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Sep 25

My sense is that lots of people would be curious to learn more about parade who don’t know us that would come to it because it’s us… but who knows.

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Sep 25

To me that word choice connotes communist/socialist rhetoric from the 1960s/1970s (e.g. People’s Republic of China, Chairman Mao) and probably leftwing activism for young folks. So not a bad thing in itself, but I see it as an obstacle to reaching many of the “average folks” we’re trying to reach and mobilize. Probably the people who are attracted by that phrasing are already on board!?

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Sep 15

1. someone glancing at schedule won’t think last act starts at 8pm.
2. saves vertical space and less “islands” in the ad.

Maybe the time doesn’t need to be in bigger font than other times, since band name is big and we give them a photo too that’s enough of a highlighting!?

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Sep 15

Also wondering if small bullets at start of each of the 2 items would help?? Will leave it to your judgement

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Sep 15

Live Music • Kids’ Zone • Dancing

Fiesta Bar • Artisan Crafts

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Sep 14
on OAWTF

If anything, I feel like it’d more likely to see fireflies when it got warmer, not less. Is the narrator misremembering something, or might you need to do some more research? If you have personal experience seeing them in winter, you can ignore this.

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Sep 14
on OAWTF

To me, this seems like a clear case of anthropomorphism. The fireflies not being around has little to do with “fighting back” and everything to do with the changing climate.

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Sep 14
on OAWTF

She didn’t have a white coat, though, so it was not to be.

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Sep 14
on OAWTF

She’d imagined herself a scientist then, with a lab full of subjects and the test tubes you she saw on tvTV.

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Sep 14
on OAWTF

I don’t think I can say science is ethical to animals, certainly not, but it’s definitely better than it used to be. Thomas Edison once publicly electrocuted an elephant to demonstrate his electric current, and I don’t think anyone could get away with that today.

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Sep 14
on OAWTF

“We’re no better than the psychopathpsychopaths, are we?”

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Sep 14
on OAWTF

The textbook may not have shown the final stage of the boiled frog, but she’d known the final stage existed frog had died nonetheless.

Reason: Less passive and repetitive.

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Sep 14
on OAWTF

While she’s looking over her own backyard, this statement echoes a broader “climate despair” that isn’t true overall, which I find really interesting. She seems almost eager to declare the world doomed, because at least then she wouldn’t have to step out of her comfort zone.

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Sep 14
on OAWTF

I’m curious as to why a sprinkler might quiet down but not stop, especially when there’s no one there to control it, and personally I find it distracting because I don’t know why it would do that.

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Sep 14
on OAWTF

She looked up, hoping to spot the big dipper Big Dipper, unable to make out but a handful of stars flickering in and out faintly.

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Sep 14
on OAWTF

“The earth is dying too” she breathed too.” She breathed, and imagined the huff of air that would be 've been visible if it had been cold enough.

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