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AP English Language and Composition ________________________________

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FRQ #1: Synthesis- A How to Guide _________________________________

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When you write a synthesis essay, your focus should be on “synthesizing” provided source material in order to support your own opinion. As the prompt page will remind you, “your argument should be the focus of your essay,” so make sure you develop an argument in which you use source material to support your ideas, not one in which you use the source material solely to build your argument. You get 15 minutes to read through the source material, but you can start writing before that time is up.

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Sut-Brang N Sut-Brang N (Nov 30 2020 8:50AM) : This is the key to writing synthesis essay
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Miracle S Miracle S (Nov 30 2020 2:05PM) : This is our primary focus for this unit.
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Lexington C Lexington C (Nov 30 2020 2:05PM) : the information/ sources are given and you don't have to think back to past experiences and knowledge
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Jada S Jada S (Nov 30 2020 1:12PM) : This is just like an argument essay except the knowledge needed comes from passages, not prior.
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Katelyn V Katelyn V (Nov 30 2020 2:04PM) : Ideas more

This explains that the essay shouldn’t talk about what is expressed in the sources, but should only use the sources to support their argument.

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Lexington C Lexington C (Nov 30 2020 2:06PM) : make sure u are on track and not scatterbrained around the topic
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Start by understanding the prompt: The prompt will generally provide you with some background about the issue at hand so that you know what the topic is, and then will provide you with a focus - the focus will generally prompt you both to be expository in your writing (that is, to explain or enumerate ideas), and also argumentative.

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Paul L Paul L (Nov 30 2020 8:51AM) : Expository and argumentative writing will help set up connecting the relationships of ideas and how they work together.
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Nyla P Nyla P (Nov 30 2020 1:08PM) : Introduces key ideas for making a prompt and how it connects to your topic.
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Brooke P Brooke P (Nov 30 2020 2:05PM) : Before you go into writing you always want to know what you are writing about. more

This gives you an idea that you will be given info on the prompt and background info on it as well. So make sure to use what you have to your advantage.

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Maria P Maria P (Nov 30 2020 2:16PM) : If your able to understand the prompt before hand it helps you develop ideas and maintain a connection to the rest of the topic that is being given. [Edited]
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Consider your opinion:

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Rhiannon T Rhiannon T (Nov 30 2020 2:07PM) : most important more

I feel that this the the most important direction to remember because it really is the basis of your entire essay. You can’t write anything else without first deciding what you’re going to write, which viewpoint you’re going to look at things from.

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Start by quickly thinking about your initial reaction to the topic. Jot down some of your own opinions and ideas before you begin reading the source material. Why? Because then you can look for help in backing up your opinion, not just look for an opinion in the sources. That way, YOUR ARGUMENT IS THE FOCUS! Form a working position before reading any of the sources.

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Princess A Princess A (Nov 30 2020 1:12PM) : This process is to help better prepare your thoughts and knowing what the idea presented by the source may influence your outlook on the subject.
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Titus G Titus G (Nov 30 2020 2:04PM) : focus more

The 1st sentence is a factual. focus should definitely be on synthesizing

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Cameron B Cameron B (Nov 30 2020 8:48AM) : how that part makes you feel while reading the story,text or source
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Madelyn A Madelyn A (Nov 30 2020 2:07PM) : It's good to get your initial opinion so that you aren't forming an opinion based on the sources.
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Cameron B Cameron B (Nov 30 2020 8:49AM) : it best helps with the processing of knowing what your opinion is about the story,text,or source
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Farrell M Farrell M (Nov 30 2020 2:20PM) : Important more

It’s helpful to be organized with how you write for essays like these

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Kahlan F Kahlan F (Nov 30 2020 8:50AM) : even if the source does not support your claim, can evidence be pulled strategically to make it seem that way? more

I don’t know if this is frowned upon.

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Melissa E Melissa E (Nov 30 2020 8:51AM) : Good question --- more

Nope…not allowed. We call that “cherry picking.” It would be marked as misrepresenting the source

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Miracle S Miracle S (Nov 30 2020 2:12PM) : Your essay should focus on your argument but must use the prompt for evidence and information instead of personal experience prior.
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Lance B Lance B (Nov 30 2020 2:04PM) : Position is like claim, what do you stand for and how does that tie in with the prompt at hand.

