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23rd September 2020

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The Cause and Effect of Domestic Terrorism

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The attacks of 9/11/2001 changed many security aspects in everyday life. From households putting new cameras and security measurements in place, all the way to the national government taking precautions. Airports checking every bag to metal detecting devices in stadium, arenas, and public museums. Now in 2020 we have domestic terrorists' organizations such as Antifa and White Supremacy. How did one attack to one country change the entire world in some aspect of safety? What is the life-long effect(s) of these domestic terrorists?

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Courtney Joyner
Courtney Joyner (Oct 21 2020 9:22AM) : Your main topic need to be more clear. I am assuming that it is how the 9/11 attacks effected America, but including it would be easier for readers to understand. Great topic willy!:)))))
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Courtney Joyner
Courtney Joyner (Oct 21 2020 9:24AM) : HAVE A FANTASTIC DAY WILLIAM
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Courtney Joyner (Oct 21 2020 9:21AM) : Maybe add a sentence before this to pull readers in. For example... On September 11th, 2001 a national catastrophe happened that altered some aspects of life forever.
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Courtney Joyner (Oct 21 2020 9:15AM) : These two sentences provide great examples! try combining them in the same style.
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Courtney Joyner (Oct 21 2020 9:19AM) : I like how you included these organization names! Good job!
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Courtney Joyner (Oct 21 2020 9:18AM) : you need a thesis statement to layout and guide what your essay will be about. I wound not put questions there instead maybe put something like... "Our country has been greatly effected by terrorist attacks by the increase of security,___, and ___
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