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"Swimming Hole, Buck Creek, Springfield, Ohio," Henri Cole

Author: Henri Cole


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Like an echo,
it comes back,
the bend in the creek,
like a uterus’
bleeding flow,

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KURTINA J KURTINA J (Apr 29 2019 11:28AM) : it compares an echo that goes back and fourth to a uterus. And how it bleeds!
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Tasneem O Tasneem O (Feb 05 2021 8:40PM) : Does he mean bleeding like a period in the uterus

tangible again,
as memory revisits,
with unusual
concreteness,
territories of the past,

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Tasneem O Tasneem O (Feb 03 2021 6:01PM) : I think the poem is about the memories in the Ohio spring, and how the “echo it comes back” i think he’s trying to say he can hear the memories.
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KURTINA J KURTINA J (May 15 2019 2:09PM) : this poem has a lot to do with memories because it talks about an echo and a tunnel and they all relate to memories either revisiting or something coming back
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Tasneem O Tasneem O (Feb 03 2021 5:59PM) : I agree
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rebounding, circulating,
surging, vexing,
panning our naked
bodies – some of us
in the water, loin-deep,

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KURTINA J KURTINA J (Apr 29 2019 11:48AM) : "-ING" ENDINGS, SPILLING OUT ONE AFTER ANOTHER! [Edited] more

I’m going to try this technique in my own poem.

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KURTINA J KURTINA J (Apr 29 2019 11:48AM) : RELATING TO BASKETBALL
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Tasneem O Tasneem O (Feb 05 2021 8:43PM) : Is he taking a showe I’m quite confused here?

making animal sounds;
some of us out,
wistfully small,
under a depthless sky –
all of us boys still,

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like blossoming buds,
bending under
the paw of some
hormonal energy
that lingers now

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in memory’s tunnel,
like an air prowling
around us, vaguely
ornery, urging:
“Begin what you are,”

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KURTINA J KURTINA J (May 01 2019 1:40PM) : METAPHOR [Edited] more

its like there making a comparison between tunnels and memory and mixing it together which creates what they use ( memory tunnel ). I want to use this technique in my poem.

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though not intended
to belittle me
for my unmasculine traits,
but, instead,
to lift me up,

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allowing new light
to enter in, its strong
broad rays in free fall
against my flesh,
as if through blades

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KURTINA J KURTINA J (May 15 2019 2:03PM) : a bright start like letting go of something old to start fresh and better
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of pungent grass,
piercing me
even deeper now, to say,
“Be kind to him,
stranger that he is.”

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KURTINA J KURTINA J (May 01 2019 1:42PM) : PAIN [Edited] more

This person was getting hurt and they use how deep and how a piercing hurts to describe the pain

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KURTINA J KURTINA J (May 01 2019 1:53PM) : This part confuses me because the author basically says that even though the person made them feel that way people are telling this person to "be kind to him...)
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KURTINA J KURTINA J (May 01 2019 2:16PM) : 9 PARAGRAPHS LONG more

I’m not sure I’m going to use this technique. I might.

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