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Learning to Read and Write by Frederick Douglass

Author: Frederick Douglass


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Learning to Read and Write

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Frederick Douglass

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I lived in Master Hugh's family about seven years. During this time, I succeeded in learning to read and write. In accomplishing this, I was compelled to resort to various stratagems. I had no regular teacher. My mistress, who had kindly commenced to instruct me, had, in compliance with the advice and direction of her husband, not only ceased to instruct, but had set her face against my being instructed by anyone else. It is due, however, to my mistress to say of her, that she did not adopt this course of treatment immediately. She at first lacked the depravity indispensable to shutting me up in mental darkness. It was at least necessary for her to have some training in the exercise of irresponsible power, to make her equal to the task of treating me as though I were a brute.

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Charles W Charles W (Oct 04 2021 9:08PM) : Speaker more

Tells us who Frederick Douglass was, how he gained his knowledge, and begins the conversation of his condition.

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Arual D Arual D (Oct 05 2021 3:09PM) : It was a good way to establish context and get to know the speaker
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2022 Samuel H 2022 Samuel H (Oct 04 2021 9:55PM) : Opening paragraph gives us a summary of who Fredrick Douglas was.
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Meaghan M Meaghan M (Oct 06 2021 3:20PM) : Maybe tell us who he was and what he did to grow his knowledge
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Neve S Neve S (Oct 18 2021 11:11PM) : This helps us learn about the background story. The purpose us to show what he will be telling the audience about.
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Claire P Claire P (Oct 19 2021 7:02PM) : Introduction / What details it gives us more

This paragraph explains a small background into who Frederick Douglass was and what he did. Gives reader more knowledge of what to expect when continuing on.

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Andrea G Andrea G (Oct 19 2021 7:16PM) : This paragraph tells us who Fredrick Douglass was. It also establishes how he has gotten to where he has gotten to where he is. Where it introduces the speaker, it also provides some context to the rest of the document.
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Olivia C Olivia C (Oct 01 2021 12:56PM) : Gives background of who is presenting the text, speaker.
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Great background for the rest of the story

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Neve S Neve S (Oct 19 2021 10:46AM) : I agree. I think it gives the readers a good understanding of what is going on
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Bella T Bella T (Oct 05 2021 12:30PM) : I think this helps give the background story and helps us understand who is speaking
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Anguau M Anguau M (Oct 05 2021 3:08PM) : Yes, I agree with background a story it gives us readers an idea/understanding of what's happening.
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Olivia C Olivia C (Oct 01 2021 12:57PM) : Purpose, shows what the speaker wants the audience to learn, the topic of this article.
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Paul F Paul F (Oct 02 2021 12:56PM) : Paragraph 1, Sentence 2 more

Shows his purpose/what he wants his audience to learn about while they’re reading

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jack h jack h (Oct 03 2021 2:46PM) : Paragraph 1 Sentance @ [Edited] more

States the purpose for writing the exerpt.

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Isabella V Isabella V (Oct 03 2021 6:21PM) : This tells why this time was significant compared to the rest and sets the tone and topic of this piece.
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Kate Y Kate Y (Oct 04 2021 6:49PM) : Purpose of the writing- it shows what he will be telling the audience about
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Anguau M Anguau M (Oct 05 2021 12:22AM) : Fedrick presents himself to us reader as who he is and background.
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Lily T Lily T (Oct 05 2021 3:06PM) : Key Idea of article more

Overall pupose of this article. Wraps up the idea of what you are about to read.

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Arual D Arual D (Oct 05 2021 3:09PM) : even as he was enslaved, he learned to read/write
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Meaghan M Meaghan M (Oct 06 2021 3:21PM) : This is the reason as to why he started to write
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Zoe M Zoe M (Oct 05 2021 12:44AM) : Gives direction for the opening paragraph.
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2022 G. S 2022 G. S (Oct 01 2021 3:06PM) : I don't know where I would be without my teachers and support system. It is impressive to imagine what he had to do to break the pattern
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Suzy T Suzy T (Oct 04 2021 6:36PM) : Purpose: shows he had to teach himself how to read and write to show jsut how bad the situation was.
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Paul F Paul F (Oct 05 2021 3:04PM) : How? more

How did he show how bad the situation was, though? What descriptions/adjectives did he use? Does it also give any specifics or foreshadowing at the beginning as to how he learned to read and write? I’d be interested to know.

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Liam A Liam A (Oct 05 2021 12:23AM) : Not having a teacher, and still learning to read and write is quite impressive
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Bella T Bella T (Oct 05 2021 3:06PM) : I agree with you. Not having a teacher can be really difficult. It is super impressive he was able to learn how to read and write without that figure to help him.
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Andrew B Andrew B (Oct 05 2021 10:20PM) : I totally agree with you. I have no idea where I would be without my teachers and seeing that he figured that out on his own is very impressive.
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Jossan A Jossan A (Oct 05 2021 3:07PM) : Not having a good teacher can seriously impact a persons ability to do anything in the future. I think its cool how he taught himself everything
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2022 G. S 2022 G. S (Oct 01 2021 3:48PM) : Mistress? Is this like the lady of the house or what? more

Words have different meanings now. It is interesting to see how meanings change.

