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A South African Childhood- Allusions in a Lifescape (1954)- Nadine Gordimer

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Growing up in one part of a vast young country can be very different from growing up in another, and in South Africa this difference is not only a matter of geography. The division of people into great races --black and white-- and the subdivision of the white into Afrikaans and English speaking groups provide a diversity of cultural heritage that can make two South African children almost as strange to each other as if they had come from different countries. The fact that their parents, if they are English speaking, frequently have come from different countries complicates their backgrounds still further. My father came to South Africa from a village in Russia; my mother was born and grew up in London. I remember, when I was about 8 years old, going with my sister and mother and father to spend a long weekend with a cousin of my father’s who lived in the Orange Free State. After miles and miles of sienna-red plowed earth, after miles and miles of silk-fringed mealies standing as high as your eyes on earth side of the road and ugly farmhouses where women in bunchy cotton dresses and sunbonnets stared after the car as we passed, we reach the dorp where the cousin lived, in a small white house with sides that were dust-stained in a wavering wash, like rust, for more than a foot above the ground. There we two little girls slept on two bed of a smothering softness we had never felt before-- featherbeds bought from eastern Europe-- and drank tea drawn from a charming contraption. There--to our and our mother’s horror-- we were given smoked duck, flavored with garlic, at breakfast. The two children of the house spoke only Afrikaans like the Boer children who played in the yards of mean little houses on either side, and my sister and I, queasy from the strange food and able to speak only English, watched their games with a mixture of hostility and wistfulness.

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Gilberto Prieto-Leon Gilberto Prieto-Leon (Oct 07 2020 10:56PM) : Nadine was racially categorized as a privileged African American girl whos parents were born in very famous and thought to be amazing places like Russia and London. because of this she was treated differently by others and was given or denied things [Edited] more

Other people weren’t.

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Ms. Jenn Rodriguez Ms. Jenn Rodriguez (Sep 30 2020 9:58AM) : Question 1 more

What racial category would this make Nadine Gordimer? Based on our readings from last week, what privileges do you know she received because of this?

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Salvador Juarez Salvador Juarez (Oct 06 2020 2:48PM) : she could of been treated weirdlty but not diffrent.Her familiy could of only work at some places
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Francisco Quintero Francisco Quintero (Oct 06 2020 10:35PM) : she was classified as someone who was from some where else and now living there. she would be treated differently and wouldn't be allowed to work in some jobs.
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Kearrion Davis-Watkins Kearrion Davis-Watkins (Oct 07 2020 1:43PM) : She was treated differently and was limited to number of jobs.
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Giovanni Lozano Giovanni Lozano (Oct 07 2020 3:14PM) : She feels like she is being treated as her race has been treated for a long. But having to go threw this horror and rules, it feels like she has to be hostility and wistfulness
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Daisy Salgado Daisy Salgado (Oct 07 2020 4:57PM) : The girl family couldn't work at many places and people treated her weirdly and only lived at some places.
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Cynthia Salinas Cynthia Salinas (Oct 07 2020 5:06PM) : She felt like she was be treated different because she was from another place. So it felt like horror.
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Juan Reyes Juan Reyes (Oct 07 2020 9:00PM) : response to question 31 more

She was treated differently than any of her cousins. Her family worked at only some of the places available.

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Yoana Pineda Yoana Pineda (Oct 08 2020 3:07AM) : She was treated different and wasn't allowed to do certain things like having a limit of jobs to work in.
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Aaron Samano Aaron Samano (Oct 08 2020 12:22PM) : Response to question 1 more

Nadine Gordimer is being treated differently where she lives and she’s not allowed to work in some jobs.

