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PS 69 Grade 2

Author: Sheryl Grill


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Liz L Liz L (Nov 07 2021 3:52PM) : This says that students have to explain the positive effects. In the samples provided, students gave examples of things they could do, but did not explain the effects. more

You can revise the task or add some scaffolding that helps students to think about the effects of good behavior. The latter is linked to SEL.

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Liz L Liz L (Nov 07 2021 3:54PM) : The student explained what problems will be avoided if she does certain things. She does this for other examples as well.

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Liz L Liz L (Nov 07 2021 3:57PM) : You can get students to add details, starting with the picture. If the student added details that show what she is doing to help in the picture, she is more likely to add them to the writing. more

Students can work from concrete (picture) to abstract (writing).

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Liz L Liz L (Nov 07 2021 3:58PM) : The student didn't get to finish. You could ask who he helped and how.

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