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A South African Childhood- Allusions in a Lifescape (1954)- Nadine Gordimer

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Growing up in one part of a vast young country can be very different from growing up in another, and in South Africa this difference is not only a matter of geography. The division of people into great races --black and white-- and the subdivision of the white into Afrikaans and English speaking groups provide a diversity of cultural heritage that can make two South African children almost as strange to each other as if they had come from different countries. The fact that their parents, if they are English speaking, frequently have come from different countries complicates their backgrounds still further. My father came to South Africa from a village in Russia; my mother was born and grew up in London. I remember, when I was about 8 years old, going with my sister and mother and father to spend a long weekend with a cousin of my father’s who lived in the Orange Free State. After miles and miles of sienna-red plowed earth, after miles and miles of silk-fringed mealies standing as high as your eyes on earth side of the road and ugly farmhouses where women in bunchy cotton dresses and sunbonnets stared after the car as we passed, we reach the dorp where the cousin lived, in a small white house with sides that were dust-stained in a wavering wash, like rust, for more than a foot above the ground. There we two little girls slept on two bed of a smothering softness we had never felt before-- featherbeds bought from eastern Europe-- and drank tea drawn from a charming contraption. There--to our and our mother’s horror-- we were given smoked duck, flavored with garlic, at breakfast. The two children of the house spoke only Afrikaans like the Boer children who played in the yards of mean little houses on either side, and my sister and I, queasy from the strange food and able to speak only English, watched their games with a mixture of hostility and wistfulness.

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Karina Garcia Karina Garcia (Jan 12 2021 3:16PM) : I would say that Nadine Gordiner is white because in the text says her parents were raised and born in russia orin london
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Ms. Jenn Rodriguez Ms. Jenn Rodriguez (Sep 30 2020 9:58AM) : Question 1 more

What racial category would this make Nadine Gordimer? Based on our readings from last week, what privileges do you know she received because of this?

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Samantha Villalpando Samantha Villalpando (Oct 05 2020 12:06AM) : I would say that the the racial category this would make Nadine Gordimer would be white.I say this because her parents were born and raised either in Russia and or London.She had way more privileges because she wasnt considered an ¨African women¨.
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Mr Orlando Orozco Mr Orlando Orozco (Oct 05 2020 1:09PM) : :) more

I would consider her as White because her parents are from Russia or London which mean she had plenty of options because she wasn’t considered “African american”.

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Elizabeth Rodriguez Elizabeth Rodriguez (Oct 05 2020 2:21PM) : I strongly believe that Nadine Gordimer is white because her parents are from Russia and or London . She was considered an "African American"
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Alondra Perez Alondra Perez (Oct 07 2020 7:52PM) : I would say that the racial category that would make Nadine Gordimer is white. Since both her parents are from either Russia or London, she had a lot of privileges because she was not a "African American" woman.
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Aimee Pineda Aimee Pineda (Oct 08 2020 3:08PM) : In my opinion Nadine Gordimer would be considered white because her parents were born either Russia and London .Nadie Gordimer will be considered white.
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Erick Villicana Erick Villicana (Oct 08 2020 9:35PM) : Erick Villicana more

I think that Nadine Gordimer is white because he comes from london and I really agree that he is white

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Daniella Cortez Daniella Cortez (Oct 09 2020 9:48AM) : I feel like her race is white because according to the reading Nadine parents are from Russia and the white people have more privileges because their race is white.
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Emilio Rodriguez Emilio Rodriguez (Oct 09 2020 10:27AM) : racial category more

i would say that the racial category would make nadline gordimer be white

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Raul Hernandez Raul Hernandez (Oct 09 2020 2:46PM) : :) more

I would consider Nadine Gordimer is white because her dad was born in Russia and her mom was from London. She had more options since she wasn’t considered African american.