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Rodrigo Rosas Rodrigo Rosas (Oct 08 2020 2:26PM) : the racial category she would be in is she wouldent be treated poorly but wouldnt get as much rights
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Olenzka Rios Olenzka Rios (Oct 09 2020 4:35PM) : She felt like she was being different from others because of her race
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alexa vasquez alexa vasquez (Oct 13 2020 12:13AM) : Nadine Gordimer was treated differently and was only limit to number of jobs.
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Brenda Anaya Brenda Anaya (Oct 20 2020 7:24PM) : she felt like she was being treated different because of her skin color and only got limited jobs.
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How different it all was from our visit to our mother’s sister, in Natal! There, with our “English” side of the family, in the green, softly contorted hills and the gentle meadows of sweet grass in near Balgowan, we might almost have been in England itself. There our cousins Roy and Humpfrey rode like young lords about their father’s beautiful farm and spoke the high, polite, “pure” English learned in expensive Natal private schools that were staffed with masters imported from English universities. And how different were both visits from our life in one of the gold-mining towns of the Witwatersrand, near Johannesburg, in the Transvaal.

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Daniel Rivera Daniel Rivera (Oct 05 2020 10:28AM) : Her hometown, at one point, was the richest gold mining area in the world. Because of this, what was her town actually like to grow up in?
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Salvador Juarez Salvador Juarez (Oct 06 2020 2:50PM) : She was like a royal at a palace with wealth/richness.
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Juan Reyes Juan Reyes (Oct 07 2020 9:06PM) : Response for question #2 more

Her hometown was actually a very wealthy town because of the richness of gold. Which she had what she needed to survive, like food, shelter,etc.

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Yoana Pineda Yoana Pineda (Oct 08 2020 3:09AM) : Her hometown was wealthy in which she had what she needed.
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alexa vasquez alexa vasquez (Oct 13 2020 12:14AM) : her town was stable which she had or they all had what they needed.
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There are nine of these towns, spread over a distance of roughly 140 miles east and west of Johannesburg. The one in which we lived was on the east side--the East Rand, it is called-- and it had many distinctions, as distinctions were measured in that part of the world. First of all, it was one of the oldest towns having got itself a gold strike, a general store, a few tents, and a name before 1890. In the pioneer days, my father had set himself up in a small, one-man business as a watchmaker and jeweler, and during the 20s and 30s, when the town became the most rapidly expanding in Witwatersrand, he continued to live there with his family. In the riches gold mining area in the world, it became the richest square mile or so. All around us, the shafts went down and the gold came up; our horizon was an egytian-looking frieze of man-made hills of cyanide sand, called “dumps,” because that is what they are-- great mounds of waste matter dumped on the surface of the earth after the gold-bearing ore has been blasted below, hauled up, and pounded and washed into yielding its treasure. In the dusty month before spring-- in august, that is-- the sand from the dumps blew under the tightly shut doors of every house in the town and enveloped the heads of the dumps themselves in a swirling haze, leading them so of the dignity of cloud-capped mountains. It is

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Ms. Jenn Rodriguez Ms. Jenn Rodriguez (Sep 30 2020 10:08AM) : Question 2 more

Her hometown, at one point, was the richest gold mining area in the world. Because of this, what was her town actually like to grow up in?

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jose Espinoza jose Espinoza (Oct 06 2020 2:51PM) : All around us, the shafts went down and the gold came up; our horizon was an egytian-looking frieze of man-made hills of cyanide sand, called “dumps,” because that is what they are-- great mounds of waste matter dumped on the surface of the earth
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Salvador Juarez Salvador Juarez (Oct 06 2020 3:15PM) : hello
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Francisco Quintero Francisco Quintero (Oct 06 2020 10:44PM) : the town was rapidly expanding and people had a lot of gold from the mines and dumped the dust from the mine into a dump, but then the wind blew and the dust covered the city making a sand storm, and people stayed inside their homes because of the storm. [Edited]
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Kearrion Davis-Watkins Kearrion Davis-Watkins (Oct 07 2020 1:47PM) : one the east side.its was expanding by population.people dumped dust from the mine into a dump.
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Giovanni Lozano Giovanni Lozano (Oct 07 2020 3:20PM) : it was one of the oldest towns having got itself a gold strike, a general store, a few tents, and a name before 1890. Also having one of the richest gold mining areas in the world.
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Cynthia Salinas Cynthia Salinas (Oct 07 2020 5:14PM) : Her town was the richest town because they would of found gold back then, but growing up it was not like that, there would always be a dust storm that would hit the city and everyone had to stay inside.
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Juan Reyes Juan Reyes (Oct 07 2020 9:29PM) : Response for question #3 more

