Eleven for period 4
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ELEVEN
by Sandra Cisneros
2 And you are—underneath the year that makes you eleven.
The sentence explains that even though you are eleven, you can still feel and act like you did when you were any other age.
i think this because it explains that you are not just 11,but all of the numbers before.
i think so to because all those ages before 11 stays with you forever.
i agree because i also put that you sometimes feel 1,2,3,4,5,6.,7,8,9,10 so when you cry you feel 3
i think this a important paragraph because she sometimes feels that she is 1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9, or 10
in the book is most important because it shows that she has personalities from when she was younger.
3 Maybe she’s feeling three.
4 That’s how being eleven years old is.
5 That’s the way it is.
6 I would’ve known how to tell her it wasn’t mine instead of just sitting there with that look on my face and nothing coming out of my mouth.
7 It’s been sitting in the coatroom for a month.”
8 “Not me.”
9 It’s maybe a thousand years old and even if it belonged to me I wouldn’t say so.
10 Mrs. Price takes the sweater and puts it right on my desk, but when I open my mouth nothing comes out.
11 I finally say in a little voice that was maybe me when I was four.
12 Because she’s older and the teacher, she’s right and I’m not.
13 Mama is making a cake for me for tonight, and when Papa comes home everybody will sing Happy birthday, happy birthday to
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15 Except when math period ends Mrs. Price says loud and in front of everybody, “Now, Rachel, that’s enough, ”because she sees I’ve shoved the red sweater to the tippy-tip corner of my desk and it’s hanging all over the edge like a waterfall, but I don’t care.
16 “You put that sweater on right now and no more nonsense.”
17 “But it’s not –“
18 Mrs. Price says.
19 This is when I wish I wasn’t eleven because all the years inside of me—ten, nine, eight, seven, six, five, four, three, two, and one—are pushing at the back of my eyes when I put one arm through one sleeve of the sweater that smells like cottage cheese, and then the other arm through the other and stand there with my arms apart like if the sweater hurts me and it does, all itchy and full of germs that aren’t even mine.
because it shows the main idea.
when you get older your still the same person and you have some of the same traits.
it is important because it brings the fact that you can feel as if you were a younger age even if you are eleven
This sentence is important to the theme because it shows that you still have all the years under 11 in you when you’re 11 and they are pushing at the back of her eyes when she puts on the sleeves
The sentence “This is when I wish I wasn’t eleven because all the years inside of me—ten, nine, eight, seven, six, five, four, three, two, and one—are pushing at the back of my eyes when I put one arm through one sleeve of the sweater that smells like cottage cheese, and then the other arm through the other and stand there with my arms apart like if the sweater hurts me and it does, all itchy and full of germs that aren’t even mine” says that even though you you put off your best image in front of people, you can never hide or run from the fact that every year of your life is hidden or buried inside of you somewhere and even though you may not want to let out those emotions, sometimes you have to. No matter how hard you try to conceal those emotions inside of you the sad truth is, you’ll never really let go of those lived years.
20 My face all hot and spit coming out of my mouth because I can’t stop the little animal noises from coming out of me until there aren’t any more tears left in my eyes, and it’s just my body shaking like when you have the hiccups, and my whole head hurts like when you drink milk too fast.
I think this sentence is a very important theme because it shows how much emotion she is having. For example,in the paragraph one of the sentences says,“my whole head hurts like when you drink milk too fast.” She is showing that she is mad or angry.
I agree because the paragraph shows how she is feeling and how the 4 year old her is coming out when she is eleven years old
21 I take it off right away and give it to her, only Mrs. Price pretends like everything’s okay.
22 There’ll be candles and presents and everybody will sing Happy Birthday, Happy Birthday to you, Rachel, only it’s too late.
This is a very importent part of the story because it was the end of the story line. it was rachels birthday and ruined by the one red sweater.
23 Because I want today to be far away already, far away like a runaway balloon, like a tiny O in the sky, so tiny you have to close your eyes to see it.
Because I want today to be far away already, far away like a runaway balloon, like a tiny O in the sky, so tiny you have to close your eyes to see it.
This is when I wish I wasn’t eleven because all the years inside of me—ten, nine, eight, seven, six, five, four, three, two, and one—are pushing at the back of my eyes when I put one arm through one sleeve of the sweater that smells like cottage cheese, and then the other arm through the other and stand there with my arms apart like if the sweater hurts me and it does, all itchy and full of germs that aren’t even mine.
the emotions of being 3. Just like Sandra Cisneros said near the beginning of the story.
to me this sentence means that the way to see witch is hard to see was there all the time
I may be wrong but I dont remember seeing that.
