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Catherin Taveras Catherin Taveras (Oct 09 2014 1:46PM) : this is a little kids drawing on what he sees outside his house [Edited] more

This picture may not be very good but it tells a lot i feel bad for the little boy or girl that drew that picture but that’s what his country deserves for doing what they did and maybe that will show him/her to do better in life when he grows up then what some of the adults are teaching him/her what to do now

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Oct 10
Jessica Hill Jessica Hill (Oct 10 2014 1:53PM) : it is really cool as to see that a refugee camp is a place to get away from
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Melissa Procton Melissa Procton (Oct 14 2014 1:44PM) : cool
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Oct 14
Zion Dawson Zion Dawson (Oct 14 2014 9:05AM) : “We wait,” says Mohammed Nassuh, a Syrian ex-colonel living at the Kilis camp for a year with his family. “Eating. Sleeping. Watching time pass. I will do anything. I will work as a janitor. I will go anywhere.1 This is not a life.” more
wow this is crazy how they wait and let pass and then he/she want to be a janitor and go anywhere
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Trauma therapy: A refugee child's drawing of a life left behind in Syria. Kilis, Turkey.
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Jubelys Bernabe Jubelys Bernabe (Oct 08 2014 1:35PM) : This photo is showing us that not everybody is rich more

I wonder what happen after that photo he draw

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Oct 8
Devonte Brown Devonte Brown (Oct 08 2014 8:48AM) : I can't understand this drawing so i think i see a camp and building and people i would not want to go to that can't. That camp look so bad and sad i would never go to that camp. [Edited]
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Oct 8
Zion Dawson Zion Dawson (Oct 08 2014 9:05AM) : camp more
word Devonte THEY DON’T LOOK HAPPY
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Oct 8
Dashawn Lloyd Dashawn Lloyd (Oct 08 2014 2:28PM) : The picture is about a little girl out said house and she seen somebody body hanging off a tank then they bombing her house. [Edited] more

It look sad because a little girl is going throw so much and can’t even go home . You have to feel how they or feeling she can’t never go home because they or bombing her then she going to have nightmares about somebody hanging off a tank.

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Oct 14
Mamadou Balde Mamadou Balde (Oct 14 2014 8:58AM) : In this picture see kids getting hanged on tanks and bombs across. which is very scary. more

I think they should put a stop to this because it really getting out of hand.

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Oct 20
Moquan Reed Moquan Reed (Oct 20 2014 11:36AM) : this is a picture of bad things more

why do kids see things like this to make some art like this but why is there a guy hanging from the hole of the tank why is there people on top of the buildings and it like they droping bombs off to try to stop the tank

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by Paul Salopek

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Oct 8
Maria Valerio Maria Valerio (Oct 08 2014 9:07AM) : This picture is trying to say the people who miss their home and don't have enough things to put in their house more

I choose this sentence because it telling me that this picture is showing me how the people live and how much things do they have in their house. Also they left there home because like of some hurricane of real hard snow made the house fall and maybe they don’t have enough food and clothes to live in their home

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Oct 8
K Kelley K Kelley (Oct 08 2014 12:19PM) : This picture really shows the amount of suffering that people in other countries have to live with. more

even though this drawing isn’t high quallity, it still is very graphic, and vivid in emotional detail.
i would like to know more about the man hanging by the tank, and the man watching

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Oct 8
Alea Bristow Alea Bristow (Oct 08 2014 12:24PM) : This picture shows the bad experiences the refugees have had to go through. The refugee camps are not good to live in, but they are better than the conflict in Syria. more

I think this is a really sad picture.The kid who drew it went through some bad experiences, and is probably traumatized by what he has seen. The conditions that these refugees have to live in are bad, and not up to America’s living standards, but they are better than being exposed to the horrible things going on in Syria. I think turkey should get some help taking care of all the refugees!