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Leonel Arreola Leonel Arreola (Oct 09 2020 5:52PM) : Nadine Gordimer’s fictional characters embody unease and often resentment with social class, expected cultural roles, and place. In her fiction, the conflicting notions of space and self are tied to gender, class, and identity.
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Kevin Leija Kevin Leija (Oct 09 2020 7:58PM) : I assume Nadine Gordimer would be considered white because her parents are from Russia or London
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Susana Valencia Susana Valencia (Oct 09 2020 10:06PM) : :+ more

I would have to say the racial category that would make Nadine Gorimer is Russian or Londoner. I think she would have more privileges because she isn’t considered an Afrian American Women .

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Evelyn Lopez Evelyn Lopez (Oct 10 2020 1:10AM) : The racial category that would make Nadine Gorimer would be Russia or London because her mother is from London and her father is from Russia and that would give her more privileges because she's white.
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Mr Arturo Resendiz Mr Arturo Resendiz (Oct 07 2020 12:25PM) : I would consider it as white because her parents are from two different country like Russia and London so as that the would consider as a white person
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Julian Vela Julian Vela (Oct 08 2020 5:44PM) : I think the racial category this would make Nadeline Gordimer would be white because her parents were from Russia or London and had more privileges because she was not an African American.
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Isaiah Izquierdo Isaiah Izquierdo (Oct 09 2020 12:33PM) : Her father lived in Russia then went to a village in Africa I wonder if it was hard living in Africa as he stayed there. [Edited]
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Yaritza Reyes Yaritza Reyes (Oct 09 2020 8:27PM) : Nadine Gordimer is white because based on the reading her father is from Russia and her mother from London so it is most likely that she is white, and some benefits of that are that they had a better lifestyle. , more salary, and more freedom.
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Karina Garcia Karina Garcia (Jan 12 2021 4:39PM) : I would say that Nadine Gordimer is white because in the text says her parents were born and raised in russia and or london
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How different it all was from our visit to our mother’s sister, in Natal! There, with our “English” side of the family, in the green, softly contorted hills and the gentle meadows of sweet grass in near Balgowan, we might almost have been in England itself. There our cousins Roy and Humpfrey rode like young lords about their father’s beautiful farm and spoke the high, polite, “pure” English learned in expensive Natal private schools that were staffed with masters imported from English universities. And how different were both visits from our life in one of the gold-mining towns of the Witwatersrand, near Johannesburg, in the Transvaal.

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There are nine of these towns, spread over a distance of roughly 140 miles east and west of Johannesburg. The one in which we lived was on the east side--the East Rand, it is called-- and it had many distinctions, as distinctions were measured in that part of the world. First of all, it was one of the oldest towns having got itself a gold strike, a general store, a few tents, and a name before 1890. In the pioneer days, my father had set himself up in a small, one-man business as a watchmaker and jeweler, and during the 20s and 30s, when the town became the most rapidly expanding in Witwatersrand, he continued to live there with his family. In the riches gold mining area in the world, it became the richest square mile or so. All around us, the shafts went down and the gold came up; our horizon was an egytian-looking frieze of man-made hills of cyanide sand, called “dumps,” because that is what they are-- great mounds of waste matter dumped on the surface of the earth after the gold-bearing ore has been blasted below, hauled up, and pounded and washed into yielding its treasure. In the dusty month before spring-- in august, that is-- the sand from the dumps blew under the tightly shut doors of every house in the town and enveloped the heads of the dumps themselves in a swirling haze, leading them so of the dignity of cloud-capped mountains. It is

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Ms. Jenn Rodriguez Ms. Jenn Rodriguez (Sep 30 2020 10:08AM) : Question 2 more

Her hometown, at one point, was the richest gold mining area in the world. Because of this, what was her town actually like to grow up in?

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Samantha Villalpando Samantha Villalpando (Oct 04 2020 11:33PM) : Because of all the gold mining going on in her hometown,living there was like as if they were living in Egypt.I say this because there were always people either digging,and or making piles of sand and what not just for gold.
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Mr Orlando Orozco Mr Orlando Orozco (Oct 05 2020 1:13PM) : : more

Growing up for her actually was like watching people dig up sand constantly on the search for gold.