Read/ Annotate the Source Material:

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Marie S Marie S (Nov 30 2020 2:07PM) : Do not summarize the source material
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Now that you have a good idea of what you will be arguing about, it is time to figure out how to support your opinion using the source material as backup. Remember that doing the synthesis essay is your chance to enter the conversation about a topic in an educated and informed manner.

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Cameron B Cameron B (Nov 30 2020 8:52AM) : when you took the time to think about the sources in the text you should have formed an idea about what is was you wanted to do so now you can go into the sources to help back everything that your saying
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Princess A Princess A (Nov 30 2020 1:09PM) : The source helps the audience by helping establish an idea or opinion
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Lance B Lance B (Nov 30 2020 2:06PM) : It can also give the audience a deeper understanding and how that idea applies to the real world.
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Jada S Jada S (Nov 30 2020 1:23PM) : I'm not making it similar to a rhetorical essay where I am evaluating someone else's position and perspective, I am taking my perspective and writing about it while using evidence from the passages to support that.
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Madelyn A Madelyn A (Nov 30 2020 2:09PM) : You have to use the sources to back up your claim, not to form it.
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The source material will cover various angles and complexities of the topic. Take a moment on each source to think about how that particular source either contradicts, supports or extends the assertion of others. Why? Because then, as you add source material to your argument, you can use some sources to back each other up, or as non-examples of what you are trying to prove. Remember that the prompt only asks you to use three sources - if you don’t find a source useful or credible, move on.

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Taylor J Taylor J (Nov 30 2020 8:50AM) : Sources [Edited] more

The provided sources can sometimes make or break you, therefore organization is key. You don’t want to become overwhelmed.

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Karla V Karla V (Nov 30 2020 1:11PM) : sources more

The topic will not fit into a single idea. It is important to be careful what sources you choose because while they may support your position, they may be irrelevant to your unifying idea(s).

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Kaitlyn S Kaitlyn S (Nov 30 2020 8:47AM) : Positions more

Finding out a position of the sources so you can know what to use for opposition or for evidence.

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Brooke P Brooke P (Nov 30 2020 2:09PM) : It is always a good idea to have an idea of each source. more

You can use the sources to help further explain your example, claim, or even another source. To make it even more clear on your statements.

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Rhiannon T Rhiannon T (Nov 30 2020 2:09PM) : interesting more

I always find it interesting when other essays use this tactic, so it would be good to remember for my own essay

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Charlie L Charlie L (Nov 30 2020 8:52AM) : Choosing your topics and sources are your most important part of your writing.

As you go, put a S or R (supports/refutes) at the top of each source to indicate where the source stands on your position.

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Madison W Madison W (Nov 30 2020 8:54AM) : sources more

helps organize your thoughts so it will be easier for you when actually writing

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Use this quick organizer to help you with each source:

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Claims (or key points)

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Evidence to use

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Unique perspective

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Connection to other sources

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Write a Thesis: With knowledge of the prompt and the source material, develop a thesis in which you identify your point of view on the topic - it helps if you enumerate, in your thesis, how you’ll prove your point.

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Kaitlyn S Kaitlyn S (Nov 30 2020 8:48AM) : Thesis more

The thesis I think is the most important part of the essay because it shows what you’re arguing about and it grabs the reader’s attention.

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Taylor J Taylor J (Nov 30 2020 8:56AM) : Thesis more

I couldn’t have said it any better. Another thing to remember is to keep your writing similar to your thesis.

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Argumentative thesis structure:

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Aiden D Aiden D (Nov 30 2020 1:11PM) : strategy more

For me this is the most useful part when I’m writing. This is how I worry about splitting up and different points I would want to make.

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Lexington C Lexington C (Nov 30 2020 2:04PM) : outline your paragraph thoroughly with given sources
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X. however, A and B; therefore, Y.

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Devin K Devin K (Nov 30 2020 2:05PM) : Important Format more

This format for thesis construction really sets you up to have a good rest of your essay. It makes your argument strong and if you follow it throughout the rest of the essay then you will have a good focus and argument in the end

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Brooke P Brooke P (Nov 30 2020 2:10PM) : Always good to remember this thesis structure more

You don’t always have to use it but you could use it to get an idea of what you want to say and your reasons. Then you could write down your final thesis in that same structure or in a different one.

