Kadidja's The Glass Menagerie response for scene 1 and 2
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I'm starting to write about "The Glass Menagerie," by Tennessee Williams.
The thing that destroyed the whole world was a virus that no one can see.
Then this thing kills each type of class.
It does not care if you are rich or poor or black or white.
Thus, the whole world has started to ask the questions how to get the drug for this disease.
Since we are the same despite the color of the skin. we must love each other no one is stronger than the other we are all the same.
And we are made with one greater belief or not God exists.
What I have thought of the play since my last reading is that nothing is created, nothing is done, all this is transformed.
Thanks to human behavior, they make or create stuff by not thinking about consequences that we will have in the long terme of the future.
This is why now the whole world is suffering from someone or others behavior that is correct to do.
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I'm starting to write about my book ,once upon a time in the world that all things men had planned or thought were destroyed only one day because we belong to someone who is the greatest one "The Glass Menagerie," by Tennessee Williams.
Reason: I don't know what that last part is about
Thus, the whole world has started to ask the questions how to get the drug for this disease.
Reason: I don't understand what the question refer to
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What I have thought of my book the play since my last reading is that nothing is created, nothing is done, all this is transformed.
Reason: That's deep. I'm wondering what you really mean here.
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Thanks to human behavior, they make or create stuff by not thinking about consequences that we will have in the long terme of the future.
Thanks to human behavior, they make or create stuff by not thinking about consequences that we will have in the long terme of the future.
Reason: yes you are right.
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The scene in the first and second sections of "The Glass Menagerie" by Tennessee Williams might leave a reader feeling grateful because even if this scene is imagery some of it is to realist in the whole world since some of the people who live in the upper class think they are over than others who they see as poor.
Since some of the people who live in the upper class think they are over than others who they see as poor.
Instead of, life is not like that because we can be poor and have a blessed life that is easy.
An example of this is at the beginning of the play where the narragtor describes where we are:"one of those vast hive-like conglomerations of cellular living-units that flower as warty growths in overcrowded urban centers of lower-middle-class population and are symptomatic of the impulse of this largest and fundamentally enslaved section of American society to avoid fluidity and differentiation and to exist and function as one interfused mass of automatism."
This is interesting because America is a place that has to much discrimination stuff thanks to segragation but at end of the day the realise this is not good for the population that fight to get the independence for their country.
Since all of them are the same and they are doing their best to have a good type of life condition for they can survive in their place.
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The scene in the first and second sections of "The Glass Menagerie By " by Tennessee Williams might leave a reader feeling grateful because even if this scene is imagery some of it is to realist in the whole world since some of the people who live in the upper class think they are over than others who they see as poor.
The scene in the first and second sections of The Glass Menagerie By Tennessee Williams might leave a reader feeling grateful because even if this scene is imagery some of it is to realist realistic in the whole world since . Since some of the people who live in the upper class think they are over than others who they see as poor.
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An example of this is on page “ at the beginning of the play where the narragtor describes where we are:"one of those vast hive-like conglomerations of cellular living-units that flower as warty growths in overcrowded urban centers of lower-middle-class population and are symptomatic of the impulse of this largest and fundamentally enslaved section of American society to avoid fluidity and differentiation and to exist and function as one interfused mass of automatism.”"
This is interesting because America is a place that has to much discrimination stuff thanks to segragation but . Think of segragation, at end of the day the they realise this is not good for the population that caused fight to get the independence for their country.
Reason: If you want you can leave it as it was. I did not understand what you wrote that's why I change it a bit.
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A reader’s questions might start on paragraphs 6-12 where it says:”In Spain there was revolution.
Here there was only shouting and confusion.”
This is important because the author is talking about the eSpain revolution instead of he is talking about American life conditions.
This is surprising but at the same moment interesting because we can know and connect that all of the country is connected since if some country that is powerful others will get effects.
That was the case of this crisis that was confusing people at that time because to find a job we need more companies that can help people to go work.
The author seems to be making the point that sometimes using both imagination and memory is important when you are writing a play.
We should describe everything that can help the reader to understand.
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A reader’s questions might start on page 612 paragraphs 6-12 where it says:”In Spain there was revolution.
This is important because the author is talking about the eSpain Spain revolution instead of he is talking about American life conditions.
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That was the case of this crise crisis that was confusing in their place people at that time because to find a job we need more companies that can help people to go work.
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The author seems to be making the point that sometimes making a guess using both imagination and memory is important when you are writing a play with much imagery .
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After this part of the play, most readers probably will be looking forward to reading the rest of this play because it is quite dramatic with a lot of thinking inside.
I like the way the author is trying to convince a reader even if it is an imaginary story.
The things that will happen next is the character who describes the scene, Tom
will be a little selfish man.
Then this play would be about class social.
That is, one family who is inferieur would try to force their daughter to get married to someone that is rich.
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After this part of the play, most readers probably will be looking forward to reading the rest of this play because it is too dramatique quite dramatic with a lot of thinking inside and . I really like the the way the author is trying to convince a reader even if it is an imaginary story.
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