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JUNE 2014

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A review of Updike by Adam Begley

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Reading Adam Begley’s book on John Updike confirms my beliefs that biography matters and that first biographies of major writers invariably leave more to be explored. Begley shows that while it may have seemed effortless for Updike to write sixty-odd books, this production took a lot of effort. Updike was more disciplined than almost all of his contemporaries, except for the likes of Philip Roth and Joyce Carol Oates. And like these two, he suffered at the hands of undiscerning critics, who think a major novel cannot be produced in less than five years. But as some writers know, the more you write, the more the words accumulate, eventually having an incremental impact that can sustain an author like Updike over a lifetime. Producing many books results in some being better than others, a truth that seems inevitable. Rather than a reason for us to deplore a prolific artist, a sizeable body of work affords an opportunity to admire a dedicated craftsman unafraid of failure. Begley writes as an Updike partisan, noting the writer’s faults to be sure, but never breaking party ranks. He also gives Updike’s critics—John Aldridge and David Foster Wallace, for example—their due. Begley is a good literary advocate, although he sometimes seems blinded, seeking only the biography in the fiction. His verdicts are not surprising. The Rabbit novels are Updike’s best fiction, along with, of course, his many short stories. Updike’s light verse and poetry are less important but deserve more attention than they have received. He is given high marks as a book reviewer with a remarkable range, including art commentary—although Begley treats Updike like an amateur art historian who skillfully conveys his impressions but is not to be taken too seriously.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Aug 24 2014 6:25PM) : Why does biography matter?
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Biographies matter because they let us understand more about the author and his/her works. One’s life path can change the persons writing: style, concerns and values a person might have given the life the person had. These factors contribute to writing and the more we can know about an author, the more we will understand and see in the work.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Sep 30 2014 7:11AM) : And what is the role of the critics, if biography plays the role you say it does?
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Critics, especially those who have researched the same people, can be seen as judges of the truth. And of course when reading a bio it should not only be truthful, but still entertaining and exciting for the readers.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 02 2014 7:54AM) : Are there ways that critics may not be helpful?
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Critics evaluate the work, entertain the reader, suggest whether this particular piece of work is worth the attention.
A biographer’s goal is to get a detailed picture of someone’s life, to understand what happened behind the scenes. Therefore, biographies reveal not only a private life, but the historic paysage that surrounded it.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 02 2014 7:54AM) : And what about undiscerning critics?
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An undiscerning critic, who lacks judgement or insight, is either dismissed by audience right away or slowly fades over time. A critic is either discerning, or not a critic at all, being not able to support his/her opinion with strong argument.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 03 2014 8:15AM) : I think you are missing something here: undiscerning critics can sometimes harm a writer's reputation.
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They can, but overtime things fall into places. Undiscerning critics fail to tell the truth, and that’s why their opinions don’t last long.
They can hurt the reputation, but only in the short run.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 07 2014 7:39AM) : Actually undiscerning opinions can last a long time with lots of people repeating them.
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That is probably just part of life, there has always been an opposition of opinions, with supporters on each side.
There was a good example in McLeese book of an undiscerning critic, who reviewed movie Lolita and very harshly criticized it, movie though lasted but his opinion didn’t.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 13 2014 7:04AM) : Sometimes critical opinion hardens and it is very difficult to overcome.
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Trudy Knockless Trudy Knockless (Oct 10 2014 12:22PM) : Biographies matter because it allows it gives background details of the author and allows you to understand why the author chose that subject matter and why it's relevant to him/her.
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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 11 2014 8:33AM) : And yet literary critics often do not want to know or do not care about the biography. Why?
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Stephen Herman Stephen Herman (Oct 01 2014 10:29AM) : Agreed. The sensation of reading a bio is similar to that of experiencing a work of art one way when first viewing it then a different way altogether when you learn of the history of the work and what the artist was going through during its creation.
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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 02 2014 7:55AM) : Biographies can provide context. Critics can provide context. So what is the difference between them?
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The purpose of the writing separates biographers from critics, and the purpose affects the style and form. A biographer wants to tell the story of someone’s life, while critic would want to evaluate how well was this story told.
Audience can also separate the two. A biography might be more read by the adults,as young people often don’t have time to read extensive biographies, but they might prefer a short condensed review of it by the critic.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 03 2014 8:16AM) : You make some good distinctions.
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Some argue that an artist’s work should never be interpreted though his/her biography. Others believe that it is extremely important to know the life of an artist, as the work is filtered through life’s experiences.
I agree with the second opinion, that a biography gives a deep insight into the artist’s work.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 02 2014 7:56AM) : So why do you suppose some critics are resistant to biography?
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They might lack the information the biographer does, making it harder to evaluate the facts and accuracy of events.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 03 2014 8:16AM) : Can you think of other reasons?
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A biography is not a fiction, it is filled with hard facts, which critics might find challenging to argue with.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 07 2014 7:40AM) : Any other reasons?
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Critics avoid details not to give away a plot, it is not quite the same with biography, in which details are crucial.
It might also require the critic to know where the biographer comes from.
And critic would have to be very creative trying to incorporate all these pieces into one interesting review.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 08 2014 6:48AM) : There are still other reasons.
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A biographical fallacy can mislead a critic, for this reason he must be familiar with a biography very close to see what has a biographer missed or misinterpreted. I thought it was the main challenge, can’t really think of any reasons,or why voice and style should be a problem.
A critic’s voice, if he has one and established it, would be heard throughout any review, whether it is a review of biography or fiction.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 12 2014 7:37AM) : There are still other reasons why critics don't like biogtraphies.
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Thomas Seubert Thomas Seubert (Oct 01 2014 1:17PM) : To Uncover more

