In the following poem, read first for understanding and then to analyze. You must add TWO comments to the discussion. You may either try to paraphrase the poem or explain what is happening. Or you may analyze by interpreting the author's word choice, sentence structure, stanza breaks, or literary devices (metaphors, allusions, imagery, etc.) .
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Aimless Love
by Billy Collins
This morning as I walked along the lake shore,
I fell in love with a wren
and later in the day with a mouse
the cat had dropped under the dining room table.
In the shadows of an autumn evening,
I fell for a seamstress
still at her machine in the tailor’s window,
and later for a bowl of broth,
steam rising like smoke from a naval battle.
Sentences can hold more than one literary devices. :)
This is the best kind of love, I thought,
without recompense, without gifts,
or unkind words, without suspicion,
or silence on the telephone.
The love of the chestnut,
the jazz cap and one hand on the wheel.
No lust, no slam of the door—
the love of the miniature orange tree,
the clean white shirt, the hot evening shower,
the highway that cuts across Florida.
His message conveys the joy and simplicity of loving simple things in life rather than the hardships and complications of a serious relationship and loving another person.
No waiting, no huffiness, or rancor—
just a twinge every now and then
for the wren who had built her nest
on a low branch overhanging the water
and for the dead mouse,
still dressed in its light brown suit.
But my heart is always standing on its tripod,
ready for the next arrow.
Although he’s fine with just enjoying the simple pleasures of life, he’s always prepared to give serious love another chance, ready to face the hurt and hardships of a relationship.
After I carried the mouse by the tail
to a pile of leaves in the woods,
I found myself standing at the bathroom sink
gazing down affectionately at the soap,
so patient and soluble,
so at home in its pale green soap dish.
I could feel myself falling again
as I felt its turning in my wet hands
and caught the scent of lavender and stone.
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