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Dear Representative Ocasio-Cortez

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I am really stunned by your instagram video because you showed how this new generation plays a really vital role within the demoncrosi of the nation. Also being aware of the backstories of the nation and knowing themself as part of the government, the young generation are so afraid of bringing up conversation that will benefit them and the following generations. One thing that really stands out to me “They're not afraid to have those conversations. If anything, like I think they're profoundly courageous because they're willing to puncture more taboos and have conversations that, frankly, older generations sometimes struggle to have”. I think this is so true what you are saying. In fact, this is what the young in this generation do to address any threat that might ruin their developpement. I do agree with you about the fact that the younger generation are Badass. One reason why I said that is that they don’t fear talking about topics even though it would make some people feel guilty about the citation. The second reason is that they are ready to use all the methods of protest in order to make their voices heard. Recently I was looking at a video by young activists, one of them is a good example of what I am saying. I’m especially inspired by the video by “Xiuhtezcatl“,and I chose this video to quote here because it shows how the younger generation would be left with no choice but to take things at a very high level. A climate change activist who represented himself at to reveal the true massacre that climate change is getting done and will accomplish more if no actions are being taken to put an end to it. Something memorable in a video was when he said “Life is a gift and it is our responsibility to respect and protect that which give us life” because life really is a gift and so spoiling it would and making into an unbearable wouldn’t be considered as a gift for the following generation and will have to endure the consequence of previous action. I think this a good example to point out and make an AOC because the young activist had no fear to show up and clarify the consequence of our actions and what needs to be done to stop it.

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Abigail Zamora Abigail Zamora (Mar 05 2020 3:21PM) : Suggested Replacement more

I am really stunned by your instagram video because you showed how this new generation plays a really vital role within the demoncrosi of the nation. Also being aware of the backstories of the nation and knowing themself as part of the government, the young generation are so afraid of bringing up conversation that will benefit them and the following generations.

One thing that really stands out to me “They're not afraid to have those conversations. If anything, like I think they're profoundly courageous because they're willing to puncture more taboos and have conversations that, frankly, older generations sometimes struggle to have”. I think this is so true what you are saying. In fact, this is what the young in this generation do to address any threat that might ruin their developpement. I do agree with you about the fact that the younger generation are Badass. One reason why I said that is that they don’t fear talking about topics even though it would make some people feel guilty about the citation.

The second reason is that they are ready to use all the methods of protest in order to make their voices heard. Recently I was looking at a video by young activists, one of them is a good example of what I am saying. I’m especially inspired by the video by “Xiuhtezcatl“,and I chose this video to quote here because it shows how the younger generation would be left with no choice but to take things at a very high level. A climate change activist who represented himself at to reveal the true massacre that climate change is getting done and will accomplish more if no actions are being taken to put an end to it. Something memorable in a video was when he said “Life is a gift and it is our responsibility to respect and protect that which give us life” because life really is a gift and so spoiling it would and making into an unbearable wouldn’t be considered as a gift for the following generation and will have to endure the consequence of previous action. I think this a good example to point out and make an AOC because the young activist had no fear to show up and clarify the consequence of our actions and what needs to be done to stop it.

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I am really stunned by your instagram video because you showed how this new generation plays a really vital role within the demoncrosi democracy of the nation.

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Paul Allison (Mar 10 2020 11:27AM) : I'm not sure I understand what you are saying here. It almost sounds like you are disagreeing with AOC.
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I do agree with you about the fact that the younger generation are Badassbadass.

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One reason why I said that is that they don’t fear talking about topics even though it would make some people feel guilty about the citation.

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I’m especially inspired by the video by “Xiuhtezcatl“,and I chose this video to quote here because it Xiuhtezcatl Roske-Martinez at the United Nations, speaking about climate change. This video shows how the younger generation would be left with no choice but to take things at a very high level.

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A climate change activist who represented himself at, to reveal the true massacre that climate change is getting done and will accomplish more if no actions are being taken to put an end to it.

Reason: I think is a little confuse, is a word missing? or it is a different idea??

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A climate change activist who represented himself at the United Nations to reveal the true massacre that climate change is getting done causing and will accomplish do more if no actions are being taken to put an end to it.

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Abigail Zamora Abigail Zamora (Mar 05 2020 3:23PM) : what is AOC?
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Abigail Zamora Abigail Zamora (Mar 05 2020 3:33PM) : this is good sentence, very clear examples of what young activist wants to achieve
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I think this a good example to point out and make an to you AOC because the young activist had no fear to show up and clarify the consequence of our actions and what needs to be done to stop it.

This is basically saying that “if actions are to taken as soon as possible,this planet will be nothing but a painful and cruel waste land for our children and grandchildrens. I’ve also been learning about youth revolt and young evolters all around the world are fighting to earn some basic human rights and also to protect the source of their lives. The young protesters that I find most inspiring are the water rights activists fighting to protect their water sources from being spoiled by some pipeline to create factories. I think this history makes me wonder about something that you said in your video “I think this new generation is very profound and very strong and very brave because they are actually willing to go to the streets”. I do agree with what you said because based on the video of the young activists taking things in hands by showing up at this conference to elaborate, they need a whole information gathering and the courage to accomplish such task. Thanks for taking the time to read my letter. I look forward to seeing what you do or say next. The fact that giving such credit toward the young generation, who are usually not being acknowledged, is just going to add up the fuel to their awareness and responsibilities.

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This Basically this is basically saying that “if actions are to taken as soon as possible,this planet will be nothing but a painful and cruel waste land for our children and grandchildrens.

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Paul Allison (Mar 10 2020 11:33AM) : Good place for a new paragraph.
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I’ve also been learning about youth revolt and young evolters revolters all around the world and throughout history who are fighting to earn some basic human rights and also to protect the source of their lives.

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Paul Allison (Mar 10 2020 11:35AM) : Look into it more about what the pipelines are about. It's not about "some factories."
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Paul Allison (Mar 10 2020 11:38AM) : I was happy to see you begin to question the notion that THIS CURRENT generation is more badass than earlier ones. But then you just quote the stuff about being brave and strong again... more

Can you write an argument where you agree that this current generation is badass, but that it might be that past generations were too?

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Paul Allison (Mar 10 2020 11:36AM) : New paragraph here.
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