The role of biographer is to uncover something about a subject that was previously unknown. The purpose should be to inform and shed light on a subject’s life.

In the case of first biographers, it is hard to uncover everything or explore every avenue of a subject’s life. It’s difficult to blaze a trail.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 02 2014 7:56AM) : Does the biography have to uncover something new?
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Thomas Seubert Thomas Seubert (Oct 03 2014 10:42PM) : Yes more

If the biography doesn’t discover something, then what’s the point? At the very least, it should look at a life in a different light than previous biographies.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 04 2014 7:36AM) : Yes, if not new information, new interpretatation, which is a sense is new information.
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Biographies tell it like it is. As mentioned, though many believed Updike effortlessly wrote sixty-plus books, Begley is able to show that in actuality it took a lot of effort. Biographies can also but isn’t limited to, taking the opportunity to deeply explore, appreciate and evaluate their subject.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 03 2014 8:17AM) : That's right. Sometimes what a biography offers is not new information but a new interpretation.
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Kyle Deane Kyle Deane (Oct 09 2014 9:20PM) : Biographies matter because they are a preservation of the lifeprint that someone leaves. Being responsible for that task grows both the writer as well as the reader.
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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 10 2014 7:59AM) : lifeprint. I've never seen that. I don't think it is a word, but it should be.
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Biographies are necessary aspects of understanding literary works because they allow readers to reach into the personal world of an author and figure out what exactly makes them tick, what spurred their literary achievements, and why they chose to pursue the path they did. Often, we see pieces of the author/artist in the pieces that they produce. Getting insight into the creative process and emotional reasoning allows readers to better understand the work, the historical significance,and the reason for it being written.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 11 2014 8:34AM) : Can biographies be exact? Can a biography know you better than you know yourself?
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Trudy Knockless Trudy Knockless (Oct 10 2014 12:20PM) : Biographies matter because it gives readers background details of the author. It helps you to understand why the author chooses that subject matter and what makes it relevant to him.
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Trudy Knockless Trudy Knockless (Oct 10 2014 12:22PM) : Biographies matter because it allows it gives background details of the author and allows you to understand why the author chose that subject matter and why it's relevant to him/her.
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Biographies matter because it allows it gives background details of the author and allows you to understand why the author chose that subject matter and why it’s relevant to him/her.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 11 2014 8:35AM) : You made this comment three times.
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But Begley cannot show what the creative struggle meant to Updike when he was not writing, or when he was writing about not writing. Begley was denied access to much of Updike’s personal correspondence because Updike’s second wife, Martha, who controls the literary estate, would not cooperate with him. From my own research I can tell you that she thought Begley got off to an unseemly fast start too soon after her husband died. Whether Begley made a strategic error in not cultivating the widow, concluded that he would never secure her permission no matter how much he pandered, or did not wish to become ensorcelled by her is hard to say. Trying to appease a literary estate is usually a losing proposition—as Jonathan Bate, Ted Hughes’s not-quite-authorized biographer, can tell you after having been excommunicated by the widow Hughes. Biographers have to find their own voices, and this Begley has done by producing a double-column biography, aligning what was happening in his subject’s life with what Updike was writing at the time. Begley has done a diligent job interviewing Updike’s friends and lovers and, most importantly, Updike’s first wife, Mary. The result, for the first part of the biography, is splendid, since Mary is frank not only about Updike’s virtues and faults, but also about her own. She verifies, in so far as any work of fiction can, the truth of the Maples stories, for example, and describes the kind of loving, if sometimes disengaged, father Updike was to his four children. Mary was there to watch Updike grow as a writer during his Harvard years and his time abroad in London, when he still had some hope of becoming a first-class illustrator. And she was on hand to deal with his sexual antics during the era that made his novel Couples a four-million-copy bestseller.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Aug 24 2014 6:27PM) : This is a paragraph about the biography's provenance. Explain
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This shows the troubles that Begley had to go through, but also some of his flaws while working on this piece.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Sep 30 2014 7:12AM) : So it is important to know how a biography comes into being.
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Stephen Herman Stephen Herman (Oct 01 2014 10:40AM) : Very important. This gives us more insight into the bio's creation and shows how it may be lacking in some areas of truth due to the hardships of the author securing all the details. Still, its obstacles led way to different angle of truth.
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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 02 2014 7:57AM) : I like the idea that truth has different angles.
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A biographer enters an artist’s world through meeting family members, reading private pieces. The intensity of the struggle to get this information says a lot about the artist’s life, becomes an important part of the bio.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 02 2014 7:57AM) : What happens with a biographer who deals with a subject who lived hundreds of years ago?
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He still attempts to come as close as possible to the life that was once lived. Whether by visiting places associated with that person, meeting remote family members, retrieving information from historians/librarians.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 03 2014 8:17AM) : Right.
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A biography is a result of an extensive research through all possible sources. Interviews with friends and relatives, diary, private letters – all these pieces are necessary to solve the puzzle of someone’s life.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 02 2014 7:58AM) : Are all lives puzzles?
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I believe so. Every person lives a unique life, shaped by individual life experiences, thoughts, secret ambitions and instincts. An attempt to enter someone’s world is a challenging task.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 03 2014 8:17AM) : Well put.
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Abel Tavarez Abel Tavarez (Oct 01 2014 8:53PM) : Information about the biography's origin will shed light not only on the biographer but his loved ones. more

