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The following 1979 piece, “The Company Man,” is by the columnist Ellen Goodman. Read the passage and then make note of the rhetorical techniques Goodman uses to convey her attitude toward Phil.

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He worked himself to death, finally and precisely, at 3:00 a.m. Sunday morning.

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Kayli F Kayli F (May 25 2020 4:05PM) : Starts off with a very intense sentence setting the tone for the rest of the passage.
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Katherine G Katherine G (May 26 2020 1:44PM) : This sentence is as abrupt,sudden , and straight to the point as death usually is in most situations.
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Maja B Maja B (Jun 02 2020 6:08PM) : The first sentence hooks the reader in by surprising them with the unexpected.
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Nisse R Nisse R (Jun 05 2020 11:56PM) : she personalizes herself by say "I think" making her more relateable
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Lauren E Lauren E (Jun 06 2020 10:31AM) : His first sentence is very short and to the point. It is sort of a cruel sentence and it gives you an idea of how the rest of this passage will be.
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The obituary didn’t say that, of course. It said that he died of a coronary thrombosis—I think that was it—but everyone among his friends and acquaintances knew it instantly. He was the perfect Type A, a workaholic, a classic, they said to each other and shook their heads—and thought for five or ten minutes about the way they lived.

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This man who worked himself to death finally and precisely at 3:00 a.m. Sunday morning—on his day off—was fifty-one years old and a vice-president. He was, however, one of six vice-presidents, and one of three who might conceivably—if the president died or retired soon enough—have moved to the top spot. Phil knew that.

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Meghan M Meghan M (May 11 2020 5:00PM) : This is also very ironic because he ended up overworking himself on a Sunday which happened to be his day off. Which he didn't use as a day off he worked.
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Chenoa F Chenoa F (May 12 2020 9:31PM) : Good. And Goodman repeats the Sunday detail for emphasis.
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Maja B Maja B (Jun 02 2020 6:11PM) : The author repeats themselves by restating the initial sentence. The repetition shows the importance of the death.
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Olivia P Olivia P (May 12 2020 11:25AM) : It specifically says that he worked himself to death on Sunday which is supposed to be his day off so it makes it very ironic.
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Chenoa F Chenoa F (May 12 2020 9:32PM) : Not only Sunday. 3:00 a.m. on Sunday! Good attention to detail.
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He worked six days a week, five of them until eight or nine at night, during a time when his own company had begun the four-day week for everyone but the executives. He worked like the Important People. He had no outside “extracurricular interests,” unless, of course, you think about a monthly golf game that way. To Phil, it was work. He always ate egg salad sandwiches at his desk. He was, of course, overweight, by 20 or 25 pounds. He thought it was okay, though, because he didn’t smoke.

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Kyle B Kyle B (May 14 2020 8:22PM) : the sentence is able to show how he acted as a person and also that he is human which can reveal ethos that he is like us all in some way.
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Chenoa F Chenoa F (May 15 2020 9:16AM) : Yes. And even his golf game is a regular ("monthly") work obligation.
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On Saturdays, Phil wore a sports jacket to the office instead of a suit, because it was the weekend.

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Logan K Logan K (May 11 2020 11:13AM) : Kind of ironic because it’s the “weekend”, yet the only thing that changed in his life is his clothes. Weekends are more relaxed and calm, but he spends his weekends working and possibly stressed
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Rayna H Rayna H (May 14 2020 12:07PM) : With this statement being its own paragraph, I feel as if its trying to put emphasis on "because it was the weekend" through almost a sarcastic tone
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He had a lot of people working for him, maybe sixty, and most of them liked him most of the time. Three of them will be seriously considered for his job. The obituary didn’t mention that.

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Rayna H Rayna H (May 14 2020 12:09PM) : "the obituary didnt mention that" is repeated. seems like the man's obituary did not do him justice for his work-filled life.
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Chenoa F Chenoa F (May 15 2020 9:19AM) : Yes. It also reveals that this essay is NOT HIS OBITUARY. This is important and I hope everyone is reading this. If this piece isn't an obituary, what is it? It's an OpEd (opinion or editorial piece). What does this mean? (Keep reading.) more

This is a fictional representation that serves as a reminder to people to live in the moment and not bury yourself in a job that could care less about you. Phil is not a real person. Rayna, this is an important detail to pick up on. Great job!

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Katarina A Katarina A (May 19 2020 10:02PM) : Really shows that, this job was not as serious about him as he was as about them, since they were so fast to replace him.
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Isaiah A Isaiah A (May 13 2020 11:24AM) : This shows the company doesn’t really care about the worker, they are already moving forward finding someone to replace him
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But it did list his “survivors” quite accurately. He is survived by his wife, Helen, forty-eight years old, a good woman of no particular marketable skills, who worked in an office before marrying and mothering. She had, according to her daughter, given up trying to compete with his work years ago, when the children were small. A company friend said, “I know how much you will miss him.” And she answered, “I already have.”

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Katarina A Katarina A (May 19 2020 9:59PM) : It pushes even further when they go on to say how his work situation really affected the family and his wife.
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Olivia P Olivia P (May 12 2020 11:27AM) : Shows how much he really did work because his wife missed him before he was truly gone. [Edited]
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Kayli F Kayli F (May 25 2020 4:09PM) : Very dramatic and shows regret and sorrow about how he worked so much so she never really got to see him.
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Lily N Lily N (May 28 2020 8:20PM) : This shows how her husband was always gone working, so it's as if she was already loosing and missing him, before he was even gone.