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Lily T Lily T (Oct 05 2021 3:07PM) : I thought this too. more

I was wondering what he meant by this too, and I believe it definitley had different meaning back then too. What are some of the context clues we can use to come to this conclusion?

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Paul F Paul F (Oct 02 2021 12:57PM) : Paragraph 1, Sentence 5 more

Used to mean just the master’s wife in old times, words change over time

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brooklyn w brooklyn w (Oct 11 2021 8:41AM) : P1 sent 5 more

The word “mistress” is appropriate at that time but now almost a derogatory term. How do we decipher between what to and not appropriate?

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Claire P Claire P (Oct 19 2021 7:04PM) : Slave Mentality / Today's World more

This sentence really spoke out to me, because in our world today, we wouldn’t consider knowing how to read a privilege. This act of kindness allowed Douglass to share his words with generations to come.

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Lily V Lily V (Sep 30 2021 10:24PM) : The author is describing instead of telling how his instructor would shut him up "in mental darkness" [Edited]
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Shows the unwillingness of his master’s wife to do something considered illegal at the time.

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Alex Y Alex Y (Oct 04 2021 2:02AM) : sets up claim that slavery and looking down on a person are not inherent qualities, and likewise, that slaves are regular people until depravity happens

My mistress was, as I have said, a kind and tender‐hearted woman; and in the simplicity of her soul she commenced, when I first went to live with her, to treat me as she supposed one human being ought to treat another. In entering upon the duties of a slaveholder, she did not seem to perceive that I sustained to her the relation of a mere chattel, and that for her to treat me as a human being was not only wrong, but dangerously so. Slavery proved as injurious to her as it did to me. When I went there, she was a pious, warm, and tender‐hearted woman. There was no sorrow or suffering for which she had not a tear. She had bread for the hungry, clothes for the naked, and comfort for every mourner that came within her reach. Slavery soon proved its ability to divest her of these heavenly qualities. Under its influence, the tender heart became stone, and the lamb‐Iike disposition gave way to one of tiger‐like fierce‐ ness. The first step in her downward course was in her ceasing to instruct me. She now commenced to practice her husband's precepts. She finally became even more violent in her opposition than her husband himself. She was not satisfied with simply doing as well as he had commanded; she seemed anxious to do better. Nothing seemed to make her more angry than to see me with a newspaper. She seemed to think that here lay the danger. I have had her rush at me with a face made all up of fury, and snatch from me a newspaper, in a manner that fully revealed her apprehension. She was an apt woman; and a little experience soon demonstrated, to her satisfaction, that education and slavery were incompatible with each other.

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Connor M Connor M (Oct 04 2021 9:12PM) : Great discriptive words
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Charles W Charles W (Oct 04 2021 9:22PM) : Use of Purpose, Context, and Exigence. more

Explains how his mistress slowly developed a more negative mindset toward him. Inspired him to write about this moment as a turning point in his life with her. Even kind people began to feel hatred towards the slaves as more opposition was pushed onto them.

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Zoe M Zoe M (Oct 05 2021 12:47AM) : Overall a great use of imagery. Lots of descriptive adjectives.
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Andrea G Andrea G (Oct 19 2021 7:26PM) : This demonstrates some context, imagery, purpose, and exigence all in one. It explains how his past experiences drew him to write. It also shows how he has grown as a person. There are many examples of imagery through the adjectives he chose.
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Isabella V Isabella V (Oct 03 2021 6:26PM) : describes the character and importance she held to him and holds his views of how someone is supposed to be treated and how she treated him as so, pathos
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Brianna V Brianna V (Oct 05 2021 3:10PM) : I agree, this shows the importance she has on him [Edited]
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2022 Samuel H 2022 Samuel H (Oct 04 2021 9:58PM) : author describes the mistress, which plays a key part in his learning of reading and writing and notes an interesting thought of thinking of slaves as just other people.
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Georgia S Georgia S (Oct 04 2021 10:02PM) : This comment speaking to how his mistress treated him like a human being implies that he had little experience with the idea.
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Mariam A Mariam A (Oct 05 2021 3:09PM) : in this sentence we get a description of the mistress, which is important because it showed who she was a person and this built his experiences as well as what he has learned from
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Lily V Lily V (Sep 30 2021 10:31PM) : pathos
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Paul F Paul F (Oct 02 2021 1:01PM) : Paragraph 4. Sentence 2 [Edited] more

Appeals to the emotions of the audience very well here.

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Isabella V Isabella V (Oct 03 2021 6:27PM) : Uses pathos to use the emotions to appeal
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Kate Y Kate Y (Oct 04 2021 6:51PM) : Gives context- explains how her teaching him how to read and write at this time was considered dangerous and unacceptable
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Yan C Yan C (Oct 05 2021 2:00AM) : Describe the mistress’s attitude toward him, explains why she teaches him because she treated him as a human being.
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Brecklyn J Brecklyn J (Oct 15 2021 1:42PM) : Shows emotion and how the mistress perceived him as a human being which was wrong for slaveholders to do.
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Lily V Lily V (Sep 30 2021 10:31PM) : claim
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Author’s claim, but could also count as pathos.