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Ready, Set, Argue!

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By now, you know how this goes. You come up with a statement of your opinion, then you write several paragraphs backing up your opinion.

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Karla V Karla V (Nov 30 2020 1:14PM) : . more

Much like an argumentative essay, but with sources given to you

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Princess A Princess A (Nov 30 2020 1:14PM) : Would this mean further explaining or explaining while using evidence and less of an emotional touch to the writing?
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State clearly, in each paragraph, which point it is making to support your assertion.

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Cameron B Cameron B (Nov 30 2020 8:55AM) : make it clear on your opinion and what you are writing about
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Use source material that illustrates the points you make, and cite them appropriately (make sure you are consistent with how you cite - either use the “Source A, Source B . . . “ citation, or the descriptions in parentheses. Don’t go back and forth.

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Trent E Trent E (Nov 30 2020 1:10PM) : Sources more

Use sources how they should be used, and be sure to credit them so your argument is plausible

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Allison L Allison L (Nov 30 2020 1:26PM) : stay strong more

Don’t change your position.

Make sure source material FOLLOWS your reasons - don’t use it to lead a paragraph, as this makes it feel as though you are writing a literature review rather than developing your own argument.

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Trent E Trent E (Nov 30 2020 1:11PM) : Evidence more

The sources are supposed to provide evidence and support to your thesis, not as an argument itself

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Karla V Karla V (Nov 30 2020 1:13PM) : sources more

Make sure you are forming your own opinion rather than just changing the words and structure of an argument given in the sources.

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Marie S Marie S (Nov 30 2020 2:10PM) : The reason, then source material as proof; not source material, then reason more

One wants to use the materials given to support the idea, not have your idea back up the source material.

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Be sure to analyze the source material - you can do this by explaining how it illustrates your point, or discrediting it with another source. Always think in terms of how you are supporting your overall argument - and remember that this is YOUR argument, not the source material’s argument.

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Sut-Brang N Sut-Brang N (Nov 30 2020 8:52AM) : This is where you want to use the source to help your argument
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Mya B Mya B (Nov 30 2020 1:13PM) : ... more

I think this is the best way to support the claim with other sources.

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Use a sufficient amount of source material. How should you use? The prompt will usually say three sources, but it is a good idea to use at least four, just in case you didn’t quite understand one of the sources.

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Kaitlyn S Kaitlyn S (Nov 30 2020 8:50AM) : Sources more

A major part of the argument is using sources and it’s important to remember to use enough of them.

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Taylor J Taylor J (Nov 30 2020 8:52AM) : Sources more

If the required amount of sources is 3 it is easier to ensure you have everything you need by aiming higher just in case one source isn’t fully supported.

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Asia A Asia A (Nov 30 2020 8:51AM) : Contingency more

Us getting used to using more than enough sources allows us to have a greater chance at scoring as many points as possible in that section of AP grading.

Try to integrate your source material as smoothly and naturally as possible into your sentences.

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Devin K Devin K (Nov 30 2020 2:09PM) : Best way to input a source in your essay more

The best way for you to use a source effectively is to write your argument until you get to a part that is not your own knowledge. This is where you want to integrate sources. If it is something you learned from or got from the sources, make a small citation for said information and make it flow within the paragraph. Be sure to use the citation for YOUR argument and explain how and why it supports what you are trying to say

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Christine N Christine N (Nov 30 2020 2:10PM) : doing this will make you sound more knowledgeable and will allow the reader to trust/listen to your argument
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Madison M Madison M (Nov 30 2020 2:11PM) : Sources [Edited] more

Does how naturally we integrate the sources impact our score? And how do we integrate naturally?

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That’s about it. In the case of the synthesis, the biggest tip I can give you is to focus on making your argument and having the sources help you. Don’t rely on them to make your case.

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Ricky D Ricky D (Nov 30 2020 2:08PM) : The point of this last part is to emphasize how sources are important for building an argument, but the argument does not come from the sources; it comes from the writer of the essay. The essay should include the writer's perspective as well.
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Synthesis: It’s your world, the sources are just living in it.

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Kahlan F Kahlan F (Nov 30 2020 8:52AM) : The original form of this quote was about Frank Sinatra from Dean Martin, therefore this is allusion.
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