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My favorite word is draw because when you draw , you take out the talent from your body , and you can draw a car , animals , flowers,etc . The draw is art ,and when you draw a lot you can be a famous painter , you can draw what you can imagine or what you like to draw , you can draw with

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cristin tolentino cristin tolentino (Feb 10 2020 9:36AM) : yes drawing is fun you can become a amazing artist.
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Jessica Hernandez-Speer Jessica Hernandez-Speer (Mar 03 2020 10:14AM) : Suggested Revision more

The draw Drawing is art , and when you draw a lot you can be a famous painter, you can draw what you can imagine or what you like to draw , you can draw with

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watercolor or pencil , if you don’t know how to draw you learn. you don’t have anything to do something? go draw! Drawing is a way of expressing yourself. Most artists express their feelings in that way. If they are going through something , their painting may be dark and ugly. If they feel happy it may be colorful , so the simplistic art of contemporary drawing has always been concerned with making marks. Different artists exploit lines to make marks, which come together to express or create a feeling the particular artist is communicating. Drawing or making marks has been around longer than any other art form as cavemen were the first to discover the art. Since this time artists have been able to manipulate line and colour using not only pencil or graphite, but using charcoal, ink, watercolor pencils and micro pens, creating a mixed media artwork classified as contemporary drawing art. The artists Keith Barley, Caitlin Hackett and Kiel Johnson all have very unique styles of drawing and the language of these artists have been expressed , and Deaf art is more than just a painting or drawing. So, what exactly is Deaf art? Deaf art is something that can bring together the Deaf Community. The feelings that the Deaf experience are now brought onto a canvas. Art plays a huge role in the Deaf community. After all, the Deaf are thought of as the best visual people. Deaf artists bring their Deaf pride and pour their hearts out into their art works. They are great role models to the people in their community , and Drawing during the Renaissance was used as a multi-purpose tool that assisted in the artists' creative process and individuality. Before the Renaissance period, drawings were used for story telling or other primitive examples of art , artists began using the methods of drawing to spontaneously express their creativity , and Life drawinghelps you prepare for taking exams , so If you are boring and do not have any job to do, switch to drawing and discover your talents for a happy feel…..

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this whole paragraph is similar to a lot of artist. and that includes me. im a digital and traditional artist. theres i lots of way people can draw and lots do vent through their art work. during my time of drawing i have developed new skills for my art to come out better(at least in my eyes) and you perfectly described how Artist develop their own skill when you said “Different artists exploit lines to make marks, which come together to express or create a feeling the particular artist is communicating”.

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Jessica Hernandez-Speer Jessica Hernandez-Speer (Mar 03 2020 10:15AM) : Suggested Revision more

watercolor or pencil, if you don’t know how to draw, you learn. you You don’t have anything to do something? go Go draw!

Reason: You don't need ANYTHING and SOMETHING together in this sentence.

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