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Last Updated Sep 3, 2017 9:02 AM EDT

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Many of the well-meaning articles we Americans donate in times of disaster turn out to be of no use to those in need. Sometimes, they even get in the way. That's a message relief organizations very much want us to heed. Our Cover Story is reported now by Scott Simon of NPR. (An earlier version of this story was originally broadcast on "Sunday Morning" on April 24, 2016.)

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The aftermath of Hurricane Harvey reminds us all over again that when Nature grows savage and angry, Americans can get generous and kind. That's admirable. It might also be a problem.

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Luke Alphonso Luke Alphonso (Sep 17 2018 12:49PM) : The Author uses pathos to describe us what happens for the recovery of a hurricane, for it gives detailed descriptions and words to get to us
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William Davidson William Davidson (Sep 17 2018 2:02PM) : The Author uses personification to describe nature saying that it grows "savage and angry", both human features that don't usually describe nature.
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"Generally after a disaster, people with loving intentions donate things that cannot be used in a disaster response, and in fact may actually be harmful," said Juanita Rilling, former director of the Center for International Disaster Information in Washington, D.C. "And they have no idea that they're doing it."

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Rilling has spent more than a decade trying to tell well-meaning people to think before they give.

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In 1998 Hurricane Mitch struck Honduras. More than 11,000 people died. More than a million and a half were left homeless.

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Kylie Stowell Kylie Stowell (Sep 17 2018 12:42PM) : Ethos. more

This is an example of ethos. The author used statistics to show how many people were killed and left homeless during the wreckage of Hurricane Matthew in 1998.

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Jake Debenport (Sep 17 2018 12:44PM) : The author puts logos here to tell us that the impact caused by hurricane Harvey was tremendous. By telling the reader how many people died uses logos because it is fact, and it is also pathos because it strikes fear and makes us sad about what happened.
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Mr Zachary McQueen Mr Zachary McQueen (Sep 17 2018 12:47PM) : This is pathos because... more

I believe this to be pathos, because it puts a number on the amount of people that were effected. Every person who reads this can think about what 11,000 people in a stadium may look like and then for that massive amount of people to be wiped away from the earth. Then the one million and a half who were left homeless, most people can relate to being homeless.

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Connor Hempy Connor Hempy (Sep 17 2018 12:44PM) : This sentence is using ethos because it is using facts and credibility to better the point he is trying to make, which is that Hurricane Mitch was very destructive, left many people home less, and killed more then 11,000 people and it took place in 1998. [Edited] more

This sentence is using ethos because it is using facts and credibility to better the point he is trying to make, which is that Hurricane Mitch was very destructive and killed more then 11,000 people and it took place in 1998. The author is trying to say that the hurricane was destructive, life changing to some people, and left many people homeless thru ethos.

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And Rilling got a wake-up call: "Got a call from one of our logistics experts who said that a plane full of supplies could not land, because there was clothing on the runway. It's in boxes and bales. It takes up yards of space. It can't be moved.' 'Whose clothing is it?' He said, 'Well, I don't know whose it is, but there's a high-heeled shoe, just one, and a bale of winter coats.' And I thought, winter coats? It's summer in Honduras."

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Raymond Jedlicka Raymond Jedlicka (Sep 17 2018 12:39PM) : Rhetorical Question [Edited] more

The author’s message is that through the issue of to many donations, some of which are not useable in the situation presented, can hurt more than they can help. As said by this paragraph, these blocked runways prevent supplies from landing that are specifically needed. This causes a issue when people are in need, but since a excess amount of donations are present, it can hurt people who may have already lost everything.

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Humanitarian workers call the crush of useless, often incomprehensible contributions "the second disaster."

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Richard Behlmer Richard Behlmer (Sep 17 2018 12:52PM) : I believe that this is hyperbole because of how the contributions are useless so they call it "the second disaster" to illustrate how bad and how useless these items are that people give even with the best of intentions.
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In 2004, following the Indian Ocean tsunami, a beach in Indonesia was piled with used clothing.

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There was no time for disaster workers to sort and clean old clothes. So the contributions just sat and rotted.

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"This very quickly went toxic and had to be destroyed," said Rilling. "And local officials poured gasoline on it and set it on fire. And then it was out to sea."

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Tons of donated clothing on the beach at Banda Aceh, Indonesia.

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"So, rather than clothing somebody, it went up in flames?" asked Simon.

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"Correct. The thinking is that these people have lost everything, so they must NEED everything. So people SEND everything. You know, any donation is crazy if it's not needed. People have donated prom gowns and wigs and tiger costumes and pumpkins, and frostbite cream to Rwanda, and used teabags, 'cause you can always get another cup of tea."

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You may not think that sending bottles of water to devastated people seems crazy. But Rilling points out, "This water, it's about 100,000 liters, will provide drinking water for 40,000 people for one day. This amount of water to send from the United States, say, to West Africa -- and people did this -- costs about $300,000. But relief organizations with portable water purification units can produce the same amount, a 100,000 liters of water, for about $300."

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Sophie Kohn Sophie Kohn (Sep 17 2018 1:04PM) : This paragraph is ethos because of its credibility and facts. The paragraph suggests how sending money to people in need would be better instead of water. It is so much cheaper if you send money since they have to ship the water which can get costly. [Edited]
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And then there were warm-hearted American women who wanted to send their breast milk to nursing mothers in Haiti after the 2010 earthquake.

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"It sounds wonderful, but in the midst of a crisis it's actually one of the most challenging things," said Rebecca Gustafson, a humanitarian aid expert who has worked on the ground after many disasters.

