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"Resilience" by Alex Elle


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look at you.
still standing
after being
knocked down
and thrown out.

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Oct 26
Paul Hankins Paul Hankins (Oct 26 2020 5:51PM) : Syllabic Counts more

Line One: 3
Line Two: 3
Line Three: 3-4
Line Four: 2
Line Five: 3

Pretty consistent. I wonder if the other stanzas will follow.

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Oct 30
Karisten Balmer Karisten Balmer (Oct 30 2020 11:10AM) : Aha! [Edited] more

The following stanzas use a fairly consistent syllabic count. This could suggest the literal “resilience” of the poem. The stanzas to not change too much. Time after time, the same count repeats, which is what resilience itself represents.

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Oct 28
Natalie Day Natalie Day (Oct 28 2020 11:54AM) : connection to outside source more

Resilience is the capability to recover quickly from the difficulties life throws one’s way. This poem written by Alex Elle has the title of Resilience. Elle uses this poem to emphasize the power resilience can hold. In “Defying Definition,” by Shaun David Hutchinson. Hutchinson stresses the importance of the definitions people give words. In this poem Elle gives resilience power. Through this poem she gives resilience the meaning of getting back up, remaining hopeful, growing, being, and standing despite all life throws at someone. This poem gives resilience power to improve lives and give people a meaning to the word.

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Ryan Emly Ryan Emly (Oct 30 2020 12:13PM) : #1 Title and Poem Synthesis more

The title of this poem is “resilience.” Throughout the poem, the reader is being recognized for their acts of resilience, such as still standing after being knocked down. Not only is the resilience recognized, but it is praised, as if to show the reader they deserve to be recognized for their resilience. At the same time, the poem serves as a reminder to never stop being resilient, as it is a very important part of achieving success in life.

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Oct 26
Paul Hankins Paul Hankins (Oct 26 2020 5:50PM) : Poetic Sounds/Line Breaks more

See how line one is “enjambed” even though there is no conventional capitalizing? This allows for that line break to be a little bit more powerful with the ST sound coming out of STill STanding.

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Oct 28
Jessica Oltman Jessica Oltman (Oct 28 2020 10:18AM) : A look into "Resilience" more

All of the stanzas have the same set up. They are directed at “you” the audience and is very general in the issue "you are struggling with at hand so just about anyone could be able to relate to the poem. It them describes what “you” are still doing ,such as standing or thriving, and then the poet describes what has metaphorically happened to “you,” like being “knocked down” mentally due to a struggle one is suffering through.

look at you.
still growing
after being
picked and plucked
and prodded out of
your home.

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Oct 30
Jocelyn French Jocelyn French (Oct 30 2020 2:55PM) : Entry point: Make a Connection: Poem to Heart/ Feelings: more

The poem by Alex Elle titled Resilience, to me means to never give up. From paragraph 2 the author states “look at you. still growing after being picked and plucked and prodded out of your home.” Especially right now we can not give up and continue on with life.

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Benjamin Landers Benjamin Landers (Oct 30 2020 3:45PM) : make a connection more

This poem is the embodiment of resilience. Being in a lot of positions I have gotten myself into, resilience is not a choice, it is just an action. you always have to be resilient.

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Oct 26
Karisten Balmer Karisten Balmer (Oct 26 2020 11:48AM) : Entry point 3: Recipient/Audience: Who seems to be the intended audience for the poem? [Edited] more

At the start of the poem, it is clear the intended audience is everyone reading – you. In line one, we read “Look at you.” Elle uses this poem as a personal address to acknowledge the strength we have within ourselves.

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Oct 30
Benjamin Landers Benjamin Landers (Oct 30 2020 3:37PM) : One step further more

I completely agree, Karis. The poem is intended for everyone, but one step further, it is intended for everyone in NEED. The poem is for anyone who needs to see it/read it.Sometimes people need a lift, and this poem does that.

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Oct 30
Meredith Antz Meredith Antz (Oct 30 2020 12:47PM) : Amidst a Negative Atmosphere more

The poet, Alex Elle, takes the topic resilience and maintains this theme throughout the entire poem. Out of every line within the four stanza poem, this line “still growing” (line 7) sticks out to me. The poem seems to be based around cheering someone on and letting that someone know they survived their struggle. While as readers, we are never introduced to the struggle. This just allows for more creativity to blossom. “Still growing” (line 7) possesses multiple meanings, and the meaning can change with its location in the poem. Its current location gives this aura of being a miracle. Within the second stanza, the narrator expresses disbelief that the subject of the poem is still capable of growing and succeeding. Being “picked and plucked and prodded” (line 9-10) and “defeated and disassembled” (line 16), it should come as no surprise that the narrator would be in disbelief. However, what truly captures one’s attention is that each stanza is being directed at the reader. With the use of “you”, Alex Elle allows readers to not only feel empowered reading about someone succeeding. But discover themselves being the subject of success.

