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Demonstration Speech Example
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Oct 13
Charis Paez
Charis Paez
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I liked how confident she was. She did a great job of going through each of the steps.
Oct 13
Amyah Griffin
Amyah Griffin
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I also like how confident she was. I think how she explained it was very elaborative.
Oct 13
student Aryanah Williams
student Aryanah Williams
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I think she did a good job explaining everything with details.
Oct 13
student Aryanah Williams
student Aryanah Williams
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I also think she did a good job demonstrating how things should be done while still making eye contact to the audience.
Oct 13
student Aryanah Williams
student Aryanah Williams
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I like how she went step by step and didn't miss anything even the small steps where there.
Oct 13
Charis Paez
Charis Paez
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I thought she used hand gestures very well. I thought it added to her speech.
Oct 13
Logan McCormick
Logan McCormick
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I feel like she's done a fine job, I liked how she informed us on the dangers to look out for when jumpstarting the car.
Oct 13
Grace Szczerba
Grace Szczerba
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I liked the way she explained what’s important and why we should know this information. A lot of the time things may seem like we don’t really need to know them or someone else can do it for us but she explained why we should know this information.
Oct 13
Sariyah Corbitt
Sariyah Corbitt
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Throughout the entire demonstration, she explained each detail of the steps and the process.
Oct 13
Amyah Griffin
Amyah Griffin
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It was very helpful that she did this, I understood what was going on way easier because of how she explained every step.
Oct 13
Amyah Griffin
Amyah Griffin
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I like how she had great props that were big enough for the audience to see so that we can understand what she was doing.
Aug 23
Professor Jessica Gleason
Professor Jessica Gleason
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You do not need to start a speech with "Hello my name is..." In fact, it would be better to start with a strong attention grabber. She gets there, but not right away.
Oct 13
Emily Monosa
Emily Monosa
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I think it is important that she told us where we can buy them and how much they are. With this information, we can go buy a set if we don't already have one.
Oct 13
Alayna Smith
Alayna Smith
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I very much agree with this. It makes it a lot easier for the person to have a good idea if they can afford it. Or where to get it if they really need one
Oct 13
Grace Szczerba
Grace Szczerba
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I agree this is a super important step to any demonstration speech
Oct 13
Paige Phillips
Paige Phillips
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I appreciate how she discloses the purchasing information of the products, as some audience might not know for sure themselves.
Oct 13
Kimberly McGuinness
Kimberly McGuinness
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I agree, I think this was a great thing to share as well as some may not have that information. Very thoughtful.
Oct 13
Alana Taylor
Alana Taylor
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I like how she mentions the information from the automotive repair company. Definitely adds to the credibility of her speech!
Oct 13
Logan McCormick
Logan McCormick
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I agree, it might even help people out when they don't know what to do.
Oct 13
Sariyah Corbitt
Sariyah Corbitt
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I liked how she had facts and information from credible companies who specialize in automotive field.
Oct 13
Ian Blinderman
Ian Blinderman
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It helped solidify her experience with what she is talking about, it made her much more trustworthy.
Oct 13
Spencer Schick
Spencer Schick
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I really like her creativity in her visual aids. I like how she made a replica car battery out of shoeboxes!
Oct 13
Alayna Smith
Alayna Smith
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I was thinking the same thing.I liked how she used something so simple that made her speech look more complex. It was simple enough for the audience to follow along
Oct 13
Paige Phillips
Paige Phillips
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Yes! I think creating your own visual aids as a sort of craft can really help the audience better appreciate and enjoy the speech while listening.
Oct 13
Grace Szczerba
Grace Szczerba
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I agree i think it’s good to get creative when it comes to things you can’t directly replicate such as how to jumpstart a car.
Oct 13
Alana Taylor
Alana Taylor
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I agree! I think it was a really creative idea of hers and I am hoping to have a creative idea for mine!
Oct 13
Logan McCormick
Logan McCormick
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I agree, I thought it was interesting for visual aids.
Oct 13
Emily Monosa
Emily Monosa
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By sharing this fact about the length of the jumper cables, it may help us with our purchase of the size of the jumper cables. Additionally, this shows that she is well informed about her topic.
Oct 13
Sariyah Corbitt
Sariyah Corbitt
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I like how she exampled what type of cables is best for the jump start process and why those cables are the best to use.
Oct 13
Paige Phillips
Paige Phillips
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I really like how she takes pauses throughout the speech, saying things like, "That's important," making sure the audience takes a second to realize that. I think that is a great step in actually informing and not only showing.
Oct 13
Alayna Smith
Alayna Smith
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I really liked how she had a really good flow when she talked. She didn't talk too fast and she paused when it was needed
Oct 13
Ian Blinderman
Ian Blinderman
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It adds a form of humor, while also keeping that information more relevant to remember.
Oct 13
Spencer Schick
Spencer Schick
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I like how she references the book "How to jump start your car for dummies". I think this is a good approach because it gives the audience a recommendation of a book to look into if they have more questions.
Oct 13
Kimberly McGuinness
Kimberly McGuinness
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I agree. Giving the audience additional resources such as she did allows people to gather more info should they feel they want to expand on what they just learned in a quick demo tutorial.
Oct 13
Emily Monosa
Emily Monosa
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She mentions sources she got her information from to help back up her knowledge and make her speech more professional.
Oct 13
Alana Taylor
Alana Taylor
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I believe that she is pretty knowledgeable on this topic. I like how she has her notes to read but is still able to maintain eye contact with the audience.
Oct 13
Viviana Garcia
Viviana Garcia
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I like how she mentioned to make sure your car is even able to be jumps started. I did not know that some cars couldn't be jumpstarted, so this information was very useful to me.
Oct 13
Emily Monosa
Emily Monosa
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This is important, because many people don't know this and it could cause them to get injured very seriously.
Oct 13
Kimberly McGuinness
Kimberly McGuinness
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I feel like she could have added in the importance of why you need to connect that last cable to something metal. That bit of info could be helpful to some.
Oct 13
Viviana Garcia
Viviana Garcia
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I like how she stated in which specific order to take off the cables. I didn't know they should be taken off in a specific order, so this is very useful information.
Oct 13
Spencer Schick
Spencer Schick
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I like the idea of giving a handout to the audience to take home with them in case they ever encounter this problem. That is a smart tactic to use to have engagement with the audience after the speech.
Oct 13
Viviana Garcia
Viviana Garcia
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I agree! I don't think I could remember all of these specific steps, so having a handout would be really useful in case a situation like this ever happens to me.
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Oct 13
Ian Blinderman
Ian Blinderman
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The whole speech she does a great job using gestures to help the audience interpret what she is talking about.
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