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Mushrooms by Sylvia Plath

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Nov 6

Aloe Vera Chng Aloe Vera Chng (Nov 06 2014 12:10AM) : What are these mushrooms really!!!

Nov 6

Miss Hwee Mae Kng Miss Hwee Mae Kng (Nov 06 2014 12:12AM) : DRUGS

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Mr Shawn Q Mr Shawn Q (Nov 06 2014 12:12AM) : Interesting choice of diction!

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Dr Chin Ee Loh Dr Chin Ee Loh (Nov 06 2014 12:13AM) : What do you mean by diction? Why is it interesting?

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Mr Joshua Loke Mr Joshua Loke (Nov 06 2014 12:13AM) : Food for eating

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Mr Joshua Loke Mr Joshua Loke (Nov 06 2014 12:13AM) : Like aloe veras. For eating

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Overnight, very
Whitely, discreetly,
Very quietly

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Nov 6

Jayne Lim Jayne Lim (Nov 06 2014 12:03AM) : very nice poem

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Mr Joshua Loke Mr Joshua Loke (Nov 06 2014 12:04AM) : Very nice indeed.

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Aloe Vera Chng Aloe Vera Chng (Nov 06 2014 12:05AM) : WHO IS MR JOSHUA LOKE

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Aloe Vera Chng Aloe Vera Chng (Nov 06 2014 12:04AM) : what is this comment about?

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Our toes, our noses
Take hold on the loam,
Acquire the air.

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Jayne Lim Jayne Lim (Nov 06 2014 12:08AM) : What is loam

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Cheryl Aw Cheryl Aw (Nov 06 2014 12:10AM) : a type of soil that is good for growing plants more

source: http://www.merriam-webster.com/dictionary/loam

Nov 6

Jiaying Lee Jiaying Lee (Nov 06 2014 12:10AM) : I think it's a kind of organic soil

Nov 6

Lynette Wong Lynette Wong (Nov 06 2014 12:11AM) : a fertile soil of clay and sand containing humus

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Prof Madeline Wee Prof Madeline Wee (Nov 06 2014 12:12AM) : Mmmm humus more

(I know, it’s poop)

Nov 6

Mr Joshua Loke Mr Joshua Loke (Nov 06 2014 12:14AM) : How about hummus

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Cheryl Ng Cheryl Ng (Nov 06 2014 12:12AM) : a type of soil that is both sandy and clayey, so the texture is between soft-sticky-muddy and hard-dry-coarse

Nov 6

Mr Shawn Q Mr Shawn Q (Nov 06 2014 12:13AM) : Yes, it is the soil required for growing plants.. like mushrooms!

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Aloe Vera Chng Aloe Vera Chng (Nov 06 2014 12:16AM) : LOAM is the singlish for roam

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Nobody sees us,
Stops us, betrays us;
The small grains make room.

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Soft fists insist on
Heaving the needles,
The leafy bedding,

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Even the paving.
Our hammers, our rams,
Earless and eyeless,

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Perfectly voiceless,
Widen the crannies,
Shoulder through holes. We

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Dr Chin Ee Loh Dr Chin Ee Loh (Nov 06 2014 12:06AM) : why are they perfectly voiceless?

Nov 6

Aloe Vera Chng Aloe Vera Chng (Nov 06 2014 12:09AM) : They aren't. they aren't. we aren't.

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Mr Joshua Loke Mr Joshua Loke (Nov 06 2014 12:09AM) : They have no mouth? (or vocal cords) And are not human, but are personified here.

Nov 6

Marguerita Kwek Marguerita Kwek (Nov 06 2014 12:09AM) : Maybe 'perfectly' suggests that it is an expected norm for them to be 'voiceless'.

Nov 6

Cheryl Aw Cheryl Aw (Nov 06 2014 12:11AM) : Or perhaps it is precisely because they are voiceless that they are able to be so insidious, infiltrating the tiniest nooks and "crannies". Like an evolutionary trait.

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Diet on water,
On crumbs of shadow,
Bland-mannered, asking

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Little or nothing.
So many of us!
So many of us!

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Mr Addison Wong Mr Addison Wong (Nov 06 2014 12:16AM) : Weed Overload more

So many of us!
Too much weed, yo

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We are shelves, we are
Tables, we are meek,
We are edible,

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Nudgers and shovers
In spite of ourselves.
Our kind multiplies:

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We shall by morning
Inherit the earth.
Our foot's in the door.

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Nov 6

Dr Chin Ee Loh Dr Chin Ee Loh (Nov 06 2014 12:09AM) : what is the significance of the fact that the mushrooms shall inherit the earth?

Nov 6

Gayle Sim Gayle Sim (Nov 06 2014 12:12AM) : Biblical Reference more

biblical reference to ‘blessed are those who are meek, for they shall inherit the earth’?

guess this links back to earlier where the mushrooms are ‘meek’.

Nov 6

Aloe Vera Chng Aloe Vera Chng (Nov 06 2014 12:14AM) : CORRECT GAIL. we are princes and princesses

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Prof Madeline Wee Prof Madeline Wee (Nov 06 2014 12:13AM) : Drugs more

we all become druggies

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Aloe Vera Chng Aloe Vera Chng (Nov 06 2014 12:16AM) : DOGGIES more

DOGGIES

Nov 6

Jayne Lim Jayne Lim (Nov 06 2014 12:13AM) : biblical allusion more

“blessed are the meek, for they shall inherit the earth”. the poet is saying that mushrooms are meek. this suggests that mushrooms represent meek people/things? perhaps the poet herself?

Nov 6

Cheryl Aw Cheryl Aw (Nov 06 2014 12:14AM) : A biblical reference suggesting that the mushrooms are a metaphor for humanity. WE ARE THE MUSHROOMS.

Nov 6

Mr Joshua Loke Mr Joshua Loke (Nov 06 2014 12:15AM) : We are mushy and roomy

Nov 6

Mr Shawn Q Mr Shawn Q (Nov 06 2014 12:14AM) : Because mushrooms are 'fun guys' and 'fun girls'... and mushrooms make you 'more cool' :)

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Nov 6

Dr Chin Ee Loh Dr Chin Ee Loh (Nov 06 2014 12:10AM) : What is this poem about?

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Mr. Jeffrey Lebowe Mr. Jeffrey Lebowe (Apr 25 2020 6:38PM) : Nice poem! mushrooms are really cool organisms

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