i
would
Climb
The hills of Mt.
Bonnell at dawn blindfolded
Swim
the Colorado at noon barebottomed and
Dance
a poet's salsa at midnight barefoot
along the pavement
Of your soul
To get closer to this poem
to that fresh air music
of people coming
and going
in Austin, Texas
Barton Springs 2017 from Corby James on Vimeo. Quick fly over of the gem of Austin, Barton Springs Pool
Oh life, how I loved your cold spring mornings
of putting my stuff in the green gym-bag
and crossing wet grass to the southeast gate
to push my crumpled dollar through the slot.
When I get my allotted case of cancer,
let me swim ten more times at Barton Springs,
in the outdoor pool at 6AM, in the cold water
with the geezers and the jocks.
With my head bald from radiation
and my chemotherapeutic weight loss
I will be sleek as a cheetah
—and I will not complain about life's
pedestrian hypocrisies,
I will not consider death a contractual violation.
Let my cancer be the slow-growing kind
so I will have all the time I need
to backstroke over the rocks and little fishes,
looking upwards through my bronze-tinted goggles
into the vaults and rafters of the oaks,
as the crows exchange their morning gossip
in the pale mutations of early light.
It was worth death to see you through these optic nerves,
to feel breeze through the fur on my arms
to be chilled and stirred in your mortal martini.
In documents elsewhere I have already recorded
my complaints in some painstaking detail.
Now, because all things are joyful near water,
there just might be time to catch up on praise.
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I agree with you Tori. It sounds like Austin is beautiful and calm. It is a place I want to visit.
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The photograph looks calm. But what mood does the POEM create for you?
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Theirs a video underneath the poem and theirs trees and the mood for this poem is beautiful and relaxing
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I think the title is named Austin Texas because his name is Austin and he is in Texas.
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Oh ok I get it now
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I feel like the author was told to remember a time in their life where they remember being at peace or a happy memory. I really enjoy the imagery used in the poem, it really helps make the piece seem like a memory.
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I’m thinking about the capitalization of the verbs as more significant that the (proper noun) places. To climb is to work hard to get high above.
Swim is to surround yourself and submerge yourself and stay afloat.
Dance is to celebrate and release and move and find rhythm.
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I think it is cool that there is no end stop in the poem. No punctuation.It is like a free flow and keeps going and going and going.
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I go often to climb a hill in Fordham. It is hard to climb up but I like to get the top to see the view of stores and people hanging out.
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The author uses i climb in order to climb you need your feet and foot.
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He is probably climbing a mountain so that’s why he needs feet in order to climb
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this relate to me cause that would be an good trip to go on with everthing going on
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i really like tis part becuase it had simliar things that made me think of being back home climbing to get fruits and walking barefoot some times different but almost the same
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due to where i come from alot of bad things have happpen and it always been people who became famous because of how they expressed music and are able to keep going through life and deal with pain.
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This is a nice poem because it just taking about blue beautiful the different states are .
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A poet’s salsa -what is that? I’m not a poet. I like the image. Salsa is a mixture. Like words? Mixed together to make a poem
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They did actually call me Bigfoot in 5th grade I sill am a Bigfoot
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it makes us wonder what is a poets salsa and what would it look like to dance a poets salsa along the floor of your soul
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does along the pavement mean along the floor? if so what does it mean to dance a poets salsa along the floor of your soul?
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The mood set is calm. The author uses a soft word like a soul to create “atmosphere of the story.”
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It is a soft sound
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Mood- the mood the author sets is happy. It makes me happy to think about music.
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Diction refers to the choice of words. Poet chose words that mean freedom like fresh air and barefoot.
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it sets a mood for people to think of some “fresh air music” and makes people think about this place.
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alliteration. when we think about Fresh air music i would think of something calming and i start to think that this poem could be something about calm things that he would do. this could help us think of things that are calming for us too.
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It remind me of traveling to Europe in Montenegro also it reminds me of traveling to Florida.
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Does the author love his city? I like my city because I have a basketball hoop and park right around the corner, actually two parks, one big and one small.
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#Pigeonriver
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That is a very admirable mindset to have.
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