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Excerpt from Catcher in the Rye


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Excerpt from Catcher in the Rye (40-41)

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Do a close reading of the following pages, making annotations when necessary. Pay attention to word choice and sentence structure, as well as literary devices and references to context or theme.

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We always had the same meal on Saturday nights at Pencey. It was supposed to be a big deal, because they gave you steak. I’ll bet a thousand bucks the reason they did that was because a lot of guys’ parents came up to school on Sunday, and old Thurmer probably figured everybody’s mother would ask their darling boy what he had for dinner last night, and he’d say, “Steak.” What a racket. You should’ve seen the steaks. They were these little hard, dry jobs that you could hardly even cut. You always got these very lumpy mashed potatoes on steak night, and for dessert you got Brown Betty, which nobody ate, except maybe the little kids in the lower school that didn’t know any better—and guys like Ackley that ate everything.

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Anthony L Anthony L (Sep 24 2020 3:54PM) : He thinks the reason they have steak is so the parents think they are being fed well, even though the steak is bad, so it probably isn't a very fancy place
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Chenoa F Chenoa F (Sep 25 2020 1:13PM) : Great!
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It was nice, though, when we got out of the dining room. There were about three inches of snow on the ground, and it was still coming down like a madman. It looked pretty as hell, and we all started throwing snowballs and horsing around all over the place. It was very childish, but everybody was really enjoying themselves.

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Anthony L Anthony L (Sep 24 2020 3:55PM) : He uses the word madman a lot
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Chenoa F Chenoa F (Sep 25 2020 1:13PM) : Good. This might reflect his tendency to exaggerate or may point to the slang of the 1940s.
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I didn’t have a date or anything, so I and this friend of mine, Mal Brossard, that was on the wrestling team, decided we’d take a bus into Agerstown and have a hamburger and maybe see a lousy movie. Neither of us felt like sitting around on our ass all night. I asked Mal if he minded if Ackley came along with us. The reason I asked was because Ackley never did anything on Saturday night, except stay in his room and squeeze his pimples or something.

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Gianna C Gianna C (Sep 22 2020 1:01PM) : Inclusive
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Jade S Jade S (Sep 30 2020 5:29PM) : Ackley sounds very boyish or like a young teen with the way he's talked about by the writer.

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Anthony L Anthony L (Sep 24 2020 3:56PM) : the writer did the same italic on the word everything and on the word anything.
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Chenoa F Chenoa F (Sep 25 2020 1:14PM) : Good. What does this suggest? Does it serve as evidence for his tendency to exaggerate?
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Jade S Jade S (Sep 30 2020 5:23PM) : In the 3rd paragraph it sounds unpleasant, but at the same time nostalgic, especially in the 4th paragraph when the writer talks about the snow. The 3rd and 5th paragraphs sounded exaggerated when talking about and describing Ackley.
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