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"Casey at the Bat"

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Mr. Zachary Hollis Mr. Zachary Hollis (Jan 10 2020 9:41AM) : This is the poem we heard in class on Wednesday.
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BY ERNEST LAWRENCE THAYER

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The outlook wasn’t brilliant for the Mudville nine that day;
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Mr. Zachary Hollis Mr. Zachary Hollis (Jan 10 2020 9:43AM) : rhyme - day and play
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Frank Gill Frank Gill (Jan 10 2020 10:06AM) : Sets stage for the imagery to the poem about what is happening
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Tyler Flewelling Tyler Flewelling (Jan 10 2020 9:46AM) : day and play are end rhyme tyler and andrew [Edited]
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Isabel winters Isabel winters (Jan 10 2020 10:05AM) : rhyme helps continue the flow of the poem, Isabel and joy
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Jake Meyers Jake Meyers (Jan 10 2020 10:06AM) : THIS MAKES THE POEM GOOD BECAUSE IT MAKES IT HAVE A GOOD FLOW
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Frank Gill Frank Gill (Jan 10 2020 10:14AM) : Starts rythm of aabbccdd
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Carlee Gotti Carlee Gotti (Jan 10 2020 9:46AM) : There are end rymes - Carlee and anna
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Katherine McGrath Katherine McGrath (Jan 10 2020 9:48AM) : end rhyme more

day and play is an end rhyme

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Jake Meyers Jake Meyers (Jan 10 2020 9:50AM) : Rhyme - day play
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John Agan John Agan (Jan 10 2020 10:07AM) : adds rhythm
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The score stood four to two with but one inning more to play.
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Emily Shoup Emily Shoup (Jan 10 2020 9:46AM) : play and day are end rhymes
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John Agan John Agan (Jan 10 2020 10:05AM) : makes it more fun to read
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Jack Flory Jack Flory (Jan 10 2020 9:47AM) : rhyme, play rhymes with day
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John Agan John Agan (Jan 10 2020 9:48AM) : Alliteration - score stood (and Frank) [Edited]
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Isabel winters Isabel winters (Jan 10 2020 10:06AM) : we thought that was personification because a score can't stand, joy and Isabel
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John Agan John Agan (Jan 10 2020 10:06AM) : it adds flare to the poem
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Jacob McQuade Jacob McQuade (Jan 10 2020 10:07AM) : to and two are alliterations - jake and patrick [Edited]
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And then when Cooney died at first, and Barrows did the same,
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Erin Tracy Erin Tracy (Jan 10 2020 9:45AM) : rhyme- same and game- Alec and Erin [Edited]
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Emily Shoup Emily Shoup (Jan 10 2020 10:05AM) : makes it more fun to read and sounds poetic
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Tyler Flewelling Tyler Flewelling (Jan 10 2020 9:46AM) : sameand game are end rhyme
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Matthew Monesi Matthew Monesi (Jan 10 2020 9:49AM) : same and game are rhyme
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John Agan John Agan (Jan 10 2020 9:49AM) : Hyperbole - Cooney died at first (and Frank) [Edited]
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Jake Meyers Jake Meyers (Jan 10 2020 9:51AM) : ryhme - same game
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Katherine McGrath Katherine McGrath (Jan 10 2020 9:58AM) : Hyperbole more

“died at first” is Hyperbole

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Isabel winters Isabel winters (Jan 10 2020 10:07AM) : adds drama and a whole new emotion, Isabel and joy
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Erin Tracy Erin Tracy (Jan 10 2020 10:05AM) : rhyme adds rhythm to the poem and makes it catchy- Alec and Erin
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A sickly silence fell upon the patrons of the game.
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Jake Meyers Jake Meyers (Jan 10 2020 9:44AM) : Alliteration - Sickly Silence
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Nicholas Tippett Nicholas Tippett (Jan 10 2020 10:12AM) : The sick part of the silence tells that it is irregular.
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Nicholas Tippett Nicholas Tippett (Jan 10 2020 9:45AM) : Rhyme - same and game
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Patrick Randall Patrick Randall (Jan 10 2020 9:46AM) : Sickly silence-personification-patrick and jake [Edited]
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Erin Tracy Erin Tracy (Jan 10 2020 9:47AM) : alliteration- sickly silence- Alec and Erin [Edited]
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Tyler Flewelling Tyler Flewelling (Jan 10 2020 9:47AM) : sickly silence is illiteration
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Jake Meyers Jake Meyers (Jan 10 2020 10:11AM) : Sickly silence isn't an illiteration, its an alliteration, please make sure to check your spelling as this could affect your grade, PS. this is embarrassing
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Jacob McQuade Jacob McQuade (Jan 13 2020 10:15AM) : FALSE
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Jacob McQuade Jacob McQuade (Jan 13 2020 10:15AM) : -tyler
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Katherine McGrath Katherine McGrath (Jan 10 2020 9:49AM) : personification more

