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"Ballad of Birmingham," by Dudley Randall (1968) + Youth produced video in Kelly Ingram Park

Author: Dudley Randall with video by Bless10 Bharat


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Ballad of Birmingham

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BY DUDLEY RANDALL

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(On the bombing of a church in Birmingham, Alabama, 1963)

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“Mother dear, may I go downtown
Instead of out to play,
And march the streets of Birmingham
In a Freedom March today?”

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JUAN V JUAN V (Feb 10 2021 7:51AM) : . [Edited] more

the mood or the atmosphere of the story in this poem is both frightening and determined. the mom is feeling frightened and the child is determined.

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“No, baby, no, you may not go,
For the dogs are fierce and wild,
And clubs and hoses, guns and jails
Aren’t good for a little child.”

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Alondra R Alondra R (Jun 03 2019 11:42AM) : This poem is a mothers nightmare. I feel for the mother, reading the second to last bit of the poem told me she feared for her baby's life. The fact that back in the day, tragic things would occur and innocents would also be injured sickens me.
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JUAN V JUAN V (Feb 10 2021 8:02AM) : . more

the poet uses imagery or descriptive language. he creates a vivid picture of time in history.

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cristin t cristin t (Feb 11 2021 3:23PM) : The mother is scary for her kid life she doesn't want anything to happen to her son.
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Kiyale W Kiyale W (Jul 22 2021 11:59AM) : It shows a lot of Allusion being a reference to the outcomes of the March's for civil rights in the 1960's
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Lucky P Lucky P (May 22 2019 9:50AM) : The voice of the mother shows her fear of her son getting killed, or injured while protesting. I can hear the mother's voice.
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cristin t cristin t (Apr 24 2020 9:37PM) : The mother seem fear for her son life.
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JUAN V JUAN V (Feb 03 2021 8:56AM) : . more

This is very sad & heartbreaking to see or hear a parent having to through this.

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MATTHEW W MATTHEW W (Mar 01 2021 11:34AM) : this is showing a concerned mother and she want her child not to be harmed
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“But, mother, I won’t be alone.
Other children will go with me,
And march the streets of Birmingham
To make our country free.”

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“No, baby, no, you may not go,
For I fear those guns will fire.
But you may go to church instead
And sing in the children’s choir.”

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JUAN V JUAN V (Feb 10 2021 7:58AM) : . more

this poet uses the “End-stopped” technique. “end-stopped” is a line that ends with a complete phrase or with punctuation.

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cristin t cristin t (Feb 11 2021 3:24PM) : I feel bad for the mother she doesn't want her baby to get hurt or kill.
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cristin t cristin t (Feb 11 2021 3:25PM) : This women is so protective and care for her son life what a good mother she is.
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Kiyale W Kiyale W (Jul 22 2021 12:02PM) : It shows such elegy about the situation, she fears that things may become the worse if she does give her permission to go. But unfortunately it still ended in chaos.
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Kiyale W Kiyale W (Jul 22 2021 12:08PM) : The form of this poetry is rhymed poetry but the rhyme scheme acts as a A,A,B,B sequence
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JUAN V JUAN V (Feb 03 2021 8:49AM) : . more

The mother of the child is really protective, and in fear that her child could get harmed in any way.

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MATTHEW W MATTHEW W (Mar 01 2021 11:50AM) : this is horrible for a kid to not even go outside because he might get shot
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sarah b sarah b (Nov 09 2021 9:00PM) : Alliteration: Fear and Fire
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She has combed and brushed her night-dark hair,
And bathed rose petal sweet,
And drawn white gloves on her small brown hands,
And white shoes on her feet.

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The mother smiled to know her child
Was in the sacred place,
But that smile was the last smile
To come upon her face.

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For when she heard the explosion,
Her eyes grew wet and wild.
She raced through the streets of Birmingham
Calling for her child.

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MATTHEW W MATTHEW W (Mar 02 2021 7:53AM) : she got really nervous like any other mother would do
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She clawed through bits of glass and brick,
Then lifted out a shoe.
“O, here’s the shoe my baby wore,
But, baby, where are you?”

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Ramona P Ramona P (Jul 27 2020 9:46PM) : . more

This has to be a mother’s worst nightmare. She was already nervous. Sending your child somewhere you’d thought was safe but ending up losing her.

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JUAN V JUAN V (Feb 03 2021 8:52AM) : . more

this has to be the worse experience any parent has to go through.

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sarah b sarah b (Nov 09 2021 9:02PM) : I believe the poets "assignment" was to share the horrific feelings and I believe they did that perfectly.

Dudley Randall, “Ballad of Birmingham” from Cities Burning. Copyright © 1968 by Dudley Randall. Reprinted with the permission of the Estate of Dudley Randall.
Source: Cities Burning (Broadside Press, 1968)

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DMU Timestamp: November 09, 2018 23:10

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Julissa Julissa (Apr 29 2019 9:23AM) : Techniques i would steal from Dudley Randall if I were to apprentice myself to this poem: [Edited] more

1. Quatrains.
2. Topic is intense

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Lucky P Lucky P (May 22 2019 9:55AM) : The poem makes me picture the events at Birmingham and how intense it was. Specifically the poet used dialogue and repetition of the mother's voice to help me feel the sadness of the event. [Edited]
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