems shows different parts of nyc. It shows 145th bridge and high bridge. https://nowcomment.com/documents/136692?scroll_to=2321311 https://nowcomment.com/documents/136692?scroll_to=2321311 Mon, 08 Feb 2021 10:24:33 -0500 Some of the sentences shows a lot of traits of the Bronx. I really like that the author does this he shows how the Bronx is and sometimes in poems or story's the reader cant really imagine the things being said happening. But I can imagine this happening https://nowcomment.com/documents/136692?scroll_to=2321140 https://nowcomment.com/documents/136692?scroll_to=2321140 Mon, 08 Feb 2021 09:59:03 -0500 There is a good representation of the word "above". The poem keeps a steady flow by using "above" at the beginning of a lot of sentences. The poem uses rhythm . Rhythm makes language musical emphasizes ideas creates moods, and contributes to tones. https://nowcomment.com/documents/136692?scroll_to=2320952 https://nowcomment.com/documents/136692?scroll_to=2320952 It causes a reader's body experience the text phisically. Tue, 16 Mar 2021 22:17:00 -0400 This shows that baldwin is very vivd with his description. And that tish and fonny are really in love https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2301516 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2301516 Fri, 29 Jan 2021 11:04:54 -0500 I feel like this hows its real affection though and not fake. Cause some people together for just their bodies. https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2301515 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2301515 Fri, 29 Jan 2021 11:03:48 -0500 This shows how he want's to be represented. And also how he should be represented https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2301513 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2301513 Fri, 29 Jan 2021 11:02:33 -0500 I feel like what sheila is saying is and isnt true because that cant be the only reason why fony is locked up https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2301512 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2301512 Fri, 29 Jan 2021 11:24:59 -0500 Fonny is way better with tish's family this his own. I feel like this hows they never were fond of him with tish https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2301508 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2301508 Fri, 29 Jan 2021 10:59:21 -0500 Why was mrs. hunt so scared. Maybe this is showing something about her. https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2301505 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2301505 Fri, 29 Jan 2021 10:58:23 -0500 Fonny relationship with Mrs. hunt compared to tish's mom. Tish's mom is way more supportive https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2301494 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2301494 Fri, 29 Jan 2021 10:49:10 -0500 I feel like fonny should be free. He has no good reason for being in jail https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2301491 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2301491 Fri, 29 Jan 2021 10:46:36 -0500 I feel like this shows how the relationship betwwen tish family and fonny is good. compared to fonnys parents relationship https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2301490 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2301490 Fri, 29 Jan 2021 10:45:59 -0500 Tish mom is very good for her health. And this also shows how good their relationship is https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2301485 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2301485 Fri, 29 Jan 2021 10:38:13 -0500 This relates to baldwins actual relationship with church. Also maybe when Mrs. hunt says church is handsome https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2301478 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2301478 Fri, 29 Jan 2021 10:33:24 -0500 This shows how much she goes to church. Tish has memories of the songs to when she was little that means she has been going to church her whole life https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2301472 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2301472 Fri, 29 Jan 2021 10:31:03 -0500 If she wants Fonny to be in church why is she so lazy to even check if he is in Sunday school. I dont really like Mrs. hunts character that much so far https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2301470 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2301470 Fri, 29 Jan 2021 10:29:23 -0500 Church is a good for everyone. There father should go to church with them and if they here church tambourines from that far that shows its important for the community https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2301454 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2301454 Fri, 29 Jan 2021 10:27:18 -0500 Yeah its crazy how different things were back then. Like just because men come home kids have to suffer does not make any sense https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2301428 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2301428 Fri, 29 Jan 2021 10:21:58 -0500 I wonder why Mrs. hunt said she look nice this morning. But every other morning that wasn't the case https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2301425 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2301425 Fri, 29 Jan 2021 10:19:20 -0500 At least he still wants to support and be with her because when some people come out of jail they only worry about themselves not there significant other or a baby https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2301413 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2301413 Fri, 29 Jan 2021 10:02:41 -0500 The way this paragraph was orchestrated i feel like baldwin is showing the connection between tish and fonny https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2301411 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2301411 Fri, 29 Jan 2021 09:59:49 -0500 It's really hard to have a baby with your lover while your in jail it shows that fonny and tish are really in love https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2301407 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2301407 Fri, 29 Jan 2021 09:56:55 -0500 I feel like they have a really good relation ship if tish is going to see him when he is in jail https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2301397 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2301397 Fri, 29 Jan 2021 09:52:20 -0500 Idk why they called her tish but i feel like it has a bigger meaning behind it https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2301385 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239056?scroll_to=2301385 Fri, 29 Jan 2021 09:45:04 -0500 At least her parents want her to be safe https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2298827 