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Brody D Brody D (Oct 05 2021 3:07PM) : This is a good point because initially it didn't really seem like a major claim since the writing isn't argumentative or seemingly done with the goal of proving a point. But it definitely functions as a pathos to a larger hidden claim.
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Penelope D Penelope D (Oct 03 2021 4:39PM) : Authors claim, saying that slavery hurt her as well as him
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Isabella V Isabella V (Oct 03 2021 6:28PM) : claim of what he thinks to be true
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Lilyana L Lilyana L (Oct 04 2021 4:12PM) : In Depth Sentence more

Appeals to pathos as we see his attempts to relate the claim through pity and sadness.

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Brianna V Brianna V (Oct 05 2021 3:05PM) : Hey queen! Girl you have done it again. Constantly raising the bar for us all and doing it flawlessly. I'd say I'm surprised but I know who you are. I've seen it up close and personal. Girl you make me so proud
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Alex Y Alex Y (Oct 04 2021 2:04AM) : repeated use of "kind" and "tender-hearted" adjectives to describe his mistress showing that people have the ability to treat slaves like real people
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Lily V Lily V (Sep 30 2021 10:33PM) : evidence
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Definitely evidence for Douglas’ claim.

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Isabella V Isabella V (Oct 03 2021 6:28PM) : evidence to his claim
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Lily V Lily V (Sep 30 2021 10:34PM) : reasoning
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Because (for this reason).

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Araxan O Araxan O (Oct 03 2021 10:30PM) : I like how he establishes the qualities typical of the mistress, and how they would not end up surviving slavery.
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Lily V Lily V (Sep 30 2021 10:38PM) : Use descriptive words and a sad tone more

Tone shift from a nice tone(She was nice) to a sad one (she became not nice). Uses imagery of the heart becoming stone and simile “tiger-like” to show how slavery negatively affected her as a slaveholder

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Penelope D Penelope D (Oct 03 2021 4:42PM) : Evidence, shows how she got turned into a hateful person because of slavery
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Sadie D Sadie D (Oct 03 2021 10:05PM) : Use of similes to compare her changes in disposition as a result of slavery
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Marisa D Marisa D (Oct 04 2021 2:49PM) : Douglas talks about how slavery turns the kindest people into stone-cold heartless people. Appealing to pathos
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Suzy T Suzy T (Oct 04 2021 6:39PM) : Choices: purposefully chose to tell about the lady and her story with her experience with slavery and how it cahnged her, showing that it is inherently bad.
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Georgia S Georgia S (Oct 04 2021 10:05PM) : Speaks metaphorically, almost prophetic: choice
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Sammy J Sammy J (Oct 15 2021 1:24PM) : Slavery turned her hateful
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Cameron M Cameron M (Oct 15 2021 1:37PM) : Claim more

Education makes slavery harder to enforce. when people are educated or educate other as an equal it goes against the doctrines imposed by slavery as a whole.

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Lily V Lily V (Sep 30 2021 10:39PM) : She became more like her husband
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Paul F Paul F (Oct 02 2021 1:10PM) : Paragraph 2, Sentence 11 more

Ethos

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Araxan O Araxan O (Oct 03 2021 10:31PM) : Evidence supporting claim
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Liam A Liam A (Oct 05 2021 12:25AM) : Evidence of his claim more

The evidence that it was not easy for Douglass to even be able to read and write let alone learn it on his own

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Lily V Lily V (Sep 30 2021 10:41PM) : claim
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Kate Y Kate Y (Oct 04 2021 6:53PM) : Claim that slavery and education didn't ever go together
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2022 Samuel H 2022 Samuel H (Oct 04 2021 10:00PM) : great ending to the paragraph and shows the mistresses "true colors".

From this time I was most narrowly watched. If I was in a separate room any considerable length of time, I was sure to be suspected of having a book, and was at once called to give an account of myself. All this, however, was too late. The first step had been taken. Mistress, in teaching me the alphabet, had given me the inch, and no precaution could prevent me from taking the ell.

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Araxan O Araxan O (Oct 03 2021 10:32PM) : Strong conclusion to the paragraph [Edited]
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Lilyana L Lilyana L (Oct 05 2021 3:04PM) : Strong Conclusion Indeed more

The conclusion was very strong as it was supported by descriptive words such as how they ‘most narrowly watched.’

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Lily V Lily V (Sep 30 2021 10:41PM) : evidence
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Description

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The plan which I adopted, and the one by which I was most successful, was that of making friends of all the little white boys whom I met in the street. As many of these as I could, I converted into teachers. With their kindly aid, obtained at different times and in different places, I finally succeeded in learning to read. When I was sent to errands, I always took my book with me, and by doing one part of my errand quickly, I found time to get a lesson before my return. I used also to carry bread with me, enough of which was always in the house, and to which I was always welcome; for I was much better off in this regard than many of the poor white children in our neighborhood. This bread I used to bestow upon the hungry little urchins, who, in return, would give me that more valuable bread of knowledge. I am strongly tempted to give the names of two or three of those little boys, as a testimonial of the gratitude and affection I bear them; but prudence forbids‐not that it would injure me, ~ but it might embarrass them; for it is almost an unpardonable offense to teach slaves to read in this Christian country. It is enough to say of the dear little fellows, that they lived on Philpot Street, very near Durgin and Bailey's shipyard. I used to talk this matter of slavery over with them. I would sometimes say to them, I wished I could be as free as they would be when they got to be men. "You will be free as soon as you are twenty‐ one, but I am a slave for life! Have not I as good a right to be free as you have?" These words used to trouble them; they would express for me the liveliest sympathy, and console me with the hope that something would occur by which I might be free.

