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This book play “The Glass Menagerie” by Tennessee Williams is based on the memories on the sons of the family where explain some details about his life. The protagonists are Tom (son), Amamda (mom) and Laura (daughter). Every protagonists have different personalities that facing somo struggle about thinking in their future. When you read you find things interesting in the story according to the scenes.

This play “The Glass Menagerie” by Tennessee Williams is based on the memories on the sons of the family where explain some details about his life. The protagonists are Tom (son), Amamda (mom) and Laura (daughter). Every protagonists have different personalities that facing somo struggle about thinking in their future. When you read you find things interesting in the story according to the scenes.

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The third scene of “The Glass Menagerie” by Tennessee Williams might leave a reader feeling excited because in this part of the scene, it shows a conflict where the family try to solve a problem. An example of this is in scene 3 in line 49; “People don't go to the movies at nearly midnight, and movies don't let out at two a.m. Come in stumbling. Muttering to yourself like a maniac!” This is interesting because these words are from Amanda who is worried about her son. This means that sometimes parents want to know about their sons and try to help them in any condition they are always there.

The third scene of “The Glass Menagerie” by Tennessee Williams might leave a reader feeling excited because in this part of the scene, it shows a conflict where the family try to solve a problem. An example of this is in scene 3 in line 49; “People don't go to the movies at nearly midnight, and movies don't let out at two a.m. Come in stumbling. Muttering to yourself like a maniac!” This is interesting because these words are from Amanda who is worried about her son. This means that sometimes parents want to know about their sons and try to help them in any condition they are always there.

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Celines Zamora Celines Zamora (May 04 2020 12:38PM) : Suggested Replacement more wording accepted ✓

The third scene of “The Glass Menagerie” by Tennessee Williams might leave a reader feeling excited because in this part of the scene, it shows a conflict where the family try to solve a problem. An example of this is in scene 3 in line 49; “People don't go to the movies at nearly midnight, and movies don't let out at two a.m. Come in stumbling. Muttering to yourself like a maniac!” This is interesting because these words are from Amanda who is worried about her son. This means that sometimes parents want to know about their sons and try to help them in any condition they are always there.

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We learn something interesting about one of the characters, Amanda in scene 3 in line 46 where it says: “ You're going to listen, and no more insolence from you ! I'm at the end of my patience!.” This is typical of how this character acts in this book, so far. She often seems to be Patient with her family specialy with Tom. She knows that Tom have problems and he try to be alone with it. She wants to know their excuses and find something to help.

We learn something interesting about one of the characters, Amanda in scene 3 in line 46 where it says: “ You're going to listen, and no more insolence from you ! I'm at the end of my patience!.” This is typical of how this character acts in this book, so far. She often seems to be Patient with her family specialy with Tom. She knows that Tom have problems and he try to be alone with it. She wants to know their excuses and find something to help.

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Celines Zamora Celines Zamora (May 04 2020 12:39PM) : Suggested Replacement more wording accepted ✓

We learn something interesting about one of the characters, Amanda in scene in line 46 where it says: “ You're going to listen, and no more insolence from you ! I'm at the end of my patience!.” This is typical of how this character acts in this book, so far. She often seems to be Patient with her family specialy with Tom. She knows that Tom have problems and he try to be alone with it. She wants to know their excuses and find something to help.

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Celines Zamora Celines Zamora (May 06 2020 1:12PM) : Suggested Replacement more wording accepted ✓

We learn something interesting about one of the characters, Amanda in scene 3 in line 46 where it says: “ You're going to listen, and no more insolence from you ! I'm at the end of my patience!.” This is typical of how this character acts in this book, so far. She often seems to be Patient with her family specialy with Tom. She knows that Tom have problems and he try to be alone with it. She wants to know their excuses and find something to help.

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After this part of the bookplay, most readers probably will be looking forward to read the rest of this book play because Tom is hiding something that Amanda wants to know. Also the relationship is routine so it seem’s in the scene. What’s probably going to happen next is Amanda will find out the truth of Tom. Probably Tom ignore the things that his mother told to him.

After this part of the play, most readers probably will be looking forward to read the rest of this play because Tom is hiding something that Amanda wants to know. Also the relationship is routine so it seem’s in the scene. What’s probably going to happen next is Amanda will find out the truth of Tom. Probably Tom ignore the things that his mother told to him.

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Leticia Zang Leticia Zang (Apr 30 2020 3:10PM) : I think you should expand your writing more by adding more explanation.
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Celines Zamora Celines Zamora (May 04 2020 12:40PM) : Suggested Replacement more wording accepted ✓

After this part of the bookplay, most readers probably will be looking forward to read the rest of this book play because Tom is hiding something that Amanda wants to know. Also the relationship is routine so it seem’s in the scene. What’s probably going to happen next is Amanda will find out the truth of Tom. Probably Tom ignore the things that his mother told to him.

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Added May 04, 2020 at 12:36pm by Celines Zamora
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This book “The Glass Menagerie” by Tennessee Williams is based on the memories on the sons of the family where explain he explains some details about his life. The protagonists are Tom (son), Amamda (mom) and Laura (daughter). Every protagonists have different personalities that facing somo struggle about thinking in , they are facing some struggles and thinking about their future. When you read the play, you find interesting things interesting in the story according to the scenes.

This book “The Glass Menagerie” by Tennessee Williams is based on the memories on the sons of the family where he explains some details about his life. The protagonists are Tom (son), Amamda (mom) and Laura (daughter). Every protagonists have different personalities, they are facing some struggles and thinking about their future. When you read the play, you find interesting things in the story according to the scenes.

