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Letter to AOC


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Dear Representative Ocasio-Cortez,

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I am astonished by your Instagram video because of your candor comments on our generation. I think our generation has been experiencing unprecedented events. Our generation is open to change and welcome differences with an open hand and arm. One thing that I really like about our generation is the fact that they are non-complacent - we constantly look for ways to improve ourselves and our society. We shudder at the thought of settling for anything.

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I am astonished by your Instagram video because of your candor comments on our generation being badass.

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Our generation is open to change and we welcome differences with an open hand and arm.

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One thing that I really like about our generation is the fact that they we are non-complacent - we not complacent. We constantly look for ways to improve ourselves and our society.

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One thing you said that stands out for me is: “I think that young people are more informed and dynamic than their predecessors. I think that they are more sensitive, in a positive way, in that they actually care about other peoples' experiences and lives. ” I think this is the best advantage that our generation has over their predecessors because as long as we continue to be dynamic we will constantly make our planet a better place.

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Kadidja El-Hadji Kadidja El-Hadji (Mar 24 2020 2:19PM) : I think you can change your quote in italic form to look good forms.
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Recently I was looking at videos by young activists, and one of them is a good example of what I’m saying here.

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I’m especially inspired by the video by Blair Imani because she was courageous enough to announce that she is a queer Muslim despite the fact that a lot of people believe that queer Muslims do not and can not exist. Also, announcing that she is a queer Muslim will not only invite harassment from homophobic but also from her fellow Muslims around the globe. This is why I think you were right when you said: “I think they're profoundly courageous because they're willing to puncture more taboos and have conversations.

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“As I began to wear hijab my visibility as a Muslim woman seems to invite harassment. I face hatred from people across the globe.” (Blair Imani, 2016)

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This is basically saying opposing norms always followed by hatred and opposition.

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This is basically saying opposing norms always followed by that when you oppose norms, you are often faced with hatred and opposition.

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I’ve also been learning about young people who have caused major social changes such as the Arab Spring. The young protesters that I find most inspiring are the ones who went down on the streets to depose the military regime of Hosni Mubarak.

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Thanks for taking the time to read my letter. I look forward to seeing what you do or say next.

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Kadidja El-Hadji Kadidja El-Hadji (Mar 24 2020 2:21PM) : can you add some words here? or ask here question may be.

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