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Brianna V Brianna V (Oct 04 2021 11:32PM) : "Valuable bread of knowledge" used his story to how emotion and leave an important message at the end. Pathos
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Claire P Claire P (Oct 19 2021 7:07PM) : Value of the Reading more

It explains how important this was to him. Douglass had the opportunity to spread his knowledge to his children and many people. He also got to share his voice.

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Olivia C Olivia C (Oct 01 2021 1:00PM) : Exigence in how the author tells the reasoning for this story and the purpose of the situation
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Claim

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Andrea G Andrea G (Oct 19 2021 7:32PM) : Shows the purpose and the reasoning for his writing.
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Olivia C Olivia C (Oct 01 2021 1:01PM) : Shows context as he tells that these children became his teachers, and he learned to read
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Context, but also evidence for claim.

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Marisa D Marisa D (Oct 04 2021 2:53PM) : appeals to emotion again. He talks about the kindness of others providing him with the opportunity to read.
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brooklyn w brooklyn w (Oct 11 2021 8:42AM) : follow up more

How important is it to bring emotion into a piece and what role did it play and Douglass’ work?

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2022 Samuel H 2022 Samuel H (Oct 04 2021 10:01PM) : author states that white children eventually turned into teachers for him and helped in his journey to learning how to read and write.
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Lily V Lily V (Sep 30 2021 10:42PM) : telling us how he learned how to read and how he educated himself
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Suzy T Suzy T (Oct 04 2021 6:41PM) : Exigence: took advantage of what was previously a useless task
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Maya R Maya R (Oct 19 2021 10:41AM) : further context into how interested he was in developing his knowledge
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Paul F Paul F (Oct 02 2021 1:18PM) : Paragraph 4, Sentence 6 more

Great description, “valuable bread of knowledge”

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Isabella V Isabella V (Oct 03 2021 6:56PM) : pathos appealing to emotions of readers
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Brianna V Brianna V (Oct 04 2021 11:33PM) : "Valuable bread of knowledge" Is using their story to how their emotions. Great way to teach a lesson. Using Pathos [Edited]
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Lily V Lily V (Sep 30 2021 10:43PM) : ethos more

He is caring about the emotions of the boys who helped him, he is grateful but he knows they, right be embarrassed from helping him.

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Paul F Paul F (Oct 02 2021 1:19PM) : Paragraph 4, Sentence 7 more

Pathos, appealing to emotions again.

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Araxan O Araxan O (Oct 03 2021 10:33PM) : Appeals to emotions and human nature of the boys.
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Madison H Madison H (Oct 04 2021 9:14PM) : He is respecting and honoring the boys who have helped him by not saying their names.
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Liam A Liam A (Oct 05 2021 12:36AM) : His methods of learning to read using and appeal to pathos
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Zoe M Zoe M (Oct 05 2021 12:50AM) : This shows a level of trust. The author wasn't going to embarrass the boys by naming them, making him trustworthy in a way.
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Kurt M Kurt M (Oct 05 2021 12:58AM) : context = attitude of the country at the time
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Suzy T Suzy T (Oct 04 2021 6:43PM) : Appeals to pathos
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Cameron M Cameron M (Oct 15 2021 1:35PM) : pathos more

The paragraph from here forward appeals to our emotions which makes it pathos. Showing the way that the young boys struggled with the idea of slavery when they were not yet fully brainwashed with pro slavery views is compelling.

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Kate Y Kate Y (Oct 04 2021 6:54PM) : Pathos- appeals to both our emotions, but also appealed to the boys' emotions, makes us sympathetic that he would never be free
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Paul F Paul F (Oct 02 2021 1:19PM) : Paragraph 4, Sentence 10 more

Pathos

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Penelope D Penelope D (Oct 03 2021 4:45PM) : pathos, showing that slavery isn't all just using emotions
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Alex Y Alex Y (Oct 04 2021 2:07AM) : repeating support for his claim that slaves are regular people with his experience with the white kids on street - they treat him as a regular person and are sympathetic instead of embarrassed to be seen with him and vicious more

support 1: mistress teaching him how to write
support 2: kids wanted him to be free

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Marisa D Marisa D (Oct 04 2021 2:55PM) : emotion. Talking about how he would ask people if his freedom was not equal to theirs would create them to sympathize with slavery because they would want him to be free.
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2022 Samuel H 2022 Samuel H (Oct 04 2021 10:04PM) : even though the white children which he is hanging around are skeptical of his opinions regarding his freedom, they were optimistic and gave him hope for a better future.

I was now about twelve‐years‐old, and the thought of being a slave for life began to bear heavily upon my heart. Just about this time, I got hold of a book entitled "The Columbian Orator." Every opportunity I got, I used to read this book. Among much of other interesting matter, I found in it a dialogue between a master and his slave. The slave was rep‐ resented as having run away from his master three times. The dialogue represented the conversation which took place between them, when the slave was retaken the third time. In this dialogue, the whole argument in behalf of slavery was brought forward by the master, all of which was disposed of by the slave. The slave was made to say some very smart as, well as impressive things in reply to his master‐things which had the de‐ sired though unexpected effect; for the conversation resulted in the voluntary emancipation of the slave on the part of the master.