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ms Oumy Diop ms Oumy Diop (May 04 2020 12:11AM) : Suggested Revision more wording accepted ✓

This book “The Glass Menagerie” by Tennessee Williams is based on the memories on the sons of the family where explain he explains some details about his life.

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Leticia Zang Leticia Zang (Apr 30 2020 3:09PM) : I am agree with you because in this play the narrator tries to show us how some family go through some issues. I think you should correct your spelling in this sentence such as "somo" instead is some.
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ms Oumy Diop ms Oumy Diop (May 04 2020 12:14AM) : Suggested Revision more wording accepted ✓

Every protagonists have different personalities that facing somo struggle about thinking in , they are facing some struggles and thinking about their future.

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ms Oumy Diop ms Oumy Diop (May 04 2020 12:16AM) : Suggested Revision more wording accepted ✓

When you read the play, you find interesting things interesting in the story according to the scenes.

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Added May 06, 2020 at 1:11pm by Celines Zamora (suggested by Celines Zamora)
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The third scene of “The Glass Menagerie” by Tennessee Williams might leave a reader feeling excited because in this part of the scene show , it shows a conflict where the family try to solve a problem. An example of this is in line 49; “People don't go to the movies at nearly midnight, and movies don't let out at two a.m. Come in stumbling. Muttering to yourself like a maniac!” This is interesting because this wpords are of the Amanda that its worried for these words are from Amanda who is worried about her son.This means that sometimes parents want to know about theirsons their sons and try to help them in any condition they atr are always there.

The third scene of “The Glass Menagerie” by Tennessee Williams might leave a reader feeling excited because in this part of the scene, it shows a conflict where the family try to solve a problem. An example of this is in line 49; “People don't go to the movies at nearly midnight, and movies don't let out at two a.m. Come in stumbling. Muttering to yourself like a maniac!” This is interesting because these words are from Amanda who is worried about her son. This means that sometimes parents want to know about their sons and try to help them in any condition they are always there.

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ms Oumy Diop ms Oumy Diop (May 04 2020 12:17AM) : Suggested Revision more wording accepted ✓

The third scene of “The Glass Menagerie” by Tennessee Williams might leave a reader feeling excited because in this part of the scene show , it shows a conflict where the family try to solve a problem.

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ms Oumy Diop ms Oumy Diop (May 04 2020 12:18AM) : you can explain what kind of problem they are trying to solve
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ms Oumy Diop ms Oumy Diop (May 04 2020 12:19AM) : Suggested Revision more wording accepted ✓

This is interesting because this wpords are of the Amanda that its worried for these words are from Amanda who is worried about her son.

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ms Oumy Diop ms Oumy Diop (May 04 2020 12:24AM) : Suggested Revision more wording accepted ✓

This means that sometimes parents want to know about theirsons their sons and try to help them in any condition they atr are always there.

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Added May 06, 2020 at 1:11pm by Celines Zamora (suggested by Celines Zamora)
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We learn something interesting about one on of the characters, Amanda in line 46 where it says: “ You're going to listen, and no more insolence from you ! I'm at the end of my patience!.” This is typical of how this character acts in this book, so far. She often seems to be Patient with her family specialy with Tom. She know knows that Tom have problems and he try to be alone with it.She want wants to know their excuses and find something to help.

We learn something interesting about one of the characters, Amanda in line 46 where it says: “ You're going to listen, and no more insolence from you ! I'm at the end of my patience!.” This is typical of how this character acts in this book, so far. She often seems to be Patient with her family specialy with Tom. She knows that Tom have problems and he try to be alone with it. She wants to know their excuses and find something to help.

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We learn something interesting about one on of the characters, Amanda in line 46 where it says: “ You're going to listen, and no more insolence from you !

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She know knows that Tom have problems and he try to be alone with it.

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She want wants to know their excuses and find something to help.

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After this part of the book, most readers probably will be looking forward to reading read the rest of this book because Tom is hiding something that Amanda wants to know. Also the relationship is routine so it seem’s in the scene. What’s probably going to happen next is Amanda will find out the truthof truth of Tom.Probably Tom ignore the things that his mother tall told to him.

After this part of the book, most readers probably will be looking forward to read the rest of this book because Tom is hiding something that Amanda wants to know. Also the relationship is routine so it seem’s in the scene. What’s probably going to happen next is Amanda will find out the truth of Tom. Probably Tom ignore the things that his mother told to him.

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After this part of the book, most readers probably will be looking forward to reading read the rest of this book because Tom is hiding something that Amanda wants to know.

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What’s probably going to happen next is Amanda will find out the truthof truth of Tom.

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Probably Tom ignore the things that his mother tall told to him.

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We learn something interesting about one of the characters, Amanda in scene in line 46 where it says: “ You're going to listen, and no more insolence from you ! I'm at the end of my patience!.” This is typical of how this character acts in this book, so far. She often seems to be Patient with her family specialy with Tom. She knows that Tom have problems and he try to be alone with it. She wants to know their excuses and find something to help.

We learn something interesting about one of the characters, Amanda in scene in line 46 where it says: “ You're going to listen, and no more insolence from you ! I'm at the end of my patience!.” This is typical of how this character acts in this book, so far. She often seems to be Patient with her family specialy with Tom. She knows that Tom have problems and he try to be alone with it. She wants to know their excuses and find something to help.

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