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2298827 Thu, 28 Jan 2021 10:58:16 -0500 I feel like she is mad and jealous just because tish and her have different type of love and he is also trying to remind them who is in charge https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2298821 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2298821 Thu, 28 Jan 2021 10:57:39 -0500 This guy is being mad disrespectful for no reason https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2298807 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2298807 Thu, 28 Jan 2021 10:55:34 -0500 I feel like he showed different ways of love so that is why she thought that https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2298802 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2298802 Thu, 28 Jan 2021 10:54:24 -0500 I really do wonder what fonny did but i feel like he should be out to see his daughter and i think soon to be wife https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2298746 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2298746 Thu, 28 Jan 2021 10:45:22 -0500 I rhink that frank would not be pleased to hear his son is going to be a dad and he would not take it lightly https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2298720 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2298720 Thu, 28 Jan 2021 10:39:13 -0500 I like this sentence because it is hard being black in general but being black and a women you just targeted https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2298713 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2298713 Thu, 28 Jan 2021 10:37:28 -0500 It is so crazy in this world how black men go to jail on crimes they where not even close to involved in disgraceful https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2298705 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2298705 Thu, 28 Jan 2021 10:35:25 -0500 This is why you dont drink or smoke or do drugs while pregnant because it is bad for you and the baby https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2298617 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2298617 Thu, 28 Jan 2021 10:21:42 -0500 I dont think it was a good choice to make tish have a drink while pregnant even if it is just one https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2298613 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2298613 Thu, 28 Jan 2021 10:18:06 -0500 Mama maybe can be hinting in ways that hoe can be taking on a bigger role in the house now https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2298612 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2298612 Thu, 28 Jan 2021 10:11:38 -0500 This can relate to me because only me and my mom eat at the dinner table https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2298597 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2298597 Thu, 28 Jan 2021 10:04:12 -0500 Her parents are cool for that they support her through her difficulties https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2283264 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2283264 Fri, 22 Jan 2021 13:13:52 -0500 he really was not impressed https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2283260 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2283260 Thu, 21 Jan 2021 12:41:54 -0500 Thats what i was thinking as well https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2283236 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239184?scroll_to=2283236 Thu, 21 Jan 2021 12:38:01 -0500 I'm happy they got approval but i'm not happy they don't have a way to provide for them selves https://nowcomment.com/documents/239919?scroll_to=2270523 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239919?scroll_to=2270523 Tue, 12 Jan 2021 11:06:58 -0500 i feel like that was mad disrespectful to call him the wrong name even if hes not fond of the marriage https://nowcomment.com/documents/239919?scroll_to=2270522 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239919?scroll_to=2270522 Tue, 12 Jan 2021 11:04:48 -0500 for real https://nowcomment.com/documents/239919?scroll_to=2270521 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239919?scroll_to=2270521 Tue, 12 Jan 2021 11:00:29 -0500 I would be confused as well on how they want to get married with no money to provide for themselves https://nowcomment.com/documents/239919?scroll_to=2270520 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239919?scroll_to=2270520 Tue, 12 Jan 2021 10:59:48 -0500 yeah same i would if they came home that late https://nowcomment.com/documents/239919?scroll_to=2270519 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239919?scroll_to=2270519 Tue, 12 Jan 2021 10:57:17 -0500 I feel like if shes ready she should get married because why would the younger sibling wan't to wait it might take decades till the older sister gets married https://nowcomment.com/documents/239919?scroll_to=2270518 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239919?scroll_to=2270518 Tue, 12 Jan 2021 10:55:49 -0500 same https://nowcomment.com/documents/239919?scroll_to=2270500 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239919?scroll_to=2270500 Tue, 12 Jan 2021 10:52:30 -0500 yeah onnys mom plays a factor too https://nowcomment.com/documents/239919?scroll_to=2270499 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239919?scroll_to=2270499 Tue, 12 Jan 2021 10:51:58 -0500 for real he really in love https://nowcomment.com/documents/239919?scroll_to=2270497 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239919?scroll_to=2270497 Tue, 19 Jan 2021 14:53:19 -0500 facts because if fonny did not go to the door with tish it would have been a whole different situation https://nowcomment.com/documents/239919?scroll_to=2270496 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239919?scroll_to=2270496 Tue, 12 Jan 2021 10:48:57 -0500 fonny really has to like tish to the point where hes going to hold her hands all the way until there stop in the subway https://nowcomment.com/documents/239919?scroll_to=2270490 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239919?scroll_to=2270490 Tue, 12 Jan 2021 10:43:08 -0500 fonny being a gentleman https://nowcomment.com/documents/239919?scroll_to=2270468 https://nowcomment.com/documents/239919?scroll_to=2270468 Fonny walked tish up to her door Tue, 12 Jan 2021 10:37:12 -0500 the white mans burden is talking to people in other countries https://nowcomment.com/documents/231335?scroll_to=2149942 https://nowcomment.com/documents/231335?scroll_to=2149942 The white mans burden to me is kipling telling others that are getting attacked by the u.s they should fight back. but i also think he is talking to the white people in other countries to act 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