When you have so few sentences, one sentence represents a greater fraction of the piece, and therefore hold far more weight than say, the same sentence in a novel
Even without dialogue, even with this one sentence, JUSTTHEPHRASING of it tells the reader so many things about the relationship!!! Just the phrasing!!!!!
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When you have so few sentences, one sentence represents a greater fraction of the piece, and therefore hold far more weight than say, the same sentence in a novel
Even without dialogue, even with this one sentence, JUST THE PHRASING of it tells the reader so many things about the relationship!!! Just the phrasing!!!!!
Words are always important, but especially in such a short work, literally EVERY SINGLE WORD iS SO IMPORTANT
laws are rules meant for peace and security.
How messed up is that the mother has to beat her child for him to learn how to not be beaten by the white community?
Some stories just aren’t meant to be drawn out in a long story. SO flash fiction makes it not seem too short, because it’s supposed to be.
What’s the same?
How does the film version stay faithful to the novel?
Fine details can develop the story and characters. It makes them more defined and gives the writer material on what the story should be.
I know this is why I don’t really read fast fiction because I struggle with fitting the story into 100 words.
why he doing that
That’s pretty cool how the author wanted to use their anxiety in a positive light.
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