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Emmi Koszinowski Emmi Koszinowski (Oct 08 2014 12:28PM) : Civil War and the displacement of Turkish civilians more

The refugee camps shelter those who seek sanctuary from the war, but sadly not all are sheltered. The camp is bursting practically because of how full it is but it only shelters 14,000 people, which is only a small portion of the million of other refugees. It is so sad that this is happening to many innocent civilians and also many innocent children who had been displaced by the war. It is a lucky thing though that some of these displaced children can seek refugee at the Refugee camps, but not all are lucky enough to find shelter. This is so terribly discouraging and I hate to think that these people are so vulnerable. I wish I could help.

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Oct 8
Melissa Procton Melissa Procton (Oct 08 2014 1:53PM) : I dont like how they got the boy in the picture hanging on the tank
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Oct 9
Cindy Rodriguez Cindy Rodriguez (Oct 09 2014 1:46PM) : this is what the kid see when he goes out side more

This is really bad because this is what little kids have to see when they wake up and go outside.

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Oct 14
Vontay Farmer Vontay Farmer (Oct 14 2014 8:52AM) : Torture, How Do they Survive? more

This is torture and I want to know how do these children survive this. Obviously they are being held captive in syria abandoned. By what this pitcure shows i can sense danger.

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Oct 22
Michael Bido Michael Bido (Oct 22 2014 11:24AM) : question and the picture more

why is there a guy hanging him self?

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Oct 28
rosa amos rosa amos (Oct 28 2014 9:50AM) : one comment i have about this picture is it look like they have nothing to put in side they houes or they don,t have a houes more

another comment i have about this picture is why the kids is hanging them slef also why the kids is hanging on the tank

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Oct 28
rosa amos rosa amos (Oct 28 2014 9:57AM) : one comment i have is why the boy hanging is self and they watching more

one more comment i have is in this picture is showing me how they live and what they do in they house also they left there home because like of some hurricane of real hard sown made the house fall down also i think they have no food or clothes

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Oct 30
George Mendoza George Mendoza (Oct 30 2014 11:21AM) : The title this " is not a life " [Edited] more

I title says it all. The title says they have struggled. The title also say a lot about them. By the title i already new they had violists they was poor they don’t like the life they living. By the title i already new they dont wanna keep on living the life they living.

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Nov 7
George Mendoza George Mendoza (Nov 07 2014 11:30AM) : This picture shows how did those people lived. more

The picture is related to the Title it shows why people said this is not life and felt like giving up. The picture shows a person hanging from a string.

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Oct 8
Malcolm Wedderburn Malcolm Wedderburn (Oct 08 2014 1:54PM) : a refuge camp his a place that helps u form war and it doesn't have a money to buy water and food more

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Refugee camp, Kilis, Turkey, 36°38'50" N, 37°05'03" E

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The Syrians pass their days and nights in shipping containers arrayed in rows atop what used to be farm fields on the Turkish border.

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Justin Perez Justin Perez (Oct 08 2014 8:01AM) : Was it mandatory to pass their nights in shipping containers. more

But was all this really necessary couldn’t they have build shelter or like find shelter or the only close by shelter was those shipping containers .

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Oct 8
Alea Bristow Alea Bristow (Oct 08 2014 12:27PM) : I think maybe the containers are like protection. But i agree that would NOT be comfortable to live in.
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Devonte Brown Devonte Brown (Oct 08 2014 9:04AM) : In the drawing why the hang the kid i feel bad for the kid.
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Oct 14
Mamadou Balde Mamadou Balde (Oct 14 2014 9:14AM) : In my opinion or should I say there opinion this refugee camp is uncomfortable because it lot that's there also
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Laquana Thomas Laquana Thomas (Oct 28 2014 10:34AM) : Its sad to see people struggling with their kids & not being able so sleep in a safe warm home. more

The Syrians had to do what they had to do in order to survive longer. Sometimes they might feel too weak to even move around because in order to survive you are going to need food & water to keep your body energetic.

