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"Hairs/Pelitos" from The House on Mango Street by Sandra Cisneros

Author: Sandra Cisneros

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Everybody in our family has different hair. My Papa's hair is like a broom, all up in the air.

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Jordy Crespo (Jul 17 2018 10:02AM) : that is call the origins
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Yang Haotian (Jul 17 2018 11:53AM) : My mother's hair is long and my brother and dad's hair is short.
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Richard Rios (Jul 17 2018 11:33AM) : the hair is similar to a cleaning thing
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Blanca Valle (Jul 17 2018 11:38AM) : her hair is in the moon

And me, my hair is lazy. It never obeys barrettes or bands. Carlos' hair is thick and straight. He doesn't need to comb it. Nenny's hair is slippery—slides out of your hand. And Kiki, who is the youngest, has hair like fur.

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Richard Rios (Jul 17 2018 11:44AM) : each hair has a different tone and structure
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Mohammed Moral (Jul 17 2018 9:53AM) : accept
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Mohammed Moral (Jul 17 2018 9:55AM) : his hair is heavy and fat.
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Mohammed Moral (Jul 17 2018 9:59AM) : his hair it's like soft hair of certain animals.
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Blanca Valle (Jul 17 2018 11:46AM) : like my little brother

But my mother's hair, my mother's hair, like little rosettes, like little candy circles all curly and pretty because she pinned it in pincurls all day, sweet to put your nose into when she is holding you, holding you and you feel safe, is the warm smell of bread before you bake it, is the smell when she makes room for you on her side of the bed still warm with her skin, and you sleep near her, the rain outside falling and Papa snoring. The snoring, the rain, and Mama's hair that smells like bread.

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Richard Rios (Jul 17 2018 11:29AM) : Each member of the family has different hair and tone
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Alvarado Saira (Jul 17 2018 11:42AM) : Everybody in our family has different hair but the hair from my mom is curly [Edited]
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