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Elizabeth Rodriguez Elizabeth Rodriguez (Oct 05 2020 2:30PM) : I believe that growing up in that town for her was seeing people dig up many piles of sand everywhere to find gold . I believe that she would always see many people digging up piles of sand everywhere .
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Alondra Perez Alondra Perez (Oct 07 2020 7:56PM) : Growing up in her town was always busy. This is because people were always digging up sand and searching for gold.
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Aimee Pineda Aimee Pineda (Oct 08 2020 3:13PM) : If her hometown was the richest gold mining area in the world her town would be consider one of the most wealthy's home town.People would just be digging trying to find gold.
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Erick Villicana Erick Villicana (Oct 08 2020 9:39PM) : Erick Villicana more

It became one of the riches gold mine area in the world which means that a lot of people were looking for gold

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Emilio Rodriguez Emilio Rodriguez (Oct 09 2020 10:28AM) : digging gold more

growing up she seen a lot of people look for gold

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Raul Hernandez Raul Hernandez (Oct 09 2020 2:52PM) : Response. more

Nadine Gordimer hometown had the richest gold mine. She would see people digging up and making piles of sand constantly in search for gold.

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Daniella Cortez Daniella Cortez (Oct 09 2020 5:21PM) : Out of all the gold mining the people had done their was always people digging and working they use them to mostly find gold.
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Kevin Leija Kevin Leija (Oct 09 2020 8:30PM) : Growing up in her hometown must have been really hard because there were always people busy looking for gold.
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Susana Valencia Susana Valencia (Oct 09 2020 10:11PM) : "-) more

Growing up in her hometown was alwyas busy people looking for gold and having a lot of valuables .

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Leonel Arreola Leonel Arreola (Oct 09 2020 11:12PM) : her hometown was the richest gold mining area in the world her town would be consider one of the most wealthy's home town,Growing up in her town was always busy.
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Evelyn Lopez Evelyn Lopez (Oct 10 2020 1:15AM) : What her town was actually like to grow up in was busy because they would dig up piles of sand to find gold and also fortunate cause they would find gold.
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Mr Arturo Resendiz Mr Arturo Resendiz (Oct 07 2020 12:55PM) : I believe the growing in a town like that would be different from other kids so like that only thing you see is just hole which has inside gold and more gold so would not be good for her only seeing gold
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Julian Vela Julian Vela (Oct 08 2020 5:46PM) : Her town growing up was very fortunate and had a lot of valuables. There were also other people wanting more gold and was always digging and making piles of sand just in case they missed some pieces of sand. Overall, her town was pretty wealthy at the tim
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Yaritza Reyes Yaritza Reyes (Oct 09 2020 8:34PM) : The town's population began to expand because there were many mines and they needed people to excavate which caused there to be a lot of lands so they describe it as if it were Egyptian.
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Karina Garcia Karina Garcia (Jan 12 2021 4:42PM) : Growing up, she would see a lot of people digging and making plies of sand because they were searching for gold.
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characteristic of the Witwatersrand that any feature of the landscape that strikes the eye always does so because it is a reminder of something else; considered on its own merits, the landscape is utterly without interest-- flat, dry, and barren.

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In our part of the East Rand, the yellowish-white pattern of the cyanide dumps was broken here and there by a black hill rising out of the veld. These hills were man-made, too, but they did not have the geometrical, pyramidal rigidity of the cyanide dumps, and they were so old that enough real earth had blow on to them to hold a growth of sparse grass and perhaps even a sinewy peppercorn or peachtree, sprung up no doubt. These hills were also dumps, but through their scanity natural covering of blackness clearly showed-- even a little blueness, the way black hair shines-- for they were coal dumps, made of coal dust.

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Ms. Jenn Rodriguez Ms. Jenn Rodriguez (Sep 30 2020 10:14AM) : Question 3 more

What happened to her town because of gold mining? Do you think it sounds like a nice place to live? Why or why not?