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Yan C Yan C (Oct 15 2021 1:22PM) : Bring pathos to the reader by given his hard feeling for being a slave for life.
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Lily V Lily V (Sep 30 2021 10:45PM) : ethos
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Characterizes what the nation was like then, so ethos.

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Araxan O Araxan O (Oct 03 2021 10:35PM) : Ethos establishing the eight of slavery acknowledged by Douglas.
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2022 Samuel H 2022 Samuel H (Oct 04 2021 10:06PM) : author uses ethos and shifts the tone of the previous sentence in the previous paragraph from optimism to hopelessness and fear.
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Georgia S Georgia S (Oct 04 2021 10:06PM) : Pathos: speaks to reader's emotions
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Brianna V Brianna V (Oct 04 2021 11:35PM) : Strong use of Ethos and Pathos. Knows what is about to happen but also alerts the reader about his emotions.
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Arual D Arual D (Oct 05 2021 3:08PM) : He was establishing background information and setting the scene. It gives readers a moment to think about how long he was enslaved and how these conditions made him feel.
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Brecklyn J Brecklyn J (Oct 15 2021 1:43PM) : The ethos used in this shows how Douglas doesn't want to live the life of a slave, and didn't want anyone else to be either.
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Meredith M Meredith M (Oct 15 2021 3:36PM) : Appeals to the emotions
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Lily V Lily V (Sep 30 2021 10:48PM) : Making the point that slaves can be smart as well and have good reasons to be emancipated
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Araxan O Araxan O (Oct 05 2021 3:07PM) : Therefore appealing to his logos.
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Logos, but also making a claim.

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Penelope D Penelope D (Oct 03 2021 4:48PM) : Logos, saying slaves have the ability to be well educated just like the rest of the country [Edited]
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Alex Y Alex Y (Oct 04 2021 2:09AM) : more support for claim - shows that slaves can have intelligent thought process and conversations
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Andrew B Andrew B (Oct 05 2021 10:24PM) : The logos here
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Maya R Maya R (Oct 19 2021 10:43AM) : His claim is that slaves have the ability to learn and be educated just like anyone else, logos

In the same book, I met with one of Sheridan's mighty speeches on and in behalf of Catholic emancipation. These were choice documents to me. I read them over and over again with unabated interest. They gave tongue to interesting thoughts of my own soul, which had frequently flashed through my mind, and died away for want of utterance. The moral which I gained from the dialogue was the power of truth over the conscience of even a slaveholder. What I got from Sheridan was a bold denunciation of slavery, and a powerful vindication of human rights. The reading of these documents enabled me to utter my thoughts, and to meet the arguments brought forward to sustain slavery; but while they relieved me of one difficulty, they brought on another even more painful than the one of which I was relieved. The more I read, the more I was led to abhor and detest my enslavers. I could regard them in no other light than a band of successful robbers, who had left their homes, and gone to Africa, and stolen us from our homes, and in a strange land reduced us to slavery. I loathed them as being the meanest as well as the most wicked of men. As I read and contemplated the subject, behold that very discontentment which Master Hugh had predicted would follow my learning to read had already come, to torment and sting my soul to unutterable anguish. As I writhed under it, I would at times feel that learning to read had been a curse rather than a blessing. It had given me a view of my wretched condition, without the remedy. It opened my eyes to the horrible pit, but to no ladder upon which to get out. In moments of agony, I envied my fellow‐slaves for their stupidity. I have often wished myself a beast. I preferred the condition of the meanest reptile to my own. Anything, no matter what, to get rid of thinking! It was this everlasting thinking of my condition that tormented me. There was no getting rid of it. It was pressed upon me by every object within sight or hearing, animate or inanimate. The silver trump of freedom had roused my soul to eternal wakefulness. Freedom now appeared, to disappear no more forever. It was heard in every sound, and seen in every thing. It was ever present to torment me with a sense of my wretched condition. I saw nothing without seeing it, I heard nothing without hearing it, and felt nothing without feeling it. It looked from every star, it smiled in every calm, breathed in every wind, and moved in every storm.

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Sadie D Sadie D (Oct 15 2021 1:25PM) : Describing what influenced him by citing a book relating to Catholicism may be a method of appealing to Catholics [Edited]
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Andrea G Andrea G (Oct 19 2021 7:36PM) : He told us what inspired him to write by acknowledging a book he read based on Castholicism.
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2022 Samuel H 2022 Samuel H (Oct 04 2021 10:07PM) : author begins to site works of literature that began to interest him.
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Logos, but could also be pathos

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Meaghan M Meaghan M (Oct 06 2021 3:22PM) : Sparks an interest in the matter of slavery and human rights
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Describing his mixed feelings about his new skill.

