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The Breather


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In the following poem, read first for understanding and then to analyze. You must add TWO comments to the discussion. You may either try to paraphrase the poem or explain what is happening. Or you may analyze by interpreting the author's word choice, sentence structure, stanza breaks, or literary devices (metaphors, allusions, imagery, etc.) .

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The Breather

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by Billy Collins

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Just as in the horror movies
when someone discovers that the phone calls
are coming from inside the house

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Natasha Whiteeagle Natasha Whiteeagle (Apr 28 2020 12:39PM) : I personally feel like this happens in almost every scary movie when another person is in the house with them playing tricks with their mind to think they are going crazy but in reality someone is actually in the house with them.
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Chenoa Franz Chenoa Franz (Apr 28 2020 4:44PM) : I agree. It's a horror movie cliche. But I love that he uses this to compare to being more invested in a relationship than the other person. He imagines talking to himself on two phones in the house because she isn't really there.
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Madi Ziech Madi Ziech (Apr 28 2020 6:18PM) : I definitely agree with Natasha on this topic. Seems predictable in movies like this poem. Very interesting how he uses words to almost make is suspenseful to readers.
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student isaiah zingg student isaiah zingg (May 15 2020 2:18PM) : this also happens a lot more

whats funny is how in the horror movies whenever there is a light flickering-or something that is odd going on they always have the character walk towards it or go in the direction of the odd something then something bad or good happens to the character

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so too, I realized
that our tender overlapping
has been taking place only inside me.

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Maddie Jones Maddie Jones (Apr 30 2020 11:12PM) : He's noticing that this relationship is completely one sided and that he has better time just with himself.
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All that sweetness, the love and desire—
it’s just been me dialing myself
then following the ringing to another room

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Natasha Whiteeagle Natasha Whiteeagle (Apr 28 2020 12:46PM) : The person is doing this because she doesn't wanna believe she's going crazy and she's actually nothing this is just how people react when they feel like something is watching them they just creating a lot of things in their head.
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Maddie Jones Maddie Jones (Apr 30 2020 11:15PM) : It's like two people are in the same house in two different rooms. One is calling for the other but there is no reply and then sits there in silence.
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to find no one on the line,
well, sometimes a little breathing
but more often than not, nothing.

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Joslyn Munch Joslyn Munch (Apr 27 2020 4:29PM) : I can picture someone picking up the phone and on the other line there is nothing besides whispering...I have watched to many horror movies that is why I can picture this
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student isaiah zingg student isaiah zingg (May 15 2020 2:22PM) : i completely agree there are so many horror movies where this happens its almost like you can tell whats coming next
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Rocco Perugini Rocco Perugini (Jun 05 2020 3:51PM) : It sounds like he is trying to find someone to love, sometime they reject him right away or he has a short relationship
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Madi Ziech Madi Ziech (Apr 28 2020 6:15PM) : This seems very predictable in a horror movie, because most times it happens in like every movie. Some horror movies are all just the same and you can already tell what is about to happen.
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student Audra Johnson student Audra Johnson (Apr 29 2020 11:53AM) : This is why I do not watch horror movies
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To think that all this time—
which would include the boat rides,
the airport embraces, and all the drinks—

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Rocco Perugini Rocco Perugini (Jun 05 2020 3:56PM) : In this paragraph, it sounds like he has been alone his entire life.
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student Audra Johnson student Audra Johnson (Apr 29 2020 11:55AM) : This little paragraph makes me feel like the person is drunk and has the two phones next to him

it’s been only me and the two telephones,
the one on the wall in the kitchen
and the extension in the darkened guest room upstairs.

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Joslyn Munch Joslyn Munch (Apr 27 2020 4:33PM) : I feel like the one on the wall will go flying somewhere and when the person goes into the darkened room to the phone someone will pop out and try and kill them
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Dominic Kontaxis Dominic Kontaxis (May 07 2020 1:12PM) : it seems like he's describing the feeling of conflict between the heart (kitchen) and the brain (dark room).
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Chenoa Franz Chenoa Franz (May 07 2020 1:33PM) : Nice!
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DMU Timestamp: April 20, 2020 22:34

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Claudia Sanchez gonzalez Claudia Sanchez gonzalez (Jun 04 2020 7:24PM) : attitude and tone all seem to be playful,humorous or sarcastic in some ways [Edited] more

is seen as a stressful topic uses the humorous tone

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