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Dec 8
Francis P: she only known by big mav daughter
on [1 of 5] The Hate U Give - Part 1: When It Happens - One to Five - by Angie Thomas (2017)
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Dec 8
Francis P: look like she dont like him
on [1 of 5] The Hate U Give - Part 1: When It Happens - One to Five - by Angie Thomas (2017)
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Dec 8
Francis P: she probably had a fight with chris
on [1 of 5] The Hate U Give - Part 1: When It Happens - One to Five - by Angie Thomas (2017)
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Dec 8
Francis P: The purpose of this sentence is to show how traumatized Starr is and how her witnessing a white cop kill her innocent best friend has been affecting her tremendously.
on [2 of 5] The Hate U Give - Part 1: When It Happens - Six to Ten - by Angie Thomas (2017)
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Dec 8
Francis P: why they trying to make khalil look like a criminal
on [2 of 5] The Hate U Give - Part 1: When It Happens - Six to Ten - by Angie Thomas (2017)
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Dec 8
Seikou T: agreement
on [1 of 5] The Hate U Give - Part 1: When It Happens - One to Five - by Angie Thomas (2017)

I agree with Jude

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Dec 8
Francis P: she actually suprise that she actually made that comment
on [2 of 5] The Hate U Give - Part 1: When It Happens - Six to Ten - by Angie Thomas (2017)
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Dec 8
Francis P: why would she say those type of comment sound racist
on [2 of 5] The Hate U Give - Part 1: When It Happens - Six to Ten - by Angie Thomas (2017)
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Dec 8
Seikou T: what i see
on [1 of 5] The Hate U Give - Part 1: When It Happens - One to Five - by Angie Thomas (2017)

If you feel something is about to pop off just get out of there

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Dec 8
Francis P: star dont want to tell chris because she feel like chris wont understand since he white
on [2 of 5] The Hate U Give - Part 1: When It Happens - Six to Ten - by Angie Thomas (2017)
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Dec 8
Francis P: the news are trying to put khalil as drug dealer so the people can agree with the reason on why the cop shot him
on [2 of 5] The Hate U Give - Part 1: When It Happens - Six to Ten - by Angie Thomas (2017)
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Dec 8
Francis P: the media are putting what they want and leaving the bigger picture about what happen
on [2 of 5] The Hate U Give - Part 1: When It Happens - Six to Ten - by Angie Thomas (2017)
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Dec 8
Francis P: the cop are trying to find a way or reason on why khalil was killed
on [2 of 5] The Hate U Give - Part 1: When It Happens - Six to Ten - by Angie Thomas (2017)
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Dec 8
Silvia X: Totatlly agree!
on Competencies
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Dec 7
Paul A: The Voyage Home
on "The Loop Writing Process," Chapter 8 (pp. 59-77) of Writing With Power (1981) by Peter Elbow
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Dec 7
Paul A: Portraits. What if we used Elbow's suggestions to create actual images that our questions or topics bring to mind? See how many different images you can come up with. Keep track of your thinking process.
on "The Loop Writing Process," Chapter 8 (pp. 59-77) of Writing With Power (1981) by Peter Elbow
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Dec 7
Paul A: Narrative Thinking. Elbow presents this as one of 13 suggestions in The Loops Writing Process, but there is so much more here! One example is to use this approach after reading through what an AI model creates for you
on "The Loop Writing Process," Chapter 8 (pp. 59-77) of Writing With Power (1981) by Peter Elbow

In other words: After having AI create an image, a movie script, an essay outline, and a poem about your topic or question, write the story of your thinking as you read through all of this material. It brings it back to you and your purposes — while taking advantage of the “voyage out” provided by the AI.

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Dec 7
Paul A: Instant Version. Variations I've done on this: "Answer on an Essay Exam" or "Complete Outline for the Essay."
on "The Loop Writing Process," Chapter 8 (pp. 59-77) of Writing With Power (1981) by Peter Elbow
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Dec 7
Paul A: Stories... poems... movie scripts...
on "The Loop Writing Process," Chapter 8 (pp. 59-77) of Writing With Power (1981) by Peter Elbow
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Dec 7
Paul A: Writing a summary at times is useful.
on "The Loop Writing Process," Chapter 8 (pp. 59-77) of Writing With Power (1981) by Peter Elbow
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Dec 7
Paul A: Dialogues. Also see the Youth Voices Guide "Dialogue with Different Opinions" https://www.youthvoices.live/guides/essays/opinions/
on "The Loop Writing Process," Chapter 8 (pp. 59-77) of Writing With Power (1981) by Peter Elbow
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Dec 7
Carlos Alberto C: That when a person is in big trouble, you have to know what kind of person you are before judging and knowing what they've been through.
on Period 6 "Under Attack"
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Dec 7
Paul A: First Thoughts. Also see the Youth Voices Freewriting Guide: https://www.youthvoices.live/guides/essays/freewriting/
on "The Loop Writing Process," Chapter 8 (pp. 59-77) of Writing With Power (1981) by Peter Elbow

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Dec 7
Yarelis S: They treat them good because they might be Gods
on T O Part 1
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Dec 7
Yarelis S: Talking about troy’s skills are excellent
on T O Part 1
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Dec 7
Jessica H: Chemo=Chemotherapy. When someone has cancer, doctors give them chemicals to destroy the cancer.
on [1 of 5] The Hate U Give - Part 1: When It Happens - One to Five - by Angie Thomas (2017)
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Dec 7
Thais D: what people know her by
on [1 of 5] The Hate U Give - Part 1: When It Happens - One to Five - by Angie Thomas (2017)

people just know her by that name and that all they call her

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Dec 7
Seikou T: disagree
on [1 of 5] The Hate U Give - Part 1: When It Happens - One to Five - by Angie Thomas (2017)

Why he so quick with the assumtions.

