NowComment
Document: Invite Print Info
More
Properties/Access Dates Add to Document Analytics Report Fullscreen (hide top links) Download & Export Options Tag Document Embed in another web page
2-Pane Combined
Comments:
Full Summaries Sorted

P.S. 150 Grade 2

Author: Heather Grimaldo


0 General Document comments
0 Sentence and Paragraph comments
0 Image and Video comments


New Thinking Partner Conversation New Conversation
Paragraph 1 (Image 1) 0
No whole image conversations. Start one.
New Thinking Partner Conversation New Conversation
Whole Image 0
No whole image conversations. Start one.
New Thinking Partner Conversation New Conversation
Task Description 0
profile_photo
Nov 2
Liz L
Liz L (Nov 02 2021 11:56AM) : This task description does not match the samples. more

I wonder if the students were given more guidelines or direction for this task.

Comment Options ▼
Edit Comment Delete Comment Archive Comment Show Comment URL
New Conversation
Hide Full Comment

New Thinking Partner Conversation New Conversation
Paragraph 2 (Image 2) 0
No whole image conversations. Start one.
New Thinking Partner Conversation New Conversation
Whole Image 0
No whole image conversations. Start one.

New Thinking Partner Conversation New Conversation
Paragraph 3 (Image 3) 0
No whole image conversations. Start one.
New Thinking Partner Conversation New Conversation
Whole Image 0
No whole image conversations. Start one.
New Thinking Partner Conversation New Conversation
New area 0
No area-level conversations. Start one.
New Thinking Partner Conversation New Conversation
New area 0
No area-level conversations. Start one.
New Thinking Partner Conversation New Conversation
Task Requirements 0
profile_photo
Nov 2
Liz L
Liz L (Nov 02 2021 11:42AM) : This task ask students to discuss positive effects of being a good citizen. I don't see evidence of students' understanding what that means or that it is part of the task.
Comment Options ▼
Edit Comment Delete Comment Archive Comment Show Comment URL
New Conversation
New Thinking Partner Conversation New Conversation
Specific details 0
profile_photo
Nov 2
Liz L
Liz L (Nov 02 2021 11:46AM) : This student did a wonderful job of giving lots of examples and explaining them clearly. The student uses the transition another for each example; it would be good to introduce other options. Sentence structure and spelling are excellent.
Comment Options ▼
Edit Comment Delete Comment Archive Comment Show Comment URL
New Conversation

New Thinking Partner Conversation New Conversation
Paragraph 4 (Image 4) 0
No whole image conversations. Start one.
New Thinking Partner Conversation New Conversation
Whole Image 0
No whole image conversations. Start one.

New Thinking Partner Conversation New Conversation
Paragraph 5 (Image 5) 0
No whole image conversations. Start one.
New Thinking Partner Conversation New Conversation
Whole Image 0
No whole image conversations. Start one.
New Thinking Partner Conversation New Conversation
Invented Spellling 0
profile_photo
Nov 2
Liz L
Liz L (Nov 02 2021 11:40AM) : Great job of sounding out a challenging word. HOM Taking a Responsible Risk.
Comment Options ▼
Edit Comment Delete Comment Archive Comment Show Comment URL
New Conversation
New Thinking Partner Conversation New Conversation
Organized by family members 0
profile_photo
Nov 2
Liz L
Liz L (Nov 02 2021 11:51AM) : This student focused on how he helps each member of the family. He uses a lot of invented spelling. Sentences are good. more

Next step is to get him to explain more. Perhaps ask how for each example and see if the student can add details. This student ended abruptly without a conclusion. Perhaps he can be asked how he feels when he helps at home.

Comment Options ▼
Edit Comment Delete Comment Archive Comment Show Comment URL
New Conversation
Hide Full Comment

New Thinking Partner Conversation New Conversation
Paragraph 6 (Image 6) 0
No whole image conversations. Start one.
New Thinking Partner Conversation New Conversation
Whole Image 0
No whole image conversations. Start one.
New Thinking Partner Conversation New Conversation
Detailed picture 0
profile_photo
Nov 2
Liz L
Liz L (Nov 02 2021 11:53AM) : The detailed picture matches the topic. Perhaps this student could use the picture to develop the writing. The writing does not match the task. This student needs some scaffolding to help him to address the task.
Comment Options ▼
Edit Comment Delete Comment Archive Comment Show Comment URL
New Conversation

DMU Timestamp: October 14, 2021 23:55

General Document Comments 0
New Thinking Partner Conversation Start a new Document-level conversation

Image
0 comments, 0 areas
add area
add comment
  • Join an existing conversation — click the “Reply” button of the appropriate right pane comment
  • Start a new conversation on an existing area — Double click on the existing highlighted area or its comment balloon
  • Define and comment on a new area — Draw a box around the desired area by clicking and then holding + dragging your mouse
Start a new conversation about the image as a whole (no specific area) — click here
change display
hide comment areas
hide comment balloons
help
Video
add comment
  at current time
  at a different time
on whole video
help

Quickstart: Commenting and Sharing

How to Comment
  • Click icons on the left to see existing comments.
  • Desktop/Laptop: double-click any text, highlight a section of an image, or add a comment while a video is playing to start a new conversation.
    Tablet/Phone: single click then click on the "Start One" link (look right or below).
  • Click "Reply" on a comment to join the conversation.
How to Share Documents
  1. "Upload" a new document.
  2. "Invite" others to it.

Logging in, please wait... Blue_on_grey_spinner