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Lily V Lily V (Sep 30 2021 10:51PM) : ethos more

starting to despise the people who enslave him, which was a more painful and strong feeling he had than his relief

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Suzy T Suzy T (Oct 04 2021 6:45PM) : Appeals to logos and pathos because being enslaved brought him much pain and he uses evidence (earlier) to backup his claims
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Alex Y Alex Y (Oct 04 2021 2:14AM) : caricatures slave owners to make them seem pitiful and thoughtless
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Suzy T Suzy T (Oct 04 2021 6:46PM) : word choice and tone help convey his contempt
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Kate Y Kate Y (Oct 04 2021 6:57PM) : This and the previous sentence describes the slave owners to be terrible men for treating people in this way- shows just how bad slavery was
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2022 Samuel H 2022 Samuel H (Oct 04 2021 10:11PM) : author uses logos and pathos to describe how he feels about the enslavers and also he is using this as his evidence to sway his readers into understanding his thought process when reading about them.
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Paul F Paul F (Oct 02 2021 1:26PM) : Paragraph 6, Sentence 9 more

Pathos

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2022 Samuel H 2022 Samuel H (Oct 04 2021 10:12PM) : logos, the author is describing logically what the slave master predicting would happen if he began reading about his identity as a slave and how it would eventually corrupt him and put him in a uncomfortable position.
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Lily V Lily V (Sep 30 2021 10:53PM) : He has seen the horrible things and he wishes he didn't know about it more

He wishes he could go back to when he didn’t know about the terrible thing slavery is and wishes he could go back to being ignorant like the other slaves who weren’t allowed education

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Paul F Paul F (Oct 02 2021 1:25PM) : Pathos more

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Alex Y Alex Y (Oct 04 2021 2:17AM) : play on the reader's emotions - descriptive language such as "agony" and "writhing" and "envied for stupidity" to show that slaves' situation was far worse than it seemed on the surface
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Lily V Lily V (Sep 30 2021 10:53PM) : He had to do something about it, it was haunting him
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Paul F Paul F (Oct 02 2021 1:27PM) : Paragraph 6, Sentence 14 more

Great Description

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Meredith M Meredith M (Oct 15 2021 3:40PM) : pathos
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Suzy T Suzy T (Oct 04 2021 6:48PM) : Repeated "nothing without" and then various senses to help readers slowly imagine life without them
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Madison H Madison H (Oct 05 2021 3:06PM) : Is there anything else he repeats a lot? If so what do they mean?
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Kate Y Kate Y (Oct 04 2021 6:58PM) : Describes how the idea of freedom never left him//shows instead of tell how it haunted him
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Lily V Lily V (Sep 30 2021 10:54PM) : Describing how the idea of freedom was all around him and he couldn't ignore it more

he was emersed in the idea of freedom

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Zoe M Zoe M (Oct 05 2021 3:04PM) : Banneker talked about freedom. He quoted the Declaration of Independence and talked about liberty. Similar to how Douglass talks about freedom a lot.

I often found myself regretting my own existence, and wishing myself dead; and but for the hope of being free, I have no doubt but that I should have killed myself, or done something for which I should have been killed. While in this state of mind, I was eager to hear anyone speak of slavery .I was a ready listener. Every little while, I could hear some‐ thing about the abolitionists. It was some time before I found what the word meant. It was always used in such connections as to make it an interesting word to me. If a slave ran away and succeeded in getting clear, or if a slave killed his master, set fire to a barn, or did anything very wrong in the mind of a slaveholder, it was spoken of as the fruit of abolition. Hearing the word in this connection very often, I set about learning what it meant. The dictionary afforded me little or no help. I found it was "the act of abolishing"; but then I did not know what was to be abolished. Here I was perplexed. I did not dare to ask anyone about its meaning, for I was satisfied that it was something they wanted me to know very little about. After a patient waiting, I got one of our city papers, containing an account of the number of petitions from the North, praying for the abolition of slavery in the District of Columbia, and of the slave trade between the States. From this time I understood the words abolition and abolitionist, and always drew near when that word was spoken, expecting to hear something of importance to myself and fellow‐slaves. The light broke in upon me by degrees. I went one day down on the wharf of Mr. Waters; and seeing two Irishmen unloading a scow of stone, I went, unasked, and helped them. When we had finished, one of them came to me and asked me if I were a slave. I told him I was. He asked, " Are ye a slave for life?" I told him that I was. The good Irishman seemed to be deeply affected by the statement. He said to the other that it was a pity so fine a little fellow as myself should be a slave for life. He said it was a shame to hold me. They both advised me to run away to the North; that I should find friends there, and that I should be free. I pretended not to be interested in what they said, and treated them as if I did not understand them; for I feared they might be treacherous. White men have been known to encourage slaves to escape, and then, to get the reward, catch them and return them to their masters. I was afraid that these seemingly good men might use me so; but I nevertheless remembered their advice, and from that time I resolved to run away. I looked forward to a time at which it would be safe for me to escape. I was too young to think of doing so immediately; besides, I wished to learn how to write, as I might have occasion to write my own pass. I consoled myself with the hope that I should one day find a good chance.

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Madison H Madison H (Oct 04 2021 9:15PM) : Shows survivors guilt, which many people, especially nowadays, have to deal with
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Lily V Lily V (Sep 30 2021 10:55PM) : ethos more

Reading this makes you feel empathy and compassion for this man

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Olivia C Olivia C (Oct 01 2021 1:02PM) : This shows more background to the speaker and makes the reader feel for him. The audience should feel empathy for him
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Kate Y Kate Y (Oct 04 2021 7:01PM) : Pathos- hearing how much he hated his life and thought death would be better makes us feel empathy for everything he had to go through [Edited]
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Charles W Charles W (Oct 04 2021 9:06PM) : Ethos more

Uses his pain and suffering as a condition for empathy. Wants the reader to sympathize with his condition.