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Samantha Villalpando Samantha Villalpando (Oct 04 2020 11:36PM) : Her home town was being practically destroyed due to all the mining going on.Her hometown looked more and more as if they were in the middle of nowhere,as if people had just discovered that part and were going to fix it up.I dont think it was a nice place
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Samantha Villalpando Samantha Villalpando (Oct 04 2020 11:38PM) : to live because of how she makes it sound,that everything was getting torn down.Nothing looked like before,and I bet a lot of places werent safe anymore like they used to be.
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Mr Orlando Orozco Mr Orlando Orozco (Oct 05 2020 1:29PM) : :) more

Her town was getting destroyed by their own people who lived their all because they wanted to be find gold.

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Elizabeth Rodriguez Elizabeth Rodriguez (Oct 05 2020 2:36PM) : I believe that her home town was getting destroyed by their own people because they were always digging up for the gold . I believe that it does not sound like a nice place to live because when she talks about her town she makes it sound like [Edited] more

Its not a good place .

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Alondra Perez Alondra Perez (Oct 07 2020 8:00PM) : What had happened to her town was that it was being destroyed because there was mining happening most of the time. I don't think it sounds like a nice place to live because most towns weren't safe and people only cared for gold.
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Aimee Pineda Aimee Pineda (Oct 08 2020 3:15PM) : Nadine home town was being destroyed because of the gold there.I don't think this sounds like a safe place because people could just destroy your house thinking there might be gold in there.
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Erick Villicana Erick Villicana (Oct 08 2020 9:40PM) : Erick Villicana more

I dont thick it was a good place to live because their would probably be holes all over the place because of all the people looking for gold

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Daniella Cortez Daniella Cortez (Oct 09 2020 9:55AM) : Due to the mining the hills can blow up and they even have dumps witch is dangerous. It is kinda not good place to live in because the hill is black and has dumps all over the hill and seems like it can blow up at any moment.
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Emilio Rodriguez Emilio Rodriguez (Oct 09 2020 10:29AM) : i think no more

i say no because maybe there always a lot of poeple on your yard trying to find gold

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Kevin Leija Kevin Leija (Oct 09 2020 8:41PM) : The town was being destroyed because the people was only interested in finding gold.
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Susana Valencia Susana Valencia (Oct 09 2020 10:13PM) : +" more

What happened in her hometown is since people were digging up and looking for gold it was baically destoryed due to people digging up holes and didn’t look like before