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Oct 28
Jennifer Espinal Jennifer Espinal (Oct 28 2014 1:41PM) : a lil girl more

i dont reaally understand the story but it looks like if they going to war

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Shakira Pineda Shakira Pineda (Nov 03 2014 11:33AM) : this is probably about syrians. more

i can tell by reading this sentence that this article is going to be about syrians.

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It is a model refugee camp, Kilis.

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Melissa Procton Melissa Procton (Oct 08 2014 8:45AM) : Can you even have a MODEL refugee camp? more

By definition a refugee camp is a terrible place. A model refugee camp is like the best prison that you could have. No matter what you don’t want to be there.

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Oct 8
Ben Butcher Ben Butcher (Oct 08 2014 12:18PM) : I would agree a refugee camp is better than prison, but it is still terrible. No one wants to end up in either of them.
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Saul Wessel Saul Wessel (Oct 09 2014 2:14PM) : I've never thought about a refugee camp before. more

I’ve never heard of them before. I wonder what it’s like to live in one. But I don’t want to end up tha way.

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There are schools. A modern supermarket offers government-funded debit cards to the camp residents. A refugee souk bustles with barbershops, teashops, a songbird shop. The living containers are clean and come equipped with televisions. And the pathways between them are paved. Humanitarian experts from many countries have trooped through Kilis. All are stunned, impressed—by the amenities, by the generosity of the Turks.

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Vontay Farmer Vontay Farmer (Oct 08 2014 9:07AM) : Can Refugees help other countries? [Edited] more

I think this would be generous and helpful in many ways for other countries. That still doesn’t come before the fact that Syria needs help.Would it be possible for refugees to come to their senses and help Syria for better of for worse.

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Madison Ravarino Madison Ravarino (Oct 08 2014 12:22PM) : The refugee camp attempts to keep life as normal as possible. more

The camp residents are given most things necessary to live. There is a supermarket and funded debit cards to help residents. The area is clean and includes amenities such as barbershops and teashops. The Turks are very generous to help these refugees and supply them with so much.

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Franz Long Franz Long (Oct 08 2014 12:30PM) : There are a lot of amenities in the camp that the Turks gave them. more

It is very interesting to me that even though it is not the best place to live the conditions are still very impressive. In this refugee camp they have everything that a normal town would, it even has government-funded debit cards. It is kinda cool how they used shipping containers to be used as the living areas.

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Mr Jose Hernandez Mr Jose Hernandez (Oct 08 2014 1:40PM) : Why are people Saying that they Owen everything. Even though they are not allowed to go home they still got school for students/food. more

Well I would like to live their but the thing about it I don’t like people telling me what to do.

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rosa amos rosa amos (Oct 28 2014 10:03AM) : why are they not going to school more

one comment i have is there school where they at but they not going to school they rather hang they self then go to school

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Michael Bido Michael Bido (Nov 13 2014 11:37AM) : camp size and places in camp more

Is it a really big camp? it has everything a city has.

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Melissa Procton Melissa Procton (Oct 08 2014 8:24AM) : This paragraph of the article on Syrian refugee camps explains that they contains schools, supermarkets, teashops, and anything one would expect in a modern city. more

I found this passage in the article interesting because I usually think of refugee camps as areas where people are stuck—they cannot go home. However, this type of camp seems to be fairly similar to my own hometown. I wondering if the people who are living here miss home.

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Josephine Baez Josephine Baez (Oct 10 2014 2:30PM) : it looks like war is going on someone getting hanged and it looks very scary to be in a place like that,it so sad. more

i feel sad like imagne going though a war seeing things watching other people get hurt.

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Jessica Hill Jessica Hill (Oct 10 2014 1:34PM) : i really like how the refugee came helps other to come and it is like a home for them if there home gets burned out more

this is ver nice for them to do that

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Maria Valerio Maria Valerio (Oct 08 2014 8:56AM) : My key ideas is that this sentence is trying to say that equipped comes with televisions and it's good for the living room. more

I think this sentence is a good statement because it trying to say that thing are clean and televisions come with equipped and could fit throw the house.