A source’s reticence (or downright reluctance) can say volumes about views held about the subject. With this in mind, one can develop their own hypotheses in regards to gaps or hearsay.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 02 2014 7:59AM) : The question is how to go about hypothesizing.
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Understanding the process of how a biography is formed and the steps towards gathering useful information shows the dedication of biographers. Seeing the process also shows the challenges that come with making biographies. There’s also the idea of there being no perfect biography that has all the answers. I think that’s why biographies “invariably leave more to be explored,” every biographer brings a different perspective.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 03 2014 8:18AM) : Yes, the answer to one biography is another biography.
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Kyle Deane Kyle Deane (Oct 09 2014 9:22PM) : The history of this biography, how it came about and the struggles that Begley had to overcome in order to get this bio done.
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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 10 2014 8:01AM) : The provenance of biography.
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The paragraph includes the difficulties that the author had writing the biography, and in that we see a variety of struggles that come along with writing and getting the absolute truth and best way of seeing something. It isn’t only about the subject.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 11 2014 8:36AM) : No, not just about the subject, right.
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Jamila Wright Jamila Wright (Oct 03 2014 11:25AM) : What an unique and interesting way for Begley to find his voice. Aligning what was happening in his subjects life with what Updike was writing at the time. I would love to read and analyze how Begley was able to do this pairing using double-columns.
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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 04 2014 7:37AM) : It would be possible to do that.
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In The New Yorker, Louis Menand commends Begley for being more scrupulous than most biographers in revealing few details about Updike’s dalliances. But of course Menand is wrong. Readers of biography need to have the names and dates of a subject’s lovers. Who were they, and what were they like, and how did the Updike they knew square with the fellow who wrote the stories, novels, essays, and poems? Was the private Updike noticeably different from the public one, from the one who wrote letters and interacted with his children? Why literary critics like Menand want to live in willful ignorance of such information is mystifying—I suppose it messes up their fastidious desire to deal only with the fiction. Why such writers bother to review biography is a bigger question. Their ambition seems to be to cut biography and the biographer down to size, or in this case to extol a biographer who has done only half his job—although Begley should not be handled too harshly. He spoke with many of Updike’s lovers with the understanding that he would not out them, perhaps the only way to get them to talk at all. But to suppose the biographer is doing anything more than making a virtue of necessity is to evince ignorance about biography, which is, alas, all too common among otherwise intelligent critics.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Aug 24 2014 6:27PM) : Why do literary critics have a hard time with biography? [Edited]
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Perhaps it is hard to detect the truth and at the same time have a voice and style, while writing about someone’s life.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Sep 30 2014 7:13AM) : A shrewd answer.
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Literary critics focus on the telling of a story. While biographers tell a story, it is very important to include detailed information like dates and times. In fiction, this typically weighs down a plot, but in biography it illuminates a subject’s life and influences. Literary critics don’t all seem to understand the difference.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 02 2014 7:59AM) : Good point about telling a story. Can a biographer be a critic too--at the same time?
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The details included in the biography should allow readers to make there own critiques. If the biography has a view point that is plausible, this should be apparent to readers without soapboxing.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 04 2014 7:37AM) : But is criticism soapboxing?
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A biography is a comprehensive research that consists of gathered facts and details. A critic might lack the knowledge a biographer has, and for this reason can struggle to evaluate it constructively.
In the above example critic form The New Yorker bluntly argued with what a biography is, instead of what it was about.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 02 2014 8:00AM) : Yet many critics feel superior to biogaphers.
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Abel Tavarez Abel Tavarez (Oct 01 2014 8:59PM) : To piggyback on Irina's comment, the literary critic might have a romanticized or preferred view of the subject that impedes the biography from being fleshed out. [Edited] more
It might have been a question of appearances. Begley might have felt that the romantic information would dilute the tone or style he was going for. A biographer must balance his desire to paint a true picture against presenting controversial information that he/she feels might debase the work.
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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 02 2014 8:00AM) : Well said.
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Kyle Deane Kyle Deane (Oct 09 2014 9:24PM) : it is imperative for literary critics to have a voice, whereas sometimes having a voice and being to stylized as a biographer takes away from telling the details of one's life that is necessary for readers to have.
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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 10 2014 8:01AM) : I'm not sure I follow this.
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Begley’s biography breaks apart in 1977, when Updike divorces Mary and marries Martha. The biographer, like an apostle obliged to rewrite scripture, has to rely on Updike’s children, who clearly resented his second wife commandeering their father’s genius, restricting access to the great man, and, in general, secluding him in the conventional life of a renowned author. But he continued to do fatherly things, while admirably letting his children go their own way even when he had misgivings. He was not merely a churchgoer, but an active participant in the life of his church. He had golfing buddies. Like most Americans, he did not take that much of an interest in politics and rarely made it the subject of his work. He was, however, a diffident supporter of the war in Vietnam, a stance that put him out of step with many of his contemporaries, such as Norman Mailer, Philip Roth, and Kurt Vonnegut. In some ways, Updike did not feel qualified to pontificate on politics, the national sport. His demurral has been taken by some as evasive, but if he really hadn’t given that much thought to politics, should he just join the dissenters? Perhaps what really upset his contemporaries on the left was his qualified respect for authority and unwillingness to stand on his own self-righteousness. Begley does not pursue this line of thought, but it has always seemed to me that Updike was refreshingly different from the herd of independent minds who opposed the war—even if he was wrong about it.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Aug 24 2014 6:28PM) : What is meant by the phrase "Begley's biography breaks apart"?
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Stephen Herman Stephen Herman (Oct 01 2014 10:47AM) : It seems once Bengly was restricted further info from Updike's second wife,Martha, Bengly was forced to rely on Updike's children who clearly disliked Martha, causing the bio to steer more in a bias direction or rather feed more into frivolous matters.
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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 02 2014 8:01AM) : Lack of sources or too many sources of the same kind can be a problem for the biographer.
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The previous narration, filled with detailed facts and confessions from Updikes’s first wife Mary, got later interrupted, as his second wife was very uncooperative.
Begley couldn’t have a biography split in two halves, and was forced to rewrite the first part as well.
This fact by itself is very important, as it reveals internal tension within Updike’s family after his death.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 02 2014 8:02AM) : There is also a certain tension at play in the biographer too.
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Jason Javaherian Jason Javaherian (Oct 09 2014 3:37PM) : The family squabbles and some of the remnants of tension from Updike's life I think make for a more interesting story. Perhaps more difficult to gather information, may be more rewarding. [Edited]
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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 10 2014 8:01AM) : A challenge, that's for sure.
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Becomes difficult to write since Martha does not cooperate. His children where also very biased when talking about his life since they did not like martha. In other words the biography lacks solid information.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 04 2014 7:38AM) : The information is solid enough but perhaps more evidence would be in order.
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Kyle Deane Kyle Deane (Oct 09 2014 9:25PM) : Sources are of the utmost importance to a biographer. Being able to rely on those sources and make sure that they are not biased or coming from a place of contempt is hard to do.
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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 10 2014 8:02AM) : Yes, the biographer has to be careful not to become a prisoner of his sources.
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Begley exhibits some momentum during the first half of the book, buoyed by his knowledge of his subject’s ways and means. This information is one reason he suggests that Martha did what her husband could not. He did not abandon his four children, but he had reached a point where he wanted to remove himself (somewhat) from them. To his children—all mostly grown by then—Updike’s departure may have seemed unfeeling. But to him, as a parent, was this such a poor choice? From Martha, Begley could have learned more, but as he revealed in an interview with The Awl, he never met Martha.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Aug 24 2014 6:28PM) : Discuss the different points of view in this paragraph.
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Jamila Wright Jamila Wright (Oct 03 2014 11:42AM) : 4 points of views more

