Alayna Smith(Nov 10 2021 9:10AM):
I agree with this. It totally grabs peoples attention, and all her jokes went really well with every single thing that she discussed
Grace Szczerba(Nov 10 2021 9:08AM):
I liked the way she started with a joke and continued to make jokes throughout, that’s a good way to keep people engaged and listening
Zach Reif(Nov 10 2021 9:09AM):
Infusing humor between her points are great transitions. I also love that she uses the stage and moves around to address different parts of the audience.
Professor Jessica Gleason(Nov 10 2021 9:13AM):
One key rule to movement in speeches is to move with purpose. When does she move? Does it make sense? Is she using movement as a transition?
Grace Szczerba(Nov 10 2021 9:11AM):
I noticed the way she paused when people were laughing as to avoid speaking over people and I think that’s a great thing to keep in mind when giving a speech with jokes written in
Viviana Garcia(Nov 10 2021 9:12AM):
Overall, I think she did a great speech. Her tone was confident, she cited her sources smoothly, and she used great attention grabbers like humor to keep the audience engaged.
Emily Monosa(Nov 10 2021 9:01AM):
Right at the start she makes a joke to help entertain the audience. This is a good way to start so the audience gets a good impression of the speaker from the get go and they continue to pay attention.
Paige Phillips(Nov 10 2021 9:02AM):
I love how she opens her speech with a few jokes and silly remarks; it is such a good way to get the audience warmed up to her and the continuation of her overall point.
Ian Blinderman(Nov 10 2021 9:07AM):
The jokes enhance the speech lots and make it interesting to listen to. I didn't find myself bored while listening to her speak, she had my attention the entire time.
Kimberly McGuinness(Nov 10 2021 9:05AM):
She seamlessly corrects herself as she stumbles on a word and continues on without skipping a beat. It was almost unnoticeable.
Professor Jessica Gleason(Nov 10 2021 9:10AM):
That's exactly what you want to do. People probably won't notice a mistake unless you draw attention to it. So, just keep going!
Amyah Griffin(Nov 10 2021 9:11AM):
I barely noticed her mistakes as well! I had to double take in order to notice it because she did not hesitate to continue her flow.
Paige Phillips(Nov 10 2021 9:14AM):
Yes! I noticed how she does this a few other times in her speech, but it was so small that it was hardly noticeable. The ability to correct speaking mistakes is such an amazing skill, as it shows your professionalism and the hard work put into the speech.
Zach Reif(Nov 10 2021 9:16AM):
She's so good at not even reacting to any mistakes and continuing on with confidence or using facial expressions of body language to make it feel like a natural part of the speech.
Emily Monosa(Nov 10 2021 9:06AM):
Her we can see how she cites a reliable source in her speech and she keeps it sounding fluid and not choppy. This is good to see as we will be having to do this soon.
Amyah Griffin(Nov 10 2021 9:14AM):
I agree,I like the way she cited her sources while not making it seem like she was directly citing them word for word.
Paige Phillips(Nov 10 2021 9:06AM):
I think her switching from discussing the serious issue of poverty and how the lower class is viewed, and her lighter remarks are really refreshing to listen to. It helps the audience stay engaged.
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Mikayla Schaenzer(Nov 10 2021 9:08AM):
she gives multiple verbal citations throughout her speech and she does a really good job of making it flow naturally.
Kimberly McGuinness(Nov 10 2021 9:15AM):
I agree Ian, she did this several times in her speech and she does it really well! I was so impressed with her speech.
Sage Hudec(Nov 10 2021 9:09AM):
She gives her view on lower class and how "not working hard enough" isn't always the case. She quoted a professor for one of her sources.
Kimberly McGuinness(Nov 10 2021 9:10AM):
I think she makes great use of body language. In this segment she’s using her hands/fingers to help people visualize what she’s saying.
Alayna Smith(Nov 10 2021 9:12AM):
I really liked her body language also. She was enthusiastic and funny about it. It kept my attention and it was entertaining.
Sariyah Corbitt(Nov 10 2021 9:14AM):
Even though she had messed up a little bit during her verbal citation, she didn't let that affect the rest of her speech.
Ian Blinderman(Nov 10 2021 9:11AM):
She states a real issue and gives a powerful take on how the poor get poorer because people think poorer people they are better off than they really are, it got me thinking.
Emily Monosa(Nov 10 2021 9:13AM):
This is very true today we often see people and view them by how much money they have and if they are poor or wealthy. This way of thinking needs to change.
Emily Monosa(Nov 10 2021 9:17AM):
Throughout the speech, she continues to make jokes and makes the audience laugh even though she is talking about a serious topic. I believe she is a very good speaker because she took a topic some may not want to listen to and made it fun and entertaining
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