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"Breast milk doesn't stay fresh for very long. And the challenge is, what happens if you do give it to an infant who then gets sick?"

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December 2012, Newtown, Connecticut: A gunman killed 20 children and six adults at Sandy Hook Elementary School. Almost instantaneously, stuff start arriving.

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Tens of thousands of stuffed animals, donated to the children of Newtown, Conn., following the Sandy Hook Elementary School shooting, fill a warehouse. Most donations were sent away.

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CHRIS KELSEY
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Chris Kelsey, who worked for Newtown at the time, said they had to get a warehouse to hold all the teddy bears.

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Simon asked, "Was there a need for teddy bears?"

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"I think it was a nice gesture," Kelsey replied. "There was a need to do something for the kids. There was a need to make people feel better. I think the wave of stuff we got was a little overwhelming."

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And how many teddy bear came to Newtown? "I think it was about 67,000," Kelsey said. "Wasn't limited to teddy bears. There was also thousands of boxes of school supplies, and thousands of boxes of toys, bicycles, sleds, clothes."

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Ethan White Ethan White (Sep 17 2018 12:49PM) : This paragraph shows statistics of how people donated is a logos appeal. The fact, though, that later it states the school had to buy a warehouse to hold all of these teddy bears and other materials that weren't needed. [Edited]
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Newtown had been struck by mass murder, not a tsunami. As Kelsey said, "I think a lot of the stuff that came into the warehouse was more for the people that sent it, than it was for the people in Newtown. At least, that's the way it felt at the end."

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Every child in Newtown got a few bears. The rest had to be sent away, along with the bikes and blankets.

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There are times when giving things works. More than 650,000 homes were destroyed or damaged in Hurricane Sandy in 2012. Thousands of people lost everything.

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Mr Andre Zelaski Mr Andre Zelaski (Sep 17 2018 12:49PM) : Omega Logos, the statistic provided informs the audience and gets them thinking about the situation as a reality. Makes them wonder if sending useless bales of old clothing is really what the dead and thirsty need.
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Donated clothing on a basketball court following Hurricane Sandy, in the Bronx, N.Y.

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HELPAFTERSANDY.ORG
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Tammy Shapiro is one of the organizers of Occupy Sandy, which grew out of the Occupy Wall Street movement.

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"We were able to respond in a way that the big, bureaucratic agencies can't," Shapiro said.

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When the hurricane struck, they had a network of activists, connected and waiting.

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"Very quickly, we just stopped taking clothes," Shapiro said. Instead, they created a "relief supply" wedding registry.

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"We put the items that we needed donated on that registry," said Shapiro. "And then people who wanted to donate could buy the items that were needed. I mean, a lot of what we had on the wedding registry was diapers. They needed flashlights."

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zac detwiler zac detwiler (Sep 17 2018 12:58PM) : This is logos because it is using a logical way of donating things. People wanting to donate could give things that were actually needed by using a website. [Edited]
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Simon asked, "How transportable is your experience here, following Hurricane Sandy?"

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"For me, the network is key. Who has the knowledge? Where are spaces that goods can live if there's a disaster? Who's really well-connected on their blocks?"

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Sydney Peters Sydney Peters (Sep 17 2018 12:43PM) : Rhetorical questions are used here to help show what is basic knowledge during a time of crisis. The impact is that the speaker helps emphasize the importance of planning [Edited]
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Juanita Rilling's album of disaster images shows shot after shot of good intentions just spoiling in warehouses, or rotting on the landscape.

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"It is heartbreaking," Rilling said. "It's heartbreaking for the donor, it's heartbreaking for the relief organizations, and it's heartbreaking for survivors. This is why cash donations are so much more effective. They buy exactly what people need, when they need it.

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"And cash donations enable relief organizations to purchase supplies locally, which ensures that they're fresh and familiar to survivors, purchased in just the right quantities, and delivered quickly. And those local purchases support the local merchants, which strengthens the local economy for the long run."

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Smith Nolan Smith Smith Nolan Smith (Sep 17 2018 4:37PM) : Certain items donated to disaster relief can have either positive, or negative effects. We all must consider how we try to help others, because we may do more harm than good. more

The author is attempting to convince the audience to be conscientious of the donations sent to disaster sites. The message will hopefully convince readers to donate more practically to disaster relief programs. The author employs several literary devices to convince the viewer to support their perspective. The author primarily uses Logos to convince the reader to logically think about what their doing and how they can best help, using real life examples of what help is appreciated

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Disaster response worker Rebecca Gustafson says that most people want to donate something that is theirs: "Money sometimes doesn't feel personal enough for people. They don't feel enough of their heart and soul is in that donation, that check that they would send.

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"The reality is, it's one of the most compassionate things that people can do."

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Below: A PSA on disaster relief giving:

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Donate Responsibly by CIDI SmartCompassion on YouTube
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Stu. Asa Frink Stu. Asa Frink (Sep 17 2018 12:49PM) : When the author says this and shows the picture with it, they use pathos to effect the emotion of the people because they see how much of the useless things they send either don't get used or get burned and take up space
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Hayden Parker Hayden Parker (Sep 17 2018 12:54PM) : "who has the knowledge? where are spaces that goods can live if there's a disaster?" this is a rhetorical question that makes people think about what they would do in that moment.
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Hunter Murray Hunter Murray (Sep 17 2018 12:54PM) : this is logos. the reason why is people should use some common sense that they should only send what they need. more

The article is suggesting that american’s send things to a country that just got hit by a hurricane, that they can’t really use. The author is trying to say that only sends things to a country if they need it and that depends on where they live, you should only send them water and food.

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