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Meredith Antz Meredith Antz (Oct 30 2020 12:48PM) : Experience more

Amidst the corona virus outbreak, many people have felt dejected and lost. Yet this poem gives readers a chance to recognize they are still here pushing through. They are “still dancing and singing” (line 13-14). “Resilience allows this space for people to feel proud about the subject in the poem. While also recognizing they too have managed to persevere.

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Zachary Milton Zachary Milton (Oct 27 2020 9:12PM) : Imagery and Symbolism more

Do you know what the most resilient thing on this Earth is? A weed. They’ll grow through anything-gravel, dirt, rocks, concrete. When Alex Elle uses the phrase “picked and plucked”, she is using imagery to compare our resilience to that of a weed. Even when a weed is plucked, it will grow back as something more-more beautiful; disguised like a flower, and it will be more difficult to pluck.

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Jasmine Murphy Jasmine Murphy (Oct 28 2020 10:49AM) : Interesting POV more

Zach, I read your comment about a weed being the most resilient thing on earth. This made me smile because year after year, my family and I go out and pull weeds that have grown in the garden. Year after year, no matter how many times we pull them, they always come back. What I’m saying is that I never thought of weeds being resilient, they’ve been more of a pest in my opinion. I liked how you pulled imagery and symbolism when I was not able to find that on my own.

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look at you.
still dancing
and singing
after being
defeated and disassembled.

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Oct 28
Hanna Ortiz Hanna Ortiz (Oct 28 2020 12:12PM) : Overarching Theme more

The overarching theme can be perseverance. No matter the fall or defeat “you” still get back up and still grow. Alex Elle is also sending a message of encouragement.

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Karisten Balmer Karisten Balmer (Oct 29 2020 12:50AM) : Pushing this one step further, [Edited] more

I think we could say this “message of encouragement” could be what Elle wanted/needed to hear at some point(s) in her life. The only date I could find associated with this poem is March 22, 2019, and I think the author carries the word “resilience” with her as her life motto. It appears in our poem here as well as in her upcoming writing course this year.
On alexelle.com, what I assume to be her official website, she has a link tucked into the top of the landing page titled “RECLAIMING RESILIENCE,” which is the title of her fourth quarter writing course. Elle explains this “will prepare us for 2021 and remind us of our ability to reclaim our emotional strength.”
At the bottom of her website’s landing page, there are a few of her instagram posts. The one that stands out the most is from June 22, 2020. It is a message on a sticky note that says “dear younger self, I see you. I am here for you now. I love you.”
To bring everything together, I think this poem is a message to Elle’s younger self to remind her how strong she is and that she can get through anything.

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Rachel Buchanan Rachel Buchanan (Oct 30 2020 11:23AM) : Imagery/Word use more

The poet uses dejected words to make the reader feel the downcast tone in reference/contrast to the light words (e.g. love, hopeful, etc.)

look at you, love.
still here and hopeful
after it all.

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Autumn Fosse Autumn Fosse (Oct 26 2020 12:06PM) : Experience more

After months of being locked away in our houses like Rapunzel, we were finally able to break away, and get out hair cut too… And seemingly trying to get better after a long battle of isolation. The message says, “we did it, we made it.”

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Karisten Balmer Karisten Balmer (Oct 30 2020 11:18AM) : Analysis more

With the past eight months in mind and the media coverage we have had, I think this poem could speak directly to the people. It tells the audience to “keep pushing.” Even with everything has pushed “you” down, you are “still standing…still growing… still dancing… still here and hopeful.”

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Karisten Balmer Karisten Balmer (Oct 26 2020 12:12PM) : Repetition more

The beginning two lines of each stanza repeat with “look at you. still…” The author emphasizes the intended audience of the poem by almost calling on them. “You” displays a want for connection with the audience. By using “you,” Elle wants the audience to feel personally spoken to. With the title of this piece being “Resilience” and “still” immediately following “look at you” in each stanza, the author is able to strengthen what it means to be truly “resilient.”

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Jarrett Garr Jarrett Garr (Oct 28 2020 11:48AM) : I believe that when Elle says "Love" I believe it is meant as love in the noun form, not as a name. Meaning that love is the most resilient thing on earth. Love knows no age, race, gender, title, or status. And love always wins. more

Love is the only reason human life exist.

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Oct 29
Karisten Balmer Karisten Balmer (Oct 29 2020 1:01AM) : But also, more

Notice the comma just before “love.” This could signify an address to her younger self, someone who this poem may be intended for. in this case “love”
would be her term of endearment of choice. This makes sense because when reviewing Elle’s website and social media platforms, I found a strong theme-self-care, self-love and self-acceptance.

