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PS 81Q Grade 5

Author: Ellen Brachfeld


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Liz L Liz L (Dec 15 2021 3:21PM) : These are very effective. The categories promote a growth mindset and the emojis are fun.
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Killion C Killion C (Oct 14 2024 10:23PM) : effective more

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Liz L Liz L (Dec 15 2021 3:22PM) : Did the students have a graphic organizer to fill out to get feedback before writing?
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Ellen B Ellen B (Jan 03 2022 1:27PM) : Yes, the students that completed the graphic organizers received feedback to make sure they were on the right path before continuing with their writing,

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Liz L Liz L (Dec 15 2021 3:28PM) : This give us background information. The student used dialogue and gave a personal reaction to the situation as well. The next step is to separate dialogue.
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Liz L Liz L (Dec 15 2021 3:28PM) : The specific details work well.

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Liz L Liz L (Dec 15 2021 3:31PM) : This story involves some self-awareness. It is a great opportunity to explore what triggers feelings and how we react to them. It might be interesting to probe a bit to develop that further.
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Liz L Liz L (Dec 15 2021 3:32PM) : There is definitely an attempt to write a conclusion here. The next step is to write one that presents a message or shows what the student learned from the experience.

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