In this paragraph there are 4 different point of views. Prof. Rollyson, Updike, Updike’s children and Begley’s. Sentences 1-2 and 5 are from your point of view Prof. Rollyson. Sentence 3 and is from Updikes point of view. Sentence 4 is from Updikes children point of view. Sentence 6 is from Begleys point of view.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 04 2014 7:39AM) : Quite intricate as you describe it.
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Begley does not reflect much about how Updike’s status as an only child might have affected his own parenting. Did having four children fill a need? Did his interaction with his writer mother—who did so much to encourage him, but who was also sometimes domineering—contribute to the aloofness he displayed when dealing with his own children? The patterns are there to be read in different ways, and perhaps Begley thought it better not to force interpretations. Or perhaps Begley did not have the kind of evidence that would permit more extensive interpretation. A second Updike biographer with access to the personal correspondence that Begley did not see may fill out and enrich this part of the story.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Aug 24 2014 6:29PM) : What should a second biographer do?
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More research on the personal and intimate details of Updike’s life. It is important to unravel the secrets and emotions of the person you are writing a biography about. More psychological aspects can add more to a biography, fulfilling not only the story of a person, but also sharing the mind, thoughts and feelings.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Sep 30 2014 7:13AM) : Right
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Stephen Herman Stephen Herman (Oct 01 2014 10:59AM) : A second biographer may attain access to Martha and some new material that Bengly could not acquire. This could give us a fresh prospective on matters especially when it came to Updike's decisions when it involved his children.
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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 02 2014 8:02AM) : Begley
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A second biographer should explore the avenues not previously mentioned. This isn’t riding the first biographer’s coattails as much as it is conducting further research. If Begley didn’t make mention of the dates of Updike’s romantic interests, then maybe the next biographer should explore how these interests specifically affected his work.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 02 2014 8:03AM) : Yes, I think that is what I would do.
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Second biographer should fill in the gaps Begley left. Especially the writer’s early childhood years, which are significant,as they shape the early perception of the world around.
It also might be wise for the biographer to be delicate in approaching Updike’s family regarding any private matters. Martha apparently was turned off by Begley’s pushiness.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 02 2014 8:03AM) : Was Begley pushy? It might be that even raising certain issues would have alienated the second wife.
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“From my own research I can tell you that she thought Begley got off to an unseemly fast start too soon after her husband died.”