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Georgia S Georgia S (Oct 04 2021 10:07PM) : another example pf pathos: pulls at your heart strings
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2022 Samuel H 2022 Samuel H (Oct 04 2021 10:14PM) : author uses ethos and strong emotion to convey his train of thought towards the "pit" he currently is in and how he does not see any escape out of this pit unless it means taking his life.
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Brianna V Brianna V (Oct 04 2021 11:37PM) : Strong use of Pathos. He wants the reader to understand the gravity of this situation and the pain and suffering he was put through.
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Liam A Liam A (Oct 05 2021 12:40AM) : Bringing out compassion in the reader for his situation
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Evan N Evan N (Oct 15 2021 1:25PM) : Personal Reflection more

The state of society that Douglas was placed in led him to believe that the only way he could gain freedom was through death.

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Maya R Maya R (Oct 19 2021 10:44AM) : pathos, "regretting my own existence". takes the reader into a sympathetic place.
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Andrea G Andrea G (Oct 19 2021 7:38PM) : Gives more background on Douglass and makes us understand and sympathize with him.
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Connor M Connor M (Oct 15 2021 1:23PM) : This shows what he was eager to hear people talk about lavery and that he wanted to listen to these poeple. This his attitude and wants.
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Paul F Paul F (Oct 02 2021 1:34PM) : Paragraph 8, sentence 3 more

Muddled background he’s hearing from the outside world.

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Araxan O Araxan O (Oct 03 2021 10:42PM) : These last two sentences remind me of a slaughter farm, strong story forwarding.
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Anguau M Anguau M (Oct 05 2021 12:30AM) : This is a good example of pathos, Fedrick wants us readers to feel/ sympathize with him and understand how much suffering he went through.
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Lily V Lily V (Sep 30 2021 10:56PM) : logos more

If a slave runs away there is a risk of them being killed, appeals to your logical side that this would happen

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Paul F Paul F (Oct 02 2021 1:35PM) : Paragraph 8, sentence 6 more

Logos, reference to the Fugitive Slave Act

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Charlie L Charlie L (Oct 05 2021 11:15AM) : Presents opposing argument and gives evidences about why it's incorrect
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Zoe M Zoe M (Oct 05 2021 12:52AM) : We get to see some dialogue
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Paul F Paul F (Oct 02 2021 1:37PM) : Paragraph 8, Sentence 17 more

Pathos of the Irishman towards Douglas

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Alex Y Alex Y (Oct 04 2021 2:11AM) : similar to support used earlier - Irishmen think a Douglas is still an intelligent human like mistress and boys on the street thought Douglas was worthy of freedom and education (intelligent human)
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Paul F Paul F (Oct 02 2021 1:38PM) : Paragraph 8, Sentence 21 more

Logos, also reference to the Fugitive Slave Act

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Kate Y Kate Y (Oct 04 2021 7:00PM) : Logos- appeals to our logic about why he didn't act interested in their advice; also gives context for events that happened with runaway slaves at the time
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2022 Samuel H 2022 Samuel H (Oct 04 2021 10:16PM) : the author uses logos to explain the logic behind previous situations that have occurred to slaves who have attempted to run away, but were betrayed by the individuals who told them to run away.
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Brody D Brody D (Oct 05 2021 3:09PM) : Appeals to one's pathos, talking about how he was so scared his friends may turn him in for money
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Meredith M Meredith M (Oct 15 2021 3:45PM) : I agree and I think this is a great way of showing his point of view.
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Lily V Lily V (Sep 30 2021 11:01PM) : Wait more

He felt like he had to wait and prepare for the day he was ready to run away

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Sam O Sam O (Oct 15 2021 1:26PM) : This statement shows how much he valued learning the ability to write, as he knew how valuable it would be.
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Paul F Paul F (Oct 02 2021 1:39PM) : Paragraph 8, Sentence 24 more

Ethos, patience or else he would get arrested.

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Penelope D Penelope D (Oct 03 2021 4:55PM) : shows how he has the restraint and the want to escape

