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Lansing Sidewalk Poetry

Author: Eight Lansing Poets


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“Mi Pueblo,” by Cruz Villarreal

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Feb 5
ROJO V ROJO V (Feb 05 2021 10:11AM) : i wonder where this is?
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ALEXANDER C ALEXANDER C (Feb 05 2021 3:11PM) : Im guessing this Is just put somewhere random, or maybe it's put next to a section with water intentionally.
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shaliyah f shaliyah f (Mar 07 2021 3:06PM) : idk where exactly this place i but i do know from the way he described it, his hometown is very nice

Old town, my town, bound by the Grand River,
the Río Grande,
lined with walkways that welcome strollers, bikers,
and rainbow families.

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Leo P Leo P (Feb 05 2021 10:18AM) : what does he mean by rainbow family. Is that a way of saying he has a really nice family.
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Genesis G Genesis G (Feb 10 2021 1:04PM) : kinda reminds me of a tik tok of this girl who keeps posting a tik tok and keeps being repetitive and keeps saying the same thing in each video.
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shaliyah f shaliyah f (Mar 07 2021 2:39PM) : i think that having a rainbow families means you have a very joyful family
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America M America M (Jun 03 2019 12:45PM) : i like how he used " the Grand River" to describe where he lives by.
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Megan R Megan R (Nov 16 2019 6:51PM) : I love how he describes his home as "my town". It shows a strong sense of ownership and loyalty
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ROJO V ROJO V (Feb 03 2021 10:06AM) : He likes Its history?
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Bethzy H Bethzy H (Feb 03 2021 6:30PM) : I can tell that the pueblo and the people in the pueblo are special to him. The reason i say that is because at the end of the poem he writes "La grand Gente de mi pueblo" which means in english the great people of his town.
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oscar h oscar h (May 16 2019 9:23AM) : question [Edited] more

How old is the Grand River?

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ALEXANDER C ALEXANDER C (Mar 23 2021 10:10AM) : this line Creates the color and texture of the written work. Shapes the reader’s perceptions. Stimulates ideas or vivid pictures in the reader’s mind. this line makes me imagine what it would look like in real life walking down the street.
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shaliyah f shaliyah f (Apr 23 2021 3:06PM) : the l's and the w's in this creates a calm mood
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ROJO V ROJO V (Feb 03 2021 10:15AM) : suggesting that the town is diverse in race?
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Bethzy H Bethzy H (Feb 03 2021 6:40PM) : I thought that too, i think they are a diverse race because he used the words "Rainbow families". But who knows i would like to know if that is what the writer meant by using those words.
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ALEXANDER C ALEXANDER C (Feb 05 2021 3:17PM) : I wonder what they mean by rainbow families.
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ALEXANDER C ALEXANDER C (Mar 23 2021 10:00AM) : "rainbow families" makes me think whether the line could have more then 1 meaning or does the writer intend to have just one meaning.

North town, my town,
El Norte de Lansing

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Genesis G Genesis G (Feb 10 2021 12:51PM) : wonder what he means when he says north town my town. Like does he mean north of his town or something i don't know.
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ALEXANDER C ALEXANDER C (Feb 05 2021 3:17PM) : seems to love his town.
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Genesis G Genesis G (Feb 10 2021 2:31PM) : I guess he's lived there for his whole life because he really talks about his town.
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Lot 56 / Cesar Chavez Plaza, Brenke, the ladder for fish,
pools that peacefully gather its dwellers

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oscar h oscar h (May 16 2019 9:25AM) : comment more

I like how you made this rhyme.

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America M America M (Jun 03 2019 12:36PM) : The rhyming is pretty cool and catchy.
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ROJO V ROJO V (Feb 03 2021 10:27AM) : I agree
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Leo P Leo P (Feb 05 2021 10:39AM) : I think that this is where he lives.
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they link me
to its sidewalks and fiestas
its fishing poles and laughter

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America M America M (Jun 03 2019 12:40PM) : It's relatable to my life because of our culture.
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Alondra R Alondra R (Jul 24 2020 4:03PM) : I like how he said that they are lined with walkway that welcome everyone.
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shaliyah f shaliyah f (Apr 23 2021 2:53PM) : this imagery Creates the color and texture of the written work
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oscar h oscar h (May 16 2019 9:23AM) : connection more

I’ve been to a lot of fiestas because of my culture.

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Bethzy H Bethzy H (Feb 03 2021 6:35PM) : i've gone to many fiestas because of my culture, so i can kinda see how his pueblo links him to fiestas because where i'm from thinking about el pueblo makes me think about fiestas that have been done.
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ROJO V ROJO V (Feb 05 2021 9:44AM) : lots of imagery

Old town, my town, bound by grand people
La Grand gente de mi pueblo.