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Vontay Farmer Vontay Farmer (Oct 14 2014 9:13AM) : This Is awesome more

This is cool it states that their living containers come equipped with televisions and other supportive things i would’ve been happy because it the televisions i would’ve watched TV so that i can get my mind off of such horrible things.

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George Mendoza George Mendoza (Oct 30 2014 11:19AM) : Bomb falling from the helicopter. [Edited] more

I would like to help them i feel bad for them because tey got no one to help them.

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Jhensen Luna Jhensen Luna (Oct 10 2014 1:51PM) : what countries or through by kilis
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Yet more than three years after the first group of 252 exhausted refugees straggled across the frontier from Syria, Kilis has become a symbol of a problem, not a solution.

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Mr Jose Hernandez Mr Jose Hernandez (Oct 10 2014 1:54PM) : Well people are having hard time over their. more

I would like to help them i feel bad for them

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Correann Anderson Correann Anderson (Oct 14 2014 9:12AM) : Do every refugee next to each other? more

this is sad paragraph because do people care about them.do they people stand out for them or they just look at them suffer.do they have enough food to survive and do they have money to take care of their family and kids.

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Vontay Farmer Vontay Farmer (Oct 14 2014 9:14AM) : this should not be A problem more

they should feel good about themselves they are generous.

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Dashawn Lloyd Dashawn Lloyd (Oct 14 2014 2:31PM) : people are losing more homes more

Syria kills is a symbol and a problem now and more people llose they homes

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Laquana Thomas Laquana Thomas (Oct 20 2014 11:41AM) : I feel sad cause I know that it hurt them alot. more

I think that was so exhusting for them to straggle across the frontier from syria.

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Laquana Thomas Laquana Thomas (Oct 28 2014 11:41AM) : Why does these things happen to the good & caring people? more

If I could do something I would try my best to help them eat a meal every day. OMG! I can only IMAGINE! Not eating for a week or two or even more. That is a really painful life.

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Mohammed Nasuh in the Kilis refugee camp, Turkey. His wife Amina weeps. Photograph by Paul Salopek

Mohammed Nasuh in the Kilis refugee camp. His wife Amina weeps. Photograph by Paul Salopek

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Maria Valerio Maria Valerio (Oct 08 2014 9:14AM) : This man is telling me that he explaining how he used to live now and before more

The man is explaining to some one the he is living poor and doesn’t have that much stuff to live with in his home like a lot of people doesn’t have that much stuff to live with

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Jessica Hill Jessica Hill (Oct 10 2014 1:47PM) : so as you it is very different to go to another school more

i would want to go to another neighborhood i would feel upset because i still would feel u uncomfortable

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Moquan Reed Moquan Reed (Nov 07 2014 11:11AM) : why is this guy face like that it seems like something happen more

because the lady look scare like something happen like she looking for god with her head down ????

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Today, the camp is bursting at the seams. It shelters more than 14,000 people—a fraction of the estimated 1.3 million refugees who have sought sanctuary from war. Turkey has spent billions on housing and feeding its displaced neighbors. It thought the civil war against the dictator Assad would be short; that Syria would be repopulated by returnees eternally grateful to Turkey. But the war continues. The welcome wears thin. Anti-Syrian protests are bubbling in Turkish cities. And still the refugees come: During the past week, another 160,000 displaced people, this time ethnic Kurds scattered by Islamic militia, have come staggering across the frontier. With a new U.S.-led bombing campaign under way against the Islamists, this human torrent will not stop.

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kayleigh johnson kayleigh johnson (Oct 08 2014 12:21PM) : Where are they going to go? more

Where are all of the people going to go? I feel bad for all of the people who are losing everything they own. How do they accommodate all of the people coming to the refugee camps?