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Leonel Arreola Leonel Arreola (Oct 09 2020 11:22PM) : Her hometown looked more and more as if they were in the middle of nowhere,as if people had just discovered that part and were going to fix it up and alsI believe that her home town was getting destroyed by their own people because they were always diggin
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Evelyn Lopez Evelyn Lopez (Oct 10 2020 1:23AM) : Her town was being destroyed because of all the gold mining. it dosent sound like a nice place to live in because the town is being destroyed with all the digging up to find gold.
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Mr Arturo Resendiz Mr Arturo Resendiz (Oct 07 2020 12:57PM) : so what happened to her town is that was destroyed due to the mining's they were. I say not because their should be a lot of hole in that town no because that only thing they looking for is gold in the town
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Julian Vela Julian Vela (Oct 08 2020 5:48PM) : Her town was slowly being destroyed simply because of other people wanting more and more gold. As time went on people started being more greedy and wanting more gold and needing more space to dig.
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Isaiah Izquierdo Isaiah Izquierdo (Oct 09 2020 12:36PM) : Her town was one of the oldest towns before it changed its name in 1890.
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Yaritza Reyes Yaritza Reyes (Oct 09 2020 8:38PM) : The yellowish-white was depleted from the mines which caused it to cause disasters in the town. I think it is not a nice place because you are in a lot of danger and I think it is not safe because things collapse or accidents happen in the mines.
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Karina Garcia Karina Garcia (Jan 12 2021 4:46PM) : Her town was destroyed by the people who were searching and digging for gold. It's not safe because people might destroy the house thinking there is gold.
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The coal dumps assumed, both because of their appearance and because of the stories and warnings we heard about them, something of a diabolic nature. In our sedate little colonial tribe, with its ritual tea parties and tennis parties, the coal dump could be said to be our evil mountain; I use the singular here because when I think of these dumps, I think of one in particular-- the biggest one, the one that stood 50 yards beyond the last row of houses in the town where we lived. I remember it especially well because of the other side of it, hidden by it, was the local nursing home, where, when my sister and I were young and the town was small, all the mothers went to have their babies and all the children went to have their tonsillectomies-- where, in fact, almost everyone was born, endured an illness, or died. Our mother had several long stays in the place, over a period of two or three years, and during these stays our grandmother took us on a daily visit across the veld to see her. Immediately when lunch was over, she would spend an hour dressing us, and then brushed and beribboned and curled our hair; then, we would set off. We took a path that skirted the coal dump, and there it was at our side most of the way-- a dirty scarred old mountain, collapsing into the fold of a small ravine here, supporting a twisted peachtree there, and showing bald and black through patchy grass. A fence consisting of two threads of barbed wire looped at intervals through low rusted-iron poles, which once had surrounded it completely, now remained only in places, can convey the idea of a taboo rather than providing an effective means of isolation. The whole coal dump looked dead, forsaken, and harmless enough, but my sister and I walked softly and looked at it out of the corners of our eyes, half fascinated, half afraid, because we knew it was something else inert. Not dead by any means, but inert. For we had seen. Coming back from the nursing home in the early-winter dusk, we had seen the strange glow in the bald patches the grass did not cover, and in the runnels made by the erosion of summer wind and rain we had seen the hot blue waiver of flame. The coal dump was alive. Like a beast of prey, it woke to life in the dark.

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The matter of fact truth was that these coal dumps, relics of the pre-goldstrike era when collieries operated in the district, were burning. Along with the abandoned mine workings underground, they had caught fire at some time or other in their years of disuse, and had continued to burn, night and day, ever since. Neither rain nor time could put the fires out, and in some places, even on the coldest winter days, we would be surprised to feel the veld warm beneath the soles of our shoes, and, if we cut out a clod, faintly steaming. That dump on the outskirts of the town where we lived is still burning today. I have asked people who have studied such things how long it may be expected to go on burning before it consumes itself. Nobody seems to know; it shares with the idea of Hades its heat and vague eternity.

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But perhaps its fierce heart is being subdued gradually. Apparently, no one can even remember, these days, the nasty incidents connected with the dump, incidents that were fresh in memory during our childhood. Perhaps there is no need for anyone to remember, for the town now has more vicarious and less dangerous excitements to offer children than the thrill of running quickly across a pile of black dust that may at any moment cave in and plunge the adventurer into a bed of incandescent coals. In our time, we knew a girl to whom this had happened, and our mother remembered a small boy who had disappeared entirely under a sudden landslide of terrible glowing heat. Not even his bones have been recovered by the girl we knew survived to become a sort of curiosity about the town. She had been playing of the dump with her friends and all at once had found herself sunk thigh-deep in living coals and hot ashes. Her friends had managed to pull her out of this fiery quicksand, but she was horribly burned. When we saw her in the street, we used to be unable to keep our eyes from the tight-puckered skin of her calves, and the still tighter skin of her hands, which draw up her fingers like claws. Despite, or because of, these awful warnings, my sister and I longed to run quickly across the lower slopes of the dump for ourselves, and several times managed to elude surveillance long enough to do so. And once, in the unbearable terror and bliss of excitement, we clutched each other on the veld below while, legs pumping wildly, our cousin Roy, who came from Natal to spend the holidays with us, rode a bicycle right to the top of the dump and down the other side, triumphant and unharmed.