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Karisten Balmer Karisten Balmer (Oct 29 2020 1:05AM) : The resilience of love more

It is strong. And reading over the poem with love as the emotional state in mind, it becomes evident that Elle is emphasizing the resilience of love.

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Victoria Hargadon Victoria Hargadon (Oct 26 2020 5:23PM) : Title and Poem Synthesis more

The whole poem accurately portrays its title, Resilience, because each of the 4 stanzas is about “you” refusing to give up despite all the hardships you’ve endured.

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Madelynn Keinath Madelynn Keinath (Oct 29 2020 2:08PM) : More about this, more

I agree with this. These stanzas are comforting and have an act of resilience, or toughness. It shows that the author is acknowledging how strong the reader is. Alex Elle does not know the hardships and obstacles the reader has been through, but they know that since the reader is here and reading the poem, they have resilience. They have the strength to overcome anything that comes their way.

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Paul Hankins Paul Hankins (Oct 26 2020 5:53PM) : Word Choice more

What is a gerund? How is a gerund created? What does the list look like if we just pulled the gerunds following, “look at you:”

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Ana Moctezuma Ana Moctezuma (Oct 28 2020 11:37AM) : Response #1 [Edited] more

I searched up gerund and I read that gerund works as multiple functions within a sentence. it says that it looks like a verb and but “functions” as a noun. It is usually created and can be seen with the “-ing” words.

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Ana Moctezuma Ana Moctezuma (Oct 28 2020 11:39AM) : Response #2 more

look at you.
still
after
knocked down
and thrown out.

look at you.
still
after
picked and plucked
and prodded out of
your home.
look at you.
still
and
after
defeated and disassembled.

look at you, love.
still here and hopeful
after it all.

The result if the gerund is taken out.

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Oct 28
Emma Holland Emma Holland (Oct 28 2020 7:52AM) : Notable Rhythm and Flow of the Poem more

Each stanza is broken into two parts. The period after “look at you” creates emphasis while the rest of the stanza flows together.

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Paul Hankins Paul Hankins (Oct 28 2020 10:53AM) : Interesting and an Invitation more

So, the “form”-ula becomes:

look at ________
still __________
after __________
and ____________

How might this “stem” be used to affirm ourselves in poetry? Or someone else? In poetry or in experience?

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Ana Moctezuma Ana Moctezuma (Oct 28 2020 11:48AM) : Proposition more

This poem fits into today and reading it now. All of us are learning but our growth is strong. We are slowly adjusting. This poem now for it can be useful for inspiration and a reminder for how we have come.

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Jaclyn Emly Jaclyn Emly (Oct 28 2020 12:12PM) : Narrator/Poet: Who is the narrator of the poem? more

The narrator of the poem is someone watching over you and observing you and your way through life. The narrator uses “look at you” to explain what “you” have done which he has taken note of.

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Grahm Kerber Grahm Kerber (Oct 29 2020 12:18PM) : Another thought on entry point #2 more

In this case, the narrator is the poet. And building on what Karis said, the audience is us-you. She is writing this poem to us-you because she wants us to know that there is always somebody that cares about us-you.There is always somebody that can appreciate us-you and all of the hard work we-you do.

And again building with Karis, this poem could be addressed to her younger self. And to any young reader that needs to hear these words of encouragement. “You are resilient. You are good. I appreciate you.”

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Abigail Grimm Abigail Grimm (Oct 28 2020 2:24PM) : Poem Connection more

I immediately made a connection from this poem to my Ivy Tech psychology class. It just so happens that today I did a full lesson on resilience. The psychological definition of resilience is the ability to mentally or emotionally cope with a crisis or to return to pre-crisis status quickly. This definition fits this poem perfectly which also explains the title and poem synthesis. Throughout this poem it is explaining someone who has gone through a hard time but is still going through daily life like normal. They are strong and have pushed through the hard times they encountered.

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Jon Hurley Jon Hurley (Oct 30 2020 9:54AM) : The perspective of a point of view more

What I immediately wonder after reading this is “what happens next?” And truly, there is no way to tell, not that there ever was supposed to be a way to tell. Part of the beauty of the piece is how this is designed for a broad and diverse audience. Even with that in mind, I cannot help but wonder who is talking to who. The seemingly most obvious answer is the narrator is talking to his or her self. Like our article of the week, perhaps it is a meta moment of reflection. Another thought is that this is coming from a caring individual. Perhaps a friend or even a paternal person. Another thought is that it is from an adversary. Though I know this may not be pertinent, it shocked me how much the tone of the poem changes. It transforms from something caring and hopeful to something snide and harsh. This is just the ramblings of a thought I felt interesting.

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