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"A Sunday Afternoon on the Island of Le Grande Jatte in the City of Columbus," Patricia Miranda

Author: Patricia Miranda

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You can’t recall how many times
you’ve walked into a conversation
only to wish you could back out—
backward through the crowd, dragging
wisps of chatter with you, backward
through the double doors and out
into the hall, twenty paces
to the place where smokers huddle
to share fresh air, and backward still
through the concourse and toward the park
on Town Street where the topiary
sculptures of Seurat’s Sunday Afternoon
sun themselves as you sidestep the posies
parasols and shadows littering
the Isle, but still you falter backward,
backward past the pug and monkey
who (though late to the picnic) still want
the mongrel’s fare, but you can’t spare
a backward glance, for now
there’s the wired girl in brimmed hat,
held fast by the faceless nanny,
and, this time, you pause to wonder
if reversal is really possible and if regret
could be counterforce enough—but now
the bugler is sounding and the crew is pulling out
and the river is there too, beckoning you backward,
its pointillated chill caressing
your ankles hips and heart,
the silence so strong
that as you wade farther out,
farther and backward,
you somehow snag a tiny piece,
even as the tide sweeps you off the curb
and into the rush of traffic,
the cars somehow knowing
not to hit the guy who’s stumbling,
stumbling backward
and still not completely free,
still backing into conversations
and hoping to say the right thing
and, this time, really mean it.

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EMILY RODRIGUEZ (May 09 2019 1:49AM) : i loved how they started
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EMILY RODRIGUEZ (May 09 2019 1:46AM) : this is similar to what i wrote
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EMILY RODRIGUEZ (May 09 2019 1:55AM) : what do they mean by this
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EMILY RODRIGUEZ (May 09 2019 1:56AM) : i agree the silence is strong because depending the silence you give someone it can effect how they act towards you.
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EMILY RODRIGUEZ (May 09 2019 1:58AM) : i know how that feel when someone doesn't want to believe the words your saying so you have to put your foot down.

Patricia Jacaban Miranda lives in Columbus, Ohio, where she teaches high school English and where there really is a topiary garden based on Georges Seurat's famous painting. Her poems have been featured or are forthcoming in apt, Bop Dead City, DASH, Heron Tree, Hyphen, Into the Void, Kitaab, Mount Hope, Rise Up Review, and several other literary journals. Her children's book debut with husband-illustrator, Chris O'Leary, will be published by Albert Whitman in 2019.

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DMU Timestamp: May 31, 2018 00:33

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