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His eyes were wide, the whites of them like twin moons. Panicked. He took the knife and held it under his ribcage and Jimmy stopped, his body going perfectly still as he stared at him over the rim of his hand. He closed his eyes. When he opened them again there was peace there and he nodded at him. The knife went in almost on its own and he twisted it like he was trained to do and leaned forward cheek to cheek with Jimmy and heard his last breath ease out of him.

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Christine Freeman Christine Freeman (Jun 19 2020 10:41AM) : The use of a short sentence here creates contrast and emphasis. The sentence variation creates contrast and creates heightened emotions in the reader.
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