“sickly silence” is personification

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Matthew Monesi Matthew Monesi (Jan 10 2020 9:53AM) : sickly silence-alliteration
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Alec Quinn Alec Quinn (Jan 10 2020 9:57AM) : sickly silence - alliteration and personification Alec & Erin
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John Agan John Agan (Jan 10 2020 10:08AM) : it adds to silence
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Isabel winters Isabel winters (Jan 10 2020 10:10AM) : adds character to an object and makes the reader stop and think, Isabel and joy
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Emily Shoup Emily Shoup (Jan 10 2020 9:58AM) : imagery- carly and emily
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John Agan John Agan (Jan 10 2020 9:58AM) : Alliteration - sickly silence (and Frank)
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Emily Shoup Emily Shoup (Jan 10 2020 9:59AM) : alliteration- sickly silence- emily and carly
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A straggling few got up to go in deep despair. The rest
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Isabel winters Isabel winters (Jan 10 2020 9:45AM) : deep despair- alliteration, Isabel and joy
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Carlee Gotti Carlee Gotti (Jan 10 2020 10:07AM) : this adds more detail and diffrent wording
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John Agan John Agan (Jan 10 2020 10:08AM) : adds how far the despair goes
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Nicholas Tippett Nicholas Tippett (Jan 10 2020 9:46AM) : Rhyme - rest and breast
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Tyler Flewelling Tyler Flewelling (Jan 10 2020 9:47AM) : rest and breast are end rhyme
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Jake Meyers Jake Meyers (Jan 10 2020 10:14AM) : ADDS GREAT RHYTHM TO THE POEM, YOU HAVE AMAZED ME WITH YOUR WORK KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK!!!!
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Frank Gill Frank Gill (Jan 10 2020 9:54AM) : Rhyme Rest Breast + John
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Emily Shoup Emily Shoup (Jan 10 2020 9:47AM) : deep despair is alliteration
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Anna Emswiler Anna Emswiler (Jan 10 2020 9:47AM) : deep despair- alliteration
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Clung to that hope which springs eternal in the human breast;
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Frank Gill Frank Gill (Jan 10 2020 9:56AM) : Personification - Spring eternal in the human breast + John
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Emily Shoup Emily Shoup (Jan 10 2020 10:07AM) : makes the reader think deeper about the meaning
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They thought if only Casey could but get a whack at that—
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Jack Kish Jack Kish (Jan 10 2020 9:47AM) : Whack-Onomatopoeia
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John Agan John Agan (Jan 10 2020 10:09AM) : Makes the reader feel something
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Frank Gill Frank Gill (Jan 10 2020 10:11AM) : Another way to say hope and swinging the bat
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Isabel winters Isabel winters (Jan 10 2020 10:11AM) : makes the reader feel the sound through wording, Isabel and joy
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Nicholas Tippett Nicholas Tippett (Jan 10 2020 10:13AM) : Whack tells how hard he would hit the ball.
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Jacob McQuade Jacob McQuade (Jan 10 2020 10:14AM) : excitement intensifies
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Jake Meyers Jake Meyers (Jan 10 2020 10:15AM) : YOUR WORK HAS BEEN OUTSTANDING, THIS IS A GREAT EXAMPLE OF ONOMATOPOEIA< GREAT WORK A+
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Isabel winters Isabel winters (Jan 10 2020 9:47AM) : whack- onomatopoeia, Isabel and joy
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Katherine McGrath Katherine McGrath (Jan 10 2020 10:12AM) : agreed more

