MERIT ON THE YOUNG GENERATION.
Author: Leticia Zang
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Dear Representative Ocasio-Cortez,
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Your Instagram video about this generation being badass leaves me feeling giddy and almost speechless.
Giddy and alomost speechless.
The way you descibe the young generation is very amazing, and I feel proud as a young girl.
You show our generation as a power group of people and profound.
You say that we are not afraid to get out to defend what we believe.
One thing you said that stands out for me is when you say, “ I think the young generation is more sensitive in a positive way.
They actually care about other people’s experiences in life.”
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Perhaps you need to read this aloud to a group and have them help you clarify what you really want to say.
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I am very giddy by your Instagram video because it left me Your Instagram video about this generation being badass leaves me feeling giddy and almost speechless.
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One thing you said that stands out for me is when she saysyou say, “ I think the young generation is more sensitive in a positive way.
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I think this is feeling and expressive of gratitude because she gives us a big honor that represents our generation.
That demonstrates that we are a generation that cares for other people’s life whatever their status.
I do with the word of gratifiedly agree with you that.
It gives the badass generation a credit and pleasure of satisfaction which means that through her video she fulfills the desires or expections of the young generation that we are.
I agree that this new generation is very profound and very strong and very brave.
We are actually willing to go to the streets, and this really demonstrates that this young generation is ready to stand out and to be proud of themselves.
One reason I say this is because shee represents us as a powerful genertion.
The young generation is not weak at all.
Another thing you say thatg I agree with is “They're not afraid to have those conversations.”
This means that the young generation has determination to go further than other, older generations.
This means that the young generation has determination to go further than other old generations.
Recently I was looking at videos by young activists, and one of them is a good example of what I’m saying here.
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I think agree that this new generation is very profound and very strong and very brave because they . We are actually willing to go to the streets because it , and this really demonstrates and helps the that this young generation is ready to stand out and to be proud of themselmthemselves.
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Another reason thing you say thatg I agree with you is “They're not afraid to have those conversations.” because this This means that the young generation got a has determination to go farthest further than other old , older generations.
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I’m especially inspired by the video by Blair Imani because I like the way she describes her coming out experience and the way she overcame what she went through.
Also, she learned what discrimination against Muslims means because she faced it firsthand.
The issue in this video was the identity.
Who are you ?
Something memorable in a video is she is really proud to be who she is because she is glad to speak behalf to her community.
Also, the way she speaks in front of many people makes her grow and go beyond her identity.
This is meaningful because as a young muslum woman she was not afraid to face her issue of identity.
There are some pople who hide her identity when people ask them where they come from.
That is very sad because no matter where you come from or where you have been living, you need to be proud of yourself.
This video sparks my interest becasue as an immigrant I saw how people treat us in this country.
They are making a discrimiantion about our background and they know respect our culture this is why I really proud of my background no matter what.
It is good because she speaks on behalf of the young generation.
“You are the government!
Like, as a democracy, we the people mean you.
You are as a voter you are the government too”.(
ALEXANDRIA OCASIO-CORTEZ).
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Also, through her experience she learned what the discrimination against Muslims means and because she faced it face her firsthand.
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This is meanful meaningful because as a young muslum woman she was not afraid to face her issue of identity.
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This is basically saying the young generation is the administration, as a self-government, the individuals are very improtant for them.
They are all over the society where we live and they are the voice of the government.
I’ve also been learning about the young activist of young people who advocate for the change in thier country or the condition of people who are threatened by other ethnicity.
For me this is a very important stand up on what you believe.
To get the courage and go forward.
Not cease your path.
The young protesters that I find most inspiring are the ones who the group of black womenwho was doing the civil rights.
I think this history is a good example of supporting something you said in your video: “.
I think that they are more sensitive, in a positive way, ” I agree with you here, because the young generation is very compassionate through other people always doing the good way.
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Thanks for taking the time to read my letter.
I look forward to seeing what you do or say next.
Your video was very powerful for because it wants to explain how the young genereation does not have to be neglict by the other generation.
Also, some people think when you young you can't speak or think positivily.
Always they want to push you back.
We mus allow youth to express themselve when they want to say something.
This is why I really enjoy watching your video.
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Also, some people think when you young you can't speak or thinking think positivily, always . Always they want to push you back, but not all they have to live them express themself . We mus allow youth to express themselve when they want to say somehingsomething.
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