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America M America M (Jun 03 2019 12:43PM) : i like how the whole thing uses a lot of imagery.
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Megan R Megan R (Nov 16 2019 6:53PM) : I completely agree, there is a lot of imagery and it helps the reader to feel as if there are in the Rio Grande.
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Genesis G Genesis G (Feb 10 2021 1:00PM) : seems likes he loves his town. because he mentions it so many times. " old town" " my town "
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Genesis G Genesis G (Feb 10 2021 1:12PM) : He says old town my town repeatedly .This pattern is Anaphora and i think like he was trying to make like a connection or to create rhythm. [Edited] more

Anaphora draws attention to sensory description and figurative language, and it creates rhythm and structure and a sense of forward movement.

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Genesis G Genesis G (Feb 10 2021 1:59PM) : there is a lot of imagery in this poem in the way he is describing it and just like saying how much he cherishes. [Edited] more

that evokes sensory experience. Creates the color and texture of the written work. Shapes the reader’s perceptions. Stimulates ideas or vivid pictures in the reader’s mind.

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shaliyah f shaliyah f (Mar 07 2021 2:48PM) : he repeats "old town, my town" because that the main focus and he wants people to remember that what the poems mostly about
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shaliyah f shaliyah f (Apr 23 2021 2:38PM) : he repeats the word grant 4 times the first two about the river and the second two about the people, this repetition suggest that the people and the river may have similarities,for example the people can be peaceful and calm just like the river. [Edited] more

It enhances the text’s ability to communicate meaning.

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ROJO V ROJO V (Feb 05 2021 10:08AM) : he likes the community there
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Leo P Leo P (Feb 05 2021 10:39AM) : He seems to like where he lives.
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ALEXANDER C ALEXANDER C (Mar 23 2021 10:06AM) : the writer seems to use town a lot, perking our ears in recognition,This complexity emphasizes, clarifies, and amplifies meaning, and it intensifies words’ emotional effect.
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oscar h oscar h (May 16 2019 9:25AM) : question more

what inspired you to right about this place?

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Megan R Megan R (Nov 16 2019 6:54PM) : I would love to know the answer to this! I would love to know the inspiration and passion that lead to have the author create this poem
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ALEXANDER C ALEXANDER C (Feb 05 2021 3:22PM) : the tone seems to be quite positive and heartfelt

“A Nod to Robert Busby,” by Therese Wood

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Feel the hum of the beat
pulsing up through the street?
The vibrational sound of
the jazz all around?
The verve and the jive makes you feel
so alive.
Take a look around, this is Old Town.

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Lennay M Lennay M (Jul 17 2020 11:56AM) : I love how she said, " do you feel the hum of the beat." To ask do you feel the sound of something gives it more meaning. I can picture her swaying and dancing to the rhythm of the street, combining the sweet song of nature with the "booms" and "clanks" c [Edited]
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shaliyah f shaliyah f (Mar 07 2021 3:02PM) : this poem gives off very calm and relaxed vibes i like it alot
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Megan B Megan B (Nov 14 2020 12:26PM) : I really enjoy this poem. It is short, but gives me a sense of adventure and warmth. I can imagine walking down the streets of old town, feeling and hearing the music! Trying new things! Seeing wonderful sights.
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Kenneth P Kenneth P (Apr 13 2021 11:35AM) : is the music loud?
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Megan B Megan B (Nov 14 2020 12:24PM) : To me this has a couple of meanings. I think it could be taken literally, or it could be talking about a jazzy feeling in the air, which makes them feel alive.
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Laquawn L Laquawn L (Feb 05 2021 10:41AM) : This poem is about living the life back in the 80 and 70 and life was great back then but it wasn’t good for animals Bc they were being hunted or killed
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Kenneth P Kenneth P (Apr 13 2021 11:32AM) : Jazz is really big in this town.
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Kenneth P Kenneth P (Mar 01 2021 7:35PM) : "The verve and the jive makes you feel so alive." I really like that sentence because that's how I feel listening to music.
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Kenneth P Kenneth P (Mar 05 2021 11:00AM) : I like the wording and it shows this takes place in the past.

Take a stroll, hear the blues,
see the art, try a brew,
relax and enjoy all the
magic to be found
then
take a look around–this is Old Town.

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Megan B Megan B (Nov 14 2020 12:16PM) : These lines remind me of exploring a new place. The excitement and curiosity in the air as you see new sites and try new things. Its also a good reminder to explore locally, these feelings can be found in your community.
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Kenneth P Kenneth P (Mar 01 2021 7:36PM) : I really like the way this poem sounds and flows. Also, The Blues was a very popular form of jazz music. [Edited]
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Kenneth P Kenneth P (Apr 13 2021 11:35AM) : is this in the past?