I think this is a important part of the story because it was Rachel’s birthday and it was ruined by the teacher and the red sweater. she keeps saying that it is her birthday, and her family is going to sing, and eat cake, but now her birthday won’t be as great because of the sweater
24 Literary Techniques
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- 26 The use of similes ,"a figure of speech in which two essentially unlike things are compared" (Webster's Collegiate Dictionary 683) , to show imagery:
27 The first simile in the short story is when the main character, Rachel, is comparing the way you grow up to:
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29 Cisneros later compares years to pennies in a Band-Aid box, again referring to how the years "build up".
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31 "...and I open my eyes, the red sweater's still sitting there like a big ("Eleven", 6)
32 The sweater has such an affect on Rachel that she moves it to the edge of her desk with a ruler and eventually brings her to tears.
33 The third simile is when Rachel pushes the sweater to the corner of her desk until
34 "it's hanging all over the edge like a waterfall" ("Eleven", 7)
35 Again, Cisneros compares two very unlike objects to create a vivid picture of the red sweater for her audience.
36 Rachel says:
37 "I want today to be far away already, far away like a runaway balloon" ("Eleven", 8)
38 This exemplifies the point that Rachel's eleventh birthday was horrible and she only wishes it would be over and forgotten about just like a lost balloon.
- 39 The use of repetition in the story creates a rhythm for the reader and creates more emphasis.
40 As Rachel repeats how old she really is (by counting the years) this re-emphasizes her point of the "layering" of years and also creates the "rhythm" of the story.
41 These emphasize that Rachel is still a child; still eleven.
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43 Overall, Sandra Cisneros uses many examples of simile and repetition in a very short story that helps to create a vivid picture of Rachel.
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57 Innocence- She understands that Mrs. Price has made a mistake, but she also knows that she cannot talk back to Mrs. Price and she loses her composure.
58 Family- This shows Rachel immense love for her family and the comfort they provide for her.
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- 60 Why doesn't Rachel want to be eleven in the story?
- 61 What are some of the life experiences you have had that are significant in the "rings" of your life?
- 62 How did Sandra Cisneros write the story so that it seems as though it was written by Rachel herself?
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78 Innocence- She understands that Mrs. Price has made a mistake, but she also knows that she cannot talk back to Mrs. Price and she loses her composure.
79 Family- This shows Rachel immense love for her family and the comfort they provide for her.
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- 82 Why doesn't Rachel want to be eleven in the story?
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- 84 What are some of the life experiences you have had that are significant in the "rings" of your life?
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- 86 How did Sandra Cisneros write the story so that it seems as though it was written by Rachel herself?
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92 ELEVEN by Sandra Cisneros
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98 Jot down on a page what you recall you looked like and felt like when you were 11 What was your relationship with your siblings and your parents?
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103 little voice that was maybe me when I was four.”
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105 that stupid Sylvia Saldivar says, ‘I think it belongs to Rachel.’ ”
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120 a. Mrs. Price says, and she holds the
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121 red sweater up in the air for all the class to see.”
122 b. “It’s an ugly sweater with red plastic buttons and a
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123 collar and sleeves all stretched out like you could 124 use it for a jump rope.”
125 c. “Maybe because I’m skinny, maybe because she
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126 doesn’t like me, that stupid Sylvia Saldivar says, ‘I 127 think it belongs to Rachel.’ ”
128 d. “Mrs. Price takes the sweater and puts it right on
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129 my desk….”
130 e. Not mine,’ I finally say in a little voice that was maybe me when I was four.”
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132 remember you wearing it once.’ “
133 g. ‘You put that sweater
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134 on right now and no more nonsense.’ “
135 h. “That’s when everything I’ve been holding in since this morning, since when Mrs. Price put the sweater on my desk, finally lets go, and all of a sudden I’m crying in front of everybody.”
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201 2. Write out the events in the order they happen chronologically.
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203 4. Draw the metaphor Rachel uses in the story to describe what it is like to grow up.
204 Then explain what she means in your own words.
205 Because the way you grow old is kind of like an onion or like the rings inside a tree
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209 5. Is there any connection between her biography and the story?
210 6. Write an essay of 100 words about a memorable event in your life.
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WHY!!!
You pick a sentence that you think is the most important sentence to the theme of the story.
When she says i’m eleven, ten, nine, eight, seven, six, five, four, three, two and one
I agree this is very powerful sentence because she sees it as although she is 11 she feels like she is not.
I think this is a really powerful sentence because Sandra is 11 but she lets her emotions take over her as if she were 5 or 3.
I agree because this paragraph is showing what she is feeling.
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