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Ms. Jenn Rodriguez Ms. Jenn Rodriguez (Sep 30 2020 10:12AM) : Question 4 more

Nadine is very descriptive in her writing so that the reader feels transported into her stories. What words really stand out to you in the highlighted section of paragraph 9? Why do you think Nadine decided to use these words to describe the scene?

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Samantha Villalpando Samantha Villalpando (Oct 04 2020 11:54PM) : Some words that stook out to me were nasty,fierce,awful,fiery,elude,bliss,clutched,and triumphant.I think Nadine decided to use these words because they were more powerful,and were more detailed words to be able to use in this type of writing.Because
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Samantha Villalpando Samantha Villalpando (Oct 04 2020 11:56PM) : other writers just use basic words,but Nadine used words that made her stand out and made her writing more precise and detailed.
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Mr Orlando Orozco Mr Orlando Orozco (Oct 05 2020 1:34PM) : :) more

some of the words that stick out to me are bliss,triumphant,vicarious,elude i think she used those words so that her point can have a strong meaning and understanding.

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Elizabeth Rodriguez Elizabeth Rodriguez (Oct 05 2020 2:43PM) : Some words that stick out for me were vicarious,clutched , elude . I believe that Nadine decided to use the words to describe the scene because they were words that described what she really meant in her writing and were more precise .
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Alondra Perez Alondra Perez (Oct 07 2020 8:03PM) : Some of the words that stood out to me are thrill, curiosity, surveillance, and triumphant. I think Nadine wanted to use these word to describe the scene because she wanted to have a clear and more detailed writing.
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Aimee Pineda Aimee Pineda (Oct 08 2020 3:24PM) : Some words that really stand out to me were incanescent,bliss and triumphant. I think Nadine decided to use these words to give the reader a better understanding .
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Erick Villicana Erick Villicana (Oct 08 2020 9:44PM) : Erick Villicana more

She described how the girl looked and how it happened and how her skin was burned and bad and how one of her cousin rode a bike down the dump and was unharmed

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Emilio Rodriguez Emilio Rodriguez (Oct 09 2020 10:32AM) : bliss nasty triumphant more

i think she used these words because she wants people to know how she lived

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Raul Hernandez Raul Hernandez (Oct 09 2020 2:56PM) : Response. more

Words that stand out to me is Bliss,elude, fierce, and triumphant.A reason she could use these words is catch these reader with words that are very detail and professional words.

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Daniella Cortez Daniella Cortez (Oct 09 2020 5:24PM) : I think she used all this words to describe the scene so the reader can visualize the scene.To see like if we were in the scene just by describing the scene.
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Susana Valencia Susana Valencia (Oct 09 2020 10:17PM) : _" more

Some words that stood out for me is Triumphant , bliss , and incanescent . I think Nadine decided to use theses words to give the reader a sight of what she was seeing

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Kevin Leija Kevin Leija (Oct 09 2020 10:17PM) : The words that stuck out to me were triumphant,elude,and bliss because they are more detailed words.
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Leonel Arreola Leonel Arreola (Oct 09 2020 11:40PM) : Some words that stick out for me were vicarious,clutched , elude.because she wanted to have a clear and more detailed writing.
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Mr Arturo Resendiz Mr Arturo Resendiz (Oct 07 2020 1:02PM) : so what she said was nasty fierce awful fiery and etc because all those words would have meaning in the future and after all that she would be great
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Julian Vela Julian Vela (Oct 08 2020 5:51PM) : Some descriptive words she uses are fierce, fiery, bliss, clutched, and triumphant. Those are deep and meaningful words to use in that paragraph and adds more detail and description.
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Yaritza Reyes Yaritza Reyes (Oct 09 2020 8:43PM) : Some words that she uses in her writing are fresh, glowing, burned, and clutched. These words make the reader transport himself to the precise place in which the writer is describing, you can also feel the emotions.
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Karina Garcia Karina Garcia (Jan 12 2021 4:52PM) : Some of the words that stick out to me was elude, bliss, disuse. I think she used those words to be more detailed and describe what is happening .
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In the part of South Africa where we lived, we had not only fire under our feet; we had, two, a complication of tunnels as intricate as one of those delicate chunks of worm cast you’d find on the seashore. All the towns along the Witwatersrand, and the older parts of Johannesburg itself, are undermined. Living there, you think about it as little as you think about the fact that, whatever your work and whatever your life, you’re reason for performing where you do and living it where you do is the existence of the gold mines. Yet you are never allowed to forget entirely that the ground is not solid beneath you.

