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Sonnet 29

Sonnet XXIX (29)

William Shakespeare

When in disgrace with fortune and men's eyes
I all alone beweep my outcast state,
And trouble deaf heaven with my bootless cries,
And look upon myself, and curse my fate,
Wishing me like to one more rich in hope,
Featured like him, like him with friends possessed,
Desiring this man's art, and that man's scope,
With what I most enjoy contented least;
Yet in these thoughts my self almost despising,
Haply I think on thee, and then my state,
Like to the lark at break of day arising
From sullen earth, sings hymns at heaven's gate;
For thy sweet love remembered such wealth brings
That then I scorn to change my state with kings.

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Oct 15

Kayla G Kayla G (Oct 15 2020 11:06PM) : Maybe poor and looked down upon by other

Oct 18

Gracie W Gracie W (Oct 18 2020 10:03AM) : He is well aware of his state of loneliness and others distaste or dislike for him.

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Oct 15

Brooke H Brooke H (Oct 15 2020 9:05PM) : I assume beweep means to cry. He feels so much like an outcast and so alone that it brings him to tears. And in the end, the only thing that heals that feeling is love

Oct 15

Avery P Avery P (Oct 15 2020 10:31PM) : He cries sometimes when he's by himself because he is disgraced with himself

Oct 15

Aaron H Aaron H (Oct 15 2020 11:21PM) : He cries because he's an outcast to everyone else

Oct 16

Ava M Ava M (Oct 16 2020 1:25AM) : He feels like an outcast. The feeling of being alone makes him cry. He feels like he doesn't belong

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Oct 15

Bradley W Bradley W (Oct 15 2020 11:45PM) : Feels helpless and like no one can hear his cries

Oct 16

Kaelynn S Kaelynn S (Oct 16 2020 12:05AM) : That heaven isn't hearing his useless cries

Oct 18

Gracie W Gracie W (Oct 18 2020 10:04AM) : He feels so lonely and unwanted to the point where he feels his own Heaven and God wouldn't want to hear or don't care about his problems.

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Oct 15

Olivia B Olivia B (Oct 15 2020 10:34PM) : He looks at himself as less, like he's cursed. Diction such as, "disgrace", "outcast", and "desire" show his longing to be more than he feels.

Oct 16

Chenoa F Chenoa F (Oct 16 2020 12:59AM) : Olivia, great job! I love that you pull in the word choice for analytical commentary.

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Oct 15

Brooke H Brooke H (Oct 15 2020 9:03PM) : He wishes himself and his life were different, more hopeful and lucky

Oct 15

Avery P Avery P (Oct 15 2020 10:32PM) : No matter what it is he always wishes he were better

Oct 16

Chenoa F Chenoa F (Oct 16 2020 1:00AM) : Better how? Coupled with Bradley's comment, how does the speaker define a person's worth?

Oct 15

Bradley W Bradley W (Oct 15 2020 11:48PM) : we get insight on how he views his life

Oct 16

Chenoa F Chenoa F (Oct 16 2020 12:59AM) : Explain.

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Oct 16

Kaelynn S Kaelynn S (Oct 16 2020 12:06AM) : He wants to be like someone who has people on their side

Oct 16

Ava M Ava M (Oct 16 2020 1:27AM) : He wishes he had more friends and people to back him up

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Oct 15

Olivia B Olivia B (Oct 15 2020 10:35PM) : Envy of the worth he feels other people have.

Oct 18

Gracie W Gracie W (Oct 18 2020 10:08AM) : Has a materialistic point of view..At this time in the poem worth is based on ones possessions or status-both of which he has none of

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Oct 15

Montana P Montana P (Oct 15 2020 7:54PM) : In lines 1-8, the wording reflects a feeling of despair and negative feelings towards himself.

Oct 16

Chenoa F Chenoa F (Oct 16 2020 1:00AM) : Yes. Why? (Using what evidence?)

Oct 17

Megan J Megan J (Oct 17 2020 10:13PM) : he says he's "desiring" other men's attributes described in lines 5-7.Prior to that he 'look[s] upon [himself] and curse [his] fate"(4) showing that he despises himself

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Oct 15

Montana P Montana P (Oct 15 2020 7:56PM) : 9-14 he thinks about someone that he loves and that loves him back in order to lighten his mood.

Oct 15

Olivia B Olivia B (Oct 15 2020 10:32PM) : This is where the volta happens, a tone shift is very prominent. It went from a more melancholy to reminiscent tone.

Oct 16

Chenoa F Chenoa F (Oct 16 2020 1:01AM) : Yes. And the word "Yet" implies a contrast and a shift.

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Oct 15

Bradley W Bradley W (Oct 15 2020 11:50PM) : A clear tone shift

Oct 16

Ava M Ava M (Oct 16 2020 1:28AM) : The thought of someone he loves instantly changes his mood, he is happy when thinking about them

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Oct 15

Avery P Avery P (Oct 15 2020 10:33PM) : He likes to enjoy himself in the morning time

Oct 16

Chenoa F Chenoa F (Oct 16 2020 1:02AM) : Hm. He said that his emotional state, like a lark rising at the break of dawn, lifts when he thinks of her and "sings hymns."

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Oct 16

Ava M Ava M (Oct 16 2020 1:33AM) : His world goes from dark and gloomy, to bright and hopeful when he thinks of his love

Oct 17

Megan J Megan J (Oct 17 2020 10:06PM) : the though of his love sparks a sort of bright, angelic, and almost freeing feeling as described by the diction

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Oct 15

Avery P Avery P (Oct 15 2020 10:34PM) : This other person's love makes him feel good about himself

Oct 15

Olivia B Olivia B (Oct 15 2020 10:37PM) : His negative feelings are forgotten as he starts to think of his love.

Oct 18

Gracie W Gracie W (Oct 18 2020 10:11AM) : The "wealth" is instead an abundance of love and happiness instead of possessions like he had earlier thought. A change in point of view was all he needed to remember what truly mattered.

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Oct 15

Montana P Montana P (Oct 15 2020 7:59PM) : This poem is about the importance of the love we feel from others. He starts the poem with negative wording that he uses towards how he feels about himself, it later changes to him thinking of someone he loves in order to see himself how they see him.

Oct 15

Brooke H Brooke H (Oct 15 2020 9:06PM) : PERIOD

Oct 15

Olivia B Olivia B (Oct 15 2020 10:30PM) : I couldn't have said it better :)

Oct 15

Kayla G Kayla G (Oct 15 2020 11:06PM) : Shakespearean rhyme scheme (obviously)

Oct 16

Chenoa F Chenoa F (Oct 16 2020 1:03AM) : Yes. So how would you use the Shakespearean rhyme scheme to organize your chronological body paragraphs?

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