the town became rapidly expanding in Witwatersrand and became the richest square mile. the shafts went down and the gold came up.looked lie Egyptian-looking frieze of man-made hills of cyanide sand.

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Yoana Pineda Yoana Pineda (Oct 08 2020 3:11AM) : Her hometown was wealthy because of how they would find gold. It was the oldest town which expanded and became wealthy.
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Aaron Samano Aaron Samano (Oct 08 2020 12:30PM) : Response to question 2 more

Her hometown was rich because of the gold. Since her hometown was rich she had what she needed like food.

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Rodrigo Rosas Rodrigo Rosas (Oct 08 2020 2:30PM) : her home town was full of rich white people because of the gold mine
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Olenzka Rios Olenzka Rios (Oct 09 2020 4:37PM) : Her town was actually old and have dust storms and was rich because of gold
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alexa vasquez alexa vasquez (Oct 13 2020 12:15AM) : well her town was rich because of the gold but it the oldest which expanded.
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Brenda Anaya Brenda Anaya (Oct 20 2020 7:30PM) : The hometown actually old and was rich because of the gold so she had what she needed in order to survive.
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Gilberto Prieto-Leon Gilberto Prieto-Leon (Oct 09 2020 9:50PM) : Her town actually like to grow up on the east side and had many distinctions.
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characteristic of the Witwatersrand that any feature of the landscape that strikes the eye always does so because it is a reminder of something else; considered on its own merits, the landscape is utterly without interest-- flat, dry, and barren.

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In our part of the East Rand, the yellowish-white pattern of the cyanide dumps was broken here and there by a black hill rising out of the veld. These hills were man-made, too, but they did not have the geometrical, pyramidal rigidity of the cyanide dumps, and they were so old that enough real earth had blow on to them to hold a growth of sparse grass and perhaps even a sinewy peppercorn or peachtree, sprung up no doubt. These hills were also dumps, but through their scanity natural covering of blackness clearly showed-- even a little blueness, the way black hair shines-- for they were coal dumps, made of coal dust.

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Ms. Jenn Rodriguez Ms. Jenn Rodriguez (Sep 30 2020 10:14AM) : Question 3 more

What happened to her town because of gold mining? Do you think it sounds like a nice place to live? Why or why not?

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jose Espinoza jose Espinoza (Oct 06 2020 2:52PM) : These hills were also dumps, but through their scanity natural covering of blackness clearly showed-- even a little blueness, the way black hair shines-- for they were coal dumps, made of coal dust.
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Salvador Juarez Salvador Juarez (Oct 06 2020 3:18PM) : they made a dump of piles of coal dust from mining
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Kearrion Davis-Watkins Kearrion Davis-Watkins (Oct 07 2020 1:50PM) : They made man made dump piles. No because when the wind would blow it would make a dust storm.
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Francisco Quintero Francisco Quintero (Oct 07 2020 2:08PM) : after the miners finished mining gold they dumped the dust onto dumps, and then the wind blew which caused the dust to blow onto the city. it doesn't sound like a nice place to live in because there is dust every where and is can make you messy.
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Giovanni Lozano Giovanni Lozano (Oct 07 2020 3:41PM) : This place sounds like a dump. cyanide dump, the black hill rising out of the veld. And they were so old that enough. Barley seeing the sky turn blue and only seeing blackness.
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Cynthia Salinas Cynthia Salinas (Oct 07 2020 5:18PM) : Her town was man-made so when earth decided to do something then her town would fall apart, and it does seem like a very nice place to live.
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Yoana Pineda Yoana Pineda (Oct 08 2020 3:13AM) : It does not sound like a nice place to live because dust storms would happen it doesn't sound as safe.
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Aaron Samano Aaron Samano (Oct 08 2020 12:35PM) : Response to question 3 more

Her town was full of dust because of the gold mining. I don’t think it sounds like a nice place to live because is full of dust and messy.

