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Apr 16

When you have so few sentences, one sentence represents a greater fraction of the piece, and therefore hold far more weight than say, the same sentence in a novel

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Apr 16

Even without dialogue, even with this one sentence, JUST THE PHRASING of it tells the reader so many things about the relationship!!! Just the phrasing!!!!!

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Apr 16

Words are always important, but especially in such a short work, literally EVERY SINGLE WORD iS SO IMPORTANT

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Apr 16
on Laws

laws are rules meant for peace and security.

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Apr 15

How messed up is that the mother has to beat her child for him to learn how to not be beaten by the white community?

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Apr 14

Some stories just aren’t meant to be drawn out in a long story. SO flash fiction makes it not seem too short, because it’s supposed to be.

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Apr 13

What’s the same?
How does the film version stay faithful to the novel?

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Apr 13

Fine details can develop the story and characters. It makes them more defined and gives the writer material on what the story should be.

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Apr 13

I know this is why I don’t really read fast fiction because I struggle with fitting the story into 100 words.

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Apr 12

That’s pretty cool how the author wanted to use their anxiety in a positive light.

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