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K Kelley K Kelley (Oct 08 2014 12:22PM) : This picture brings to life the amount of suffering on the individual scale of a fammily more
The emotion in this picture is really expressed through the look on the mans face, and his wife crying.
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Devonte Brown Devonte Brown (Oct 08 2014 8:55AM) : That's a lot of people and kids and they in a war why the and why the war wasn't short and why was it was so mush money.this part of the article was interning [Edited]
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Mr Jose Hernandez Mr Jose Hernandez (Oct 08 2014 1:53PM) : Their only about 14,000 people.that they don't have where to live. They worried that they not going to help this people. more

Well only if I was rich I would help them. I think that rich people should help them.

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Jessica Hill Jessica Hill (Oct 10 2014 1:41PM) : i like this sentence because it was saying how over 1.3 millions have war more

so it is really cool home they had over 1.3 million people to be there in the camp

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Dashawn Lloyd Dashawn Lloyd (Oct 10 2014 2:36PM) : telling us about how many people that's in the shelters. more

Its crazy because people don’t have no space so its really bad 1.3 million lose they houses

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Laquana Thomas Laquana Thomas (Oct 20 2014 11:34AM) : How can that many people as 14,000 really live a shelter? more

I think that its really sad that 1.3 million people lost their houses & especially the parents that has their babies & kids.

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Jennifer Espinal Jennifer Espinal (Oct 28 2014 1:50PM) : it really sad that a lot of those people dont got homes more

i see that they are really stress out

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Jennifer Espinal Jennifer Espinal (Oct 28 2014 1:52PM) : It says Turkey are lossing they homes more

it sad because they dont have they homes & bing in the streest is really bad they could get kill 7 stuff

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Vontay Farmer Vontay Farmer (Oct 14 2014 9:03AM) : This Is heartbreaking for me because... more

I feel this is heartbreaking because this what they have to go through in order to have somewhere to live, i dont want turkry to spend all their money because then what if they need housing for their country turkey.

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Dashawn Lloyd Dashawn Lloyd (Oct 14 2014 2:16PM) : a lot of people losing they houses more

It says Turkey spent billions on houses thats a lot of people that don’t have a house

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Will Ryan Will Ryan (Oct 08 2014 12:32PM) : Its a very scary thought that the Syrian refugees are wearing out their welcome with the Turks. They will have no other place to go if they are kicked out, leaving them as a very exposed and vulnerable population.
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Jennifer Espinal Jennifer Espinal (Oct 28 2014 1:45PM) : i think they dont havee money or jobs more

i think about this picture that is really sad bcausee they dont got job or money to eat or feeds they kids

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Ronny Morales Ronny Morales (Nov 06 2014 1:58PM) : they should stop war or war is goin to stop us more

this people are the terrorist that are going to end this world

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“We wait,” says Mohammed Nassuh, a Syrian ex-colonel living at the Kilis camp for a year with his family. “Eating. Sleeping. Watching time pass. I will do anything. I will work as a janitor. I will go anywhere. This is not a life.”

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Palak Jayswal Palak Jayswal (Oct 08 2014 12:18PM) : This is not a life. more

It makes me sad to think of the thousands of people like Mohammed Nassuh who are displaced at refugee camps just like these. He is right when he says that “this is not a life.” Nobody deserves to live like this if you can call it a life. It makes me really sad to think about all the children who aren’t getting a chance with a normal joy filled childhood.

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Mr Jose Hernandez Mr Jose Hernandez (Oct 10 2014 1:48PM) : Well people over their look like they have hard time having a job. more

If I was rich I would help them have job and help their family

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George Mendoza George Mendoza (Nov 07 2014 11:35AM) : “Eating. Sleeping.2 Watching time pass. I will do anything. I will work as a janitor. I will go anywhere.1 This is not a life.” more

Right there Mohammed Nassuh says he tired of that life. He said he would work as a janitor or anything they told him to do.

