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I began to write about my book about the various stages in the career path of an aspiring lawyer in the form of answering the letters of a law student. I think that the title of this book is somewhat confusing as he not only answers hard-core law questions but deals with issues prior to the first year at university and explains the transition from A level.

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I began to write about my book about the various stages in the career path of an aspiring lawyer in the form of answering the letters of a law student. I think that the title of this book is somewhat confusing as he not only answers hard-core law questions but deals with issues prior to the first year at university and explains the transition from A level.Omit

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Moreover, the first, second, third and final sections of “ The Glass Menagerie” By Tennessee Williams might give a reader a great surprise because even if this play is made with novels, it still has some real facts. For example, on this page from the play “It seems unimportant to you, what I'm doing - what I want to do - having a little difference between them ” This shows how other people want to control people’s life without asking them their opinion. This is why since all those things, I try I try tryed to accomplish my purpose in life because I understand you do not have to pay attention to someone else life.

Moreover, the first, second, sections of “ The Glass Menagerie” By Tennessee Williams might give a reader a great surprise because even if this play is made with novels, it still has some real facts. For example, on this page from the play “It seems unimportant to you, what I'm doing - what I want to do - having a little difference between them ” This shows how other people want to control people’s life without asking them their opinion. This is why since all those things, I tryed to accomplish my purpose in life because I understand you do not have to pay attention to someone else life.

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Paul Allison (Apr 23 2020 7:01PM) : Leticia, you seem most interested in the way facts and the imagination mix at the beginning of the play. Please go back to the guide, and rewrite this essay. https://www.youthvoices.live/guides/literature/questioning/
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Aboubakar Dabre Aboubakar Dabre (Apr 08 2020 5:11AM) : this writing should only be about the first and the second scene of book.
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Moreover, the The first , and second, sections of "The Glass Menagerie” By Tennessee Williams might give a reader a great surprise because even if this play is made with novelsfiction, it still has some real facts.

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Paul Allison (Apr 23 2020 6:51PM) : I can't find this in the play. Who is saying it? What line it is? In addition, I'm not sure what you are saying about what this means. This confuses me.
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Paul Allison (Apr 23 2020 6:54PM) : This comes from scene 3. Your writing needs to come from scene 1 or 2.
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Aboubakar Dabre Aboubakar Dabre (Apr 08 2020 5:13AM) : Suggested Revision more wording accepted ✓

This is why since all those things, I try I try tryed to accomplish my purpose in life because I understand you do not have to pay attention to someone else life.

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Aboubakar Dabre Aboubakar Dabre (Apr 08 2020 5:16AM) : SOme time we have to pay attention life in order to make our life bttere. I mean by paying attention to other people life you will not do the same mistake as the rest of the people did.

Furthermore, a reader’s questions might start on page 92 where it says, “ TOM [sitting up slowly]: I'll rise -but I won't shine”. This demonstrates that Tom is always against his mother. He does not respect her opinion and he always reflecting his behavior to her. I think the bigger conflict is the selfishness between the characters. For me, this is so surprising For instead, Tom thinks that he is a cute man. Also, he does not care about what other people of his family thinks. I can also, portrait him as an ambitious guy an a drunkard man. But I can also, describes his mother too as a materialist woman because she wants to have everything in her life and also want her children to succeed. The author seems to be making the point that because he wants to convey how sometimes family can lack misunderstanding between us. Also, how people are greedy in life and they want to show up. Sometimes they forget bout what is really important in life.

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Paul Allison (Apr 23 2020 6:53PM) : This comes from scene 3. You quote here needs to come from scenes 1 or 2.
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Aboubakar Dabre Aboubakar Dabre (Apr 08 2020 5:25AM) : Actualy Tom does respecte her mother. it is his mother who is Talking. She does want her childrent to rise and shine, but in her way no in the way that the children wanted.
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Paul Allison (Apr 23 2020 6:55PM) : Where in the play does it show that "Tom thinks he is a cute man?"
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Aboubakar Dabre Aboubakar Dabre (Apr 08 2020 5:31AM) : you are right in this part. he doesn't think about other people. But here is not the problem. the problem is the mother. she doesn't suporte the children to do what they want to become in the furture. in addition to this she talk to much. more

how someone can live in this kind of house?

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Paul Allison (Apr 23 2020 6:56PM) : In scenes one and two?
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Aboubakar Dabre Aboubakar Dabre (Apr 08 2020 5:33AM) : Finaly I'm agree with ya about the mother.
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Paul Allison (Apr 23 2020 6:57PM) : What does "family can lack misunderstanding" mean? are you saying that families and lack understanding or that they misunderstand each other? Where is evidence of this in Scenes 1 and 2?
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Paul Allison (Apr 23 2020 6:58PM) : Interesting point. Where do you see this in Scenes One and Two?

Finally, After this scene of a play, most readers would likely look forward to reading the rest of this play because it is too dramatic and captive with a lot of logical and thoughtful things inside. I really like the way the author is trying to persuade a reader even if his play has a little imaginary scene. The things that will happen next is the character who describes the scene. Also, his play would be about class social.

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Paul Allison (Apr 23 2020 6:58PM) : This is an interesting sentence. Perhaps you should explain this more.
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