i agree

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Emily Shoup Emily Shoup (Jan 10 2020 9:47AM) : whack is onomatopoeia
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Tyler Flewelling Tyler Flewelling (Jan 10 2020 9:48AM) : whack at that is internal rhyme
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kate murphy kate murphy (Jan 10 2020 9:53AM) : onomatopoeia - "whack"- kate and gabby
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Emily Shoup Emily Shoup (Jan 10 2020 10:08AM) : onomatopoeia adds excitement, provokes your senses
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Nicholas Tippett Nicholas Tippett (Jan 10 2020 9:53AM) : Onomatopoeia - whack
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Alec Quinn Alec Quinn (Jan 10 2020 9:55AM) : whack - onomatopoeia Alec & Erin
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Tyler Flewelling Tyler Flewelling (Jan 10 2020 9:56AM) : whack is an onomatopoeia
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Erin Tracy Erin Tracy (Jan 10 2020 10:14AM) : Onomatopoeia- makes it more realistic- Alec ad Erin
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We’d put up even money now with Casey at the bat.
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Frank Gill Frank Gill (Jan 10 2020 9:57AM) : Rhyme - That Bat + John
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But Flynn preceded Casey, as did also Jimmy Blake,
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Nicholas Tippett Nicholas Tippett (Jan 10 2020 9:46AM) : Rhyme - Blake and cake
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John Agan John Agan (Jan 10 2020 9:52AM) : Rhyme - Blake and cake (and Frank)
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And the former was a lulu and the latter was a cake;
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Frank Gill Frank Gill (Jan 10 2020 9:46AM) : Metaphor - And the former was Lulu and the latter was a cake + John [Edited]
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Isabel winters Isabel winters (Jan 10 2020 10:13AM) : two ideas that don't appear the same but help contrast two together, Isabel and joy
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John Agan John Agan (Jan 10 2020 9:46AM) : Metaphor - and the former was a lulu and the latter was a cake (and Frank) [Edited]
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Emily Shoup Emily Shoup (Jan 10 2020 9:48AM) : latter was a cake is a metaphor- emily and carly
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Alec Quinn Alec Quinn (Jan 10 2020 9:58AM) : And the former was a lulu and the latter was a cake - metaphor Alec & Erin
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So upon that stricken multitude grim melancholy sat,
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Nicholas Tippett Nicholas Tippett (Jan 10 2020 9:46AM) : Rhyme - sat and bat
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Emily Shoup Emily Shoup (Jan 10 2020 9:50AM) : personififcation-
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John Agan John Agan (Jan 10 2020 9:53AM) : Rhyme - sat and bat (and Frank)
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Patrick Randall Patrick Randall (Jan 10 2020 9:54AM) : multitude melancholy-alliteration-patrick jake
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Alec Quinn Alec Quinn (Jan 10 2020 9:59AM) : that stricken multitude grim melancholy sat - personification Alec & Erin
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For there seemed but little chance of Casey’s getting to the bat.
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kate murphy kate murphy (Jan 10 2020 9:53AM) : rhyme - sat and bat-kate and gabby
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Matthew Monesi Matthew Monesi (Jan 10 2020 9:54AM) : sat and bat-rhyme
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But Flynn let drive a single, to the wonderment of all,
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John Agan John Agan (Jan 10 2020 9:53AM) : Rhyme - all, ball (and Frank)
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And Blake, the much despised, tore the cover off the ball;
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Emily Shoup Emily Shoup (Jan 10 2020 9:49AM) : tore the cover off the ball- hyperbole- emily and carly [Edited]
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Jacob McQuade Jacob McQuade (Jan 10 2020 9:58AM) : blake and ball, alliteration - Jake and Patrick
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And when the dust had lifted, and men saw what had occurred,
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John Agan John Agan (Jan 10 2020 9:53AM) : Rhyme - occurred and third (and Frank)
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There was Jimmy safe at second and Flynn a-hugging third.
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Alec Quinn Alec Quinn (Jan 10 2020 10:02AM) : safe at second - alliteration Alec & Erin
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Then from 5,000 throats and more there rose a lusty yell;
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Jack Kish Jack Kish (Jan 10 2020 9:48AM) : 5000 throats and more there a rose a rusty yell - imagery
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John Agan John Agan (Jan 10 2020 9:54AM) : Rhryme - yell and dell (and Frank)
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It rumbled through the valley, it rattled in the dell;
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kate murphy kate murphy (Jan 10 2020 9:54AM) : rhyme - yell and dell- kate and gabby
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It knocked upon the mountain and recoiled upon the flat,
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For Casey, mighty Casey, was advancing to the bat.
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Anna Emswiler Anna Emswiler (Jan 10 2020 9:48AM) : Casey- Repetition
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Isabel winters Isabel winters (Jan 10 2020 10:14AM) : repetition helps the reader remember what the poem is about, Isabel and joy
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There was ease in Casey’s manner as he stepped into his place;
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Nicholas Tippett Nicholas Tippett (Jan 10 2020 9:47AM) : Rhyme - place and face
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There was pride in Casey’s bearing and a smile on Casey’s face.
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kate murphy kate murphy (Jan 10 2020 9:56AM) : rhyme - place and face- kate and gabby
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And when, responding to the cheers, he lightly doffed his hat,
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Nicholas Tippett Nicholas Tippett (Jan 10 2020 9:47AM) : Rhyme - hat and bat
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No stranger in the crowd could doubt ’twas Casey at the bat.
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Isabel winters Isabel winters (Jan 10 2020 10:00AM) : line 21- hyperbole, Isabel and Joy