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Ms. Jenn Rodriguez Ms. Jenn Rodriguez (Sep 30 2020 10:25AM) : Question 5 more

In her town, what were people motivated by? Why?

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Samantha Villalpando Samantha Villalpando (Oct 04 2020 11:45PM) : In her town,people were motivated by the idea of them actually being able to find gold.Thats why they kept on digging and digging and never stopped,even if their own hometown ended up looking horrible.
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Mr Orlando Orozco Mr Orlando Orozco (Oct 05 2020 1:38PM) : :) more

People were motivated that they would find gold in the sand and get a pretty good amount of money over that.

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Elizabeth Rodriguez Elizabeth Rodriguez (Oct 05 2020 2:38PM) : Many people in her town were motivated because of the gold . I believe that that they were pretty motivated to find the gold because if they found the gold they would get a good amount of money for the gold .
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Alondra Perez Alondra Perez (Oct 07 2020 8:05PM) : People were more motivated by finding gold. This is because they thought that if they dug up a lot of gold, it would be worth a lot of money.
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Aimee Pineda Aimee Pineda (Oct 08 2020 3:28PM) : In her town people were motivated by the idea of finding gold someday .I say this because people will be found digging and digging to find gold .
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Erick Villicana Erick Villicana (Oct 08 2020 9:45PM) : Erick Villicana more

They were motivated by finding gold were they lived.

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Emilio Rodriguez Emilio Rodriguez (Oct 09 2020 10:33AM) : gold more

in her town people were motivated to find gold

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Raul Hernandez Raul Hernandez (Oct 09 2020 2:57PM) : Response. more

In her town the people were quickly motivated of them having a good chance of gold, so as a result they would non-stop dig for the search of gold.

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Daniella Cortez Daniella Cortez (Oct 09 2020 5:26PM) : Her people were motivitaded by the search of gold they worked as along they had the idea of finding gold and becoming rich no matter the way they lived like.
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Susana Valencia Susana Valencia (Oct 09 2020 10:20PM) : +:+ more

In her hometown people were motivated of finding gold . So they decided to dig and dig until they find something valuable and would be worth a lot of money.

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Kevin Leija Kevin Leija (Oct 09 2020 10:29PM) : In her town the people were motivated by the amount of gold that they had in other words how wealthy they were
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Leonel Arreola Leonel Arreola (Oct 09 2020 11:41PM) : Many people in her town were motivated because of the gold,therefore because they thought that if they dug up a lot of gold, it would be worth a lot of money.
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Evelyn Lopez Evelyn Lopez (Oct 10 2020 1:29AM) : The thing that motivated the people in her town was the idea to find gold because they wanted to be wealthy so they could trade gold for money.
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Mr Arturo Resendiz Mr Arturo Resendiz (Oct 07 2020 1:03PM) : so there motivated was gold that's why they keep digging more and more because they were doing for gold only
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Julian Vela Julian Vela (Oct 08 2020 5:52PM) : Most people in the town took pride an joy in finding gold. As more and more gold was found people got motivated that they would find more and more.
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Yaritza Reyes Yaritza Reyes (Oct 09 2020 8:45PM) : People were motivated by the gold mines because you can sell it and get money in return and when you have money you can have more things and have a better lifestyle then that is what motivates people to be in town and keep working.
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Karina Garcia Karina Garcia (Jan 12 2021 4:53PM) : People were motivated because they know that if they find gold they would get a lot of money.
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