Martha might thought Begley rushed too fast to investigate, maybe she needed more time after her husband’s death.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 03 2014 8:19AM) : Good point.
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It seems Begley puts up boundaries and doesn’t fully pursue certain points that are important to know, like Updike’s sibling-less childhood. Therefore a second biographer can further pursue and explore Updike’s childhood, relationship with his parents, his marriage to his second wife and children.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 03 2014 8:19AM) : Biography is a matter of emphasis, so another biographer might have a different emphasis.
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Sebastian Lema Sebastian Lema (Oct 03 2014 9:09PM) : A second biographer should see if there are any questions left unanswered and do research on it. if there where portions omitted a second biographer can fill in those gaps and possibly expand on it.
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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 04 2014 7:40AM) : Even the best biographies have gaps which sometimes can be filled in by later biographies.
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Kyle Deane Kyle Deane (Oct 09 2014 9:28PM) : While the first biographer may excavate some of the subjects life, a second biographer would need to go "deeper into the rabbit hole" and use the base information provided by the initial biography as a starting point to delve deeper into the "why"
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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 10 2014 8:02AM) : And one biography can build on another biography.
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Mr. Kishan Singh Mr. Kishan Singh (Dec 15 2014 11:49PM) : Interpretations are based on assumptions. exploring different avenues might sometimes lead to assumptions, however careful deliberation of versatile patterns with emphasis on personal details should be done.
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Like a good biographer, Begley dispels many of the shibboleths that saddle Updike. Although he wrote for The New Yorker all of his professional life, Updike was not, in key respects, a New Yorker writer. He only lived in the city for about two years and rarely made it the subject of his fiction. In fact, he did not like New York much, preferring to live in New England and to write about it when his home ground in Pennsylvania did not preoccupy him. A world traveler, Updike also set his fiction in Africa and South America, and created his own version of the literary life in his stories about Henry Bech. Although Updike received some excellent editing at The New Yorker, he hardly took his cue from the staff there, for example, ignoring Katherine White’s advice to steer clear of a novel about an ex-basketball player. Had he been in thrall to her, there would be no Rabbit novels.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Aug 24 2014 6:29PM) : What constitutes a good biographer?
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To be able to balance information, truth and objectivity while writing an autobiography. To share the life and goals of the person and not just general knowledge. To show what the person was like and to explain how he saw the world and what influenced his decisions. To introduce the person, but also let the reader into the persons life and mind.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Sep 30 2014 7:14AM) : The term autobiography creates some confusion here.
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That’s a typo, sorry!