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Rodrigo Rosas Rodrigo Rosas (Oct 08 2020 2:34PM) : her town was overrun with rich white people it was not a nice place as the whites were raceist
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Juan Reyes Juan Reyes (Oct 08 2020 7:21PM) : Response for question #4 more

What happened to her because of golf mining is that now the hills had dumps on them because of gold mining and the dumps were piles and piles of coal dust. I think now it doesn’t sounds like a good place to live because the dumps are what makes the place very dirty to live.

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Olenzka Rios Olenzka Rios (Oct 09 2020 4:37PM) : What happened was they made piles of coal dust because of mining so much
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alexa vasquez alexa vasquez (Oct 13 2020 12:17AM) : her town was falling apart and it was in good condition anymore
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Brenda Anaya Brenda Anaya (Oct 20 2020 7:31PM) : Since the hometown was filled with gold people were looking for it making dumb of piles. No because when the wind would blow they would make dust storms.
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Daniel Rivera Daniel Rivera (Oct 07 2020 3:32AM) : but then the wind blew and the dust covered the city making a sand storm and people stayed inside their homes because of the storm.
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Gilberto Prieto-Leon Gilberto Prieto-Leon (Oct 09 2020 10:05PM) : Her town the yellowish-white pattern of the cyanide dumps was broken so the black hill was rising out of the veld. In my opinion, Is a nice place to stay because It's not hurting them.
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The coal dumps assumed, both because of their appearance and because of the stories and warnings we heard about them, something of a diabolic nature. In our sedate little colonial tribe, with its ritual tea parties and tennis parties, the coal dump could be said to be our evil mountain; I use the singular here because when I think of these dumps, I think of one in particular-- the biggest one, the one that stood 50 yards beyond the last row of houses in the town where we lived. I remember it especially well because of the other side of it, hidden by it, was the local nursing home, where, when my sister and I were young and the town was small, all the mothers went to have their babies and all the children went to have their tonsillectomies-- where, in fact, almost everyone was born, endured an illness, or died. Our mother had several long stays in the place, over a period of two or three years, and during these stays our grandmother took us on a daily visit across the veld to see her. Immediately when lunch was over, she would spend an hour dressing us, and then brushed and beribboned and curled our hair; then, we would set off. We took a path that skirted the coal dump, and there it was at our side most of the way-- a dirty scarred old mountain, collapsing into the fold of a small ravine here, supporting a twisted peachtree there, and showing bald and black through patchy grass. A fence consisting of two threads of barbed wire looped at intervals through low rusted-iron poles, which once had surrounded it completely, now remained only in places, can convey the idea of a taboo rather than providing an effective means of isolation. The whole coal dump looked dead, forsaken, and harmless enough, but my sister and I walked softly and looked at it out of the corners of our eyes, half fascinated, half afraid, because we knew it was something else inert. Not dead by any means, but inert. For we had seen. Coming back from the nursing home in the early-winter dusk, we had seen the strange glow in the bald patches the grass did not cover, and in the runnels made by the erosion of summer wind and rain we had seen the hot blue waiver of flame. The coal dump was alive. Like a beast of prey, it woke to life in the dark.

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The matter of fact truth was that these coal dumps, relics of the pre-goldstrike era when collieries operated in the district, were burning. Along with the abandoned mine workings underground, they had caught fire at some time or other in their years of disuse, and had continued to burn, night and day, ever since. Neither rain nor time could put the fires out, and in some places, even on the coldest winter days, we would be surprised to feel the veld warm beneath the soles of our shoes, and, if we cut out a clod, faintly steaming. That dump on the outskirts of the town where we lived is still burning today. I have asked people who have studied such things how long it may be expected to go on burning before it consumes itself. Nobody seems to know; it shares with the idea of Hades its heat and vague eternity.

