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Dear Toni cade :

I am choosing glorious like adjective about your story ,“The Lesson” because I really appreciate the way that you write your story by showing us what it make our society to have inequality or division.

The lines that stands for me is,“Imagine for a minute what kind of society it is in which some people can spend on a toy what it would cost to feed a family of six or seven. What do you think?” because This is a key line that let me know the difference between the people economically and how the economy is affecting the poor people. Also how look like how reality life.

Another line that stands for me is, “So we heading down the street and she’s bored us silly about what things cost and what our parents make and how much goes for rent and how money ain’t divided up right in this country. ”Because The main idea of your story is about to expose the African American problem of social equality and lack of quality of education for the black children. Also make us think or believe not all humans are the same.

Your Story reminds me of a story I once read that is “we are not God. “ because in that story the use some bad words that poor clase usually speak and show us how inequality is affect us today in our society . however in the conclusion the author arrive to chow that community everything can change if we are unique even though it will be not easy.

Thanks for your story I look forward to seeing what you make next. I was very happy after i read your story because is teaching us and that can change our society. An additionally next time I want to feel more emotion in your story by many different types of ways. Hum I want to know why you chose this title “Lesson” for this story amusing ? I hope one day I will get my response thanks you

DMU Timestamp: November 27, 2019 01:26





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