A good biographer should be able to balance information, truth and objectivity while writing a biography. To share the life and goals of the person and not just general knowledge. To show what the person was like and to explain how he saw the world and what influenced his decisions. To introduce the person, but also let the reader into the persons life and mind.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 02 2014 8:04AM) : Right
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A good biographer is like a good photographer, able to capture intuitively his object in the precise moment. The images are seen through the lense, they reflect the photographer’s vision, yet the picture speaks for itself.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 02 2014 8:04AM) : Nice analogy. Most people, though, would probably trust a photograph more than a biography. Why?
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Because picture can be seen or even touched in an instance, and develops trust as historic evidence. A biography takes much longer time to get familiar with.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 03 2014 8:20AM) : Good answer. How about a painting of a subject? How would that differ from a photograph?
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An understanding of piece of art might be proportional to the amount of time it took to create it. A photo is captured in the exact moment, making it easier to scan. While a painting is not usually created at an instant, and behind the scenes too, so one might take more time to examine the painting.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 07 2014 7:41AM) : Good answer. Can a photograph be as complex to read as a painting. In other words, what do they have in common?
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Photographs can be very complex too, but they are always more related to reality than paintings. They both serve the purpose of a visual aid, but a photo is more of an evidence, it makes one envision the moment it was taken in.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 08 2014 6:49AM) : Is that really true? Couldn't a photograph be misleading and a painting more accurate?
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Totally, especially with the help of all available technology picture can be edited and photoshopped. But unlike a painting it can be used as an evidence in court, because of its power to capture a precise momentum.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 12 2014 7:39AM) : Even as evidence in court photographs are challenged. Even with the first photographs there was a problem with using them as evidence. What was the problem?
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Digital manipulation could have been a problem. It is true the reality of picture can be questioned, but it possesses an ability to capture a moment in that particular moment, while painting is more of a record from a painter’s memory. There also can be a mathematical aspect to it, on the picture objects freeze in their precise positions at exact angles, a painter will not be able to replicate the exact moment. But their ability to reflect, whether through painter’s brush or camera’s lens, brings them very close to one another.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 16 2014 8:44AM) : What about the distortions of photography? If you choose a certain angle, you can make certain aspects of a face seem different if that face was shot from another angle.
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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 10 2014 8:03AM) : All facts are true if they are facts.
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So much has been written about Updike and sex that it is refreshing to see Begley return often to Updike’s treatment of religion and religious feeling—its place in his life, in his work, and in the lives of others. He was a man of faith who always had his doubts. His freethinking stance is a manifestation of a man who was marvelously open to experience, to registering the quotidian, and to intimations of immortality in the ordinary. A case in point is “Pigeon Feathers.” Begley suggests the story is about Updike’s “adolescent crisis of faith”—although to put it in purely autobiographical terms unnecessarily delimits the reach of this masterpiece. Begley almost too dutifully builds up his biographical perimeter. Thirteen-year-old David Kern is Updike’s stand-in. Together with a mother and father who also resemble Updike’s parents, David is boxed up in a farmhouse in Firetown, a fictionalization of Plowville, the natal home Linda Updike insisted on moving back to despite her son’s and husband’s resistance. They did not want to be removed from Shillington, Updike’s beloved hometown, which becomes Olinger in his fiction. While it is good to know that Updike’s parents were the starting point for the story, Begley does not seem to notice that the characters Updike creates seem harsher and less nuanced than Linda and Wesley Updike. Begley paraphrases the story’s exquisite opening, and as a result much is lost in the translation. Here are the first three sentences:

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Aug 24 2014 6:30PM) : What point is made in this paragraph and the long quotation about the difference between the writer's life and writing?
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Begley “too dutifully” framed Updike’s life. He got carried away while connecting fiction with reality. There was certainly a resemblance between young David and Updike himself, but not all of it.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 02 2014 8:05AM) : yes
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When they moved to Firetown, things were upset, displaced, rearranged. A red cane-back sofa that had been the chief piece in the living room at Olinger was here banished, too big for the narrow country parlor, to the barn, and shrouded under a tarpaulin. Never again would David lie on its length all afternoon eating raisins and reading mystery novels and science fiction and P. G. Wodehouse.
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Updike has often been accused of writing precious prose, of emitting perfect sentences that do not amount to much more than an expression of elegant style. But as an analysis of Updike at his best shows, such dismissiveness is nonsense. This beautifully measured beginning is about more than David and Updike. It is about deracination and its disturbing consequences for the human psyche.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Aug 24 2014 6:30PM) : What is precious prose?
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Stephen Herman Stephen Herman (Oct 01 2014 11:12AM) : It seems to be an old fashioned, stylized way of writing that concentrates more on technique than on the traditional form of straight forwardness; making what you write more pretty on paper than strong in statement and structure.
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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 02 2014 8:05AM) : Right
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Thomas Seubert Thomas Seubert (Oct 01 2014 1:32PM) : Precious Prose more

This is when a writer justifies the inclusion of a phrase, sentence or passage that has no real value other than its prettiness.

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It is a reference to calligraphic style, when every letter is skillfully written with an ink. From ancient Greek calligraphy is translated as beautiful writing. Perfect sentences for visual beauty, but no meaning attached.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 02 2014 8:06AM) : Or the meaning is too refined.
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Kyle Deane Kyle Deane (Oct 09 2014 9:31PM) : A precious prose is concentrating more on the style of the writing as opposed to the meaning of it. While it may sound poetic, it may not have any depth to it.
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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 10 2014 8:03AM) : So sometimes style, even a good one, can get in the way of content or meaning.
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The material world, in this case, is solidly observed in a succession of objects that help the boy own his existence. When those objects are disarranged, David feels as banished as the sofa and is dead to this new world. He might as well be living under a shroud. He is disoriented as he looks at his books, “stacked, all out of order.” But rather than discourse on his character’s feelings, Updike shows us David’s world. We can see it for ourselves, instead of being told about it. The eclectic, casual, and comfortable world of David’s adolescence has been disrupted, as Begley says, but “Pigeon Feathers” is also about a rage for regularity that helps us situate ourselves in the reality we have built. So David’s sets about “to find a new place” by arranging his books. In its quiet, unassuming way, the story’s opening paragraph is reminiscent of the moving scene in The Sound and the Fury when Benjy wails because Luster is going the wrong way around Jefferson’s square, quieting only when Luster turns the wagon around so that to Benjy everything appears “each in its ordered place.”

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Aug 24 2014 6:31PM) : How does this literary analysis help in an understanding of Updike's life?
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It reveals that Updike himself experienced the traumatic change when was forced to move as a young child. And it made a life-long effect on him, as the issue of order vs disorder frequently appeared in his writing.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 02 2014 8:06AM) : Good
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David’s mother cruelly demands that he shoot the pigeons his grandmother says are fouling the furniture in the barn. A reluctant David, goaded by his father who, in effect, calls his son soft, shoots a whole mess of the birds, feeling like a “creator,” clever at seeing and shooting “these little smudges and flickers.” To this theological conceit, Updike adds a warrior mentality that looks upon the carnage as dead enemies, “falling with good, final weight.” Dead, the birds are to be admired as beautifully engineered specimens: “And across the surface of the infinitely adjusted yet somehow effortless mechanics of the feathers played idle designs executed, it seemed, in a controlled rapture, with a joy that hung level in the air above and behind him.” Begley rightly concludes that David’s “religious doubts are eventually resolved to his own satisfaction (if not the reader’s—the boy deduces from the beauty of nature evidence of a caring deity).” The god who “lavished such craft upon these worthless birds” could not refuse to “let David live forever.”

