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"You Fit Into Me," by Margaret Atwood

Author: Margaret Atwood


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you fit into me
like a hook into an eye

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ANJELINA ABRAMS ANJELINA ABRAMS (Apr 08 2019 9:34AM) : Enjambed line more

this is an enjambed line

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ANJELINA ABRAMS ANJELINA ABRAMS (Apr 08 2019 9:07AM) : what aspect is she talking about? [Edited] more

Does she mean literally? Physically? Mentally? Emotionally? Or is she using this as a metaphor? She could also be talking about forced sex in a way or rape, but thats only a possibility. Maybe she might even be talking about personality wise, like someone else’s personality fits into her.

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ANJELINA ABRAMS ANJELINA ABRAMS (Apr 08 2019 9:13AM) : Misleading sentence more

This sentence can be interpreted in many different ways, as to like a hook into an eye like the hooks and eyes on women’s clothing, or she could be talking about a metal, sharp hook, fitting into an actual eye, we may never know what she’s talking about. But this means the poem can go both ways, she could be saying “you fit into me like a hook into an eye” as a good thing clothing wise because they are made for each other or she could be saying “you fit into me like a hook into an eye” in a bad and disturbing way like real eye and metal hook, once again might be symboling into rape of some sort since she said you fit into me which she could’ve meant physically but like a hook into an eye could mean it was painful, disturbing, horrendous, and all the other scary synonyms to describe a painful experience like that.

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ISAIAH HARRIOTT ISAIAH HARRIOTT (May 15 2019 9:46AM) : I agree with Anjelina Abrams more

I feel like this can be taking many different ways, at first i felt like she was talking about just a fish but then i re-read it and i figured that she was talking about something more personal

a fish hook
an open eye

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ANJELINA ABRAMS ANJELINA ABRAMS (Apr 08 2019 9:35AM) : end stopped lines more

this paragraph contains end stopped lines

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ANJELINA ABRAMS ANJELINA ABRAMS (Apr 08 2019 9:37AM) : Cadence more

It gives the poem a stop, a finishing ending.

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ANJELINA ABRAMS ANJELINA ABRAMS (Apr 08 2019 9:15AM) : clarification more

Now she confirms my belief of earlier saying how she was talking about a metal hook, that she was making the poem have a disturbing turn, as she might be symboling rape, or some other type of unhealthy relationship with another.

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ISAIAH HARRIOTT ISAIAH HARRIOTT (May 15 2019 9:47AM) : Mentions fishes more

Seems like it isn’t about fish

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ANJELINA ABRAMS ANJELINA ABRAMS (Apr 08 2019 9:16AM) : Imagery more

An open eye makes it more disturbing as you visualize it, but what might her purpose be of making us visualize that?

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Paul Allison and/or Reading Buddy Teammate (Mar 16 2024 12:26PM) : আপনি কি আমাকে এই কবিতা বুঝতে সাহায্য করতে পারেন? more
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অবশ্যই, আমরা এই কবিতাটি একসাথে অনুধাবন করতে পারি। আমাদের কাছে যে কবিতাটি এসেছে, আহা, কি অসাধারণ ভাব ও অর্থের গভীরতা! একেবারে চমকপ্রদ কিন্তু সংক্ষিপ্ত!

এখানে, মার্গারেট এটউডের কবিতা “you fit into me” আমাদের প্রেমের এক ধরনের চিত্র আঁকে যা অনেক গভীর ও জটিল। প্রথম লাইনে, “you fit into me” – এখানে একটি অন্যরকম সম্পর্কের চিত্র প্রতিষ্ঠিত হচ্ছে, এমন এক সম্পর্ক যেখানে দুই জন আপনাপনে সাঁজগোজ করেন। ঠিক যেমন একটি হুক একটি ছিদ্রের সাথে মেলে যায়, যেন তারা একে অপরের জন্য নির্মিত।

কিন্তু পরের দুই লাইনে, “a fish hook / an open eye” – ওহ, আমাদের মনে হয়, এখানে একটি হঠাৎ অর্থ পরিবর্তন ঘটেছে! একটি মাছ ধরার কাঁটা এবং একটি খোলা চোখ – এটি যন্ত্রণা এবং আহতের চিত্রকল্প তৈরি করে। এক দিকে যেমন তাহা সমাপ্তির বার্তা বহন করে, তেমনি অপর দিকে এটি সম্পর্কের যন্ত্রণাদায়ক দিকগুলোকেও তুলে ধরে।

এই কবিতায় আমাদের মনে হয় যে এটি সম্পর্কের দ্বৈত প্রকৃতির কথা বলে – যেখানে সংযোগ কখনো কখনো ভালোবাসা এবং বেদনা দুটোর মিশেল হয়ে যায়। আহা, এত কম শব্দে কী অনন্য ভাবে প্রগাঢ় অনুভূতির ব্যঞ্জনা!

কিন্তু আমাদের মনে হয়, এখনও একটি রহস্য অবশিষ্ট রয়ে গেছে – এই সম্পর্কের জন্য কবির আসল উপলব্ধি কি? আমরা যদি এর অধিক তল খুঁজি, হয়তো প্রেমের এবং যন্ত্রণার মধ্যে আরো গভীরতর সত্য আবিষ্কার করতে পারি, যা এই কবিতার শক্তিমান শব্দগুলোর মধ্যে লুকিয়ে রয়েছে।

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Paul Allison and/or Reading Buddy Teammate (Mar 16 2024 10:33PM) : Yo, Dis poem is dope, feel me? more
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Oh, we just experienced something quite striking, didn’t we? The text we heard – it’s a poem, and its imagery is so powerful, it’s dope, as one might say with enthusiasm! It’s short but intense, starting with a classic metaphor that suggests closeness and compatibility: “you fit into me like a hook into an eye.” One could envision a garment’s hook and eye closure, a symbol of two things perfectly designed to connect, to be together.

But then, swiftly, the poem shifts our perspective – it pulls the rug out from under us and changes the meaning entirely with the second part: “a fish hook / an open eye.” This shift from the benign to the violent is surprising, wonderful in its literary power, and exciting in its impact – it conveys so much emotion and ideas in so few words.

The first image is one of intimacy and the snug fitting of one thing into another, isn’t it? Then, we’re led into a deeper, darker reality with the second image that conjures pain and shock, shifting the tone drastically. A relationship once seen as close-fitting is recast as something potentially harmful, dangerous.

Altogether, this poem encapsulates the beauty of poetic expression – the economy of language and the evocativeness of metaphors. Yet, within its brevity lies a complexity, a mystery that lingers with us. There’s an echo of something unsaid, a narrative of entanglement and perhaps hurt that lies just beyond the words. It’s as if the poem itself is an eye, and we’ve just been hooked, drawn into a depth of feeling and insight that continues to resonate long after the words are spoken. It invites us to ponder, doesn’t it, on the nature of our own interactions, on the duality of closeness that can veil the potential for pain. We’re left to contemplate, and this contemplation is a silent dialogue that the poem initiates within us and amongst us.

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