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But perhaps its fierce heart is being subdued gradually. Apparently, no one can even remember, these days, the nasty incidents connected with the dump, incidents that were fresh in memory during our childhood. Perhaps there is no need for anyone to remember, for the town now has more vicarious and less dangerous excitements to offer children than the thrill of running quickly across a pile of black dust that may at any moment cave in and plunge the adventurer into a bed of incandescent coals. In our time, we knew a girl to whom this had happened, and our mother remembered a small boy who had disappeared entirely under a sudden landslide of terrible glowing heat. Not even his bones have been recovered by the girl we knew survived to become a sort of curiosity about the town. She had been playing of the dump with her friends and all at once had found herself sunk thigh-deep in living coals and hot ashes. Her friends had managed to pull her out of this fiery quicksand, but she was horribly burned. When we saw her in the street, we used to be unable to keep our eyes from the tight-puckered skin of her calves, and the still tighter skin of her hands, which draw up her fingers like claws. Despite, or because of, these awful warnings, my sister and I longed to run quickly across the lower slopes of the dump for ourselves, and several times managed to elude surveillance long enough to do so. And once, in the unbearable terror and bliss of excitement, we clutched each other on the veld below while, legs pumping wildly, our cousin Roy, who came from Natal to spend the holidays with us, rode a bicycle right to the top of the dump and down the other side, triumphant and unharmed.

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Ms. Jenn Rodriguez Ms. Jenn Rodriguez (Sep 30 2020 10:12AM) : Question 4 more

Nadine is very descriptive in her writing so that the reader feels transported into her stories. What words really stand out to you in the highlighted section of paragraph 9? Why do you think Nadine decided to use these words to describe the scene?

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Salvador Juarez Salvador Juarez (Oct 06 2020 3:20PM) : vicarious, subdued gradually unharmed.she can come up with these words because she expirienced this
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Kearrion Davis-Watkins Kearrion Davis-Watkins (Oct 07 2020 1:55PM) : coals and hot ashes. To make the story more interesting and to give an idea of what that was like.
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Francisco Quintero Francisco Quintero (Oct 07 2020 2:25PM) : it standed out when she said "and the still tighter skin of her hands, which draw up her fingers like claws.", but she used the word "like claws" so she can give us a better picture of how damaged the girls hand were by the quicksand.
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Giovanni Lozano Giovanni Lozano (Oct 07 2020 3:53PM) : What really stands me out is the phrase "dump". She likes to use that word a lot, and I can see where she coming from. To the lost members to her childhood, and seeing others burn to ashes. She describes this place, and dump.
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Cynthia Salinas Cynthia Salinas (Oct 07 2020 5:24PM) : ¨When we saw her in the street, we used to be unable to keep our eyes from the tight-puckered skin of her calves, and the still tighter skin of her hands, which draw up her fingers like claws¨ This really stood out to me because I have never heard some of more

those words before.

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Aaron Samano Aaron Samano (Oct 08 2020 1:25PM) : Response to question 4 more

Nadine use the word vicarious in her writing because she wanted to explain us how her town looks like.

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Rodrigo Rosas Rodrigo Rosas (Oct 08 2020 2:38PM) : the hot coals tell us how much the workers worked to melt the gold
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Juan Reyes Juan Reyes (Oct 08 2020 7:32PM) : Response for question #5 more

The words that really stood out to me in the highlighted section of paragraph 9 was “terrible glowing heat” because she explained how the heat felt to her when she was just a little kid. Nadine decided to use these words to describe the scene because so we can know how the heat would have felted like if we were there in person feeling it.