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Ten thousand eyes were on him as he rubbed his hands with dirt;
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kate murphy kate murphy (Jan 10 2020 9:47AM) : rhyme- dirt and shirt- kate and gabby
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Nicholas Tippett Nicholas Tippett (Jan 10 2020 9:48AM) : Rhyme - dirt and shirt
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Five thousand tongues applauded when he wiped them on his shirt.
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Frank Gill Frank Gill (Jan 10 2020 9:50AM) : Personification - Five thousand tongues applauded +John [Edited]
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kate murphy kate murphy (Jan 10 2020 9:59AM) : personification - "five thousand tongues applauded"- kate and gabby
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Then while the writhing pitcher ground the ball into his hip,
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kate murphy kate murphy (Jan 10 2020 9:48AM) : rhyme - hip and lip- kate and gabby
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Nicholas Tippett Nicholas Tippett (Jan 10 2020 9:48AM) : Rhyme - hip and lip
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Defiance gleamed in Casey’s eye, a sneer curled Casey’s lip.
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Isabel winters Isabel winters (Jan 10 2020 9:49AM) : defiance gleamed- personification, Isabel and joy
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And now the leather-covered sphere came hurtling through the air,
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And Casey stood a-watching it in haughty grandeur there.
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Close by the sturdy batsman the ball unheeded sped—
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“That ain’t my style,” said Casey. “Strike one,” the umpire said.
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From the benches, black with people, there went up a muffled roar,
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Nicholas Tippett Nicholas Tippett (Jan 10 2020 9:48AM) : Rhyme - roar and shore
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Patrick Randall Patrick Randall (Jan 10 2020 9:49AM) : benches black- alliteration-patrick jake [Edited]
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John Agan John Agan (Jan 10 2020 9:55AM) : Imagery - black with people
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Like the beating of the storm-waves on a stern and distant shore.
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Alec Quinn Alec Quinn (Jan 10 2020 9:50AM) : Simile (line 35 & 36) Alec & Erin [Edited]
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Isabel winters Isabel winters (Jan 10 2020 9:50AM) : there went up a muffled roar, Like the beating of the storm-waves on a stern and distant shore.- simile, Isabel and joy
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kate murphy kate murphy (Jan 10 2020 9:51AM) : simile - "there went up a muffled roar, like the beating of the storm-waves"- kate and gabby
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Nicholas Tippett Nicholas Tippett (Jan 10 2020 9:57AM) : Simile - roar to a shore
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Frank Gill Frank Gill (Jan 10 2020 10:01AM) : Simile Muffled roar like the beating of a storm + John
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“Kill him! Kill the umpire!” shouted some one on the stand;
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And it’s likely they’d have killed him had not Casey raised his hand.
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With a smile of Christian charity great Casey’s visage shone;
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Alec Quinn Alec Quinn (Jan 10 2020 9:54AM) : Christian charity - alliteration Alec & Erin
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Erin Tracy Erin Tracy (Jan 10 2020 9:55AM) : Personification- a smile of Christian charity- Alec and Erin
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Jake Meyers Jake Meyers (Jan 10 2020 10:02AM) : alliteration - Christian charity
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He stilled the rising tumult; he bade the game go on;
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He signaled to the pitcher, and once more the spheroid flew;
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Nicholas Tippett Nicholas Tippett (Jan 10 2020 9:49AM) : Rhyme - flew and two
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But Casey still ignored it, and the umpire said, “Strike two.”
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Jacob McQuade Jacob McQuade (Jan 10 2020 10:11AM) : still and strike, alliteration- jake and patrick
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“Fraud!” cried the maddened thousands, and echo answered fraud;
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Nicholas Tippett Nicholas Tippett (Jan 10 2020 9:49AM) : Rhyme - fraud and awed
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But one scornful look from Casey and the audience was awed.
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Tyler Flewelling Tyler Flewelling (Jan 10 2020 9:50AM) : audience and awed are internal rhyme
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They saw his face grow stern and cold, they saw his muscles strain,
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Nicholas Tippett Nicholas Tippett (Jan 10 2020 9:50AM) : Rhyme - strain and again
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John Agan John Agan (Jan 10 2020 9:56AM) : Imagery - face grow stern and cold, they saw his muscles strain (and Frank)
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And they knew that Casey wouldn’t let that ball go by again.
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The sneer is gone from Casey’s lip, his teeth are clinched in hate;
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Carlee Gotti Carlee Gotti (Jan 10 2020 9:50AM) : "His teeth are clinched in hate." - imagery
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Nicholas Tippett Nicholas Tippett (Jan 10 2020 9:50AM) : Rhyme - hate and plate
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He pounds with cruel violence his bat upon the plate.
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Jacob McQuade Jacob McQuade (Jan 10 2020 10:09AM) : pound plate- alliteration - jake and patrick
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And now the pitcher holds the ball, and now he lets it go,
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Matthew Monesi Matthew Monesi (Jan 10 2020 9:55AM) : go and blow-rhyme
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And now the air is shattered by the force of Casey’s blow.
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Emily Shoup Emily Shoup (Jan 10 2020 9:52AM) : air is shattered is imagery- carly
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Katherine McGrath Katherine McGrath (Jan 10 2020 9:55AM) : metaphor more