His “dearly beloved” eldest of the “dearly beloved” children is a hard-working executive in a manufacturing firm down South. In the day and a half before the funeral, he went around the neighborhood researching his father, asking the neighbors what he was like. They were embarrassed.

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Nisse R Nisse R (May 31 2020 5:43PM) : the quotations around the term dearly beloved, and repeating of the word are used in an ironic sense more

the quotations around the term dearly beloved, and repeating of the word are used in an ironic sense, the term being more of a standard curtesy used just because that’s what you say about someones children, even if it’s a false assumption about the children’s meaning to the deceased.

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Angela G Angela G (May 10 2020 6:04PM) : Uses "dearly beloved" as sort of a sarcastic outlook that the eldest son didn't have that connotation portrayed to him.
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Chenoa F Chenoa F (May 11 2020 1:45PM) : Good! Yes, that's why Goodman uses quotes--to illustrate her sarcasm.
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Hailey A Hailey A (May 11 2020 1:35PM) : Uses pathos to make the reader feel bad for the son because he didn't know his father that well, so he had to ask neighbors what he was like.
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Chenoa F Chenoa F (May 11 2020 1:45PM) : Excellent! And in contrast, how should the reader feel about Phil?
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Jordyn A Jordyn A (May 11 2020 3:40PM) : The reader should feel bad for Phil, but yet not be sympathetic because he took on a job that would be too addictive to slow down. It was his fault that he didn't really have a connection with his children and that he neglected the wife. There are many more

jobs that aren’t stressful. But it is sad that his job took over his life and is what eventually killed him.

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Chenoa F Chenoa F (May 12 2020 9:33PM) : Good! The reader's sympathy follows the narrator's view, lending sympathy to Phil first. But once his children are introduced, the sympathy shifts to them.
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His second child is a girl, who is twenty-four and newly married. She lives near her mother and they are close, but whenever she was alone with her father, in a car driving somewhere, they had nothing to say to each other.

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Logan K Logan K (May 11 2020 11:17AM) : Father clearly isn’t much of a family type of guy. He never spends time with them and when he does he doesn’t talk to them. He probably had most of his “fun” at work
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Chenoa F Chenoa F (May 11 2020 1:46PM) : But he doesn't even eat lunch with others at work. How much "fun" is he having? What is his priority in life?
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Jordyn A Jordyn A (May 11 2020 3:36PM) : He didn't have fun. If you're that stressed over a job then how much would you actually like it? His priority was his work, although it wasn't healthy for him. He probably wanted to prove himself through his work, but died before he completed it.
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Meghan M Meghan M (May 11 2020 5:04PM) : When they talk about the dad they seem very bitter
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Will M Will M (May 12 2020 2:47PM) : Suggests he was more involved in work than invested in his family.

The youngest is twenty, a boy, a high school graduate who has spent the last couple of years, like a lot of his friends, doing enough odd jobs to stay in grass and food. He was the one who tried to grab at his father, and tried to mean enough to him to keep the man at home. He was his father’s favorite. Over the last two years, Phil stayed up nights worrying about the boy.

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The boy once said, “My father and I only board here.”

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At the funeral, the sixty-year-old company president told the forty-eight-year-old widow that the fifty-one-year-old deceased had meant much to the company and would be missed and would be hard to replace. The widow didn’t look him in the eye. She was afraid he would read her bitterness and, after all, she would need him to straighten out the finances—the stock options and all that.

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Will M Will M (May 12 2020 2:50PM) : She possibly blames the company for Phil's strong commitment to work rather than family and possibly his death.
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Chenoa F Chenoa F (May 12 2020 9:34PM) : Yes. Specifically, which word choice?
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Maja B Maja B (Jun 02 2020 6:22PM) : The word bitterness implies that she is bitter towards the company and possibly blames them as the reason for Phil's death.
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Lauren E Lauren E (Jun 06 2020 10:35AM) : In this paragraph it sounds like he was more into the company than his family and he uses the word bitterness to describe how the wife feels because she it's like shes blaming the company.
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Phil was overweight and nervous and worked too hard. If he wasn’t at the office, he was worried about it. Phil was a Type A, a heart-attack natural. You could have picked him out in a minute from a lineup.

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So when he finally worked himself to death, at precisely 3:00 a.m. Sunday morning, no one was really surprised.

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Angela G Angela G (May 10 2020 6:01PM) : Repetition of the same sentence at the beginning. Emphasis of the idea of him working himself to death and the added idea that it wasn't a shock.
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Chenoa F Chenoa F (May 11 2020 1:47PM) : Good, Angela! The essay comes full circle with this repeated phrase. Suggests a cycle of sorts. Where is the cycle in this piece?
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By 5:00 p.m. the afternoon of the funeral, the company president had begun, discreetly of course, with care and taste, to make inquiries about his replacement. One of three men. He asked around: “Who’s been working the hardest?”

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Katherine G Katherine G (May 26 2020 1:48PM) : That one of the first things that people think after death is now how am I going to replace this person rather than greiving a loss of another human being.
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Lily N Lily N (May 28 2020 8:21PM) : This sentence is as saying if death was almost expected with him. It's like everyone seen it coming.
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Hailey A Hailey A (May 11 2020 1:33PM) : Ironic that he asked who has been working the hardest to get Phil's job since overworking is what killed him. [Edited]

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