Meanwhile, I would learn to write. The idea as to how I might learn to write was suggested to me by being in Durgin and Bailey's ship‐yard, and frequently seeing the ship carpenters, after hewing, and getting a piece of timber ready for use, write on the timber the name of that part of the ship for which it was intended. When a piece of timber was intended for the larboard side, it would be marked thus‐"L." When apiece was for the starboard side, it would be marked thus‐‐S.F." A piece for the larboard side forward, would be marked thus‐"L.F." When apiece was for starboard side forward, it would be marked thus‐"S.F." For larboard aft, it would be marked thus‐"L.A." For starboard aft, it would be marked thus‐"S.A." I soon learned the names of these letters, and for what they were intended when placed upon a piece of timber in the shipyard. I immediately commenced copying them, and in a short time was able to make the four letters named. After that, when I met with any boy who I knew could write, I would tell him I could write as well as he. The next word would be, "1 don't believe you. Let me see you try it." I would then make the letters which I had been so fortunate as to learn, and ask him to beat that. In this way I got a good many lessons in writing, which it is quite possible I should never have gotten in any other way. During this time, my copy‐ book was the board fence, brick wall, and pavement; my pen and ink was a lump of chalk. With these, I learned mainly how to write. I then commenced and continued copying the Italics in Webster's Spelling Book, until I could make them all without looking in the book. By this time, my little Master Thomas had gone to school, and learned how to write, and had written over a number of copy‐books. These had been brought home, and shown to some of our near neighbors, and then laid aside. My mistress used to go to class meeting at the Wilk Street meeting‐house every Monday afternoon, and leave me to take care of the house. When left thus, I used to spend the time in writing in the spaces left in master Thomas's copy‐book, copying what he had written. I continued to do this until I could write a hand very similar to that of Master Thomas. Thus, after a long, tedious effort for years, I finally succeeded in learning how to write.

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Zoe M Zoe M (Oct 05 2021 6:52AM) : Dialogue is present in this paragraph
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Andrea G Andrea G (Oct 20 2021 1:39AM) : He has a lot of dialogue in this paragraph. It is a different way to engage the reader.
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Olivia C Olivia C (Oct 01 2021 7:04PM) : His tone is straightforward and informative but still keeps the reader intrigued.
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Claire P Claire P (Oct 20 2021 1:09AM) : Importance of Dialogue and Explanation more

By using these details, it allows Douglass to relate to the reader. It gives the reader a way to find more interest in what they are reading about.

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Maya R Maya R (Oct 19 2021 4:45PM) : Shows the simple tasks and things we'd look over as being the reason for someone's desire to learn.
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Paul F Paul F (Oct 02 2021 7:41PM) : Paragraph 9, Sentences 4 through 6 more

Logos

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Lily V Lily V (Oct 01 2021 5:02AM) : the doubted he was educated and could write
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Paul F Paul F (Oct 02 2021 7:41PM) : Paragraph 9, Sentence 8 more

The character of the times, ethos

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Sam O Sam O (Oct 15 2021 7:24PM) : He describes how he began his procress of learning to write. Offers context as to how this happened as he was a slave at the time. [Edited]
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Paul F Paul F (Oct 02 2021 7:42PM) : Paragraph 9, Sentence 12 more

Logos, would get caught if taught any other way

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2022 Samuel H 2022 Samuel H (Oct 05 2021 4:19AM) : concludes the essay by telling the reader that he accomplished his life-long goal, escaped the bottomless pit and gathered the courage and strength to give the audience a compelling story about his freedom and reiterated the point made by Master Thomas.
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Andrew B Andrew B (Oct 06 2021 4:26AM) : ends his essay with a comment showing that he escaped the horrors of slavery and learned how to read and write
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Evan N Evan N (Oct 15 2021 7:24PM) : Learning more

He self taught himself how to read and write. Looked to acquire knowledge that wouldn’t be granted otherwise. Douglas broke the stigma of colored people to gain and retain knowledge.

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Lily V Lily V (Oct 01 2021 5:03AM) : Major more

This is important because he taught himself how to write which many slaves didn’t know how to do.

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Olivia C Olivia C (Oct 01 2021 7:03PM) : He appeals to the reader through taking the reader through a journey of him learning to read and write.
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Paul F Paul F (Oct 02 2021 7:44PM) : Paragraph 9, Sentence 18 more

Background, appeals to the audience with one last hurrah.

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Penelope D Penelope D (Oct 03 2021 10:56PM) : proves how slaves can be educated, uses pathos to make people relate to the struggle and puts more credibility towards his words
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Isabella V Isabella V (Oct 04 2021 12:58AM) : uses pathos to make people sympathize with his struggles and uses his experience to make him more creditable
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Araxan O Araxan O (Oct 04 2021 4:48AM) : Conclusion tying the paragraph together.
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Alex Y Alex Y (Oct 04 2021 8:19AM) : support of claim by showing that slaves have the ability to overcome challenges and do amazing things even while being "handicapped" at the start of the race - ex: compared his journey to writing against master Thomas'
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Kate Y Kate Y (Oct 05 2021 1:04AM) : Ties the writing back into the purpose of the writing given in the first paragraph; pathos- makes us feel proud of his achievements and all he worked through
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Charles W Charles W (Oct 04 2021 9:25PM) : Tone and Appeal [Edited] more

Within this paragraph and especially this concluding sentence, Frederick Douglass sums up his hardships of learning to write with a thankful tone. He’s not happy with his experience but feels accomplished with his own abilities gained during his slavery.

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Kurt M Kurt M (Oct 05 2021 6:55AM) : tone = prideful, sense of accomplishment
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Charlie L Charlie L (Oct 05 2021 5:16PM) : Context for how hard he worked to accomplish this
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Sammy J Sammy J (Oct 15 2021 7:25PM) : Great ending with claim support, and tying it all together
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Andrea G Andrea G (Oct 20 2021 1:42AM) : Proves that slaves can be educated. This can make people sympathize and even relate. This also provides more credibility to his writing.

Taken from: http://www.gibbsmagazine.com/learning%20to%20read.htm

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