“the air is shattered by the force of Casey’s blow” is Hyperbole

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Isabel winters Isabel winters (Jan 10 2020 9:56AM) : 47-50 - imagery describing a pitch in play. Isabel and joy
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Oh, somewhere in this favored land the sun is shining bright;
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kate murphy kate murphy (Jan 10 2020 9:49AM) : rhyme bright and light-kate and gabby
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Patrick Randall Patrick Randall (Jan 10 2020 9:50AM) : sun shining- alliteration
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Nicholas Tippett Nicholas Tippett (Jan 10 2020 9:51AM) : Rhyme - bright and light
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Tyler Flewelling Tyler Flewelling (Jan 10 2020 9:51AM) : somewhere is repetition
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The band is playing somewhere, and somewhere hearts are light,
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Matthew Monesi Matthew Monesi (Jan 10 2020 9:51AM) : light and bright-rhyme
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And somewhere men are laughing, and somewhere children shout;
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Nicholas Tippett Nicholas Tippett (Jan 10 2020 9:51AM) : Rhyme - shout and out
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But there is no joy in Mudville—mighty Casey has struck out.
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Jacob McQuade Jacob McQuade (Jan 10 2020 9:47AM) : alliteration - mighty and Mudville - jake and patrick [Edited]
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Tyler Flewelling Tyler Flewelling (Jan 10 2020 9:48AM) : deep despair are illiteration
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Jacob McQuade Jacob McQuade (Jan 10 2020 9:57AM) : Casey is repetition - jake and patrick
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Mr. Zachary Hollis Mr. Zachary Hollis (Jan 10 2020 10:13AM) : Saying a person's name again and again would not necessarily count as repetition. The phrase "Casey at the bat" might be a better example.
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Nicholas Tippett Nicholas Tippett (Jan 10 2020 10:01AM) : This poem seems to be free verse
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