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PS 69 Q Grade 3

Author: Tracey Marchesini


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Liz L Liz L (Nov 05 2021 3:42PM) : This is useful for teachers, but it could be made more student friendly if you want it to guide students.

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Liz L Liz L (Nov 05 2021 3:44PM) : You might ask the student what changed his attitude?

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Liz L Liz L (Nov 05 2021 3:47PM) : The essay tells what changed but not how. It doesn't give reasons. Perhaps a pre-writing graphic organizer would help all the students. more

How was he at the beginning?
What happened?
How did he react?
How was he different in the end?
What did he learn?

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Liz L Liz L (Nov 05 2021 3:49PM) : This shows a strong understanding of the story.
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Liz L Liz L (Nov 05 2021 3:50PM) : Perhaps some questions could help the student to develop this further.

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DMU Timestamp: October 14, 2021 23:55

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