“Layers,” by Rebecca Payne

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Beneath it all, the river
made its bed and told us where we’d be.
You on this side, you on the other.
Green followed the river,
stopping to uncurl its tendrils.
Then came the critters,
creeping, swimming, flying.
First nation people paddled in
to hunt the deer, the turkeys, the fish,
showing thanks by barely leaving a trace.
Settlers arrived next,
pulling factories behind.
They plotted the grids, laid the laws,
planted schools, groceries and homes.
Now, sounds of hustle and swoosh
overlay the birdsong.
Smokestacks send a daily dusting of soot.
Kids on their way to get a pop
kick a bottle off the bank.
A bag billows up, swirls and dips,
is swallowed by river’s current,
ever moseying along.

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Sarah S Sarah S (Nov 15 2020 7:41PM) : Storytelling rhythm. more

The rhythm with which this poem was written reminds me of a storyteller. It doesn’t have the exact same rhythm all throughout the poem, but changes to emphasize important points. It almost makes the entire poem seem like it is a story being told by native people.

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Sarah S Sarah S (Nov 15 2020 7:36PM) : Imagery more

This poem is using the imagery of the river being buried underneath all the modern things in order to create this powerful image of something that was a truth and existed before we came along. Very cool.

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Sarah S Sarah S (Nov 15 2020 7:30PM) : Division happens as a natural occurrence. more

This line and the previous really connect the ideas that we did not choose to be here, rather, where we are is a product of the natural process of life. In this instance, the river determined which side we would reside on.

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Sarah S Sarah S (Nov 15 2020 7:37PM) : Rhyme more

River and critters do not rhyme precisely, but are close enough to add some interesting effects to the rhythm of this poem, making this section very lovely to read.

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Sarah S Sarah S (Nov 15 2020 7:32PM) : First Nation people term. more

This is the first time I have ever heard of native peoples being called “First Nation”, and I am curious of where this term came from or if it merely fit the poem and rhythm at the time as to why it was used. I suppose I wonder if they truly are referring to native people or if they are referring to the first people of the United States (the settlers).

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Sarah S Sarah S (Nov 15 2020 7:33PM) : It was the native people. more

This line connects to my previous comment in that it was the native people they were referring to. I love that the author said “showing thanks by barely leaving a trace,” as this is a very deep-rooted philosophy for native people, and one we have lost in our highly developed world.

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“To the Poets Who Gather Here,” by Grace Carras

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(with thanks to the Poetry Room
and the Robin Theater)

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this is for you,
who overcome the trembling
dance of your own pulse
to blossom in the stage light.
you, who dig your roots in deep
and sprout from rock bottom.
go forth and devour, you
conquerors of concrete,
who put the we in weeds,
you brilliant bouquets of breath;
i’ve seen you carry explosions
in your mouths.
you hungry poets,
i’m in love
with the shrapnel of your bravery,
with the way you become the light
that you need to grow.

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Kiran C Kiran C (Apr 28 2021 7:30PM) : Poets as survivors. [Edited] more

For me, the metaphor of bravery as shrapnel brings to mind shiny flecks of metal stuck in flesh, and makes me think of a soldier.  Like maybe the poets are survivors of battles within themselves as artists; or maybe they are survivors of battles with societal norms and conformity; or maybe they are survivors of an actual war — army veterans who write their way to healing together at a community center.   

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“1611 E. Kalamazoo St.,” by Nancy Knox

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Lettuce ladies laugh
as basket bauble-ed ballerinas
rehearse with vegetable violinists.

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Streetware sirens sing
chocolate
tomato-ed tamales.

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Sidewalk gypsies stir
spring caldrons
mirroring
Wednesday’s
wonders
at
Allen Street Market.

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“Sidewalk Dreams,” by Alan Harris

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this sidewalk admires
the rookie’s stride
and shares with all that pass by
that big league dream
that dream which reminds us all
that this is only the beginning

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“Shiawassee Street Bridge,” by Nan Jackson

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Who knows the shapes
Of all the bridges over time
Built to cross the river here?

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Felt more than seen, inflection points
Where the sidewalk starts to slope
Less steeply upward,
Graceful curve to the summit
High above mid-river,
Past concrete balustrades
That replicate the shape of carved stone.

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Years ago I stood on the eastern bank,
Looked up at the underside
Of a bridge that used to stand here,
Wondered why it rose to its high point
Right above my head
Far from the middle of the Grand.

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There once were train tracks here.
The trees whispered—
High cargo along the bank,
Low cargo on the river.

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“The River,” by Jan Shoemaker

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The generations
rise and fall
and resurrection
is in the cards,
though it takes
a wider self
to see it.

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The river
is faithful:
the river gives
old bones
new blood.

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