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Commenting Letters to Authors - How to Date a Browngirl, Blackgirl, Whitegirl and Halfie" by Junot Diaz

Dear Junot Diaz,

I am astonished about your story “ How to Date a Browngirl, Blackgirl, Whitegirl or Halfie because you see to be very confident ans intuitive when it comes to sentimentally understand women’s feelings broadly and the way you tell the story already convicts how experience you are for dating all kinds of them.

One set of lines that stood out for me was in paragraphs “23 and 24.” I think these paragraphs really show how calcu;ated you have the movements of them. You express what are every single women going to to at each specific time, which is very surprising to be sure that none of them will change their mind to one point or another at their lives. You seemed like you were improvising a lot with different women and narrate as if each women was supposed to be a guideline in this story. Were you really improvising a movie , that you were going to hire someone else on it, such as the reader? Or not really?.

Another set of lines that stood out for me was in paragraph “26”. I think you tend to be multiculturalism with women. It makes me feel very involved the way how you speak. Every single moment is very well explained as if it would be happening very objectively. Your poem reminds me of the story of a friends that was in High School who was very quiet, yet knew how to talk broadly about women in general. He did not seem to apparently have a lot of experience, yet his experience was hidden under his attitude with people. Its person eventually was very seeked to give help to other friends who were dating with women. Consequently, he spoke with a lot of confidence in himself about them. Therefore , It is to say that he was quite like you in that sense of behavior.

Thank you for sharing your story with people. It was very interesting. I look forward to seeing what you make next and hear about it. It is quite attracting to know when a person talks about diverse things including women. It could be really enjoyable to listen to a men expressing every single detail about an opposite sex’s satisfactions.

Sincerely,

Idelkys Checo

DMU Timestamp: February 03, 2020 23:30





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