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Dec 7
Thais D: party
on [1 of 5] The Hate U Give - Part 1: When It Happens - One to Five - by Angie Thomas (2017)

everyone be going to partys but not starr shes not that type of girl that be going to party

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Dec 7
AKUMANI S: she didn't like to go have fun alot
on [1 of 5] The Hate U Give - Part 1: When It Happens - One to Five - by Angie Thomas (2017)
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Dec 7
Seikou T: disagree
on [1 of 5] The Hate U Give - Part 1: When It Happens - One to Five - by Angie Thomas (2017)

All of that wasnt so serious could of jus gave him his ticket and went about his day.

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Dec 7
Thais D: comfortable
on [1 of 5] The Hate U Give - Part 1: When It Happens - One to Five - by Angie Thomas (2017)

she dosent feel like she could be herself here shes somewhere where shes not comfortable to be herself

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Dec 7
AKUMANI S: she slip her phone in her pocket
on [1 of 5] The Hate U Give - Part 1: When It Happens - One to Five - by Angie Thomas (2017)
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Dec 7
Thais D: sad
on [1 of 5] The Hate U Give - Part 1: When It Happens - One to Five - by Angie Thomas (2017)

this makes me sad just becuse he went to the car and asked starr if shes ok and then the officer just shoots him for no reason

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Dec 7
AKUMANI S: got folks thinking you're my girlfriend
on [1 of 5] The Hate U Give - Part 1: When It Happens - One to Five - by Angie Thomas (2017)
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Dec 7
Francis P: that crazy she know him for that long and not she will never see him again
on [2 of 5] The Hate U Give - Part 1: When It Happens - Six to Ten - by Angie Thomas (2017)
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Dec 7
Omar N: six years
on [1 of 5] The Hate U Give - Part 1: When It Happens - One to Five - by Angie Thomas (2017)

she been going to different school for six years everybody think she fagot about them

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Dec 7
AKUMANI S: kenya share an older brother
on [1 of 5] The Hate U Give - Part 1: When It Happens - One to Five - by Angie Thomas (2017)
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Dec 7
Seikou T: Memory moment
on [1 of 5] The Hate U Give - Part 1: When It Happens - One to Five - by Angie Thomas (2017)

The cop has an attitude for what?

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Dec 7
Francis P: she have alway talk to people nice because she dont want other people to know she from the ghetto and dont want to be treated diffrent
on [2 of 5] The Hate U Give - Part 1: When It Happens - Six to Ten - by Angie Thomas (2017)
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Dec 7
AKUMANI S: she likes to say that spring bring love
on [1 of 5] The Hate U Give - Part 1: When It Happens - One to Five - by Angie Thomas (2017)
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Dec 7
Seikou T: Again and Again
on [1 of 5] The Hate U Give - Part 1: When It Happens - One to Five - by Angie Thomas (2017)

Probably thought they had a heavy weapon

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Dec 7
Francis P: star feel better that she not doing it alone that her mom is going in there with her
on [2 of 5] The Hate U Give - Part 1: When It Happens - Six to Ten - by Angie Thomas (2017)
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Dec 7
AKUMANI S: between the headache from the loud ass music and the nausea from the weed
on [1 of 5] The Hate U Give - Part 1: When It Happens - One to Five - by Angie Thomas (2017)
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Dec 7
Francis P: i was thinking the same if i was star i dont wanna keep on waiting for what gonna next
on [2 of 5] The Hate U Give - Part 1: When It Happens - Six to Ten - by Angie Thomas (2017)
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Dec 7
Seikou T: compare and contrast
on [1 of 5] The Hate U Give - Part 1: When It Happens - One to Five - by Angie Thomas (2017)

He sounds like he`s stressing.

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Dec 7
AKUMANI S: There are just some places where you cant go
on [1 of 5] The Hate U Give - Part 1: When It Happens - One to Five - by Angie Thomas (2017)
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Dec 7
Seikou T: Tough question
on [1 of 5] The Hate U Give - Part 1: When It Happens - One to Five - by Angie Thomas (2017)

What is chemo?

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Dec 7
Omar N: party drink
on [1 of 5] The Hate U Give - Part 1: When It Happens - One to Five - by Angie Thomas (2017)

when she take sip from the Hawaiian punch she know its not just Hawaiian punch

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Dec 7
Thais D: contrasts and contradiction
on [1 of 5] The Hate U Give - Part 1: When It Happens - One to Five - by Angie Thomas (2017)

kenya is doing this because that one girl was talking about her in the lunch line and i knew this was gonna happend because of what she was saying

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