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I'm starting to write about my book ,once upon a time in the world that all things men had planned or idea were destroyed solely one day because we belong to any person who is the biggest one . The issue that destroyed the total world was once a virus that no one can see. Then this element kills every type of class. It does not care if you are rich or negative or black or white. Thus ,the complete world has begun to ask the questions how to get the drug for this disease. Since we are the equal in spite of the shade of the skin. we should love every other no one is enhanced than the other we are all the same. And we are made with one greater belief or no longer God exists. What I have thinking of my e book for the reason that my final analyzing is that nothing is created, nothing is done, all this is transformed. Thanks to human behavior , they make or create stuff through now not wondering about consequences that we will have in the long terme of the future. This is why now the whole world is struggling from someone or others conduct that is correct to do.

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I'm starting to write about my book ,once upon a time in the world that all things men had planned or idea were destroyed solely one day because we belong to any person who is the biggest one . The issue that destroyed the total world was once a virus that no one can see. Then this element kills every type of class. It does not care if you are rich or negative or black or white. Thus ,the complete world has begun to ask the questions how to get the drug for this disease. Since we are the equal in spite of the shade of the skin. we should love every other no one is enhanced than the other we are all the same. And we are made with one greater belief or no longer God exists. What I have thinking of my e book for the reason that my final analyzing is that nothing is created, nothing is done, all this is transformed. Thanks to human behavior , they make or create stuff through now not wondering about consequences that we will have in the long terme of the future. This is why now the whole world is struggling from someone or others conduct that is correct to do.play, " Galss Menagries" then you can discribes about the play

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I'm starting to write about my book, once upon a time in the world that all things men had planned or idea were destroyed solely one day because we belong to any person who is the biggest one .

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Thus, the complete world has begun to ask the questions how to get the drug for this disease.

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What I have thinking of my e book for the reason that my final analyzing is that nothing is created, nothing is done, all this is transformed.

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2The scene in the first and 2d sections of The Glass Menagerie By Tennessee Williams may depart a reader feeling grateful due to the fact even if this scene is imagery some of it is to realist in the whole world because some of the humans who stay in the upper class suppose they are over than others who they see as poor. Instead of, lifestyles is no longer like that due to the fact we can be negative and have a blessed lifestyles that is easy. An example of this is on page “ one of those sizable hive-like conglomerations of mobile living-units that flower as warty growths in overcrowded city facilities of lower-middle-class populace and are symptomatic of the impulse of this largest and essentially enslaved part of American society to avoid fluidity and differentiation and to exist and characteristic as one interfused mass of automatism.” This is interesting due to the fact America is a place that has to plenty discrimination stuff thanks to segragation but at cease of the day the understand this is now not excellent for the populace that fight to get the independence for their country. Since all of them are the same and they are doing their first-class to have a exact kind of life circumstance for they can live to tell the tale in their place.

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2The scene in the first and 2d sections of "The Glass Menagerie By " by Tennessee Williams, may depart a reader feeling grateful due to the fact even if this . This scene is imagery some of it is to realist in the whole world because some of the humans who stay in the upper class suppose they are over than others who they see as poor. Instead of , lifestyles life styles is no longer like that due to the fact we can be negative and have a blessed lifestyles life styles that is easy. An example of this is on page in scene in lines “ one of those sizable hive-like conglomerations of mobile living-units that flower as warty growths in overcrowded city facilities of lower-middle-class populace and are symptomatic of the impulse of this largest and essentially enslaved part of American society to avoid fluidity and differentiation and to exist and characteristic as one interfused mass of automatism.” This is interesting due to the fact America is a place that has to plenty discrimination stuff thanks to segragation but at cease of the day the understand this is now not excellent for the populace that fight to get the independence for their country. Since all of them are the same and they are doing their first-class to have a exact kind of life circumstance for they can live to tell the tale in their place.

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2The scene in the first and 2d sections of The Glass Menagerie By Tennessee Williams may depart a reader feeling grateful due to the fact even if this scene is imagery some of it is to realist in the whole world because some of the humans who stay in the upper class suppose they are over than others who they see as poor. Instead of, lifestyles is no longer like that due to the fact we can be negative and have a blessed lifestyles that is easy. An example of this is on page “ one of those sizable hive-like conglomerations of mobile living-units that flower as warty growths in overcrowded city facilities of lower-middle-class populace and are symptomatic of the impulse of this largest and essentially enslaved part of American society to avoid fluidity and differentiation and to exist and characteristic as one interfused mass of automatism.” This is interesting due to the fact America is a place that has to plenty discrimination stuff thanks to segragation but at cease of the day the understand this is now not excellent for the populace that fight to get the independence for their country. Since all of them are the same and they are doing their first-class to have a exact kind of life circumstance for they can live to tell the tale in their place.

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2The The scene in the first and 2d 2nd sections of The Glass Menagerie By Tennessee Williams may depart a reader feeling grateful due to the fact even if this scene is imagery some of it is to realist in the whole world because some of the humans who stay in the upper class suppose they are over than others who they see as poor.

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3A reader’s questions might start on page 612 where it says:”In Spain there used to be revolution. Here there was solely shouting and confusion.” This is important because the author is speakme about the eSpain revolution as an alternative of he is talking about American life conditions. This is shocking but at the equal moment fascinating because we can know and connect that all of the usa is related in view that if some country that is effective others will get effects. That was once the case of this crise that used to be perplexing in their vicinity due to the fact to find a job we want more businesses that can help people to go work . The creator appears to be making the factor that every so often making a wager is vital when you are writing a play with a whole lot imagery . We must describe everything that can help the reader to understand.

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3A reader’s questions might start on page in scene un lines 612 where it says:”In Spain there used to be revolution. Here there was solely shouting and confusion.” This is important because the author is speakme explain about the eSpain Spain revolution as is an alternative of he is talking about American life conditions. This is shocking but at the equal moment fascinating because we can know and connect that all of the usa U.S.A is related in view that if some country that is effective others will get effects. That was once the case of this crise that used to be perplexing in their vicinity due to the fact to find a job we want more businesses that can help people to go work. The creator appears to be making the factor that every so often making a wager is vital when you are writing a play with a whole lot imagery. We must describe everything that can help the reader to understand.

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4After this part of the play , most readers probably will be looking ahead to reading the rest of this play because it is too dramatique with a lot of questioning internal and I in reality like the way the writer is trying to persuade a reader even if it is an imaginary story. The things that will happen next is the character who describes the scene. It will be one of personnage that is Tom and he will be a little egocentric man. Then this play would be about classification social. That is, one family who is inferieur would try to force their daughter to get married to any one that is rich.

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4After this part of the play, most readers probably will be looking ahead to reading the rest of this play because it is too dramatique drama with a lot of questioning internal and . I in reality like the way the writer is trying to persuade a reader even if it is an imaginary story.

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