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PS 13 Q 2nd Grade

Author: Maryann Bongiorno


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Liz L Liz L (Dec 16 2021 12:57PM) : These look like what the teacher uses to assess the work. I wonder how the guidelines were presented to the students. [Edited]
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Liz L Liz L (Dec 16 2021 12:58PM) : Choice in content promotes a sense of ownership.

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Liz L Liz L (Dec 16 2021 1:00PM) : I notice that all three students worded the introduction the same. Was this a framework they were given and did the fill in the blanks?
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Liz L Liz L (Dec 16 2021 1:01PM) : The three samples indicate that students might not have understood what this was asking. I wonder if looking at pictures and paying attention to details might have helped them to pay attention to changes.

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Liz L Liz L (Dec 16 2021 1:02PM) : Interesting. I thought of physical differences when I saw the question how does it change. The student focused on situational changes. [Edited] more

To develop attention to details, you could show pictures of mothers and babies and ask students to list differences. These could be used to answer the question.

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Liz L Liz L (Dec 16 2021 1:02PM) : I see that students are using specific terms.

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DMU Timestamp: December 14, 2021 22:47

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