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Olenzka Rios Olenzka Rios (Oct 09 2020 4:38PM) : she would use dump a lot as she was explaining her town
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alexa vasquez alexa vasquez (Oct 13 2020 12:18AM) : wanted to explain what they use it for and show how her town was.
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Brenda Anaya Brenda Anaya (Oct 20 2020 7:54PM) : The words that really stand out to me in the paragraph is "tight-puckered skin of her calves". I think Nadine decided to use these words because they help with the details and make it more realistic.
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Gilberto Prieto-Leon Gilberto Prieto-Leon (Oct 09 2020 10:17PM) : The words that stand out to me is an Incident that was fresh in memory during our childhood. I think Nadine decided to use these words to describe the scene is to Imagine what happens in the story and Nadine tries to get us her attention.
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In the part of South Africa where we lived, we had not only fire under our feet; we had, two, a complication of tunnels as intricate as one of those delicate chunks of worm cast you’d find on the seashore. All the towns along the Witwatersrand, and the older parts of Johannesburg itself, are undermined. Living there, you think about it as little as you think about the fact that, whatever your work and whatever your life, you’re reason for performing where you do and living it where you do is the existence of the gold mines. Yet you are never allowed to forget entirely that the ground is not solid beneath you.

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Gilberto Prieto-Leon Gilberto Prieto-Leon (Oct 07 2020 11:40PM) : her town was motivated by the riches found in the gold mines and all the hard work
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Juan Reyes Juan Reyes (Oct 08 2020 7:40PM) : Response to question #6 more

In her home town, the people were motivated by the gold mines. They were motivated by the gold mines because The gold minds helped them with everything they needed,to survive. And helped them with food to not starved. The people also have lived with gold mind. Which gold mind leaded to the dumps of coal.

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Ms. Jenn Rodriguez Ms. Jenn Rodriguez (Sep 30 2020 10:25AM) : Question 5 more

In her town, what were people motivated by? Why?

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jose Espinoza jose Espinoza (Oct 06 2020 2:46PM) : In the part of South Africa where we lived, we had not only fire under our feet; we had, two, a complication of tunnels as intricate as one of those delicate chunks of worm cast you’d find on the seashore.
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Salvador Juarez Salvador Juarez (Oct 06 2020 3:21PM) : they were motivated by the gold mines
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Kearrion Davis-Watkins Kearrion Davis-Watkins (Oct 07 2020 1:57PM) : The gold mines because she says ¨you’re reason for performing where you do and living it where you do is the existence of the gold mines.¨
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Francisco Quintero Francisco Quintero (Oct 07 2020 2:33PM) : people in her town were motivated by the mines because the mines once had a lot of gold which greatly helped the town grow, and because it was the only job they were forced to do.
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Giovanni Lozano Giovanni Lozano (Oct 07 2020 3:56PM) : It sounds like there self. while others kind of feel the same, it's possible to learn about new actions from yourself.
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Cynthia Salinas Cynthia Salinas (Oct 07 2020 5:27PM) : They were all motivated by the Gold times because they have lived with it and may know how to deal with it.
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Yoana Pineda Yoana Pineda (Oct 08 2020 3:23AM) : What kept people motivated was the existence of the gold mines. Yet they didn't have solid ground. [Edited]
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Aaron Samano Aaron Samano (Oct 08 2020 1:31PM) : Response to question 5 more

The people in her town were motivated by the gold mines because there was a lot of gold and it help her town. The gold helped them to survive.

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Rodrigo Rosas Rodrigo Rosas (Oct 08 2020 2:39PM) : the people were motivated by the gold that was to mine
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Olenzka Rios Olenzka Rios (Oct 09 2020 4:38PM) : They were motivated by gold
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alexa vasquez alexa vasquez (Oct 13 2020 12:19AM) : they were motivated by the gold mines because it helped the town grow
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Brenda Anaya Brenda Anaya (Oct 20 2020 8:00PM) : People were motivated by the gold mines because they lived live with it and know how to deal with it.
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