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Aug 24 2014 6:32PM) : What point is Updike making about "craft"?
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He might be referring to death. The brutality of a shooting scene is described with admiration by Updike, birds obtained beauty after their death, joy hung above them. And he called his dad a “creator,” once he killed the pigeons.
And same creator wouldn’t let his son live forever either. There is a father-son relationship depicted in this paragraph.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 02 2014 8:07AM) : Can the craft of writing be brutal?
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Brutality is a strong word,only a good writing can capture and translate an intensity of the scene.
A small paragraph describing the carnage of pigeons, made a scene alive, one can picture idle feathers flying in the air of juts shot birds.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 03 2014 8:21AM) : Brutal perhaps in the sense that words are not used to soften cruelty or harshness.
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The notes to the Library of America’s new Updike: Early Collected Storiesprovide the author’s own 1996 gloss on this story he wrote in 1960 as a reconstruction of his “adolescent trauma of religious doubt mixed with the trauma of being moved from a small town to an isolated, unimproved farm.” Even a single word like “unimproved” takes us deeper into the story, into David’s and our own increasingly atavistic feelings. But Updike doesn’t leave off where Begley’s biography begins. Instead, Updike makes the theological/philosophical thrust of the story paramount: “The notion that killing other creatures relieves the fear of death owes something to Hemingway. At the age of sixty-two, I can scarcely improve on the vision and affirmation of the last paragraph.” And, it must be said, any biographer or critic would be hard put to improve on Updike’s characterization of his work.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Aug 24 2014 6:32PM) : How do Updike's comments help illuminate the story?
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By letting Updike in to his own biography the author makes it more alive and truthful. His words can underline the statements and replace extensive explaining, by brightening up the work with his own words. This also provides authority to the work, we can trust what the author is writing, when we read Updike’s comments on the topics.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Sep 30 2014 7:15AM) : Can you be more specific? What is Updike saying that makes this particular story more understandable or significant?
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It improves the characterization of the work, giving us the ability to go further into the life of Updike: ““adolescent trauma of religious doubt mixed with the trauma of being moved from a small town to an isolated, unimproved farm.” Even a single word like “unimproved” takes us deeper into the story, into David’s and our own increasingly atavistic feelings.”

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 02 2014 8:08AM) : ok
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His comments confirm that he was confused as a young teenager, but in the middle of the surrounding traumatic mess he found his answers.
And later on in his life at the age of 62, Updike felt the same way about them.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 03 2014 8:22AM) : right
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Kyle Deane Kyle Deane (Oct 09 2014 9:39PM) : As a biographer, to get a subject to insert of behalf of themselves adds a sort of legitimacy to the work. It makes the reader feel like the work must be authentic if the subject is willing to add to it
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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 10 2014 8:03AM) : insert? I'm not sure what you mean here.
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Begley’s book has only so much room to discuss individual works—his discussion of “Pigeon Feathers” is accorded two substantial paragraphs—and perhaps to say much more is to defeat narrative in favor of analysis. But for Updike’s best work, more of a buildup might have been preferable to cataloguing both his achievements and his failures. Even so, Begley has done the good work of a first biography destined to be superseded—not by jettisoning his adumbrations about Updike the man and his work, but by building upon them.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Aug 24 2014 6:33PM) : What does it mean to defeat narrative in favor of analysis?
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Stephen Herman Stephen Herman (Oct 01 2014 11:26AM) : to go any deeper would take something away from the story. It would leave less room for interpretation, trumping fable with fact, but that seems to be the point of a biography. Still, less wonder doesn't mean more intrigue.
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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 02 2014 8:09AM) : Biographies balance between narrative and analysis. Why?
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This balance probably plays the key role in the biography, as too much of analysis could turn it into fiction, but too much narration would make a newspaper article of it instead.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 03 2014 8:22AM) : How does analysis affect the telling of a story--its pacing?
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An analysis can control the pacing of the biography, by creating reverse chronology for example, or by going back and forth in the time.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 07 2014 7:42AM) : Is there a way analysis might hurt the narrative?
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If biographer’s opinion dominates, especially if it is not accurate.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 08 2014 6:50AM) : but what if the analysis is accurate. There could still be a problem. Why?
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As kyle below explained, it might overshadow the story.

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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 12 2014 7:40AM) : Slow up the story, get in the way.
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Sometimes too much of analysis imposes a certain opinion, it is better to leave space for the narration to speak for itself.
If the point is strong enough and really exists, an attentive reader would intuitively pick up on it.

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Kyle Deane Kyle Deane (Oct 09 2014 9:36PM) : Analysis delves so deep into the details that the story (or progression of said story) is lost
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Professor Carl Rollyson (Oct 10 2014 8:04AM) : Yes, the reader might feel frustrated wanting more story, less discussion.

Carl Rollyson is Professor of Journalism at Baruch College, CUNY. He is at work on a biography of Amy Lowell.

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