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Maria Valerio Maria Valerio (Oct 14 2014 9:01AM) : The key ideas in this sentence is that the man is saying that he doesn't have a life more

I think this sentence interested to me because the man said he doesn’t have a life because he wants to have a job, have kids, and go to differents like supermarkets,store.

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Catherin Taveras Catherin Taveras (Oct 15 2014 1:52PM) : the man dosnt want to be there more

this man is saying that the way he lives in the refugee that’s not a life and he thinks its a horrible place

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Jessica Hill Jessica Hill (Oct 10 2014 1:44PM) : it says here i will go anywhere more

so as you see that they will be going anywhere they want to go

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The lucky ones: Children displaced by the civil war in Syria sing their national anthem in a refugee school operated by the Turkish government. After more than three years of fighting, the the cost of such facilities is no longer sustainable. Kilis camp, Turkey.

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Justin Perez Justin Perez (Oct 08 2014 8:51AM) : What made him wan't to start his paragraph f with "The lucky ones" more

was he trying to that we were lucky because we wasn’t suffering in the civil war like these kids

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Lucile Taluy Lucile Taluy (Oct 08 2014 9:14AM) : The main idea of this paragraph is that the kid are in a school where they save by the government. more

This whole paragraph is about kid that they took from they home and move them to a better place were they save with grown up and the government don’t have money to take care of them and if they don’t don’t have food they could die but if people from another county heard the news of this kid they could help them. What I have to say about this is it scary.

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Mr Jose Hernandez Mr Jose Hernandez (Oct 10 2014 1:41PM) : Well people were fight to be able to live their. If I live their I would help the teacher.
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Melissa Procton Melissa Procton (Oct 14 2014 1:30PM) : you spelled wrong more

this is kayla

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Catherin Taveras Catherin Taveras (Oct 15 2014 1:59PM) : the children sing their national anthem more

the children in the refuge camp are proud of there country even tho its being bombed

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Moquan Reed Moquan Reed (Nov 07 2014 11:18AM) : i dont know what they was doing but i didnt know they...... more

so i see they got toys and rugs this video look like its in a day care that they have in African where ever he at but it look like a clean stop that he have on video

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Devonte Brown Devonte Brown (Oct 08 2014 9:00AM) : I'm happy for the lucky ones cause the don't have to be in the war.and the get to go to school. [Edited]
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Devonte Brown Devonte Brown (Oct 08 2014 9:05AM) : if i was the kid i will run away are do something
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Malcolm Wedderburn Malcolm Wedderburn (Oct 10 2014 1:41PM) : if u look real good u could see that there his somebody being handed
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Dashawn Lloyd Dashawn Lloyd (Oct 14 2014 2:24PM) : Lucky kids haven fun. more

Some kids or lucky and some or not its because have to grown up with no home.

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Laquana Thomas Laquana Thomas (Oct 28 2014 11:24AM) : I wonder why does the person who wrote this uses the line "The lucky ones" as the topic? more

Some kids are lucky & some are not. The poor kids that can’t eat a meal are really suffering all through pain every single day. The lucky kids that do have a home, clothes, & meals everyday don’t realize when they waste food that’s bad because some kids don’t even eat at all.

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Moquan Reed Moquan Reed (Nov 07 2014 11:36AM) : i dont know why they happy at they contrary if they in war more

so i dont know why they happy at where they come from because they in war right now i dont get it if im in war im going to mad i dont know why they happy problem is they going to lose people

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Videographer: Paul Salopek. Producer: Adam Jabari Jefferson

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Maria Valerio Maria Valerio (Oct 14 2014 8:52AM) : This sentence is telling about the producer of the video more

The producer is telling how they used to live and there food, clothes, and there cultures.

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this like camp for refugee they don’t look happy more like they want to leave
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Zion Dawson Zion Dawson (Oct 08 2014 8:02AM) : It shelters more than 14,000 people—a fraction of the estimated 1.3 million refugees who have sought sanctuary from war more
wow this is crazy that this people have to go this they should’t be in killis refugee camp in my opinion they should move to other city
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